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Posted: 11 years ago
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great and fabulous concept... do continue soon and pm me
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Interesting concept and a great start.
please continue this OS. waiting to read further
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nyc start..😊
Do continue!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb start... plz update soon... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg amazing start !! :D
Its a nice story, pleasee continueee ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wowww i jus loveee this DS😳
and u have started t n ss version also😊
awesomeee👏
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great start
nice plot
the end was intresting
want to read further
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice and good start... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys thanks a lot for the reviews. I love them. :D Please do continue sharing this work , and liking and comment on this work. I would be updating alternate days probably as this work in the KR version has already crossed 21 chapters. BUT I will be updating ONLY if I find the reasponse good. By good I don't mean 20+ comments or something , but at leasr one page?

Part 2

I had come a bit early to college. So I decided to rehearse for a while. I changed into my rehearsal clothes , and went to the rehearsal hall.

I put the blindfold on my eyes , and started dancing. As I was dancing , I suddenly felt someone pull me , and I banged into a muscular chest. I was about to push him away from me , when he started dancing with me.

The steps , they were same as my dream. Was it him by any chance? My thoughts came to an end when the song stopped. I touched his face .

"Who is this?"

And I was shocked , when I felt him kiss me. What the hell! How dare he do that. But I felt myself give in , why? I don't know. The kiss was magical , as if it was Swayam who was kissing me. I pulled back. And I heard him say.

"The dream of every girl."

He was Swayam! I am definitely sure . How dare he kiss me so abruptly. Yes , I like him and I even replied to the kiss , but how can he kiss anyone like this. Bloody Casanova. I removed the blindfold , and stared at myself.

I ran away to the locker room. Tears were flowing down my eyes , and I don't know why. Maybe cause I was angry at myself to let him kiss me! What if that man would not have been Swayam. I looked at myself. And wiped my tears , suddenly my anger was replaced by a blush. The thought of him kissing me came back in my mind .

Urgh! What on earth is wrong with me. Well Mr.Swayam ,by this kiss , I understood you are kind of a jerk , with a caring heart. And you need to give me an answer to your actions.

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I walked to the atrium and saw Swayam with his friends. I went to him with no idea about what I will speak in front of him. I cleared my throat. He turned.

"Oh! Miss. Sharon Rai Prakash? What do you want? Or my gang ragged you again? Gosh! Guys , why didn't you call me? Iss baar toh koi bet thi hi nahi. "

"Huh?"

Was all that came out of my mouth at that time.

"You didn't get it still miss.Rai Prakash? Gosh! I am not a guy who will save anyone from ragging , I love ragging people , and I so wanted to rag you. But they had given me a dare to help you. So I had to. And if you think I am interested in you , then you are wrong."

I was hell angry! And no my heart didn't break , of course I knew this guy can never love any one , but it came as a shock to know that he wanted to rag me! Jeez , do hell with you Swayam. And suddenly I knew what I should do.

I smirked at him. He looked at me confused. I took his collar and kissed him , I could hear gasps , and then I pushed him slapping him hard , I said.

"Tit for that , mr.oh so called dream of every girl."

And I turned and left from there , with my head held high , and a proud smile on my face. When I said , Sharon Rai Prakash does not take shit from anyone , I meant it!

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Hope you like it. For PMs add me in your buddy list. :D

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res dis time i ll unres

unres

wow nic update..

its aswom as always...

nd last kiss tit 4 tat wow girl...

plzz update soon


p.s:- im gona read kr version bcoz i cant wait...
Edited by swaronlove001 - 11 years ago

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