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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: zk456789

Awesome update eagerly waiting for next update
Happy that all the misunderstandimgs got cleared between swaron
Thanks for the pm
Do update soon
And congratulations for the new thread




Thanks a lot dear
Ur welcome
Will b updating soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: shalomshini

Hey loved d ff its ws 1 of d best ff read Soo far I must say ur an amazing writer
Keep up d good work waiting for d next chapter hope ul update soon..




Thank u so much dear
Will update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: hima_taarey

M so happy happy

Mu cleared
Nd cute nd peaceful update
Ty sm yaar
Loved it so much...
Nd update soon
Sry fr late cmmnt




Awe thank u dear
I m glad u r happy
Its ok
Will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: nidhi1998

ur update😃

i super sorry for not commenting to ur previous updates
i was stuck in these exams

anyways '
i loved ur update
i was happy with swayam coming
clean to sharon
and ganga problem will also be solved
finaaly mujhe closure mill jayegaa
loved it
nidhi




Its ok dear
Thanks
Yup finally everything will b cleared as the end comes nearer :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Nehal92

Phew! I read the updates after so long :) n what to say... it is awesome as usual,,, i like the way u portray emotions in a practical manner... that is the highlight of the whole FF. :)

Do update soon :)



Thank u so much dear
Will update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Part 24

||~Sharon's POV 😲 YAAAY 😆~||

There were too many emotions building inside me anger, hatred, happiness, sadness, uneasiness, love and what not. But only one thing that was keeping me sane was his request. I couldn't help but smile at his sweet request of listening to him without judging him. He was nervous as hell I could tell that. It was maybe first time he was willingly telling someone what he feels. I was feeling special as he chose me among all and wanted me to know everything. As minutes passed his nervousness was vanishing and replaced by ease. I kept my posture same not reacting at anything he said. He even stammered at some places and waited for me to interrupt or leave but I didn't. I loved him too much to not give him this chance. So I kept still and listened to his each and every word. When he was done and waiting for me to react I didn't know exactly how to react. So I stood up and asked him to follow me. He was following me like a pet I giggled mentally and kept thinking of what he had said to me.

By the time we reached my car I knew clearly what to do. We both sat in silence and I drove us to my house. He sat on my couch at my instructions and I grabbed a pen and paper. I handed him and he looked confused then it struck me that he can't read my mind. Sighing I sat beside him and said "Swayam I need you to write a letter to this girl... ummm Ganga... write anything and everything you want to say to her without thinking twice. Just write it all without stopping as if you have this last chance to say it all to her." I said all in one go and then took a deep breath. When I saw him staring at me dumbfounded I glared at him and he started writing scared. I wanted to laugh at his cute scared behavior but I had to stop myself from doing so.

I sat watching him scribble down words quickly and like I said he didn't even paused to see what he has written so far. After few long minutes he stopped and gave the paper and pen back. I took it and we both walk to my study I photo copied the paper and folded both the papers. "Swayam keep this one safe with you. If you ever find Ganga give that to her. And this one we will take with us. Let's go." Without wasting another second I grab an empty wine bottle and left the house. I drove for an hour until we reached my desired place. We both get out and walked until we were at the top of the stones by the side of the beach. I gave the bottle to him and said "Swayam it may be hard to find Ganga but you can lessen the burden from your chest by doing this. Place the letter in this bottle and let the sea carry your heart's weight." I smiled at him first time after what he had said to me earlier. He kept looking at the waves of the sea for a while and then folded the paper and pushed it inside the bottle through the opening. He then capped the bottle and giving me once last look he threw the bottle in the sea. We kept staring at the bottle until it vanished in the wild sea ahead of us. We looked at each other and then before I could get lost in his eyes I said "now punishment time" and walked away from him towards the car smirking leaving him stunned and nervous for sure.

