MY RUTHLESS SAVIOUR #2 updated Part 10 on 17-5-2014/Pg 112 - Page 33

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Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

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HI, READERS WHERE ARE YOU? LAST TIME MRS K LIKES PURE HO GAYE THE BUT THIS TIME IT TAKING SO MUCH TIME.

ANYWAYS I AM GOING TO TYPE MRS BUT NOT POST TILL I GOT 180+ LIKES ON UPDATE 8...

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PART - 9


Beautiful and Delicate like rose,
keep you cuddled in my embrace,
always there for you,
to protect you from this evil world,
protect you from the harshness of hard rays
and,
allow to cherish you in the tenderness,
Yes i am your Ruthless Saviour..

Geet slept peacefully in his warm embrace. He cuddled her so softly as he securing her even in his sleep state. Gradually she opened her eyes and found herself in his embrace. He was sleeping. She glance him with her paniced eyes. He never seem so calm as he is now. Geet know he had done nothing wrong,still she paniced and wants to come out of his grip. She trying to voice her wish but had a fear of him. She start wriggling and tried to remove his arm wrapped around her. She scared to touch him,dont know how will he react if his sleep broked by her. Very softly she held his wrist and try to remove from her. Maan is more concious then her knowledge. The moment she touched his wrist he get up instantly. Geet slipped back and looking for her scarf. Maan glance her raised his arm to check her temprature. But she was scared that moment so push herself back. Maan glared her and she turn numb. He touched her forehead.

'hmm ab fevear nahi hai.' he confirmed to himself more then to hers. 'Shivering to nahi ho rahi?' he scanned her properly and asked becoz she is trembling, least he aware that it was not because of fever. It was beacuse of their proxcimity which make her tremble like a dry leaf. When she wont replied Maan raised his voice and she nodded her head in no instantly. Maan glance her paniced eyes and come out of the bed. He moved towards door and stood at some distance. He slanted his neck to get her glimpse. She was squeezed in herself,not feeling good. 'you was not well last night thats why i slept besides you. Just for the sake of your life. Otherwise i have no intrest in touching you.' He said roughly to divert her mind. He knows what she is thinking off. He turned and gave her dreadful glare before he left from there. 'tum koi aasmaan se utri pari nahi ho isliye apna faltu dimag chalane se pehle ssau baar soch lena. U and me never in my worst dreams.' Maan insulted her so badly and left the room like a wild wind which only leads to destruction.

Geet's guilt is now replaced by fear and insult. She feels herself like a flith who born just to ruined by other in different ways. No one like her. No one love her just abondon like a garbage. Her life seems burden to her and no wish she have to carry it for long.

Geet was so lost in her thoughts when his servant came and aske for her to came for breakfast as soon as she can. From past three days she was in the same cloths in which he kidnapped her. Geet get up and take bath. She came down and found hall empty,so she went outside in a garden for some fresh air. Though she scared of him too but not as much as she from her father Sumer. Gardner was busy in watering the plants and she spell bound reached towards the beautiful flowers. Geet caressed the flowers tenderly and feel good there.


A missing smile came on her luscious lips.

'betiya apko phool pasand hai?' He asked softly and she nodded with a smile. 'ye de du apko?' he asked if she want any flower.

'nahi kaka,use todiye mat. Inme b jaan hoti hai. Use dard hoga.' she denied quickly.

Maan is scanning the whole view from his room's gallery. For the first time he found her happy. Geet scanning everywhere and suddnly she found him staring her. Geet trembled in fear and start moving inside before he yelled on her. Maan gave her instructions not went outside KM without his permission.


Geet's heart is throbbing badly wit unknown fear. She silently sit on her chair and waits for her to come. Maan went to talk to Gardner first.


"Kya chahiye tha use?", Maan get curious what she found here which gave her reason for smile.


"Kuchh nahi Maan baba. Maine to puchha b ki konsa fool chahiye to todne se b mana kar diya. Kehne lagi inhe dard hoga inme b to jaan hai. Sach kahe baba bahut masoom hai Geet bitiya." Like Adi and Sasha, gardner too repeat the same fact. Maan's brow knotted and he lost in her thoughts.

