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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episode 242
Kaun hai wo?
Khushi:
Baat phirse wahin aakar rukgayi
Jo dhoondh rahi thi, ab tak na mili
Kya thi majboori, kyun ki thi shaadi?
Kyun baandh diya humey khudse zabardasti?
Fikar jinhe hai doosron ki khushi ki
Jo aadar kartein hain, buzurgon ki, badon ki
Par ghoorte hain humey aankhon mein bharke angaar
Kaun hai wo, shaitaan ya rajkumar?
Arnav:
Baatein kuch aisi kaanon pe padi
Jo thi kaali raat, aaj khayalon mein saji
Har baat chupaayi, har pal muskuraayi
Kyun na kaha kisise ke maine ki thi zabardasti
Apne bereham pati ko diya ooncha darja
Apni maa se bhi badhkar kisi aur ko maa samjha
Par kisi aur ke pati par buri nazar thi daali
Kaun hai wo, charitraheen ya ek nirdosh, bholi bhali
Translation:
Khushi:
The matter comes back and halts at the same place
Have not yet found what I had been searching for
What were the constraints, why did he marry?
Why did he tie me to himself forcefully?
The one who is concerned about other's happiness
The one who respects aged and elders
But stares at me with eyes filled with flames
Who is he, a beast or a prince?
Arnav:
Some words fell on my ears
The night that was black, got bedecked in thoughts
Hid every thing, smiled every time
Why didn't she say that I had forced her?
Gave a merciless husband a very high status
More than her mother, treated someone else as her mother
But on someone else's husband had an evil eye
Who is she, a characterless or an innocent, ingenuous one?



hello, dear durga what is this

Par ghoorte hain humey aankhon mein bharke angaar

you want me to have a heart attack just reading your words or something... i want angaar bhare ankhen to ghooro me, samjhi tum?

very apt and keen observation... if he is a conundrum, so is she... who is he? who is she? lovely pause in the flow of ipk.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Meant to write this for over a week.. epi 205 on the rerun.. their first rabba ve.. a cozy moment after the fateful wedding...reminiscing the good old times that lapsed between them... a reverie they hoped would last a life time..
Some where it reminded of the day when they clutched onto each other to avoid tripping very early on... the girl astonished "paudhon me paani??!!" thoroughly bewildered at the penchant for tender plants of this man who has been nothing but only diabolical with her till then... Mr Gardener and his little Ms Daisy in that bright yellow...I realize it was only episode 25.. both looking fresh from the garden... their personalities already carved with a great ken... a classy romance on its way just next to the likes of Jane Austin..

And here, the man who coerced her to marry him on a dark night.. ..both not refraining from shooting daggers at each other... yet .. the girl comes back to her inherent theatrics in no time.. "kood jayenge hum babuji ki kasam" .. and he.. thoroughly amused, spiraled at them as always "teen foot ka pool hai Khushi" ... the gleam in his eyes ominously slipping onto his lips...but for his "sub kuch under control" tenacity... the girl continuing her dramatics.. almost trips..

(why he looked extra suave here... like an old classic matinee idol??!!)
And, as he pulled her closer.. their frames collided after what seemed like eons...an all too familiar touch inundated them with many cherished memories that they wished to treasure... cascades of precious moments shared in togetherness unveiled in their hearts one after another...golden times gone by in glory of their unspoken love and desire..
...as he unwrapped her like a precious gift at the very same spot.. as they took their first steps together hand in hand that led to a dizzying intimate moment at the very same site...as he pecked on her cheek and got inebriated as if not desiring to get sober again.. right here.. by their heavenly abode... just like at this moment.. where they are in each other's embrace .. but alas..engulfed in a web of deceit and ache...
Her:
My faint little heart fluttered and gasped for breath that day.. all my hazy, crazy dreams seemingly coming alive suddenly...your gaze and touch.. weave those Technicolor dreams yet again... throwing me back into that blissful puddle I dare not go back...it still doesn't seem to sink... why were they all shunned into a nightmare in a swift, grotesque twist my Rajkumar???
Him:
These silken strands frolicking on your pristine porcelain visage caress my insides.. that day in an intimate moment of ours as I had let them loose.. so did I all those hitherto strictly abandoned desires.. to let willingly washed away in those cascades.. to get entangled in their fragrance...and these enthralling doe eyes... is this a beautiful guile... or a mesmerizing malice... how did they end up pushing me into dark asphyxiating depths my love???
The quiet blue waters in their paradise stand as somber witness as their love laments...
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Originally posted by: indi52