I could only imagine his scared face. I mentally laughed at him and we both drove to his house. I greeted BM as soon as my eyes saw her "BM." I kissed her cheeks and smiled brightly at her smiling face. "BM, we both wanted to talk to you about us" I said and looked at Swayam who knew that the decision has been made but he didn't know what it was. I looked at confused and worried face of BM and gave her assuring smile. "BM Swayam has told me everything about his lifestyle, his wants and needs. He also gave me the choice to take the decision about us. Knowing you and Swayam since my childhood I know my decision isn't wrong. I... um...I think I want to give us a chance." I managed to say the last part with great difficulty and ended up blushing. "Aaawww" BM said and hugged me tightly and then hugged Swayam. I looked at him and he was smiling genuinely at my decision somewhat relieved. We three talked for a while and at my request BM gave us few months time to know each other and accept each other as would be husband and wife.

||~A Week Later~||

DING DONG ugh cant people let me sleep. I threw a pillow at my face trying to fall back asleep but the annoying door bell didn't let me. I huffed and walked to my door ready to beat the life out of the person who disturbed my sleep when I came face to face with a large bouquet. I instantly smiled at those fresh flowers and looked around but there was no one. I frowned and took the bouquet inside looking for a note but there was none. The door bell rang again and I found a box I picked it up and closed the door again. I sat on my couch and opened the box it had a beautiful bracelet and a note.

"Be my date tonight. Be ready at 8 and dress casual.

Yours,

Swayam"

I smiled at the note and looked at the time and it was 10 in the morning. I wanted to be mad at the fact that he disturbed my sleep but the happiness of having a date with him overcome my anger. I wanted to jump in excitement and wanted to tell it to Sam. I picked the phone just to remember what I did to him in order to save Swayam. I tear rolled down my eyes while I picked the photo frame from the side table that had both of us smiling at the camera. "I miss you" I whispered to the photo and hugged it as if I was hugging Sam. Later in the evening I was ready for the date somewhat excited for it and somewhat sad as I was missing Sam.

At sharp 8 the door bell rang and Swayam was standing looking dashing as ever at the door. I smiled at him and he looked me up and down and said just the word I wanted to hear "Beautiful." I blushed and he offered me his hand and I took it. We both walked to his car and he opened the door for me while I slide in. He did the same thing for me and I hoped out of the car when we reached to our destination. We both then walked inside a restaurant while he kept a hand on my back leading me to our table. I stopped walking further when I saw someone already sitting at the corner table we were walking towards. I gave Swayam a questioning look but he smiled at me and pushed my back gently signally me to walk. I was curious to know who was sitting on our table as I couldn't see the guy's face. When we reached our table the guy sensed us and turned to see us. My jaw dropped at the sight in front of me. I squealed and hugged him tightly but he didn't hug me back. I broke the hug and looked at him pouting but he gave away no emotions. "Sam no hugs for me?" I asked still pouting but he glared at me and shook his head. I turned to look at Swayam who was watching us with amusement. I faced Sam again who was still glaring at me I huffed and then slumped my shoulders in defeat. "I am sorry Sam. I know I am the worst friend ever. I slapped you went all mad at you when you were only trying to take my side. I really am sor..." I was forced to shut up with my rant when the oxygen was cut of my system. I then realized that Sam had finally hugged me. Or should I say took me in bone crushing and suffocating hug. I wanted to shout at him but the hug was so warm I couldn't say anything. But soon my lungs gave out and I pushed him panting for breath.

He laughed at me while Swayam gave me water with a worried look. He glared at Sam who was oblivious of him and was still laughing. Suddenly his laughter stopped and he got dead serious. "This is how I felt Shar when you told me to leave. I felt like someone was chocking me and I couldn't breathe. The only difference between my feeling and yours is that it was killing me and this was giving you the missing warmth in your life. Am I wrong?" Sam said in a sad tone. My heart went out for him so I hugged him tight and this time he hugged me back. When I broke the hug I stomped my feet at his feet and he hissed in pain. I smirked at him and said "next time hugged me like this and I will knee you where sun doesn't shine." He placed his hand on his manhood protectively making me giggle and Swayam laughed at him.

