MG SS: TE AMO - CHAPTER 3 UPDATED PG 7 -- 21-APR-2014 - Page 3

part 2
awesome...
whoa Maan is so smitten seeing Geet...
interesting...
cont soon dear...

S - can u post the link when u update in this thread?
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Originally posted by: spvd

part 2
awesome...
whoa Maan is so smitten seeing Geet...
interesting...
cont soon dear...

S - can u post the link when u update in this thread?
FF Daily Updates 10

gr8 parts..

Maan is smitten by her, though his heart says its love, he is denying as he only believes in lust.

interesting... continue n pm me...

awesome start and awesome updates

Great SS. You are a versatile writer.

waiting waiting

do cont. soon

beautiful story and loved maaneets character sketch
both maan and geet dont believe in love but seems like they r already falling in love

CHAPTER 3

Note: No proofreading or editing done to this update. Typed half sleepy. Ignore the spelling and grammatical mistakes.

A commentator's voice raised to high pitch along with the crazy crowd supporting no.4 car driver "And MSK's no. 4 car starts to make its move, passing low inside as Rocky goes high on Turn 5"

Mercy barked instructions to his mechanic team over head phone which was attached to his left ear. "Charan..in 3, MSK will reach the station; Check the fuel tank and compression breaks. Maddy you gotta check the air in front & back tyres..raj check the engine..I don't want any mistakes..now common buckle up and get moving Riya..are you there? Which lap no.4 in"

Riya, the crew member of MSK team, works in track observing room replied "its 5 mercy..MSK should increase his speed.."

Mercy "what place he is in now? "

Riya "14 th place..7 more laps to go..in 10 minutes..its highly impossible to complete laps in 10min mercy.."

Mercy "there is nothing impossible to MSK.. keep your eyes on track baby..Talk to you later.."

Commentary's voice erupted in the speakers in race track "Rocky's car's no.7 front! If MSK can hold the low groove, he's going to take home his second win this season. Wait! Rocky's car hit hard and scraped the wall. Sparks are flying! Rocky's off and directly into MSK. They're giving each other tough competition."

"Guess the new boy rocky's got some cool moves"

"He need to be sharpen at the edges..And MSK definitely the one I suggest to groom this new driver yet these two are fighting for champion ship trophy with one hell lot of cash prize..Let's see who kicks the dust" two commentators where predicting the winners of this champion cup series by their cross and curves.

"It's a very interesting race today.. Those two have dominated the track today, Andy, no.10 car sandwiched between them, they've led all but 5 laps and have swapped the lead 10 times to complete another 7 laps"

"No.4 has halt at the back station for technical examination"

"It's been a tight race, both have had superb starts. But this has always been MSK's track. He has won 9 champion cup series continuously from 2003 to 2013

"And MSK's no.4 car starts to make its move, passing low inside as Rocky's no. 7 goes high on Turn 8."

" Wooohh! MSK is in full zoom speed..Look at the car, Rocky's left behind raising the dust..MSK is pulling ahead andy's no.10..oh! what a curve ..now andy's in loose...3 more laps to go..."

"Ron's no.2 is on rebound with andy's no.10 spinning into the side track. Oh! No..ron's car caught fire..andy's now airborne ..Unfortunately they are off from the track...now MSK's is in second where as Rocky's leading; Krish's no.9 is in third place...."

"The caution flag waves at Rocky's no.7, freezing the drivers in place with two laps to go."

"Oh! God..Krish's no.9 hit the MSK's left ..oh! no! ..MSK's car is spinning in rounds..Hitting kirsh's bonnet oh! He is rolling off...hit the wall..krish's no. 9 is off the track.. Now no.4 and no.7 giving tough competition each other"

"one lap left to go.."

"What's going on in MSK's mind..he has slowed down a bit where Rocky's reaching the checkered flag. I am sure, being 9 times champion MSK new this track like lines in his hands..he definitely have some strategy ...Oh! look ...MSK's no.4 just increased its speed..MSk managed to pull beside Rocky's no.7."

"They seem to be locked. Rocky's managed to get an edge. He's pulling ahead, but his back panel just clipped MSK's bonnet. Now MSK's loose! He's backward...and into the wall"

"MSK's recovered the hit and geared up towards the final line..Oops! so close...MSK's managed to pull right thank god..! Rocky's increased the speed.."

"100 mts to the final line and for checkered flag..so whole stadium and National Champions Series cup is waiting for its champion by holding their breath... 30 seconds to go.."

Maan put the top gear and pressed the accelerator hard increasing the speed of the car. His black Manifest Ford, his lucky charm, which has won him last 4 champions series cup. "Common baby! One more to go.." Maan held the staring wheeling tightly. A sweat dripped over his eye lashes "Fordy..sweet heart ..common baby...lets kick some asses...."