episode 242

beautiful collage..love the foggy effect

the sweetest moment of this episode for me was when a tycoon who hates his wife, looks at her with a childlike desire in his eyes, wanting to be a part of her wildly dancing free and happy world. walks up to her awkwardly, tries to follow her steps and join her in that dancing. so willing to be a part of her world and be happy with her, a desire larger than the realities that pull him back propels him. Aww he really was childlike here.. Did you notice how he sideways glanced at her and tried copying some steps? Vulnerable..adorable...

he is only 27 or so but it is so easy to forget that, so easy to think he is completely in control and a much older guy just because he takes on the mantle and lives up to it. almost har baar. in this beautiful story where two people unlikely to fall in love with each other, do exactly that, once in a way, just that love is the hero... perhaps that's what i felt about this episode.

he was sure he knew he was having an illicit affair with his beloved sister's husband. at too many levels this was not just painful, it was abhorrent. galat had no place in his life... never after what his father had done. his sister was the only human being he allowed into his heart, which lay dormant beneath an icy layer, barely beating. this girl was the only one in the whole wide world that had cracked that layer,
sunshine as it were, and touched his dhadkan, making it race, becoming part of it. he had just thought he might start a life with her where there was a chance of laughter and of joy.

was arnav singh raizada really not hurting terribly inside? pragmatic, powerful, preponderant... he may be all of that, but he is also a man who loves, a man who hurts, a young man who wants a bit of happiness in his life. life has denied him so terribly that he doesn't even think he deserves such things. when your mother commits suicide on your sister's wedding day... almost without caring for what happens to her offspring, do you start feeling some crazy anger and do you perhaps start feeling guilty... that you could not stop it... we are complex beings and a myriad inexplicable emotions and urges grip us. strange really how the mother left the children to fend for themselves. Must have been in a really bad place in her life to take such en extreme harsh step.. Another of those things we will never really know fro sure

barun sobti's asr exuded this sense of complexity... more than what you see is who i am how i am. Layers and layers.. He keeps making my mind wander of in tangent imagine this unending vista of possibilities in what he is trying to express, what still remains hidden. In an interview barun said he likes it when his acting surprises his director because they know the script much better than the actor usually. This answer of his made me so happy. The potential in this man!

khushi too had no plans to love such a man, but she did... and who could ever love someone after they treated you like that? that terrifying claustrophobic wild hungry wedding with something darkly fiery and sacred in it... who could love anyone that forced one into such a nuptials? who threatened the destruction of one's sibling's marriage. who threw one out onto cold stone floor. who accused and ranted. who never explained why he did what he did, but carried on relentless. sharp words..lovely description Indi di

yet, khushi did love him.

neither could deny that love, no matter what.

in two moments of this episode that was so tenderly and terribly clear.

as he stepped up to dance with her. and as she turned away and lied to her mother.

this was no daughter allaying a mother's fears, this was a lover who wanted to guard her lover's image, he was hers, part of her ego, her self, she would not let him be viewed as unworthy in any way. had it been only to allay her mother's fears, she could have simply said she was happy, or maybe even said a few wonderful things about him, but look at the words she chooses to describe him and his feelings for her... isn't there a lot of what she wishes for from him in that? what she knows instinctively he is capable of giving? Interesting thought. I felt that in the scene she talked with her friends while getting Preeto ready. that the lie was partly for his sake as well.

i think true lovers have a sixth sense about each other, where they know beyond the obvious, they see potential that many can't...

both have been given a tough task... to see way beyond the obvious and feel the truth of the other. how do you perceive such things but? i guess you have to see with the eyes of the heart.

i completely agreed with the way that was ultimately shown. at this point this otherness of love and lovers is on display. in an episode that didn't thrill me often, because of execution, i still felt that love and its power.

just moments ago
she has overheard a conversation, and her disturbance is justified... why this whole thing happened still plagues her... but she is not keen to negate the relationship, instead find out, who this man is.

