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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey muskaan I love ur writting alwys n read many of ur ff many tyms, and my fav is kashish and sati plsss add ne in ur pm list for this ff also
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally she came to her parents!! why do i feel now maan's guroor will be shattered 😒 i am afraid for the baby coz the drugs will defo affect it making it physically or mentally handicapped ... so i feel it will be better if she faces miscarriage coz giving life to an unhealthy baby is unacceptable ... this is a punishment to the innocent life

model wala thingy i understood maan had nothing to do coz u didnt clarify!!

waiting di for the next part haye i am waiting all excited seeing updating status😎
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Posted: 11 years ago


wow lovely emotional heart tearing update.. oh god te way geet was craving to have more and more drugs so she sold all te jewels, she is in tat state were she dont know wat to do was emotional winching...te way geet felt she is pregnant and worried for te baby was lovely emotional.. te way my maan was happy tat he crack te deal and asking her arrange party & call everyone and geet ki taunt abt her parents and they argument ,geet rushing out was lovely emotional .. te way geet stood in front of her mansion and collapsed on her dad ki arms was lovely emotional heart tearing.. atlast geet broke down in their parents arms.. now mohi wont leave my maan, and my maan will now realize wat he done or get angry on his geet for going to her home?..buddhu maan now atleast see wat ur geet needs..i love te update so much..
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 10

Next Morning Khurana Mansion

Maan paced restlessly in the room waiting for Geet. He had shouted at all the maids asking where Geet was. Even Pooja didn't know where Geet was.
There was a sudden panic in the house.
Maan - so many of you are in the house & don't know where Geet went
"koi uska khayal nahi rakh sakta kya?"
, he lashed out his anger on his mom

It was not that Pooja had not seen Geet losing weight or skipping meals at home. She had assumed Geet attended so many parties probably she ate there.
Pooja tried to explain - Maan uska koi kitty hoga. Waise bhi wo ghar pe kabhi khana rahthi. khabhi khanne pur bhi nahi aati
Maan was taken aback. He very well knows Geet loves homemade food, especially Maa ke haat khana tho ussen bahut pasand hain.


Adi had already reminded him couple of times since morning about the meeting with foreign delegates. Maan left in haste to office. Nothing seemed right.

Later in the day he received divorce papers.

He roared in frustration. He threw everything that was in front of him. The only person who could do this was her Dad. He just marched into his office.

The secretary told him he couldn't meet him now.

He cared a damn & walked into the cabin. There was no one in the cabin. Maan gave the staff members a deadly glare.
Sectary - sir, I was just trying to tell you. Mohindar sir didn't come to office today.

He didn't wait for her complete.

He told the driver to take him to Handa Haveli. The whole haveli was painfully calm. The servants welcomed him with a painful look. Like they were not happy with him. He could not relate it to hate but it was something else.

This was the first time Maan was entering her house. He knew she was from Handas, he knew about their bank balances & shares & the money they made but had never seen how magnificent & posh their life style was.

The haveli felt so much like home even though right now he owned the most expensive mansion in the city. The place looked so rich with love & warmth. The servants were more like family members. Probably they would have seen Geet since she was born. Every corner of the house was done tastefully by the people who lived there.

The servant offered him water. He politely refused & asked for Mr. Handa.
Servant - sahab is gone out
Maan took a deep breath - Geet kanha hain?
servants eyes welled up - baby bhi unke saat hi gayi hain


Maan was walking out not knowing what to do next when he saw Mr Handa walking with few family members.
Maan looked straight into his eyes - Geet kanha hain?
He didn't call him papaji nor did he want to address him as Mr. Handa


Mohinder eyes were cold. He was shrewd business man. He very well knew how to hide his emotions. Right now he wanted to beat the hell out of this boy who claimed to love his daughter but all he had given her was pain.


Mohinder - tum bolo Maan, Geet kahna hain?
His voice was weak & for a moment he let out his pain. Definitely the girl who came to his door step last night was nowhere like the Geet he remembered she was.
Mohinder - Last I remembered, she walked out with you


Maan threw the divorce paper at him - don't play games with me. Meri Geet aisse nahi kar sakti
Mohinder laughed - tumhari Geet!
Maan - I don't even want to talk to you. Mujhe Geet se milna hain.
Mohinder roared - kabhi nahi! You can never meet her. I will not let you meet her.
The lawyer held Mr. Handa back - you can see the papers have been signed by Geet.

Maan held the lawyer by collar - no paper can stop me from meeting my jaan
wo mujh se khafa ho sakti hain, mujh se juda nahi
jaanta hoon naraaz hain, lekin main ussen mana loonga.
Bus aap log humarin beech mat aaiye!

By then Geet's tau ji called the security & told him to send Maan out.
Maan - If this is how u want to deal it.. so be it. I will get the cops. Let me see how will you stop me then.

Maan would have just reached the door when he heard mohinder plead - it's already quiet messed up. Don't make it worse.

Maan had not heard someone speak in such a torn out tone. His determination shook as he walked back to his car. He loosened his tie as he walked into the mansion. Adi came with a few files that needed his signature.

Maan looked blank when he signed the papers. Adi looked at his face & knew something was wrong. He had heard from the servants that Geet was not at home since morning & that he had been to handa haveli.
Adi stammered & asked - siiir, Geet ma'am theek hai na?
Maan looked at him confused - umm!!
Maan looked at him confused - why did u ask that?
Adi stammered again - I thought maam is not been keeping well or something, that's why you look disturbed
Maan looked away
adi - waisen bhi maam kuch mahino se apna khayaal nahi rakh thi
Maan wondered what was he talking about.

He just asked casually - why did you say that?
Adi blurted out how Geet has changed her wardrobe size over past months.

That came as a blow to Maan. How come he never noticed it? Yes he did feel she has lost some weight. But so much! It was like someone has slipped the floor underneath his legs. What if his jaan was not keeping well?

He checked with Pooja & Dev if they knew anything about her health. It all seemed so ironical. He didn't know about his own wife's health. Maan was checking into Geet's stuff to look for any reports or anything.
Dev slowly came in, not sure if he had the right to speak - sab theek tho hai na?
Maan just broke down - I don't know
I don't know anything. They are not letting me meet her.

thanks for sweet comments & likes
BIG THANKS TO AVI FOR EDITING
love
muskan
NEXT PART 11
Edited by muskanp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hailaaa accidently just came under the update😆😆😆😆

will comment after i read it😉

ohhh I m sooo loving this back to back updates muskaan
it seems like our old muskaan is back🤗🤗
I hope u start updating the others ff like this tooo

I am sooo happy to see this mode of u once again

just love it sooo much.
can't tell u how happy I am that i am dancing😉😉
Edited by jasraj123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
he deserves this treatment from handas
so geet signed divorce papers
too cool
sometimes though we love a lot...when we cant show it
we loose many things in life
and now mk is facing same stream
and somwehre happy tht he is going through this
and what happened to his mom who said she vl be with her son when he is going to meet Mr.Handa fr d first time
and i too dont wann geet to come back soon
and let him repent fr all his deeds he did
and dont no baby is there or not
but for that also

plzzz give one more update
plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
he deserve worse.i m liking handas more than all damn khuranas.
nice update.

another thing- i m not going to feel any sympathy for this maan. Never. he just can't understand Geet. for him she left everything and may be first time she asked him to respect her parents. he can't even do that.


Edited by mannu_minnie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
May be best is in rehab...
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Posted: 11 years ago
omggg geet signed the divorce papers
it does not seems right
wonder what is the truth behind it
feeling bad for mohinder that he even pleaded to maan not to mess up more😭
finally maan came to know something about her health 😭😭 and he feeling soo pathetic about not knowing anything about her

he is thinking others taking care of her as he himself did not do it😕😕😕

He just had too much trust on his family and in this he just ignored what he suppose to do

like the way mr handa asked maan about where geet is and he is the one who claimed to love her and got her in to this condition😭😭
wonder how is geet now and is she really pregnant

what will happen to baby as far i know baby of addicted person just become addicted in womb as well
but just can't bear it happen with maaneet baby😭


do something muski
hard to wait for next part now
Edited by jasraj123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ahhh i just love his update 😈

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