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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for all well wishers for their blessing to my childrens
both are fine now..
n thanks for waiting for me patiently
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 32
One morning maan was out to gym n geet was busy in kitchen..the bell rang..
Geet st:is waqt..maanji will come at 7.30 only na..there is more 15 minutes..did he came quickly..
Geet lost in thoughts..when the bell rang again she went n opened the door..only to see a small girl standing on door step..

Girl:whats this.. how much time you take to open the door..
(think the girl is speaking in tamil..)
The girl pushed geet aside n went in..
Geet was baffled ..she doesn't know who the girl is..but she speaks like she know her for ages n is going inside her house like its hers..
The girl went inside every room n checked everything..
She came back to the living room n said..
Girl:the house is so beautiful..i like it..n haan im coming here for first time..wont u ask me what would I prefer to have.. wont you offer me something..
Geet was still standing looking at the small size atom bomb who is talking nonstop..which she doesn't even understand a word..
The girl nodded her head ..
Girl:ofo...I think I must do self service..
she moved to kitchen n saw the curry in gas...if its kept a little more it will get burn..
The girl slapped her head..
Girl:ofo..u forgot what u have kept in gas too..
The girl switched off it..she looked around n found some sweets in box.
She served in a plate n went to hall..geet was following her..
Geet heard a voice..someone calling by name..
Aishu...aishu..where are you..if I caught u..i ll surely ground you..aishu..
Geet looked at the voice n saw a beautiful girl cladded in chudi standing there..
The girl who was still now talking nonstop hid behind geet hiding herself n peeked thru her pallu..
Geet st:so this girls name is aishu..
N the girl caught her mom who is throwing daggers on her thru eyes..
Mom: u..here..come out..i ll show stars today..
She too was talking in tamil n geet was looking both mom n daughter..
Aishu came out with a cute pout..
Aishu:amma,I want to see the neighbour..
Mom:is this the way to peek inside neighbours house..dont u have manners..let ur dad come its all his fault..his pampering is making you spoil day by day..
Aishu:amma,appa is never wrong..he loves me..
Both w ere lost in their f8 forgetting the poor soul..
Aishu:aiyo amma..i forgot the main thing..
Mom:what..
Aishu:appa told na they are from north..n im here talking with her the whole time in tamil..now only i understand why di didnt reply me..
Aishu turned to geet..n started conversing in hindi..
Aishu:hai, mera naam aishwarya..n yeh hai meri pyari mama..jyothika..n aap meri papa ko jaanthi ho..my hero my dad..surya..
Geet smiled at both.N Jyo smiled at her
Jyo:sry for the inconvenience..meri beti nachadi hai..n she is so curious to meet you ..that she cant wait till I accompany her..
Geet sighed in relief..
Geet:its ok..im glad that u speak hindi..
Jyo:did she annoy you..
Geet nodded no..how can she say,when she loved her bubbly nature..
Geet caressed aishu's cheeks ..
Geet:betiye..mei coffee laathi hoon..
Jyo:no formalities..waise..i have lots of works in house..n I must join office too..
Geet:u work..
Jyo:yes..i work as chief accountant in xyz company..
Geet:phir aishu..
Jyo:she is used to be alone..n more over most of the apartment members knows her well..she will never get bored..woh kahi bhi jaathi hai..but will be in home when we both return..n now I think u will be her time pass..
Geet"I ll surely like to be her companion..
geet asked aishu..
Geet:which class are you..
Aishu: I have written 3rd ..so going to 4th..i still hv a month of holidays..me n mom went to nanus house..but muma must join office na so we are back..i want to be with nanu..but mom says i ll be his headache in his oldage..so she brought me here..now i m here all alone..
she sighed..
Jyo:its enuf u old lady..atleast for first day cant u keep ur big mouth shut..
Aishu:ok amma..as u say..
Jyo wondered how easily she accepted..but next what she saw she was annoyed to extent
Jyo:kabi nehi sudregi ye shaitan..
Aishu has stuffed a big laddu in her mouth n showing now her mouth is shut..
Geet laughed seeing it..
kyo:you devil..

When maan n surya entered hearing them maan was all lost in geets laugh..
Surya:who is saying my daughter as devil..
Maan now came to know its suryas family in his house..so he greeted them
Maan:hi..
Jyo:hai..
Aishu with her stuffed mouth:appa,jyo ur devil wife saying me a devil daughter..
Jyo:see..see surya..what she is saying..im devil..ruk..mei bathathi hoon devil kya karthi hai..
Jyo moved to catch her..n aishu run away..she stopped at entrance showing her tongue n mocking her with fingers..
Aishu:jyo..catch if u can..n didi..i ll come after sometime..
Jyo:aishu u calling me by name..im ur mother..give some respect..wait till I catch u
Jyo ran behind her..
Surya:so u have met my crazy family..n im the head of this 2 devils..now I must go..aur this 2 will make the house as if tsunami attacked ..
Maan smiled..Surya bid bye n left.