"kaun hai yeh, shaitan yehi raajkumar yehi..."
who is this, devil he is, prince is he too.

the mystery of the man, ek insaan ke do chehre... one man and two faces.

writers choose to bring back the beast and prince allusion.

i had written about this rajkumar shaitan thing after 226 where i think it makes its first appearance, now i find i had referred to these episodes there without even realising it came up here too... so the storyteller must telling the story well.

a little bit of what i wrote then:
later she described asr to her mother as "duniya ke sabse achhe pati" the best husband in the world, attributing to him several rajkumar qualities... which no doubt he had. but again the beauty of it was that it wasn't true yet... and still she loved him... her own shaitan.

"hum inhen kabhi samajh hi nahin aayenge."
i will never be able to understand him.
"ek pal mein itna pyaar... aur doosre pal mein inse itna dar lagta hai..."
one moment so much love and teh very next i am so afraid of him.
"yeh aise kyun hain?"
why is he like this?
"hume pata karna hi hoga..."
i must find out.

he is too much a part of her to deny him, break the tie. this i guess is love. this is essential connection. in our world we get so caught up in the norms of
conventional 'sahi' .. she thought of an ideal rajkumar but did she like the apparently considerate, simple, middle class Shyam? he praised her in her dreams and it had no effect but ASR did just the opposite. Was ASR in her dreams as in real life and she was inexplicably drawn towards him.

she is now determined to find out why the rushed wedding had to happen, there must be a reason. every time she sees this man doing something decent, reasonable, positive, she lets her heart fill with hope and with renewed vigour chases the reason for that horridness.

love this attitude in a girl especially, given the passive role women are encouraged to play in our world... gah, i never thought growing up i would start talking like a women's libber, but this world doesn't give me an option, hello hi bye bye. 😆

going back to the dance:

"no, i... don't dance..."

aww. shy guy.

cute standing around looking out of place in formal suit and perennial aloofness among dancers. cutest moment, slowly walking up to khushi and starting to somehow get in step with her, join in, like a kid i repeat gleefully. perennial aloofness.. 👏 .. he will always stand out won't he? exudes that indefinable auro that segregates him from the crowd. he can look disheveled but won't cease to be ASR. Really nice expressions in this scene.

and he has actually overcome that insane anger... in any person i would love such a moment. bua ji is the first to notice and is totally floored, she and garima have sensed all is not well with babua.

jerky stiff movements, my mama would have said "oont ki chaal," the gait of a camel. she sees him and is astonished. he is almost imploring her to help him out here. I thought so too.. join me.. please..that gaze said..

bua ji is ecstatic, both she and garima are so relieved.

asr inept in a situation... something awfully sexy about it. haha.. ok sorry for giggling but can't help it..

rabba vey as she sees him dancing by her... then someone pushes him and he stumbles, gets nudged closer to her...


and like holi, together they stand... this time also he had walked up to her mesmerised, but now minus bhang...




that endless searching look again... what is it? i don't know. why can't i be in my senses around you? why can't i? do you... need me? do i need anything else? tell me it is for hamesha... hamesha is what i have every time i have you.

there is no shyness, no awkwardness, fluent full dialogues their eyes do deliver...

then he has to remember shyam again and walk away...

leaving her bewildered.


a glimpse of the opening sequence:


"i really like her...", said the bridegroom of his bride to be. earlier inside khsuhi had asked the uncle of aunt if there was any "kami" in preeto. i wonder why we are so unmindful of our own self respect. why is the girl's personality, her abilities always the topic of discussion. instead of asking people tp shut up and not be obnoxious why must we actually go and ask is there soemthing wrong with us that they behave so badly. if this is our culture, time to change it.

asr speaks reasonably and not nobly or culturally correctly or anything. an out there character he deals with life looking at it straight and real and not fudging his mind with a thousand cluttering thoughts. which is why that airconditioner as solution, and now a straight and simple question...

"phir bhi tum chup ho!" even then you are quiet. brusque harsh truth.

loved this dialogue for its freshness and unfloweriness, remembered salim javed. "tumhare gharwale 1960s ke in laws ke tarah ghatia aur stereotypical demands kar rahe hain..."

your family members are speaking like in laws from 1960s films and making third rate demands...

"ghatia" seems to be damad ji's favourite epithet. 😆

"tumhari apni marzi ka koi matlab nahin hai kya..." doesn't your own will have any meaning?

we need to hear this. to be collaborative, part of a whole, even "good" if you will, one need not not respect one's own self, one's own desires and wishes. i always loved asr's "main". he was no merged and part of an amorphous "hum". khushi and all girls in hindi serials are always "hum", worth a ponder why... why they can't be the more assertive, steady, "main". You had shared that crooner post which mentioned howard roark and I kept thinking how befitting.. Outsiders may roll their eyes and say no comparison whatsoever but there was something singularly individualistic in how ASR was portrayed and written.

but this entire piece didn't quite speak to me, saved by barun and asr's exciting energy and sense of claiming.

the best husband in the world:


i wish the sequence had a little less of the tearjerker element. i liked the fact that khushi said specific things about him... painting pictures, as though she had thought them many times in her mind.

garima says it so beautifully that very drama dialogue about what will i tell your mother when i meet her. this 2nd viewing am really liking this actress.

"hamari amma toh aap hai.. aapko kissiko bhi koi jawab dene ki zaroorat nahin..." you are my mother, you don't have to answer to anyone anywhere, comes khsuhi's response. i liked her saying that in that most khsuhi way. her love for thsi adoptive family of hers is complete and resolutely unselfish. it is beautiful.

he watches them and is shredding within... "haan, amma, arnav ji iss duniya ke sabse achhi pati hai" yes, amma, arnav ji is the best husband in the world.

he leaves. maybe because he is somewhere the best husband in the world. I am still trying to process what you say here..deep and lovely..

sleep eludes him... a man with conscience suffers, his beloved's voice is in his mind, murmuring in him.

"arnav ji apno ka bahut khayal rakhte hain... aur doosron ki madat karte hain... jab hi hum aap sab ke baare mein sochkar thode dukhi hotey hain... toh aapko pata hai woh kitne pareshan ho jaate hain?... phir hamare chehre pe muskurahat laane ki jee tod koshi karenge..."

all the lies she tells, all that he really wanted to do for her.

"hum bahut khush hain.. ki tumhe itna accha pati mile..." i am very happy that you got such a good husband, says amma.

"haan, amma... arnav jo iss duniya ke..." yes, amma, arnav ji is this world's.

and he is up, breath ragged...

turns to look at her, she sleeps... the ultimate innocent, his heartbeat tripper, with whom his breath is one... yet this is what it has come to, a look of such keen guilt, what have i done to you...


You manage to surprise me har baar.. An episode you don't like and still you manage to write so well about the parts you did. Very nice Indi di! You add in so much more to each rabba ve moment with your words. I really enjoy the flow and feel..

Seems like we haven't spoken in a while (yes even 1 day seems long now ☺️ ) so lots of chatting above.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Indi I loved these two scenes from these episodes 👏



oh, he did enjoy himself so so much... and she could feel it, it even touched her, shook her deep inside, completely lost in each other for a wonderful moment where there is no one but them... hey hey heyheyhey.



hey hey... heyheyhey.

as they tried to sit up the petals showered down. te brats had tipped the flower basket (okay, this bit was shot pretty badly, the gravity defying basket almost snatched my attention away from the magic unfolding).

Edited by AKAD - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Horizon

Meant to write this for over a week.. epi 205 on the rerun.. their first rabba ve.. a cozy moment after the fateful wedding...reminiscing the good old times that lapsed between them... a reverie they hoped would last a life time..

Some where it reminded of the day when they clutched onto each other to avoid tripping very early on... the girl astonished "paudhon me paani??!!" thoroughly bewildered at the penchant for tender plants of this man who has been nothing but only diabolical with her till then... Mr Gardener and his little Ms Daisy in that bright yellow...I realize it was only episode 25.. both looking fresh from the garden... their personalities already carved with a great ken... a classy romance on its way just next to the likes of Jane Austin..
that first time she saw him with his plants. how terribly young and engrossed he looked, a part of his garden. that was a fabulous episode, touches of humour already there. humour and heat, has anyone done it better? you are so right, asense of aclassic romance... something terribly clean and gambolling in it.

And here, the man who coerced her to marry him on a dark night.. ..both not refraining from shooting daggers at each other... yet .. the girl comes back to her inherent theatrics in no time.. "kood jayenge hum babuji ki kasam" .. and he.. thoroughly amused, spiraled at them as always "teen foot ka pool hai Khushi" ... the gleam in his eyes ominously slipping onto his lips...but for his "sub kuch under control" tenacity... the girl continuing her dramatics.. almost trips..

(why he looked extra suave here... like an old classic matinee idol??!!) always had that classic appeal... somewhere it is in him, despite all the goofing around and being just ay oung guy here and now, the man carries that quality from another time. and once you slick back the hair, gel it and put him in atie... had it, it's hollywood, or a movie made by bimal roy, asit sen, or one of those classy and classic directors, slow moving camera, keen eyes, and the ladies are fainting.
And, as he pulled her closer.. their frames collided after what seemed like eons...an all too familiar touch inundated them with many cherished memories that they wished to treasure... 👏 👏 👏 beautiful line and thought. cascades of precious moments shared in togetherness unveiled in their hearts one after another...golden times gone by in glory of their unspoken love and desire..
...as he unwrapped her like a precious gift at the very same spot.. as they took their first steps together hand in hand that led to a dizzying intimate moment at the very same site...as he pecked on her cheek and got inebriated as if not desiring to get sober again.. right here.. by their heavenly abode... just like at this moment.. where they are in each other's embrace .. but alas..engulfed in a web of deceit and ache...
Her:
My faint little heart fluttered and gasped for breath that day.. all my hazy, crazy dreams seemingly coming alive suddenly...your gaze and touch.. weave those Technicolor dreams yet again... throwing me back into that blissful puddle I dare not go back...it still doesn't seem to sink... why were they all shunned into a nightmare in a swift, grotesque twist my Rajkumar???
Him:
These silken strands frolicking on your pristine porcelain visage caress my insides.. that day in an intimate moment of ours as I had let them loose.. so did I all those hitherto strictly abandoned desires.. to let willingly washed away in those cascades.. to get entangled in their fragrance...and these enthralling doe eyes... is this a beautiful guile... or a mesmerizing malice... how did they end up pushing me into dark asphyxiating depths my love???
The quiet blue waters in their paradise stand as somber witness as their love laments... ufff



very very very beautiful, indu.

i was thinking of writing 244 today and literally not feeling excited at all... almost fearing what i will see on screen. then i remembered the early days, 75 especially, and your lament about the state of things. a completely different structure, essence, pace and classiness of thinking those days. couldn't wait to watch. think i'll go and indulge a bit today. that thing seemed to come back for a very very short time, but never went all the way there...

that first time she sees him with his plants and they are both together at the poolside... how fresh and lovely... he had to hold her... they had to look at each other with feelings that had to take root and grow... we are in the nursery now.

and then there seemed to be a frost that ruined the plantings. alas.

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You manage to surprise me har baar.. An episode you don't like and still you manage to write so well about the parts you did. Very nice Indi di! You add in so much more to each rabba ve moment with your words. I really enjoy the flow and feel..

Seems like we haven't spoken in a while (yes even 1 day seems long now ☺️ ) so lots of chatting above.



yes, ages since we spoke, 😆 see how much i have to say? thanks, rhea for reading and saying what you do. but honestly, i can't keep this up much longer. 245 has me cringing. however ha ha guess what i liked a really bad scene, maybe i will write just about that. i start filling in those rabba ve moments with my words because as i watch again and again, they just keep coming at me... incorrigible believer i romance me. 😆 thank you for liking them.
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Indi I loved these two scenes from these episodes 👏



oh, he did enjoy himself so so much... and she could feel it, it even touched her, shook her deep inside, completely lost in each other for a wonderful moment where there is no one but them... hey hey heyheyhey.



hey hey... heyheyhey.

as they tried to sit up the petals showered down. te brats had tipped the flower basket (okay, this bit was shot pretty badly, the gravity defying basket almost snatched my attention away from the magic unfolding).



thanks so much, akad...

