SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn NOTE (Pg145) CH-43 Pg 143 *Aug11, 14*

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@navk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

amazing updates
& song selection was fab

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kirti

@Kunta_tanha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

First of fall , thank u sakshi for pm n scrab too . ... It was wonderful surprise . U update 2 part wow , thank u so much ... U r gud writer n even sweet too. Coming too update first want where nimmi got to know about swaron ... I like most when u r describing their duet dance ... I like song selection n dance pose also ... Their are swaron , tyo dance should be perfect ... It was very gud update . Oh Sharon lost his brother... I like , we got to know sad part of Sharon again ...but happy swayum is there for her ... I enjoy telephone coversation ... I always cherish Sharon naughty avatar ... Very nice update n too gud writer u r . Waiting for update n all the best for ur test , love u n miss u

Edited by Kunta_tanha - 11 years ago

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Rajeshwari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#613

surprise was lovely!!!
awesome chapters!!
great fun reading both of them!!
super!!!
thanks for the pm.

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shaaz23

@shaaz23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Thank u for double surprise
It was too good and amazing
Their dance was just perfectly defined ,Sharon teasing him was too fun
Waiting for their love story to progress and their parents reaction especially Sharon's dads
All the best for ur exams
Sorry for the late comments[B]

Edited by shaaz23 - 11 years ago

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Sakshi Shah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#615

Thanks for the response...
Here's the next chapter...
Sorry for any further mistake.

Recap- SwaRon duet on "Mere haath mein" , Sharon's painful past, Sharon teasing Swayam, Nandini gets a hint, Renuka aware of SwaRon relationship!

Both were happy... For Swayam it was a dream come true...
Swayam *thoughts*- I don't know how to express my feelings... wo confession and meine kabhi nahi socha tha that I'll ever fall in love and Sharon... she don't love me but still she wants to be with me... she wants to fall in love with me!! Isn't it perfect..! I'll make sure she feel comfortable with me... and mein uske liye kuch bhi kar sakta hun... usne bhi kabhi nahi socha hoga... ki wo kabhi pasand (like) kar payegi and that am sure... but it happened... I'll always say... humari kismat... all thanks to it for our Connection!!

He smiled to himself... staring at her pic in his phone...
Swayam *to the pic*- Agar har morning tum se shuru ho...aur har night tum se khatm to I swear mujhe aur kjuch nahi bhi mila to I'll be happy!!

He kept the phone aside and went to take bath!

Here, Sharon was eager to tell Swayam about what happened the past night...

After sometime she told Swayam about Renuka's reaction to their relation and he was quite happy that Renuka accepted them whole heartily...

***
A week before Finals...(Of Seniors)
At College,

Sharon- Guys! Let's go for Rehearsals...
Swayam- Yeah yeah..let's go...
Simmi- Tum dono couple ho..iska matlab ye nahi ki har baat ek dusre kimaanoge...samjhe!

She spoke all that in a hurry but later realized that it was all out in front of the gang!!
Taani- Whatt..! Swayam Sharon! OMG! I mean..wowww! Tumne bataya nahi...???
Taani immediately hugged Sharon and Swayam!

Rey- Great dude...! Sahi hai...
Swayam- Guys!! Wo event ke...
Aashi- Ohho...aap dono to ek dusre ke liye perfect types ho!.
Simmi- Yes! So true...

Sharon was literally blushing... and Swayam's looks at her were making her blush more... Swayam so loved this...
Vicky- Ab to party chahiye yaar!!!!! Kaha, kab ye tumlog decide karo...but not college huh..

Everyone laughed...
Sharon- Noo...koi party nahi...abhi next week se tumlogo ke exams hai...uske baad karte hain...
Bharat- Kya be...fir to aadhe kam ho jayenge...hatt...
Rinni- Seniors ke last exams!

All turned upset but Swayam kept looking at Sharon who was looking here and there..as if avoiding that...and trying to ignore the fact!
She felt bad...

Swayam- Kya hai yaar...tumlogo ki har baat ka end yahi topic kyun hota hai??? Seriously...
Sharon- Sach to yahi hai na... Swayam!

She titled her head a little and looked at him... he just tooka deep breath...
Swayam- Sharon tumm...
Nilesh- Are yaar bas karo guys...

Swayam stromed up and went to Rehearsal hall...Sharon kept looking at him...

Sharon *in mind*- Gussaa!! Swayam!! Arghh... mein pagal hun.. yeh topic future hai and jab mujhe Swayam ke saath hone tha meine uska mood aur kharab kar diya... mujhe usse milna padega...

Sharon stood up and went behind Swayam...

Sharon- Swayamm...
He was standing inside the RH...
Sharon- Swayam..sorry... na...
Swayam- Hmm...
Sharon- Please...
Swayam- Hmmm...
Sharon turned him...
Sharon- Last baar bol rahi hun...sorry! Just accept it...
Swayam- Okay fine... but ye mujhe batao ki tumhari galti kya thi???
Sharon- Huh???
Swayam chuckled... Sharon hit him on his chest playfully...
Swayam- Are mein tum par gussa nahi tha... wo topic start hua isliye!
Sharon- Hmm...so...?
Swayam- So?
Sharon- Isse pehle ki mein yahi so jaun...let's dance...?
Swayam- Umm... shayad RH mein dance hi karte hai?
Sharon- Are dumbo tumhare saath... not group...

He was about to reply when he received a call...
Swayam- Hello...Maa?
Kaka- Beta..mein Kaka... aap jaldi ghar aa jao...
Swayam- Kya ho gaya??? Aap itne tension mein??
Kaka- Wo...Nandini beti...behosh ho gayi hai...
Swayam *shocked*- Kya!!! Mein abhi aata hun...Kaka...

