Hamaari Prem Kahaani......#5 Part 64/ Pg 139 Dt 24/05 - Page 73

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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update
things r getting better . dev is safe now even though he is broken from inside and vulnerable but is fine and with his family and hope with time he will gather himself
maaneet scene was really cute.poor geet maan made her fool 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan

Nice Updt..
Maaneet part was so short..
Lovely pics..



Thank you
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I wasn't gonna include Maaneet in this update but then added later😳
I wanted to clear the air around Dev😊
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Posted: 11 years ago



Thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
dev is all fine but he is dejected with everything he had done in his life in the influence of ayesha
In KM, everyone get a relief to know dev is safe in Apna Ghar
LOL!!! geet ka woh bhayanak attitude dekh kr maza aa gya
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 61 - lovely update...
curious to know whose pov..dev ki koi love interest hai kya...
pari was happy to know that dev is alright and afe at their house...
loved vicky pari fight
maaneet fight reminded me of the serial...
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
DEV IS FINE BUT HAS LOST ALL WILL TO LIVE
BUT NANI IS THERE TO BOOST HIS MORALE AND MAKE HIM PROVE TO THE WORLD THAT HE IS AMAN KHANNA'S SON AND HE IS NOT A COWARD
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 61
awesome dear...
lovely...
poor Dev...
his Naaniji is trying to make him understand...
poor Pari but now shes happy that Dev is fine...
Vicky was trying to cheer up Pari...
and Maan and Geet scene was excellent...
my God that was so hilarious...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago




Teaser

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I slowly lifted myself and pecked his forehead, his nose and then moved towards his lips. I bent to close the distance but last nights events halted my very personal romantic stint. Though Maan was a light sleeper but still sometimes I was lucky to get away with my drooling and pecking routine. I would always take these opportunities to lightly kiss him and have my fill to gaze at him without him knowing about it.




It was my small little secret!


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I hit my forehead for getting carried away yet again.



'Geet yeh tu kya kar rahi thi...abhi yeh sher jaag jaata aur teri khair nahi rehti! Yaad kar kal raat ko iss Dusht Danav ki wajah se tujhe movie ka climax miss karna pada tha...Inhone phir se tujhe bewakoof banaya. Agar aisa hi chalta raha toh tera baby bhi apne paapa ki tarah tujhe ullu bana ne lagega...Teri toh koi value hi nahi rahegi. Nahi!!!...'




'Ghar ki boss main hoon aur hamesha main hi rahungi! Mujhe inko mooh tod jawaab dena hoga...yeh meri izzat ka sawaal hain!' I vowed to myself and escaped out of the room to implement my plan.









"Agar tumne koi bhi gadbad ki...ya Maan ko kuch bhi bataya toh...mujhe Pari ko batana hoga tumhaare boys night out ke baare mein...jo tumne plan kiya tha woh bhi...apni aur Pari ke dinner date ko cancel kar ke."


"Main toh Maan ke saath apna score kaise bhi settle kar doongi lekin tumhe kaun bachayega..." I left my statement hanging and seeing the drained off face of Vicky I knew mission accomplished!







"BB aap fikar mat karo, main abhi saari arrangements karwa deta hoon aur Aadi Bhai ko bhi phone kar ke bol deta hoon..." He babbled.



"Aadi ko phone karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain, woh sab Pinky ne sambhaal liya hain. Tum sirf woh karo jo maine kaha hain...aur Maan ke uthne se pehle." I ordered him and walked away.

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'Kahan phas gaya Vicky!'



"Ek taraf khaai aur ek taraf kuwa! Bro ko pata chala toh bhi marega aur Pari ko haathon bhi katega...Isse kehte hain Bali ka Bakra!!!!!"



"Yeh BB ka dimaag toh solid chalta hain, inke innocent looks ko dekh ke lagta nahi ke yeh aisi sab planning kar sakti hain woh Maan Singh Khurana ke khilaaf par...kar bhi sakte hain jisne Bro ko apna deewana bana diya hain usme kuch toh baat hogi!"



"Chal beta kaam pe lag jaa warna BB jaan le legi!"



"Babaji meri raksha karna!"










Very disappointed with the response of the previous update

I guess u all are loosing interest







Will update soon


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Edited by heytal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice teaser. what is geet planning now that too against maan ?She always looses still never gives up.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heehee. vicky phas gaya bechara..😆

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