and very good to see you. 😳
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One thing I came to know after today's episode that ASR came to GH to fix the messed up relationship. That's why he was enduring Khushi's wanton behavior, the unbearable heat, the discomfort of middle class living. In spite of all, his heartfelt effort to make Khushi's family happy, to accepting all Khushi's delirium, proves he is here to redeem and to make a bond with his wife's family. May be his heart was laden with contrition to hurt Khushi for making her hurt her family. Didn't he witness her turmoil when everybody abandoned her after the forced marriage! My intuition says he never felt guilty to compel her to marry him. Moreover he was sure to tether her for life long, cause she loves him or loves somebody else, she is characterless or not, home wrecker or not, Khushi was his. And he would've never let her go from his life. He sure was mortified because the only girl whom he loved turned to an immoral swindler and he had to treat her obnoxiously because of that.

Is he trying to erase that terrace scene from his mind and wanting to give a new start? May be I'm wrong.


Arnav ended up with a bar soap cause Khushi dropped his shower gel intentionally. She have to make him feel the middle class life style; so no shower gel, only bar soap.😆

"open the faucet lightly, keep the door closed" she is delaying him more, time is not 9:30 yet. Arnav shuts the door in extreme pique. He had to do it earlier, uff I'm missing my old ASR. This submission is not suiting him.😲

"aaj mausam hai suhana

Sade nau bajneka hai bahana" khushi is singing in exultance.

"Aaj mausam hai suhana

Nahaneka hai bahana"

What the what the what the." She is buttering the bread and singing her favorite parody. The clock strikes 9:30 and she tries to hear what's going on inside the bathroom.

The man is already half bare, only in his boxer. TRP aunties must be clapping. The thin man can't fit properly in that narrow bathroom. He is lathered with soap ready to lave him. But what the, no water! He thinks it must be Khushi's prank. He screams Khushi khushi. but khushi is clearing her ears pretending not listening. Amma and bua comes there to hear his holler. They are astonished how cum she didn't tell Arnav bitwa that there is no water supply after 9: 30?

The soppy man peeps from the bathroom, telling Khushi to turn on the motor.

"There is no motor and no water supply after 9: 30 and comes only after 5." Khushi tells him with annoyance and suggests him to request Indraji. If he relents he can pour some water for him.

"give me the phone and I'll talk." Poor man can't get that Indraji is no other but the God. He is in impasse, no choice but to listen to his wife's addle pated idea.😆

Amma wants to give him water from the kitchen. Khushi stops her and tells Arnav to dry him up like this. Arnav is frantic now, so am I.😡.Is she a cretin? .

"I need water right now."

khushi holds his hands to take him near water. Amma and bua admonishes her; but no avail.

My temper is rising. I'm rather angry for giving him such insensitive logic than taking him to give public bath. No it can't be Khushi, she loves Arnav, she can't do this to him. I can understand that common people may do this all the time. And Khushi wanted Arnav to taste that life. But it's not necessary that he needs to taste all of that. There are so many common people who don't like to make themselves bare in front of people. It could be easy for Khushi, cause she is no less than a muddle headed child, but how couldn't she think of ASR who is now her husband to the rest of the world.


"khushi, where are you taking me?"

Indi you are right,. how Arnav is not realizing that he is in the open air; couldn't he feel the breeze or people's talk? Where is ASR's prudence gone?

Khushi brings him near the hand pump of the moholla. The neighbors are flabbergasted, where Khushi is taking her husband like this. The ladies are devouring the half naked sexy man. They are scrutinizing his figure, he is skinny, Khushi must not feed him well. The TRP aunties must be more jovial now. But sorry I'm not. I love my man more in his stylish outfits.

Arnav is still ambiguous, where is he, he is asking for water. And khushi rather giving him water immersed in frothy talk with the neighbors. Finally she relents and pours water on him. Arnav is completely stupefied to find him in the open air taking bath with small kids where the ladies are also washing clothes. his anger reaches to the zenith. How could she bring him to bathe him in public place?

"You told me that you need water."

"khushi tum meri beizzzati karahi ho." (you are insulting me.)

She refutes, she just brought him near water. Or if it is so disgraceful then every day some people do this disgraceful thing one or twice. Her neighbors also assent with her. Some passerby asks her what he does.