He hung up the call...

Sharon- Swayamm..kya hua???
Swayam- Maa behish ho gayi hai...I'll have to go...
Sharon- Okay okay!! You go...I'll be there...
Swayam- Yeah...and...
Sharon- Relax! I'll bring all your stuff...

Swayam ran out of the RH, there NiMmi were coming... (Gang was in Canteen)
Nilesh stopped him...
Swayam- Mein hospital jaa raha hun...
Sharon came behind...
Nilesh- Hua kya?
Sharon- Nilesh tum iske saath jao plz...waha tumhe pata chal jayega...

Nilesh nodded..both ran out...
Nilesh drove the car because Swayam was tensed, and in tensed state he couldn't control himself and that too this was his Mom... for safety Nilesh made him sit next...

Here, In College, Sharon took his bag and other things!
Sharon- Simmi... Mein Swayam ke paas jaa rahi hun... Abhi Nilesh ka message aaya...they are in the City hospital only!
Simmi- Should I?
Sharon- No need to worry...I'll manage... uske Dad bhi nahi hai India mein..so mein pure time wahi rahungi...okay bye!

Sharon took her car and drove off to Hospital. Nilesh had already left from there since Swayam forced him to go...

Sharon- Mam..Nandini Shekhawat?
Lady- Umm..yeah...107...2^nd Floor.

She ran upstairs... was earching here nad there...and justthen found Swayam sitting on the bench, covering his face with his hands...
She came to him and placed her hand on his shoulder...He suddenly looked at her...

Swayam- Shar...
Sharon- Kya ho gaya?
Swayam- Maa...stairs se girr gayi...forhead pe laga hai...little deep...
Sharon *eyes wide*- What!! And abhi??
Swayam- Doctors are still testing her...

Sharon saw tears in his eyes...she sat beside him...
Sharon- Hey, Swayam... unko kuch nahi hua hai...don't worry...
Swayam- I so hope ki wo thik ho jaye...
Sharon- Relax! Acha..I'll be back ina minute...

Swayam nodded and she left...
After 5minutes...she was back with acup of Coffee... she handed it to him...

Swayam- Sharon yeh...
Sharon- Have it...
Swayam- Mujhe nahi chahiye...
Sharon- Coffee lo..you'll feel better...chalo...

He silently had it...she wiped his tears... he threw the empty cup into the dustbin...

Swayam- Sharon...wo mera bag and all...?
Sharon- Haan..wo meri Car mein hi hai.
Swayam- Okay keep it with you only and now ab tum ghar jao..I am here...
Sharon- No Swayam! Mein yahi hun...
Swayam *pleading*- Sharonn...please...
Sharon- Umm..acha thik hai...take care!

Swayam smiled.
Sharon *in mind*- Yeah...ghar jaati hun..and hmm...yeah!

Sharon had something in her mind...so she went directly to Swayam's home.
After keeping his stuff back, she went down in the drawing room where she found Kaka...

Kaka- Beta, waha thik hai sab?
Sharon- Ji Kaka...abhi ilaaj (treatment) chal raha hai...aur Swayam waha akela hai to meine soch rahi hun uske liye khana le jaane ka, wo bhul jayega kyunki!
Kaka- Thik hai beta... mein jata hun...
Sharon- Are nahi.. mein banati hun na..please...

Kaka smiled and nodded...
Sharon made the dinner.. she made the dishes which she knew he would be needing . She then made her way to hospital...

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Swayam- Sharon humesha text karti hai khud hi ki she reached but aaj... bhul gayi hogi... huh...

He was sitting on the chair only... when Sharon tapped his shoulders...
Sharon- Mein yaha hoon...

Swayam looked at her...
Swayam- Sharon! Tum yahan...it's 10 + now...
Sharon- Are...to kya ho gaya? Tumne dinner nahi kiya... fir?
Swayam- Dinner?

Sharon took out the tiffin from the bag and opened it...
Sharon- Dekho meine banaya hai tumhare liye...
Swayam- Sh...
Sharon- Chalo...khao ab..tumne subah se kuch nahi khaya hai...

Swayam had no option but smile at her care and concern...
Swayam- Tumne khaya?
Sharon- Nahii.. tumhare saath khaungi na...

Sharon fed him in between and both had the Dinner...
Sharon- Ek sec...call...
Swayam- Hmm...

On call,
Renuka- Sharon..kaha ho tum??
Sharon- Ohh sorry Chachi.. mein hospital mein hun..Swayam ke saath...
Renuka- Kyaa?? Tum dono thik to ho na??
Sharon- Han haan... wo Swayam ki Mom stairs se gir gayi thi to unko yaha admit kiya hai...
Renuka- Thik hai na??
Sharon- Haan... aur Dad ko bol dena ki mein inke saath rukne wali hun... aaj...aur kal...Swayam bhi akela hai...
Renuka- Thik hai beta...aur koi bhi kaam ho phone kar lena...
Sharon- Thankyou Chaachi... bye!
Call end.

Swayam- What???? Tum yaha ruk rahi ho??
Sharon- Yeahh kyun??
Swayam- Are but tum ghar jao...
Sharon- Tumhe lagta hai tum yeh bologe aur mein sach mein ghar chali jaungi aise is condition mein chodke?
Swayam *laughs*- Nahii...
Sharon- Good..you're right!!

Both chuckled...
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Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago

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Sakshi Shah

@sakshibshah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#616

Updated 28th Chap...how was it???
Sorry for being late..I was stuck with exams...

This Nandini-Swayam-Sharon story I wanted to show for some reason n twist... hope you all liked it.

Demand- 39+ likes n satisfactory comments...

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Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago