TR OS - THE KNOWN UNKNOWN LOVE

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok guys, this OS is specially written for our sunflower Ravee, it's her happy waala 18th birthday today and she is burning with fever on the bed. I hope she gets well soon. And rave, I couldn't make a birthday thread for you, I am sorry. And I hope you will like this os.

A beautiful angel woke up from her sleep and unlocked her phone gasping in shock.

T: hey krishnaji! Bhai toh aaj hi aa rahe hai. Aur mere iss stupid gs ke duty ke wajah se main aaj unhe mil nahi paungi! Kaash bhai aur bhabhi ki shaadi ki baat pakki ho jaaye aaj! Please Krishna ji!!!

And she sprang out of her bed rushing in the washroom.

Meanwhile

R: Yaaawwwnnn!!! Oh my god!!! Aaj Sharon aa rahi hai yaar! Shit! Aur mujhe aaj college jaana padega! Meri Ms. Jodhpur boss mujhe maar daalegi!

Saying so he sprang out of his bed rushing into his washroom,

As he was getting ready he gets a call from Vicky.

And taani gets a call from neha

(Please imagine, rey and taani dialogues are same and Vicky and Neha are same)

R/T: dude! Watsup?

V/N: yaar, mera/meri gaadi khaarab ho gayi yaar, tu pick up karoge please?

R/T: sure, be ready!

In Rey's car and taani's bike

V/N: kya hua? Why are you so silent?

R/T: kya bolu? Meri behen/ mera bhai 7 saal baad London se waapas aa rahe hai and inhone apne liye ladki/ladka pasand kar liya and wo log aaj hi rishta pakka karna jaa rahe hai. And main unse mil nahi saqta/saqti!

V/N: ok, relax! Toh tu chala jaata/ chali jaati!!!

Now single convo!

R: kaise yaar, meri uss strict boss allow karegi toh na, jo even aa raha hai, uske liye budget list banana hai!

V: toh tu taani se pooch leta, she would have given you off!

R: off? My foot! Main uss monkey ko request karu?

V: rey, tu chahe use jitna bhi chidey! Admit it, you feel for her!

R: feel??? Are you nuts?

V: well, I can't help it if you won't accept it yourself!!!

R: tujhe laga bhi kaise ki main uss chudail ke liye kuch feel karunga? Kabhi usko dekha hai? Uske aankhein, uske gaal, uske honth (imagining her and smiling like an idiot)

V: now why are you smiling like an idiot? See, you admit she is beautiful!

R: fine, ok! But uski arrogance!!! You know na who kitna gsgiri karti hai!!!

V: Gs hai toh gsgiri karegi hi na!

R: enough!! Stop supporting her!

V: okay! cool!!!

Meanwhile

N: tu chali jaati thi! Konsa important kaam hai taani!

T: arey wo budget ka list banakar aaj hi vp sir ko dena hai!

N: it's ok yaar, permission le leti!

T: you know na, baad me kitna problem hoga!!!

N: okay, in that case rey ko de dena tha, he would have managed for once.

T: I can't trust him neha in serious matters. Aur agar me usko du bhi, I can't stay peaceful unless I do it myself u know that.

N: don't say that taani, he was the GS once.

T: once upon a time! Uss chimpanzee ke upar kaam chodne se accha hai wo mujhe assist karey!

N: oh!!! You like his company?

T: neha! You know how much he irritates me! Majbooran mujhe usko jhelna padta hai!

N: so you never felt anything for him? Itna handsome hai, cool dashing!

Taani was lost in his looks imagining him.

N: oye, see! He affects you!!!

T: rubbish! You know kitna arrogance hai usme!

N: acha! Leave! You will realize soon!

Finally four of them reached the college.

In the canteen, rey and Vicky on one table and taani and neha on another, Vicky and neha were stealing glances and rey was thinking over his convo with Vicky in the car.

He got an idea and he started talking to talk to Vicky loudly so that taani could hear.

R: Vicky you know what? I forgot to tell you something.

V: what?

R: by sisters's fianc have a beautiful, gorgeous and a sexy sis! She proposed me on the phone the other day and I also accepted. I can't wait to meet her, once my sis engagement is fixed! I can meet her! I am so excited dude!

Vicky felt weird; he understood looking at taani's face burning with jealousy,

Meanwhile

Swayam and Sharon were at singhania mansion, where both their families met and it broke open that Ranvijay Singhania and Rishi Shekhawat were classmates in their college and best friends.

(Now, taani and rey were unaware that their parents are friends)

Both the families accepted their relationship and decided that their engagement will be within 2 days.

Here with taani in washroom

T: idiot! Splash! Gadha! Splash!

Ullu ka pattha! Splash!!!

Urggghhh! Usko chicken pox ho jaaye!

She was splashing water on her face cursing him!

N: someone is jealous!!!

T: uss insaan ko akal nahi hai kya? How can he just say yes to a girl whom did not even see???

N: uski life hai and uski marzi hai! Tumhe kyu bura lag raha hai?

Suddenly taani's phone beeped!

Swayam bhai: engagement tomorrow!

Reading this message, something clicked in her mind.

T: mr. reyaansh singhania! Ab aayega mazaa!!!

