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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here I am writing an OS..with an awesome Scene..from season 1 .. don't wanna change .. it ..as I love the scene ..but It is for the Birthday Girl as its her fav scene most ..and more over ..some how this scene could be more romantic ..I am just trying to ..imagine the scene in my way .. hope I will do justice with this...

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Ram and Priya both are in changing room...their relation changed a lot ..They are now Husband and wife .in true sense they r now ..Man and woman.. They reach in so comfortable zone that sharing one changing room .its not a big deal for them...

Ram is feeling so hot .. and complaining about the electronics machine that its not enough to give him comfort..

But Priya is lost in her thought .. she does not pay attention to his words.. because.. RAM himself ..is occupied her all thought so his words did not effect on her so much .. After a blissful night ..and freshen up..Priya .smiling herself..and humming her favorite song ..,....

Bahon Mein Chale Aao

Bahon Mein Chale Aao

Ho, Humse Sanam Kya Parda

Ho, Humse Sanam Kya Parda

Ram is surprised with her behavior .. First when he did not get any reply from her ...but ..when He heard the song what Priya is humming.. it makes him blush...blush more ..and takes him their first visit to Vikram flat and the late night drive, Priya's drunken state .. as this was the First time ..he saw his wife in a childish nature ..which secretly he admired ..even he uttered she looks Cute ..and more sweet.. but he did not compliment her .. his shyness..and more over being a Golu .. He could not express ,as he was unaware about his own feelings ...even did not like her so much .. but .. fallen for her company as friend..as a guide...and the special things which he is remebering that is her song when they were in car ... "Rat akeli hai ...bujh gaye Diye "

And again same type of song His Wife ...

Yeh Aaj Ka Nahin Milan

Yeh Sang Hain Umar Bhar Ka

when the reality strikes him that now his wife is not in a drunken state .. she is very much in her own self .. then why this song ..and it makes him more naughty...he made a plan asap..and again said .. and this time very loudly..

Sh, Sh, Sh, Sh, Sh, Sh

This Changed Ram Kapoor is not the arrogant Business Tycoon..he is much more a husband RAM Kapoor..husband of his Priya .. and ..it encourages himm lots to give her Company with those words which is in the main song ...

Priya just landed from her own land.. with her husband s voice..it makes her surprised ...She knows her Man. Her Mr.Kapoor ..who does not like this stuffs ..even who is not so romantic . but she is in love.. she loves him like crazy the way he is .. no Romantic ..but no one is in the earth who is so much caring about her ...caring about his family even his step family .. .. he is just a perfect son.. perfect .. friend..perfect ..Son in law.. a true life partner ...more over her best friend.. but this type of matching her foot step is so wired for her ..

Priya looks at him .. and asks ..

Kya kaha aapne..

Ram trying to hide his naughtyness.. composing himself he says ..

Kya ase kyun dekh rehe ho.. yaar ..i am feeling so hot ...

Priya knows her husband is so Golu..so ignoring her own thoughts...

She moving towards him... And when she founds the sweat bids ,..she takes her pallu to wipe all ..

Ram loosing himself more and more in her .. in her attitude, the way she cares about his,, his each and every lil belongings.. so lil needs of his.. after his mom she is the first lady .. who cares for him..not his wealth.. rather his health more ..

As a caring wife ...Priya .. takes one Shirt and suggest him to change it will be more comfortable for him..

Being the rightful Person..she takes the charge and .. starts to untie his tie knot...

Her movement surprised Ram more and more ..but he loves it .. love s it more ..her proximity makes him blush more ..and of course more demanding too .

Priya is busy to untie the knot ..and ..Ram takes this opportunity ..putting his arms..around Priya's waist .. pulling her close to him...

Its Not his First touch ..but .. she is not so habituated with this .. just .. their blissful married life started a couple of days before ..his lil touch Makes her Shiver ..

Priya stares at him.. ..

Kya gana gaa rehi thi tum...

Priya does not expect this from Ram ...she is un aware about the fact .. and with lil hesitancy she says...

Wo.. Wo main.. even she cant match her eyes with him..

Lowering her gazes ..she open her mouth to reply..

But like a stub born baby ,, Ram says ...gakara batayo .. I know u have a sweet voice...

Priya cant Ignore her husband demand..