"he is the owner." Arnav doesn't let khushi complete. It feels like insinuation to him.

Aunties are noticing him so well that one even tells Khushi to wash lather from his ear.

That Aunty invites them to come to their place for tea. Khushi wishes to come on the next day, her husband is staying here for a while.

One good thing I found that, this middle class people is so warm. And I guess they took Arnav's public bath easily.

Khushi pours water on him again. Arnav strides fast towards the house. he can't take this insult any more. Khushi is blabbering, she helped, but rather appreciating her, he is getting angry..

"Don't talk to me." he wants truce between them.
"Who is talking to you? I'm talking by myself."

.😆

After getting a public bath from his crazy wife, ASR looks fresh; ready to start his work. But neither his laptop has charge nor his phone. So he can't call anybody for help. And he should be indignant. But his endurance surprised me again. I thought he would leave the house right then, rather trying to adjust their tough middle class life.

"bizli agayi." Khushi screams.

He gotta respite after some long turbulent hours. He quickly puts his devices in charge. Khushi calls him to have lunch. He disgruntles to think about the unsavory, backwas food, what was served to him previous day. He doesn't want to take this torture again, so he orders food from restaurant. Aww my poor baby, how can he tell his in laws not to serve him those insipid food?

While Amma and bua were serving the lunch; a guy comes with a parcel. Bua is surprised, she didn't order anything.

"Arnav Sigh Raizada ordered this food." The guy gives her the bags along with a heavy bill of 5000.

"Panch hazar!" they are aghast, how they will pay the bill! It might their expenditures of the whole month's grocery. They also can't ask money from damad, after all their self respect is everything to them. Amma feels bad, he might not liked the food, that's why he ordered from outside. Two ladies search their every possible bags, envelopes and boxes to gather 5000 rupees. They hardly could pay the bill.😭

Khushi, who went to borrow yoghurt from neighbor's house, comes there right then. Her eyes go to the food packet and the bill. Then she hears amma and bua's convo on how they managed the money to pay the bill. Amma got some money from Khushi's dabba business and bua got some from her husband's pension. Khushi rankles and misunderstands Arnav more.

😲

Shyam is with the locksmith making the key of Arnav's locker. He thinks to get the file from Arnav's locker as soon as possible; he needs to know urgently, what is the file about. Fortunately mama meets him there, but clever Shyam dissimulates that he is making keys for his office locker, which is lost.

"kaunse khazanaki chabi bana rahi hai aap?' mama jests him sarcastically, but doesn't get his shenanigan. Mama gets a bit incredulous when the locksmith gives him the key imprinted soap back. Shyam equivocates; he loses his keys frequently, so he always keeps the copy like this. Mama doesn't get his weird reasoning, but still doesn't suspect their good son in law, who is actually a devil. It's surprising that how easily he could hoodwink smart mamaji.

"my habit is weird, but beneficial." He mutters, already exulting his victory.

Pause: I really didn't get why cvs made mama to see shyam making keys. They never used it for Shyam's denouement. Rather using him to solve the loops, they banished him for good.🤢


Arnav comes out to have lunch and sees the food packet on the table..

"The food came, why didn't you tell me? I had to pay." He goes for his wallet.

"how can I take money from you." Amma and bua look more than happy to pay the bill. Bua turns on the cooler; they have to provide all comfort to their dearest babua.
"Is the cool breeze coming." Two awesome ladies are so concern for him. He is in complete submission, will not complain if he feels heat or uncomforted.

They all sit to eat. bua grabs their home made food for them. Arnav stops her, he ordered food for everybody. A glimmer of smile suffuses Khushi's face who was upset a while ago.

"this mushroom soup is really mild, will be goo for uncle." Arnav gives shashiji first as he is the eldest. My man knows very well how to respect elders. And after his heart attack he always showed his concern for him.

Inadvertently khushi's face glints with a pleasing smile. To see Arnav's concern for her babuji makes her heart filled with satiation.

"This pasta with hot sauce for khushi. she likes spicy hot food that's why."

.her laad governor thoughtfulness makes her eyes soften with tenderness.

"it's macaroni with hot sauce for you." He passes the container to bua and then another for amma.

