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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter ~ 22

Author's POV

Viren Held Jeevika's Wrist. Bringing Her Close. "We're Going Out. And Whatever It Is You're Coming With Me." He Said As He Rested His Chin On Her Shoulder.

J - "But Viren..."

V - "No But's Jeevika...Please.." He Said Opening The Closets Door. "Here You're Wearing This. Go Get Ready!" Handing Her A Gift Box

J - "Now What's This New Dress For?" She Said Opening The Box In Which A Anarkali Suit Was Packed. White One With Blue Borders. With Some Glittler. Soft, Elegant, And Gorgeous. "Where Are We Going And Why?"

V - "Stop Asking Questions! Go Get Ready..." He Said As He Pushed Jeevika Towards The Bathroom.

Jeevika Came Out After Few Mins To Find Viren Standing There Wearing A Red Shirt, Black Jeans And A White Blazer.

J - "Take That Blazer Of Viren..." She Said As She Stood Across Him.

V - "Why What's Wrong In It?" He Glanced At Himself In The Mirror Askign The Question.

J - "Just That I Don't Like The Combo...How About You Just Go Change You're Whole Attire?"

V - "What? Why?" He Asked Confused.

J - "Just Because I Said." She Opened His Closet Finding Something For Him To Wear. Taking Out His Blue Jeans And Black Shirt "Here, Wear This..."

V - "Alright!" He Entered The Bathroom To Change.

When He Came Out Jeevika Stood In Front Of The Mirror. Viren Stood Behind Her.

V - "Close Your Eyes!" He Ordered.

J - "Why?"

V - "Asking Questions Is Your Another Hobby I Guess..." He Glared At Her...

J - "No..." She Said As She Closed Her Eyes.

Viren Placed A Thin Diamond Neclace Around Her Neck. Sensing It On Her, She Touched It Opening Her Eyes, Adoring It.

J - "It's Gorgeous...Thank You Viren, But Why This All Gifts? It Ain't My Birthday, Nor There Something Imortant Today"

V - "It's Not Gorgeous. It's You Who Make It Gorgeous Wifey.." He Said Smirking. "And About The Gifts..Hmm..."

J - "What? Tell Me Already Viren..." She Said Curiously, When Viren's Phone Rang.

V - "Hello" He Said Picking Up The Call. "What? When Did That Happen!?" He Banged His Hand On The Wall, "Damn, He Was My Main Witness!" Moving His Index Finger Over His Brow "I'll Be There In Some Time..." He Ended The Call.

J - "It's Okay, We Can Go Some Other Time Viren. Go Rush To The Spot Now. And Take Care. And Before That Have A Glass Of Milk. Let Me Bring In..."

V- "Jeevs I'm So Sorry..." He Said In A Guilty Tone.

J - "Did I Say Anything?" She Stared At Him. "Come One Have A Glass Of Milk And Go" She Said Pulling Him Out To The Kitchen.

Viren Follwed Her Silently As Mom Dad Witnessed This Scene.

J - "Here Have It." She Said Handing Him The Glass. While Viren Gulped Down The Milk Hurriedly.

V - "Don't Wait For Me, Have Your Dinner. Sorry Again." He Said Hugging Her Lightly.

J - "We'll Talk About It Later...Take Care..." She Said.

Viren Left While Jeevika Told Mom That She'll Change And Then Serve Dinner To Them And Virat.

Viren's POV

I Entered To Find My Room Pitch Dark. Jeevika Was Sleeping On The Bed. Without Disturbing Her I Placed My Stuffs On Bed. Tiptoed To The Bathroom To Get Changed. I Got Back To Find Jeevika Missing From The Bed. And My Stuffs Places On Their Places. I Left The Room To Find Jeevs Serving Food In The Plate. Glancing At Me She Ordered To Settle On The Seat. I Agreed.

J - "Chalo Finish It Fast..." She Said As She Settled On the Chair Next To Me. Staring At Me To Start My Meal. While I Kept Looking At Her Expressionlessly.
J - "What?? Don't Start Your Thankyou And Sorry Session! I Don't Want It! Eat Your Food Before It Gets Cold!" She Said As She Slapped My Head Lightly.
V - "I Love You!" I Said Smiling Ear To Ear. She Looked At Me, And Then Smiled With A Little Crimson Color On Her Cheeks.
J - "I Love You Too! For Now Eat!" She Said.
V - "Did You..." She Cut Me Off In Middle.
J - "Yes I Had Dinner With The Others. Mom Forced Me To Have...So..."
V - "Pretty Good!" I Said Smiling As I Continued To Eat! I Was Hungry! But If My Sweet Wife Wasn't Up, I Would Sleep Without Having Anything!