.geets heart was filled with happiness..she loved them both..hmm surya..still she is not convenient before him..but she can see a cute family before her..


Maan:geet..how was ur meeting with them..
Geet:aishu bohut achi hai.so sweet,,.n her mother looks young ..not like a mother..n she is too nice with me..n more over they knew hindi.
Maan:now u got one more time pass..
Geet:yup..aishu..
The days were again moving on..jyo came to geets house n asked her to accompany her whenever she goes for purchase ..geet asked maans permission n she started to go out with jyo..jyo taught her many things n making her comfortable..n aishu was making geets life pleasant..her nonstop bak bak was a gud time pass for her..aishu used to come with her story books n drawings n sit with geet..geet nowadays never got bored in house..but for maan it was hard sometimes to romance his wife..n their noon shift stopped 😆bcoz of aishus presence..

Geet was comfortable now with no expectations..his love has filled her heart..n her inlaws often called her..The phone call from her family was rare..once a week..or more than it too..n she didn't expect more than a hai hello n how r u..
It was one another morning when maan got call from his mother..
Maan was super happy after the phone call..
Geet: u look so happy..
Maan just lifted her n twirled her..
Maan:arohi is expecting again..now only maa told me..
Geet:that's gud news..
Maan:maa asked us to visit her inbetween..
Maan:hmm..geet when is shravans marriage..
Geet:still 10 days more..
Maan:ok..then I ll book flight 2 mumbai next week..we will visit aro n kids..then we will go to marriage from there..
Geet:ok..
Geet was lost ..maan guessed she want to say something..
Maan:geet,what happened..
Geet:wo..can we go by train..
Maan:r u afraid of air way now too..
Geet:hmm..wo..i want to travel in train..
Maan looked at her..first time she has asked him something..
Maan:ok.. I ll book train..but from Mumbai we will go by plane..
Geet:ok..
Maan reached office n called adi..he asked him to come to chennai when he reaches delhi..vickys exams too has finished..maan asked vicky also to come with him..the college needs the student to meet them ...



Maan forgot to tell geet about their arrival. It was one morning maan was busy romancing with his wife n having their morning shift. Geet was all red n blue already with the long night n now too she was in his arms pleading him to leave her.she want to fresh up n make bf..maan was not in mood to leave her.the calling bell stopped their romance.
Geet: I think milk man dropped the milk pkt..I ll get it n come.or cat will drink it.
Once she was late n the thief cat drank the milk.from that day she was aware of it.maan left her
She hurriedly slipped into her nighty n rushed to open the door.
SURPRISE
she was shocked n surprised to see vicky n adi standing with a big smile.she stood there blocking their way to e nter too..then realised she is in n8 dress n her devar n maans friend is their.she felt shy n embarrassed..she hide behind the door n welcomed them..she showed them the chair to sit .
Geet:I ll call him.she ran inside..she was panting heavily
Maan: what happened geet.u r panting like u ran in a marathon. Geet huffed.
Geet:woh..woh..aapki bhai aur friend aayi hai.
Maan:what both..I thought they will come a few days later.
Geet:aapko patha hai
Maan was dressing up n answering her
Maan:hmm.when we are not here adi will take care of office.n vicky must present some imp papers in college before joining..so I called them here.
He checked himself in mirror or vicky will tease him n adi bhi hai.
Here vicky was feeling weird. Its his brothers house n he is feeling like he is a guest.he has been with maan these years n never he felt this..
Adi now thought surprising is a wrong idea.he must have informed maan about their arrival.joining hands with vicky to surprise maan was wrong..
In the short time he noticed geets behaviour.the swallon lips n her shyness..they spoliled their passionate morning..vicky didnt notice it..thats also gud..
Both of their thoughts stopped with maans voice.
Maan:vicky adi..
Vicky had a wide smile seeing maan
Vicky:maan.i missed you..so so much
He came n hugged him in a bone crushing hug.
Maan coughed..hmmm.i can see it in the way you are squeezing me.
Vicky:bhai...sachi..
Maan:I missed u too...then how is maa bhai nt ansh..n how u did ur exams.
Vicky:all are fine.exams..I ll top this time too..ansh is missing his chachu very much n
Adi:arei muj se bhi milo..I m also here ..
Maan:sry adi..waise u both here witthout information..
Adi: we thought to surprise you. First we decided to come after 3 days.but we got local holidays.due to some riots..n sunday too..so came here to help you..
Maan:that's great idea.
Geet came out freshing up n dressed in sari..
She smiled at both of them sheepishly..still she couldnt come out how she came before them
Geet:I ll make coffe...
Maaan:coffee nehi geet tea .they like tea
Geet ok
She took the milk pkt n went to kitchen.
Maan: geetu bf bhi sabkeliye banalo.
Geet:ji.
Maan:come i'll show u both ur rooms.you both get fresh up soon. I ll go to gym n join u soon.

