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kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

unres!

yay! me first!🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

awesome update di

loved it

fantastic

continu soon

thankx for pm

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rinku95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Fantastic
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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Harisree001

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Ye MPD tho bahot ghatarnak he. Sochke bhi dar lagtha he...
Finally Roshni told it to Sam and Aisha... Yes.. Aisha noticed the changes...
Their reaction is well justified...
Hope their plan will work...
Sha aur Arjun ek dusre ko aamne samne dekha tho vo samach jayenge ki there is only one person... That is the host...
Hospital surroundings made Arjun wake up already...
Now want to know that how will they face each other...
Like Aisha said, hope Arjun will go away from Sha forever...
Hope Sha will be free from Arjun before Zaid knew about it... If happened so then there will be no traces of Arjun and police can never prove that Sha was Arjun...
Me fingers also crossed in the hope for the good...
Well written...

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Eventhough Arjun is the saviour of Shaina, she will also wish for the well being of Sha...
Don't know what you thought of the outline of the story... But waiting for your writing magic...
Waiting eagerly for the next update...
Cont soon...

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Harisree001

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Ek baat bathana bhool gaya...
Banner is awesome...
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laila

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

unres...

Roshni finally told Sam & Ayesha🥳

Sameer found it really difficult to digest the truth.

The thing that stole my heart was that nobody judge Sha after knowing that his alter ego killed people🤗

I think Masa will not be as shocked as sam about Sha's condition. She must have smelled something fishy in past. after all she knew sha so well😳

She helped him in past & now she will help him again.

Arjun will be really angry after these people will force him to accept that he is alter ego of sha. And yeah, He will definitely not accept it so easily.

Sha ko confinement me rakhna hoga. Looking forward to see Sha's helplessness & Arjun's frustration 🤢

Sam-ayesha will not cancel their engagement. I think it's a good idea👍🏼

Last para was so chilling😳

Arggg. Update soon please

PS. If Sha/Arjun get caught by Zaid, And if They succeed proving that Sha has MPD. he will not be found guilty by reason of insanity But sha will still end up at Mental asylum.

Either way Sha is at lost-lost situation.

So my request is Don't let Zaid reach anywhere near Sha or Arjun😃

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

wow di..

it was awesome and amazing update di.

just loved it.

do continue soon.

and thanks for the pm.

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KReyAS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

awsom superb updt

loved it

cont soon

thnx fr pm

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Areesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Awesome part di
waiting 4 arjun's reaction

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..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Roshni had been holding the secret inside her for a long time now and it was being difficult for her.She needed somebody to share it with and who better that Aisha and Sameer who knew both of them well.Aisha too had seen the changes in Sha, and being a doctor herself she very well understood what Roshni was trying to imply.But, Sameer hadn't even imagined an alter of Sha that too so voilent, but now as he has understood he is also trying to help and bring Sha out of this mess.
ACP Zaid is still trying to find out evidences against Sha and he's unknown about all that.
To start with, Sha has never entered inside the hospital premises, but Arjun has gone there a lot of times.He tried to stop Sha but as always Sha didn't listen to him, maybe the Arjun that was silent for few days, will again come forward after hospital visit.If this happens, then it's not gonna be so good as ACP Zaid is always keeping tabs on them.
Like Aisha said, MPD isn't actually a disease so it has no fixed treatment and in some cases no treatment at all.Being in Medical field myself I too know a few things about it.It's really dangerous when the two alters meet eachother, anything can happen at that time especially when one is as silent and innocent as Sha and the other so voilent like Arjun who is on his journey of seeking revenge.
Let's see what is in store for us.
Brilliant update.
Well written.
Waiting for more.
Thanks for the PM.
P.S. Nice banner.