Soon Enough I Was Done With The Dinner. Just As Jeevika Was To Go Of To Put The Plate Away I Accompanied Her To The Kitchen.
I Sat There On The Kitchen Counter Looking At How Beautiful She Looked. She Told Me To Go To The Room Till She Checked On Mom Dad & Virat.

I Entered Room After Washing My Face To See The Balcony Door Open. I Edged Towards It To See Her Standing There Lost In Her Own Thoughts. Grabbing Her By Her Waist I Held Her Closer To Me. To Which As Always She Rested Her Head Back On My Chest, Releasing All The Thoughts She Had. We Stayed There Like That Silent And Peaceful For Another Few Minutes.

V - "Jeevika, You Didn't Ask Why Was I Taking You Out For Dinner Last Night..." I Asked Her.
J - "I Did Ask You Viren, But Then You Didn't Want To Ruin Your Surprise! And Anyways Now I Know Why And What..." She Said Not Moving At All, But Still Turning Her Cheeks Red.
V - "How Do You Know?" I Inquired...
J - "Simple...My Little Monster Told Me When She Called After I Had Dinner..." She Smiled Not Letting The Color Of Her Cheeks Fade Away.
V - "So..You Aren't Angry Or Upset Wifey?" I Asked As I Grinned With A Little Hint Of Guilt.
J - "No...I'm Not. Work Comes First, And Then Everything..." Turning Towards Me.."Lets Go Sleep Now...We Can Talk About This Tomorrow...I'm Really Tired Viren..." She Continued As She Hugged Me With Her Hands Encircling My Neck And Her Head Resting On My Chest.
Kissing Her Hairs "Okay...Lemme Carry My Wifey To The Bed...We'll Sleep..." She Mumbled A Thank You Making Me Smile Wider.
Picking Her Up I Took Her To The Bed. Placing Her There I Edged Towards My Side, Laying Next To Her, I Placed The Duvet On Us. And She Slept Snuggling With Me. While I Was Off After Kissing Her Forehead And Staring Her For Next Few Minutes, Thanking My Fate For Giving Me A Better Half Like Her.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Res..
yayy i'm first😉
*Unres*
Victory dance...🥳
Loved the whole update
Fantastic👏
Amazing😆
Loved that jeevs wakes up when viren came and served him the food
Continue soon...

Edited by MyKryan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res !!! :)

#Unres

Oh My My !!!!

U Updated !!! Riddhi I M So Addicted To This Story Of Urs !!!

This Is Like One Of the grt Stories We have On VIRIKA !!! <3
And After Knowing Ur Personal Attachment With this Story !!! I M Liking This A Lil More !!! :D

This Story Is A Perfect Blend Of Emotions!!!! Nd Always Takes Me On A Ride Filled with Emotions !!!<3
Ur Style Of Writing Is Getting Better nd Better !!! :)

This Update Was In Particular Filled with Care, Love And Understanding !!
Jeevika Is such An Understanding Girl !!!
Viren is Lucky To Have Her !!!
Nd What Is So Amazing abt Ur Updates...That U Show Everything So Realistic ...Nd Everyone Can Relate To It !!!

Keep Up The GoodWork !!! <3
Nd Keep Giving us These Phenominal Updates !!! :D <3
Edited by millee18 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wowww. . Awesum sweet update... loved it soo much.. keep continuingg..eager to read the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was awesum luved this update madly in luv wid this story n thnx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
viren surprise😉bt all ruined bt work cums first naaa
awww love d virika convo at night d bestessst couple both know each other soo well n love each other so much ❤️
continue sooon
thanx for d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous update
viren's surprise for jeevika is so cute...but work :(
Virika's relationship is so strong
amazing
awsame
fantastic
Thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
absolutely brilliant
so romantic
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
ress!!
unresss!!
im not first!😡😡😡
i guess im prettyy late!!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
luved the update!
always nailing it!😊👏👏👏
the update was awesommeee!! <3 <3
aww the convo was bare cute!!😳😳😳 <3 <3
just amazing!!
awww they were guna go for dinner!!
bless!!
"work comes first"!!!!
shes soo understanding!
blesss!!!
awww she made viren have dinner!!
cuteee!!
blesss!!!
awww she found out y they were guna go out!!!!!
anyways it was amazing!
fantastic!
superb!
luved it!
running out of words now!
fab!
continue ur superb work!
and cont soon!
update was short but its ok!
thnxxx!
tc!
luv u!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Edited by sumayyah1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update ya
how you describe jeevika
she is so caring in her place
any other she will be angry with his hubby
and how cool she controlled the situation
and she is waiting for hubby
and he makes him to eat
you describe jeevika so nicely
means she is the best daughter , wife and daughter in law
and bhabhi love her so much
and i want know about the surprise
and what is that
totally
amazing
superb
fantastic
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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