Maan showed vicky his room n adi the guest room
Both freshed up n came out.
Geet gv both their tea.
Adi n vicky chatted till maan joined them.
Geet called them for bf..
Maan:geet..u
He was habituated having bf with her..now without her he thought she must eat alone.
Geet smiled at his care.
N said like she understood his turmoil.
Geet:I ll have after serving you all..
All three had their bf.
Adi:very nice bf bhabhi..
She smiled nervously
The word bhabhi from elders mouth always made her feel weird.
Vicky:yes gb..its very tasty like mom does.
He too was trying to get normal with his bhabhi.
Geet looked down n said:thanks.
When both went to wash their hands maan fillled his plate n gave to geet.
Maan:eat
He winked making her all sharamse pani pani.
What if vicky r adi saw this..she was oblivious to the situation. But it seems like maan wants to be caught.
Maan too washed his hands n came.
Maan:ok lets go..adi take the imp files n vicky ur papers n certificate s too.
Maan turned to geet:geet we wont be able to come for lunch.so u make for yourselves. ?
Geeets face fall down.
Maan: we will be back soon by evening.we will go for outing.ok.
Geets face brightened n she nodded like a child..
All 3 went.

When they reached the office, vicky sighed heavily.
Maan:what happened vicky.
Vicky:whats with Gb maan.she is not talking .I feel left out in your house.
Maan looked at him sternly.
Maan:our house vicky.u r going to live here.n about geet she is very reserved type.n only one person has brought the change in her.
Vicky:you.
Maan:no.she talks with me.but very less.only the needful.n as I said b4 it will take time 4 her to adjust.you are going to be with us.she will slowly get used to you n start to speak too.we must have to wait for that.
vicky:then with whom does gb talks..
maan smiled:n the person who brought change in her u will see yourself.
Vicky:ok ok.i understand.
Maan:now lets do our work.before raman uncle calls we must finish the major things.
Vicky:raman uncle..hu..hmm..got it .the councellor u saved n helping u so much in this new city
Maan:&he is the one who got ur admission here too.so behave properly.we are going with him only to college.
Vicky:yes boss.
All laughed n started to do the work.vicky called home n told them they have reached.

note:i know its short..but with summer holidays n childrens around i could only make this..till school reopens i ll be slow ..bare me pls

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Edited by vrinda22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update di too gud,geet opening up to aishwarya n having gud tym with her.geet still being shy n reserved type n vicky n adi in chennai loved it di continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its look like a dream that you updated
Waiting from long ok leave it

Update is as usual awesome
Aishu entry is fun and jyo is also good
Surya and family filled the color in update

Geet is still shy and their morning disturbed by vicky
Well both Geet and vicky are right on there place
Geet doesn't know vicky and vicky doesn't Geet
Well it's take time
So they are going back
Maybe now maan comes to kniw Geet's real age
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really nice update..
We will wait.. enjoy your time off with your kids..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aishu is too cute like the movie.
Loved it.
Geet is still trying to adjust with men around her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
it awsum when got my fav ff updated
dear awsum update
so devil toly is came she is so cute incury comision ki tarha
entry geet like yeh hai kon n talking in tamil they r alian to geet
vicky n adi came
geet not opening with vicky
somewhere it hurt him
he think as left out n guest in his own house
sahre hi s prob with maan
love his true nature heart main kuch nahi rakna
maybe when geet will talk with him they become close friend
waiting for next plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
after sooo many days 😳
awesome update..
a girl came to geet n geet dont know her...
she is speaking in tamil...
poor geet confused to see the gorl behave like she know her from ages...
the girl chota bomb really 😆
expert... sare rooms dekh liye kitchen bhi check kar liya sweets se self service bhi kar li 🤣
so she ia aishu
der se hi sahi aishu ko yaad aaya geet north se hai tamil nahi samjhti 😆
aishu is so cute bubbly geet loved her bubbly nature...
adi n vicky came n give surprise to maan n geet
loved itt

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Posted: 11 years ago
finaly got update
fab hai di
aishu n her mom
how much they talk but cute
geet open up with aishu
arohi expecting again
geet ask somthing for maan it good sign
she try to open up
vicky is came now he is stay with maaneet
hope he will also understand geet hesitation dont think wrong about her
n soon will geet n vicky became frd

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice updatedi wow wt a atom bomb aishu s luvd the crazy family n geet openin up wd aishu s really great n she s gettin comfy wd maan but i really wish to see bhabi devar interaction vicky s feeln out f plac s so wrying

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