"As much as its fun to see you guys like this lets eat guys I am starving" Swayam said pulling a chair for me. I sat and looked at him grinning ear to ear. "Thank you so much Swayam. I know it was your plan as Sam has ego of the size of Mount Everest. But I wonder how did you do this and why?" he smiled at me and took my hand in his and said "when I gave you bouquet and bracelet I was watching you from window and then I saw you crying and hugging yours and his photo. So I went to his place and after our little talk he accepted to join us to the dinner. Simple." I smiled at him and looked at both of them who looked uneasy under my gaze. I knew there was more to this but I didn't push it as I didn't want to ruin this moment. We ate dinner and talked about random stuff. By the end of the dinner I could see the tension between them was easing slightly which was enough for me for now. I smiled hugging Sam and then waved him and drove off with Swayam. We were driving silently me gazing out the window smiling and he was concentrating on the road while stealing glances of me every now and then. "STOP" I screamed making him stomp his feet on the break paddle roughly. The car made a screeching sound and came to a sudden stop. As soon as I saw his panicked face I gave him my innocent cum guilty smile and without a word ran out of the car. I could hear him shout my name but right now my first love was calling out to me. I had to ignore my second and last one for the first one. I was panting by the time I reached the stall. The stall guy was eyeing me confused but I ignored him and ask him to make me a spicy plate. I heard footsteps reaching me and I knew finally Swayam catch up with me. I giggled imagining his expressions while I shouted and ran away like this. The stall guy gave me the plate and I quickly picked one and insert it in my mouth in one go. "Sharon you are unbelievable. You did all this for gol gappa" Swayam exclaimed from beside me while shaking his head. I swear I saw a smile on his face but it went away as fast as it came. Ignoring him I ate another gol gappa moaning and savoring its taste. He just stared at me and finally he smiled freely. I offered him one but he denied it. I stopped eating when I couldn't ate anymore and without waiting for him to pay I started walking tiredly back to the car.

He opened the door for me reaching before me as he walked faster than me. I sat in too tired to comment on anything and we drove to my house. I don't know what was happening but I could feel myself in air moving up and down. It was too dark I couldn't see anything and then it hit me that my eyes were closed. I opened one eye to see someone's chest. I panicked and opened both eyes while slightly moving away from the chest. The grip on me got tighter and I heard him saying "Sharon relax it's me Swayam. You fell asleep so I am taking you to bed. Relax okay?" I nodded at him and then kept my head on his shoulder yawning while he carried me to my bedroom. After tugging me he kissed my forehead and left with a smile. I turned nuzzling more in my cozy bed smiling sleepily and thinking about our so called first date with kabab mein haddi Sam. I giggled slightly and fell asleep soon looking forward to our future together as Mr. and Mrs. Shikhawat.

*Part 24 Ends*

||~Author's Note~||

Hola guys,

As some of you know that I was giving final exams so couldn't update. But as my exams ended here I am as promised to update LOF as it wasn't updated in a while. Hope you guys like the update. I am not dragging it much as this story has to end. So maybe in 1-2 updates I will end this FF and then epilogue will be posted. So till then enjoy reading, liking and commenting.

Love

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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Me first !!!!!!!! :)
Awesome update :)
Amazing :)
Loved it :)
Update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Nice update. Loved the blooming relationship of Swaron. Also the way Sharon handled Swayam's guilt was amazing. Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Bohot neend aa rhi hai
Res pls
Will unres tom
Pls update BOL soon

unres
actually i am very very sorry
this was the best chap till date in LOF
i loved the way she told badi maa that
she wants to give their relationship a chance
and sam k saath jo bhi hua
it was so emotional and cute
sorry again for commenting late

and update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
aswom update..

loved it thae way u show swaron nd that letter part was nic .. nd date with kabbab me hadi...

plzz updaye soon

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