~Imperfectly Perfect ~

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello shello guys ... how are you all ?? seeing me aftr a long tym na 😛 so as u guys might hv read i m here with an OS as usual 😆 bt this tym it seriously a cranky one 😛😳 wonder how such zany ideas pop up my head 😛 n this tym its not because i want to sound modest or sumthing 😛 i am skeptical dat it turned out to be be well 😳 am paranoid dat u guys will hit me with those rotten tomatoes aftr reading it 🤣 bt still i dare to take a risk 😆 actually m now rather voracious to read ur views ...n plss ingnore sum errors which may hv popped up as i usually dont proof read the parts as m devoid of patience 😛 so enough of my blabber n now here's the OS ..




The alarm rang piercing my ear drums as usual with an enormous screeching sound..aftr all this is hw I had set it..thinking dat I would sleep..wat a fool I was..i could barely sleep out of excitement...today was d day...day which I hd been longing for...today was d first tym I ws to meet hr...I had to be on tym..n thinking dat I would over sleep I had put on d alarm.. bt I would be woken if I had slept...I was jst lost thinking abt hr..dreaming abt hr..wonder hw would she luk like.how does she wlk , will she like me ?? well i was an average gud lukr .. ...ahh..i noe typical thoughts..bt wat could I do..my brain had lost its control.. it grew frantic with every passing second ..bt dat hardly did matter..it was she who mattered...d one who proposed me coz I was taking too long..d one who tickled me to make me laugh..yet she was chivalrous.. d one who is actually undefinable...she is jst an antic..yeah dats wt I call hr..aftr all antic definatly sounds bttr to rotlu...yeah u guess it right she calls me a rotlu..nw it would tke a decade to explain how we actually landed on those names...bt will surely try to explain..wat would u call a person who would propose u sayin "I'm broken , do u see me..? I'm blinded cause ur everything I see..." I noe u r wondering i should call hr a sweet heart bt aftr I reveal d nxt part u'll surely agree to my choice...I was in awe bt d vry nxt thing she asked me to do ws to sit on my knees n repeat wat she actually said...I noe it might sound romantic bt it actually took me 5 retakes to do so ...i noe u r thinking me to b mad..n yes u r right ..i m gone mad..mad for her...m madly in luv with hr...well well I got deviated from d topic... so finally today ws d day...I chose to dress formally...well dats d only thing we hd in common...n our choices were poles apart..i was a bit on d casual side n she luvd punk...bt dat hardly did matter...finally d time was abt to arrive...i left my place for d place where we had planned to meet each other for d vry first tym...as tradition it should hv been me who would reach first bt as i took steps further I could feel hr presence...i was lost in hr aroma...I felt to b in heaven...n yes my senses weren't wrong...she was there ...right there...waiting for me...she was awe fully beautiful... I was ready to spend my entire lyf with hr...to me she seemed like an angel who was here to take me to heaven ...to d world she must be a deaf bt for a deaf like me there was no one like her...from now there was no place for melancholy in either of our lyfs ...the world now sounded gibberish..for dey thought dat we n our story were imperfect or surreal n yeah dey were right bt jst half a way.. for we r IMPERFECTLY PERFECT...!!


do comment ur views 😊 silent readers plss hit the like button 😊


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Badtameejdil thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely start. Excited to read upcoming updates. BTW what is their name who are they imperfectly perfect curious please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely beginning waiting for the updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start excited continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aish...awesome re...live it a lottt...I am just waiting to see how u will carry it further,,,,superb dear...do continue it...and don't forget to update it frequently...waiting for d upcoming romance too dear :-) :-) :-) :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishabansall

lovely start. Excited to read upcoming updates. BTW what is their name who are they imperfectly perfect curious please continue soon

thnku 😊 n its ananth n navya 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Firstly thank you so much for bringing up this os.🤗.at least some is back to make the forum happening ..and the story line is interesting. .Please name the characters😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely begining dear :) excited to read further pls do continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you for starting new OS lovely dear please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start dear and thanks a lot for staring the new OS

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