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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is a simple ShraNal OS...My first attempt to write...it's vacation so thought to write...I know it's little bit boring...but bear me once people...It's in my POV I have already written this in AT and Rose suggested me to post as an OS...I don't have confidence still posting...you all can throw chappels...Enjoy...

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Shraddha was driving fast to reach home early as possible...she excited to hear Dhruv's reaction on Kunal's rishta she saw small rain droplets in the front glass...

She could sense his constant starring but tried not to turn as it was too intense for her to handle instead she started to think about mummy and Ishaan how they agreed for this as they were very much aware of what Kamini's stand on her...

But it was a surprise to her that she itself brought rishta she was sure Kunal did something to convince her but behaving like he was not aware about anything simply said his mother was happy...but why she was happy about her...

She lost in thinking and looked the wiper moving to and fro removing the rain droplets...she felt something taking over her mind and couldn't understand what was it...she suddenly turned to Kunal saw him smiling and gazing her...

He overthrow her completely by those looks...both them lost each other's eyes...soon she lost the control of her car...roads were too sloppy due to raining and they end up by hitting a large tree...

They both stepped out to see and found it was impossible to move forward...he tried getting it fixed but no use and hours passed...the rain had gotten heavier...

Shraddha moved forward enjoying the rain...she jumped and twirled around while he watched...

He said..."Please sit in the car or u will get sick"...

"Oh...it's not a problem no need to go school tomorrow"...

She held his hand and said..."Why don't you enjoy too"...opened her hands wide and smiled...

He was surprised on that felt like hit a lottery...

Asked her "Do you like rain"...she didn't answer instead smiled and walked forward...time was running fast and it almost 12 at night...there was not a single vehicle was passing through there to get a lift and rain was turning more heavy...

There was nothing only romantic rhythm of rain was playing there...he looked at her moved forward his hand to ask her for a dance...

Without thinking a second she said "No Kunal I love to dance alone in rain"...

He moved closer grabbed her hand..."But I love to dance with the women in front of me"...

She looked at him smiled at the sparkles in his eyes giving her hand in his...she lifted her other hand and looked at him wearing a creamy shirt which was clinched to his chest giving a look of his well built body she couldn't resist but placed her hand in his chest...she was looking more sexy with her top clinched to her curves and her hair sticking to her neck and he slowly stare her... moved closer holding her waist and other her hand...

They started to dance slowly simply...moving in the rhythm of rain...they moved closer by each step holding tight each other...craving for each other's warmth in the shivering cold of rain...their face reached so close that they could feel their shaky breaths...

He twirled her moved around and got closer with each turn firming his grip on her...finally he lifted her caused their body crashed each other...she opened her arms wider and enjoyed the rain in his arm with her eyes wide open...

He brought her down slowly...and just when her face was just above his...his lips rubbed against her cheeks...making her realize her proximity with him...she shocked and realized what she was doing turned away and he held her hand and pulled her back...

He breathed in her scent his face traced hers...he placed his hands around her stomach and they both again started to move in the sweet music of rain...she was captive in his arm lock...enjoying the warmness...

She started to think how lucky she was now with him around and flashbacks of their all encounters rushed through her brain...she grinned and Kunal caught her smile and surprised...

He released his hold and turned her around..."Why are you smiling Shraddha"...

He asked in his sweet voice made her again shiver and looked in his eyes and sense the burning passion...and he could see the brightness in her eyes...

She tried to talk but her words were stuck in her throat under the tension she felt in their closeness...

She looked down and said..."thinking about our meetings"...

He smiled caressed her face moved forward and cupped her face to ...he saw her sweet lips quivering which he always wanted to feel ...he was about to kiss her when she pushed him and tried to run away but he got hold of her hand and pulled back...

She felt herself weakened in his chest and the breathed harshly...she tried to turned her face to avoid his gaze as it's piercing her eyes and sending tremors in her body...he again lifted her face and hugged her tightly...

She hugged him back after getting over the shock of his sudden action and he started to speak..."I can't imagine a single moment without u Shraddha I m feeling bad that I have failed to realize it earlier...I thought it's just a friendship...I said you about my feelings towards Dhuv but Shraddha my love for you is the only reason for everything I have now with your family...

I remember how much pain I have been suffered all those days before realizing my love...not just pain I lost myself...during all those days from that badminton match I feel very much excited for you...

But when everyone tried to avoid me I have felt my heart tear to pieces and from that day I also try to find out what's that...not to meet u some days...