"Wo bhi to bilkul aisi hi..." Maan was lost in his past memories when his phone buzzed and he come out of his past. Maan ans the call and moved inside. Geet sit silent and gloomed. Maan glanced her. He settled on head chair. Geet's head is lower, avoiding his furious eyes. Maan wait for her single glance but she wont given up. Specially after morning incident.


He observed her and when for a long she dont saw him, he caughed to grab her attention. Spoon drop from her hand and she saw him in a flip of second and apolozise. "I am sorry." She said in such a lower voice that it hardly reach to her own ears. But Maan aware of her gestures.



"Agr tume garden me better feel hota hai to tum waha ja skti ho." He gave her permission and Geet just staring her amusingly. "Lekin dhyan rahe sirf garden tak. Uske bahar nahi ok?" He cautioned her as well. She nodded and her vanished smile came back on her face.


After breakfast he went to his office. He summoned Sasha in his cabin. "Sasha maine Geet k liye dresses arrange kar di hai par baki cheeze tum dekh lena." He commands her and she quickly went to shop for Geet. Maan called Geet. She pick up his call. But still kept with her silent. "Geet..." he start talking to her.

"Ji..." she replied briefly.


"Abhi tumhare liye ek parcel aayega. Use receive kar lena." Hecommands her and in return she again replied ji only.


Maan cuts the call and Nakul came to inform her about the parcel. Geet went to recieve the parcel. She signed the papers and recieve the parcels. She take the box to her room and found the many dresses in that. She just glance and keep the box at one side.


Sasha shopped accessories for her and reached to KM. "How are you sweety. Do you like the dresses MK send for you?" She asked softly.


"I am fine. How are you", Geet now feel bit comfortable with her.

"Thats good. Aaj to fever b nahi hai." Sasha like her gestures.

She talked with her for few hours and then reached to office. She informed Maan. Maan feel good as now she have some clothes. Maan wants to make her comfortable in KM. Slowly slowly he too on the verge of believe that he wont punish her any how...



precap: Maan met with Advocate of Geet's Mother.


NOTE:- GUYS HAR BAAR MUJHE LIKE K LIYE NOTE KYU DALNE PADTE HAI?

EVEN AFTER SENDING PMS TO 300 READERS I ONLY GET 167 LIKES. AGAIN I HAD PUT NOTE ITS REALLY ANNOYING TO ME.

OK SILENT READERS IF YOU ARE NOT INTRESTED IN APPRECIATING MY WORK THEN I ALSO NOT INTRESTED IN SHARING MY WORK WITH YOU.

MY NEXT 2 UPDATES TAK DEKHUNGI AGAR LIKES AND COMMENTS PROPER ATE HAI BINA MERE BOLE THEN FINE OTHERWISE I WILL SHIFT MY ALL FFS ON MY BLOG AND SHARE IT ONLY WITH MY REGULAR READERS WHO HAVE A TIME FOR ME. THEN NO "LFR2, IN LOVE... AND MRS" ON GF.

THIS IS MY LAST WARNING IF THIS TIME LIKES WONT HIT 190 I WILL END IT HERE FOR SILENT READERS
Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago
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Edit
awesme part
but maan is such a khadoos!!! Ek taref kar dega toh kya ho jayega..
Poor geet..she feels unwanted..
Edited by _CookieMonster_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update dear
Geet is soo scared of maan
And maan always hurt her in anger
Hope maan will soon find out about Samar and geet's relation how they torture her in the name of property
I m glad that she is opening up a little with sasha
Continue soon dear
Edited by priya_ya1408 - 11 years ago
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Superb update... so Maan is somewhere believing that Geet is innocent..Thank God at least... he is treating her humanly... and not bursting on her..,.
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor geet😭 geet is so scared of maan maan ia always hurt geet
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Dekha I told you ullu h maan!
Usk past k chakar me geet k present k tote udrahe h!😆
I mean he could at least speak to her na!
Ullu!
Waiting for the next!

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