She soon changed into a beautiful churidhaar and came to the canteen in the lunch hour. Rey who was talking to Vicky and neha drinking his coke saw her and spit it out in shock. He was gaping at her madly as if he was watching a supernatural thing!

Taani came and sat beside him intentionally.

Viha clear their throat so that rey is back in canteen.

N: kya baat hai taani! Looking so different!

T: wo main aaj date pe jaa rahi hu!

Rey's eyes widened in shock and

R: kya?

T: haa, main aaj date pe jaa rahi hu!

N: kiske saath?

T: wo, my bro's fianc brother! We were talking to each other on phone for the past 10 days. And yesterday he asked me on a date! I am so excited neha! I can't just wait!!!

Neha understood her plan and

N: I am so happy for you taani!

Rey's blood was boiling, how dare she go on date with some stranger?

He left the canteen in anger and went to fire exit. He messaged taani to come there.

Taani entered the FE closing the door behind her, he suddenly caught hold of her arms and gripped them tightly.

She let out a cry and was petrified at his behavior.

R: I never thought you would steep so low taani! I never thought you will simply accept whoever asks you on date, no matter whatever it is! Shame on you taani! How can you do this being a girl? Do you have something called self respect? I feel so ashamed that I have respected you in my life!

He pushed her off from his hard dead grip and left the fire exit.

Taani sat down and was crying hard remembering those harsh words. She never thought in her wildest dreams that rey would be so harsh on her.

Next day

The whole singhania mansion was on full swing with engagement preparations and rey being the brother of Sharon indulged him in work.

rey:

The Shekhawats entered the mansion, including taani. Both rey and taani were not aware that about whom they spoke to test each other were themselves.

taani:

When both the families were exchanging hugs, then rey and taani saw each other and were utterly shocked!

When their parents introduced taani to singhanias and rey to shekhawats, the got another thunderbolt, they both were silent the whole day.

When, swayam and Sharon exchanged their rings, taarey saw the glistening love beaming in the eyes of those love birds. Soon, taani couldn't stand and rushed to the terrace.

She collapsed there and started crying, crying her heart out. His words shot her heart with such intensity that, she felt like dying.

R: taani!

Taani turned around and saw rey, she got up and was about to leave but he held her wrist and pulled her, he held her arms lightly but

T: sss!!!

He then saw his nail marks on her tender skin, his heart sank. He looked at her with teary eyes and stroke her arms gently but she pushed his hand.

T: rey, mujhe jaisi giri hui ladki par apni sympathy mat dikhao! It's an insult for you!

That hammered him into his soul!

R: taani! I am___ I am sorry!

He whispered to her!

T: it's okay mr. reyaansh singhania! Waise mujh jaisi ladki ko yeh sab sehna hi padta hai na! Thank you so much for showing me my standards!

This was enough for him! He pulled her by her wait and hugged her with all his might.

R: taani, I know ki maine bohot rudely baat ki hai tumse! I don't have any right to even comment on you! Aur maine itna kuch keh diya! Mere baatein maafi ke laayak nahi hai taani! But, I am hopelessly in love with you! And I can't lose you because of my arrogance! Please don't leave me taani! I just can't survive without you!

His tears were falling on her neck and shoulder drop by drop. Her heart was bleeding when he was crying!

Taani was also crying, she hugged him back in response. This oozed out his tension proving that she forgave him!

He pulled out and rested his forehead on hers, wiping her tears.

R: saara makeup kharaab ho gaya! Wiping her kajal

She wiped her kajal and

T: ab theek hai?

R: haan, and tumhaari lipstick bhi!

She was about to wipe it but

R: ahaa! Please give me the privilege! And he leant forwards, taani understood his intentions and kept her finger on his lip and bent her head blushing furiously.

Rey lifted her up and started to twirl her around, taani was scared and started laughing heartily, then she asked him to put her down looking at his face and he kept her down and then

T: I love you too rey!

He took her lip into his, she helplessly gripped the collar of his sherwani and he pulled out. They intertwined their fingers and went down to join the function.

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Okay now, I hope you liked it ravee and Priyanka di, I hope I justified it.

Happy birthday ravee, may god bless you sweet heart! Take care!

Love you so much!!!

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Edited by hima_taarey - 11 years ago

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taani.priya1997 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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first of all awesome done...tune justify kiya and
happy wala birthday ravee...may the good god bless u get well soon

Edited by taani.priya1997 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww it was really cute os
beautifully written
Edited by princess_tara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely n awesome os. Luved it.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY RAVEE!!!!
Edited by geeth_amar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such an amazing nd awesome OS
Luved it
Thanx for d pm
A very Happy Birthday RAVEE
God bless u
Get well soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow :)
Awesome OS :)
Loved it :)
Happy birthday RAVEE :)
May god bless you :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wish u a very happy birthday Raveena
superb os
taarey feel for each other but dont want to accept it nice
it was awesome

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was an amazing os.. Happy b'day ravee
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i was in awe.. ! ..
🤗... 😳... 😛..

keep writing :)

ps. - Happy bday Ravee.. ! 😃 hope you get well soon 😛.. rock the sickness and dance 😆
A BIG TIGHT 🤗 for YOU !
Edited by ankita_95 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was a lovely os.. And happy birthday ravee...

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