But I realized soon there that it's not just a friendship I want more and more...not more Shraddha I want you completely...as only and only mine...I can't imagine my existence without you...I won't be able to live...

Her eyes turned all teary...the love and care poured out from his words was not undeniable...she could feel his love and yes her love for him and after all in all this drama of avoiding him she too had fallen for him...

She felt her the most lucky girl in the world as staying in the arms of a man who love her by every inch...she thanked God at that moment for giving him in her life...she hugged him back tightly by putting her hands around his back ...

He felt her tighten around him and a slow smile came across his face...feeling her feelings for him and her soft body...they stayed some more time hugging each other...but she soon came to her sense released him and tried to move away...he didn't let her go pulled her close to kiss her...his lips brushed her cheeks...and hands caressing her back...

She refused..."why are you still refusing...its clear u too love me"...she shocked at that and looked him saw the heat in his eyes he leaned down ...his breath was laboured fast and it fell on her closed eyes...he again leaned down brushing his lips across her cheeks and planted his lips on her...

She was shivering at that sensation of his lips and hands which was trying to hold her and pull towards him within moments it found its way up her back into her hair which was wet in rain...

He pulled it tilting her head to the side, gazing at her briefly, and then deepened the kiss and her hand's squeezed his hair into her fingers and pushed her body upon him further...

She soon started to respond her hands run down the sides of his ribs all the way to his waist and he felt her hands trembling...

He was burning in the heavy rain and he could no longer hide it from her and he was not going to stop himself instead slipped his tongue into her mouth feeling the warmth and sweetness...She also tried to control his tongue without allowing him to overtake and they continue to played with their tongues mapping each other's mouth...

The rain was still heavy made them shiver more and made them to try reaching more to each other's warmness...she felt him more desperate as he started to work on her shirt trying to pull it off...but soon she broke the kiss as it became more passionate and uncontrollable...looked around and looked at him...she saw the disappointment in his eyes at the sudden break of kiss...

She smiled and said..."my legs are paining want to sit" she rushed to the car opened the backdoor and sits there and he followed her...it's almost morning and she told him to call a mechanic...

"Why are you hurrying...We still have time...relax Shraddha" and bend down again to kiss her...

But she turned and smacked his arms..."I want to go my home" she grabbed his phone and dialled the mechanic...they waited around there walking, smiling, hugging each other when each time she tried to push down his hands which was roaming and teasing her to avoid anything more as the mechanic was working and watching them...talking a lot freely about a lot of things until the car was repaired...

She gave him keys before entering the car "drive for me"...

"You are driving me crazy now"...

"I mean car"...

"But I mean another driving"... He smiled and kissed her forehead and hugged her tightly before starting the engine...they smiled looking each other without knowing the bitter phase waiting for them in home...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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yayyy..u posted it here!!
Thanks treesa!!🤗🤗🤗🤗

I loved it yo!!⭐️⭐️😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start Treesa. Amazing. Love you dear. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful OS Treesa!!👏⭐️
Loved how you described the scene & ShraNal's closeness & romantic moments!!☺️☺️

Would love it if you continued writing!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Red-Rose-

yayyy..u posted it here!!

Thanks treesa!!🤗

I loved it yo!!⭐️⭐️😃


Its me who should hav said thanks to you dear🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗...
Love u soo much for tolerating me😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vivkriti

Great start Treesa. Amazing. Love you dear. 🤗


Miths love you soo much...glad that u loved it...endless hugs for u🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nazzyx8

Beautiful OS Treesa!!👏⭐️

Loved how you described the scene & ShraNal's closeness & romantic moments!!☺️☺️

Would love it if you continued writing!!😃


Hayyee...thankyou dear...soo happy that u all loved it...i was expecting some chappels😆
ShraNal romance always made me lost in their dreamland...a simple phone convo is enough for meto dreaming throughout the day...so it's not difficult to write...but the prblem is my confidence level...anyway will try🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Originally posted by: -treesa-


Its me who should hav said thanks to you dear🤗...
Love u soo much for tolerating me😆

oye...ye kya hogaya!!😲
i tolerated u or u tolerated me!!🤣🤣
I should thank U bearing my harassment!!🤣🤣🤣

Anyways u are awesome!!⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Red-Rose-

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oye...ye kya hogaya!!😲
i tolerated u or u tolerated me!!🤣🤣
I should thank U bearing my harassment!!🤣🤣🤣

Anyways u are awesome!!⭐️⭐️


True i tolerated u😭...but harassment no dear...it's encouragement for me😃

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