A Sharon OS: The Men Who Ruined My Life

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Really commendable work..Big round of applause for ur unique concept..I really loved it..It was different from the league..For the first time i am glad to read about sharon as a character coveying her emotions,her inner self here..I must say..u just done a superrbb job of emotions and their justifications here..I really loved sharon pov in case of swayam and her father..She was absolutely correct as swayam is her love and he is the only one who ruined her life by giving immense love,making her to feel such a Beautifull feeling of love...The whole concept u narrate is just mindblowing,Out of the way..Sharon as a character is very very different one and the way u showed her was really commendable..So i just loved it and i really enjoyed it (As the OS was really different one and very interesting)..Great Work..!!

Thanx for PM and sorry for being late here..

Prateek