MG SS: BLACK COAT BARRISTERS - CHAPTER 11 - UPDATED PG 62 - 28TH MAY - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 4



Before geet could ask meera, what she is up to now?

A group of newly joined lawyers caught sight of geet and meera sitting alone. Looking at them Meera recognized few junior lawyers and waved at them. Geet watched them coming towards their table she thought sometimes the hungry lions does go near to its prey.

One of the guy in that group said to meera "Hi..Beautiful.." "hey gorgeous.. Its sham here... may I know your good name please?" he asked geet pulling the chair out which was beside her chair. Geet gave a blank look to him.. Meera thought, this is perfect time & situation to make maan jealous and to make him accept that he likes geet and ask her for a date in front of whole coffee hut.

One by one seated at the table introducing themselves to geet and meera . They attempted to flirt with them, and even some tried to buy the cold drinks.

Geet watched sham who leaning close to her ear and heard him say something in her ear, geet's eyes widened like gol gappas with mouth wide open. Aaye aaye babajee...aaj kal ke bacche bhi na...badon ko samaan aur choton ka aadar karna inko kisine seekaya nahi hain kya...

How dare he call her sexy...Before geet could reply him or kick his ass, she heard meera saying . "Uh.. oh. I think we're being summoned now geet" Babajee...aaj tho meri waat lagnewaali hian...

That feeling she had before...That wasn't panic. This was panic. Meera was already up on her feet and geet didn't want to be left alone to face the bunch of lunatic and flirty junior lawyers. She took a deep breath and grabbed her coat over the chair and followed meera. Several prosecutors had moved on and there were plenty of empty seats at Dev'& maan's were seated.

Both had to cross the table where a bunch of local people seated at the table talking and laughing out loudly. Few watched them from their table staring at them shamelessly, one of the guy from their group blocked geet's way and asked,

" Hi..you know..you look damn hot..without black coat.." he said while looking at her boobs. "I wonder how you might look without this...hmm bombshell?" he said while pinch held her shirt with his two fingers "Rascal" Geet snapped his hands off from her shirt, gathering all her strength, pushed him back with great force. At the same time another guy held meera's hand pulled over his lap forcefully.


"Aisi kya jaldi hain jaan-e-mann..jara hamari godhi main baitja" Meera lost her mind when she felt his hands on her thighs "How dare you?" she slapped him straight.


Another friend of those guys caught geet's hands and twisted them on her back to which geet felt unbearable pain "Ahhh.. chodo mujhe! ..Leave me you bas***d" he was so adamant "Bahut garmi hain tujhmain...maie hu na..main tanda kardunga tumhari saari garmi ko.." saying this he brought his face close to geet's face to kiss her. And then he kissed her, well he thought he did but actually he kissed on someone's palm.

Maan watched geet taking off her coat from his table to which he wasn't comfortable of others gawking at her lustfully.

I must punish her for taking off that black coat of hers. That's It..I waited too long for her to come to me... How can she be so naive about her beauty and what effect it has on people around? I felt my stomach flutter painfully and my ears getting hot and my blood boiled when I saw the shameless predators lusting at my girl openly. I want to beat each one of them present in this room who are looking at his geet till they become black and blue. She is only mine, only I have rights to gawk at her, lust her & love her..Love? I don't care anymore; I must claim my right on her no matter what she thinks or feels about me.


I can't wait another enternity for her to confess that she is also interested in me. I did everything I could to make myself perfect match for her. I did change myself and my life style for her; but now there is a limit to my patience. Whether she accepts me or not! I must give it a try for at least once. And then she did something to which my libido shot up high breaking all the control I had over me from past 8 months. I was so uncomfortable looking at her half dressed with hair open - which is deadly combination. I can smell her fruit shampoo from here which tickled my senses - perfect strawberry is my favourite too. Isn't that her smile enough to make me grow hard? Damn you geet! For making me to feel weak! Is she naive or doing all this intentionally just to tease me and test my patience? I must spank her for creating these weird feelings in me.

I managed to keep this secrete that you are my mystery girl from everyone, now you have crossed all the limits by challenging me. I was waiting for this moment since when I don't know, now I will show you what happens when you tease me.

Maan saw few junior lawyers gathered around the table where geet and meera seated. He sat up straight in his chair while watching them closely. "who are those guys? " dev asked maan passing his cigarette pack to him.

Maan "Juniors..! " maan said while lighting at his menthol cigarette(Smoking is injurious to health)

Yash "damn man!"

I watched them from my table whether they are uncomfortable to talk with those guys. I was all set to punch them if they even think of troubling them. And then I saw a guy who is sitting beside geet say something in her ear to which geet made that cute face with her that ever arguing mouth wide open. Uff..Her little gestures make me so hard that I had to wait for others to leave till I am all fine to leave the place.

Yash saw maan staring at geet without breaking his contact for a second. Maan "was there something that you wanted to ask or say ?"

Yash "why don't you tell her what you want maan?" to that dev laughed like lunatic "agar iska bas chalet ho..ussko hey kabhi bhi bahar nahi aanedega.. ghar main usko bandh karkey rakkdega... sabki nazar se door.." "but you know she is one spit fire...issko kaccha khaajayegi agar hey baat usko pata chali tho..."