With her red cheek she starts ,,

Bahon Mein Chale Aao

Ho, Humse Sanam Kya Parda

Ho, Humse Sanam Kya Parda

Ram is enjoying her state.. he knows very well his wife is so much shy .. but it makes him more crazy .. crazy for her ...

U cant stop singing.. I want to listen full song .. I just love ur Voice Priya ...

Making her more Blushing .. but more it giving her inspiration and an unknown pleasure to sing for her husband

Chale Hi Jaana Hain Nazar Churake Yun

Phir Thami Thi Saajan Tumne Meri Kalayi Kyu, Haan

Chale Hi Jaana Hain Nazar Churake Yun

Phir Thami Thi Saajan Tumne Meri Kalayi Kyu

Kisi Ko Apna Banake Chod De

Aisa Koi Nahin Karta

Ram goes so close to her ear ...seductively utters

Sh, Sh, Sh, Sh, Sh, Sh

Priya cant take this more .. already his proximity makes her ..loose and ..his hot breath on her ear ... she just loosing her self ..more and more ... to control herself.. she just moves a lil bit from there ..but ..her pallu tugs at his wrist watch and...just fallen from her shoulder..

Ram stares at her from top to bottom.. and the same effects happened with Priya .. but Priya and her eyes are just stuck at his eyes which expresses lots of love and also the desire for her ... which she cant ..ignore too ..

And this effects of him.. makes her lost and she moves towards him.. with the same condition ...

Bahon Mein Chale Aao

Ho, Humse Sanam Kya Parda

Ho, Humse Sanam Kya Parda

Ram lost in her state .. that he forgets every thing.. his work. Even that still he needs to prepare himself. for office.. Priya goes close to him ..tip toed , reaches still his ear ...

Kabhi Kabhi Kuch To Kaho Piya Humse

Aye, Kam Se Kam Aaj To Khulake Milo Zara Humse

Kabhi Kabhi Kuch To Kaho Piya Humse

Aye, Kam Se Kam Aaj To Khulake Milo Zara Humse

Completing this lines.. she kisses his chubby cheeks just ,, controlling her emotion.. ...Ram was lost in her state .. and her proximity ..her action..makes him more weak ..that .When ..Priya .. starts to move back.. without his sense he upwards his left arm to show her watch exactly he wants to show where her pallu tugged..

Priya can feel his state .. biting her lower lips she nods ...

Hai Raat Apni, Jo Tum Ho Apne

Kisi Ka Phir Humhe Dar Kya

Her this reaction is enough to proboke RAM much more .. he goes close to her lips.to fill the gap.. when his lips touches with her he utters

Sh, Sh, Sh, Sh, Sh, Sh

Within a second he just catches her lips...and the both love birds lost in their land.. to make the morning again bliss full forgetting the world ..just for being together again..with morning bliss..

So Tough job to write this typo.. I am not at all good .. please forgive me ..

Thank u


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aweee... Sooo romantic😉
Superb OS❤️
Raya are tooo romantic...
I love this scene too much😉
Thanks 4 pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was d most beautiful scene v ever got in BALH.. jst awesome..
Nice extention of d scene... 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG! Sanju
Morning i open my IF account, first recd your PM😆
What a Hot OS dear 😳
I like Each & Every lines, it's full of Romantic 😉
Thanks for the Romantic OS & PM too Dear 😆



Edited by rosinagoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb os
lo bhai mai aa gai
first to nhi pr jaldi aa gai😆
wah wahhh
kya baat hai...
romantic os😉
Thanks for the pm🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thx for the PM.
Changing room se shuru hogayi inki kahani.
i loved the part ,priya wiping his sweat from her pallu, i can make out both their expressions
what a sensuous song u chose to express their feelings.
Khoyi khoyi si priya, naughty naughty ram and itni sweat humming voice hayye kya mast sama hai. a couple to be adored and usspe sanju ki jaadu 👏👏👏



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shhh in ram style awesome di hayyee season 1 thank u for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hhhaaayyyeee di...kya baat hain...ek aur romantic os... ;) ;) ;)
superromntc os...

comebck wid another...

thnx fr the pm...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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its beautiful, loved it,. this particular scene is one of my favourite and I loved this new musical version of the scene, keep up the good work 👏👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os...
loved it..
My sister is writing romantic os
great..


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Edited by rampriyarocks - 11 years ago

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