Khushi' heart fills with joy to see such love from her husband for her family. She is amused to see Arnav's sensibilty⭐️

Amma can't eat the ajeeb food what her damadji brought. he tries to follow him. Arnav shows her how to eat, "aunty aise khate hai." How endearing he sounded!

Bua also tries to follow how he demonstrated. Khushi enjoys the moment with pure happiness.

Bua seems doesn't like the food that much, but still she pretends that she loved the food so much. Not the taste, they saw his love in the food. So how they can say they didn't like it?

"bohot achcha hai. Itna maza aya, hume to aise kabhi khaya bhi nahi."

Arnav is enjoying this convivial moment with khushi's family. he loves family bonding. In RM except breakfast he hardly have lunch and dinner with his family. He is getting the warmth of relationship more in GH..


While they were enjoying a pleasurable family lunch together, Arnav's driver Mohan comes there and asks him to come out. He is flummoxed to see his car, what is now just a body without wheels and parts.

"what the f"

He goes inside and calls Khushi to come out. He doesn't want to create any scene in front of the family. Amma and bua are ambiguous, what happened now!


Arnav hauls Khushi outside and brings her to the car.

"what is it"

your car"

He turns her face towards the car. Khushi's eyes pop out to see the car without any parts. "where is your seat? And where I'll sit? Where shall we keep our goods? Forget about the goods, along with parts, your wheels also are stolen."

"Exactly, what you did? Where are the spare parts of the car."

Khushi doesn't get why he is accusing her. "it looks like all the parts have been stolen.'

"I'm asking the person who did it." with a frisson of anger, Arnav moves towards her.

"kya kaha apne, hum chore hai, humne apki gadi ki poorse chudai."

"yes cause you only think like that. Like what you did with my shower in this morning."

He is still mad for her earlier frenetic behavior. And this out burst is for that.

"let me tell you then, your assumption is wrong like the weather forecaster."

"it's right, you can do anything to trouble me." he accuses her pointing finger towards her. he is over sure she is the who can sabotage his stuffs.

"I didn't do anything." Khushi also points finger to him.

People are already gathered seeing husband mauling his wife publicly..

She told him to put the car here, because it's safe. How she would've known, it never happened before. Arnav raises his voice more and khushi tells him to lower down his voice, cause everybody is watching."

"alright everybody can see me taking bath, but can't see me screaming."

Khushi can't retaliate him, cause what she did in the morning was wrong. She just tells him to call police rather than screaming. He already did it.

"then come inside and finish your food, and police will let you know when they will find the parts."

"I'll not come inside until I come to know about the stolen parts. And I know it is with you.'

"then keep standing until your own parts turn bad." She goes inside and he stands there leaning on the car.😆


Pause: I didn't like ASR divulged their turbulent relationship in front of public. Rather it would be better if he fought with her in front of her family. He has every right to be mad at her for the public bath, but accusing his wife for stealing in front of people is certainly not ASR. Khushi can be naughty enough to bathe him in front of people, but she never can harm him or cause him loss of his property.

plz ignore typos and mistakes.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B3qfbyACGew[/YOUTUBE]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B3qfbyACGew

credit goes to the maker



it was lovely 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
YAAAYYY I have completed 5000 posts on IF

I am rocking on becoming IF-Rockerz

My 5001 post is dedicated to awesome thread Blast of the Past and all the Blasters which didn't let me miss magical tale Iss Pyaar Ko at all. Thank you all for keeping IPK alive in our hearts.

It's been a wonderful journey of reading fantastic fan fictions, short stories, lovely one shots and stupendous reviews.
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Posted: 11 years ago
^^^

javeria congratulations...

imagine five thousand... now five thousand what would really thrill you i am thinking.

imagine you got five thousand roses? yeah, that's nice.

imagine you received five thousand out of five thousand in your exams... not bad.

or maybe five thousand diamonds sparkled on a lovely long chain... hmmm.

chain reminds me, do you know this man who owns a chain of industries? you know that harvard educated guy, who wears waistcoats and drives an suv...

now what if, javeria... when i told him this news, he blew you five thousand kisses.

javeria, tum sun rahi ho na?

delighted to hear the news, rocker javeria... you just got 5,000 xxx


Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago

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