Yash "Ask her out maan, I had this doubt she might be your mystery girl...now I am 100% sure..she is your mystery girl..go for it man.."

Dev" no-oh-oh-oh... way..." surprised dev asked maan " seriously? ..I mean ..are you ? maan the great player...no-oh-ohohoho- damn man! " dev patted maan's back bit hardly to which maan only smirked at him.

When my eyes fell on them, I couldn't control my anger looking at the sight of my geet in someone's arm. Wait a minute? Did meera just slap that guy? And then my blood boiled watching my geet's hands twisted back and her face cringed with pain. That's it...! I can't see her in pain..

Dev & yash were also watched them and quickly stood up from their chairs with fisted hands. Maan pushed back his chair and walked towards their table dangerously taking long strides. Dev also followed maan along.

"Bahut garmi hain tujhmain...maie hu na..main tanda kardunga tumhari saari garmi ko.." saying this he brought his face close to geet's face to kiss her.

Before he can kiss geet on her lips, maan kept is hand in between blocking their mouths to which he kissed on maan's palm.


Maan didn't waste another second. He pulled geet from his hold while looking at geet's tearful eyes. Thats it! He made his geet cry...then maan held his jaws tightly in his left hand while shoving geet back towards yash gently. "Stay there.."


Maan said pointing at geet. by then, other friends of that guy who were seated at the table stood up, ready to fight.


Maan "tumne bahut badi galthi kardi.." maan said to that guy looking back at geet "you did a grave mistake by touching whats mine.." saying this maan punched him hard on his face to which he fell on the table holding his face in her hands "ahh..." and then hell broke loose over coffee hut.

Dev kicked the guy who misbehaved with meera, while meera was hitting that with her pointer heals. Maan was held by other two guys while the first guy who was punched by maan, punched back on maan's face to which maan's lips started to bleed.

Someone hit maan on head from back. Maan swing his head back to hit the guy who hit him with try. Yash tried to release maan from them but he was thrown on away to get hit by the chair. Geet saw a guy taking out a knife from his pocket who was about to stab on maan's back. She screamed with horror"Maannn...look back".. maan quickly moved aside before the guy stab him..And kicked him hard on his bumps to which he fell on floor'


"Freeze...stop there where you are...everyone hands over your head ...Now" A police arrived on time before anyone get serious hurt, thanks to the manager. He deserves a bravery medal.


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After a hour later


SI "Thank you Mr.Khurana, We will take care of them from here. I will make sure that they stay in jail at least for a year. "

A police van left from there with those scoundrels leaving the dust behind.

Yash said with ice bag pressed to head "Uff..Finally" Meera was doing first aid to dev's shoulder knife cut wound. While geet made maan to sit on chair to check the cut on his lips and small wound on his forehead.



Geet said "Thanks."to maan while dabbing tincture on cotton ball. Maan "sirf thanks miss.Handa..? " asked smirking at her. Geet pressed the tinctured cotton on his lips where the cut was making maan to hiss from pain and pleasure "Ahh! Geet...easy.." .. "Oh! Sorry... I will be gentle"


Geet moved more closely between his legs to check the wound on his forehead her, the cut was pretty bad which needed at least 4 - 6 stitches. "Maan...I mean mr.Khurana..I think you need to go to the doctor...this wound need to few stitches" geet said with bit breathlessly, standing this close to maan. Geet couldn't take all these torture to stay this close to him yet she couldn't do whatever she wants to do with him.

Yash "I guess ...I might need doctor's attention as well ...or else I will die" said seriously rather dramatically.


Meer also agreed with yash bit worried for dev's wound "I second you.." to which Geet and maan just nodded for an yes to their suggestion.


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...To Be Continued...


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P.S: Sorry again for making you all wait. kya karu Network problem! Let me know how is it okay?

Jesus Christ! I thought you all might hang me upside down if I would have made geet kissed by someone creep. seriously? I would nver imaging geet kissing or kissed by anyone but Maan..Only maan have that rights ..Righ?

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Edited by GurtiWonderland - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
Lovely update! Very well written!I was wait ing to know Maan's feelings 4 Geet!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Awesum and lovely story. I luvd the jealous Maan. Its treat to read.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Great update..
Loved it..
Maang standing up for geet..
Such creep people we meet sometimes..thank god the boys were there to help..
Please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Superbb update
so da feeling is mutual..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
awesome update!!!
both hav feelings towards the other!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
as usual.. its an amazing update...

maan's hard wall finally broken n his possessiveness has come out...


i was just visualizing the scenes one by one as written n its just awesome...


the scenes n the dialogues n their actions even the cigerettes passed by Dev to Maan , his smirk for their dialogue...



its all just superb... I can say i just watched the epi... n i am re-reading it again n again...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
beautiful part👍🏼
thank god maan came at the right time
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
achha budfhhu banaya aapne teaser se...
reallly yr...tht ws such a blow "and he kissed her"...
loved ur sweet surprise..or i bettr say shokk...😉
n good to here maans monolgue...
abb maan geet ka kya punishment dega...?? 😉
n tht boy... 😡 achha hua maan ne usko bht maara...
abb waoting to c our maaneets closeness...
waitinggg...!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mazaa agaya
It was full filmy
Loved it

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