"Oh! Rocky's zig-zag driving blocking MSK to go forward.."

Maan was waiting for perfect moment to get loose...and pressed the accelerator to top most speed putting last gear leaving Rocky's car behind..

The cheers from crowd covered the stadium, some were cheering for their favourite racers and most of them where cheering for MSK, the 9 time champion.

Maan watched rocky's car which was shaking with the speed increase. And next moment something just blown up making a loud noise. Whole stadium fell into pin drop silence. Maan saw rocky's car in rare mirror spinning losing its control rolling off! Whoa, Rocky's car landed upside down. MSK's car just crossed the finishing line making whole stadium to erupt from their seats making loud cheers for his victory.

The whole stadium praised hip hip hurry's, cheers, and congratulations to the winner while some hugging their beloveds and friends.

Commentator "Definitely not Rocky's day"

"Ladies and gentlemen, Now We present you the 10^th time Nascar Champion cup series, winner.. Mr. Maan Singh Khurana"

Maan jumped out of his car when he hit the break making skidding crouch noises. Maan ran toward's rocky's car which was upside down..rocky's was trying to some out when a fire sparked in the engine..the fuel tank was leaking. Anytime the fire will spread. Maan removed his helmet and threw aside.. Rocky's might have fractured his arm and leg which he found great difficulty to move them. "Rocky..move back" Maan kicked opened the drive's door while instructing rocky to secure his head. By then the helping team has arrived at the accidental zone. And ambulance just arrived with siren still on.

Maan kicked the door hard once last time. And dragged rocky's out gently. "Buddy...you alright ? ..can you walk?"

Maan helped rocky to lay on the stretcher while the help team took care of the car by spraying the foams on the little fire in the engine.

And a loud applause erupted all over the stadium in appreciation to maan, first for winning the champion cup and second for saving his colleague's life. Whole stadium filled with cheers, songs, hoots and drum beats.

The event sponsors welcomed maan on Diaz shaking his hands. Maan was smiling all the way, The committee sponsors handed him a crystal cup along with the check of 20 million. Maan called up his crew members and handed them the cup and check. Someone gave him the victory champagne bottle to pop it. Maan shook the bottle before popping the neck of the bottle while sprinting the champagne upward and took a few sips from it.

Maan was asked to say few words about his victory

"All this credits goes to my crew members, friends, fans and well wishers..I am thankful to everyone..Love you all.." maan screamed loudly over mike followed by the whole crowd's cheers.

Maan was talking with other racers about the race. He turned back when he felt someone's soft hands on back slightly pressing his shoulder over his racing jercy.

Maan gasped when he saw the most beautiful pair of eyes meet his, the same eyes hunted him in his dreams..the same eyes he could never get tired of them looking at. The same eyes made him restless and create something unknown feelings in his heart. And then he heard her musical voice again, the same voice called him in dreams over and over.. "Congrats Mr. Khurana.." Geet extened her hand to shake his hands. Maan immediately held her hand dragging towards his car leaving surprised crews and geet's band friends behind.

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At parking zone

Maan couldn't explain the state of his at the moment. All these years he lived without a family. But his crew has become family now. In these 10 years, winning champion trophy has become a robotic to him, his crews used to congratulate him and friends-colleagues send bouquets. But he never had this satisfaction when geet congratulated him with a beautiful smile on her lips.

Maan left geet's hand when they reached his car, black BMW 5 series. Geet looked at the car awe with her jaws open. Maan didn't wait for her to say anything. He didn't even get changed from his race uniform. He removed the jercy and straightened the blue t-shirt underneath which has sung to his body like second skin. Geet watched his every move without a word. Geet wore white jeans Capri and yellow-white flowered lose top with yellow sneakers. Her cury hair loosely tied by white lace ribbon. Totally she was looking smoking hot. Maan surveyed her top to bottom briefly before opening the passenger door to geet. "Gorgeous! Get in the car.."

Geet "But where are we going..And my friends are still here waiting for me.. I can't leave them like this"

Maan thought that he couldn't control anymore. He has to kiss those plump-pink-glossed lips. His libido is in danger level and he has to take care of it asap. But he doesn't want to force geet into anything which she doesn't feel comfortable doing. His mind is screaming since he saw her lips few minutes back at stadium. Her natural scent once gain knocked his senses off. Maan moved closer to geet pinning her to the car. Maan touched her soft milky cheeks "Geet! Do you trust me? .." for that geet just noded for a yes without taking time to think before answering to him.

Maan "then don't worry ...your friends will be picked up by my crew. They will be attending the party at 5 star hotel."

Geet couldn't say anything for that, "Thank you.." whispered breathlessly. Maan's spicy perfume tickling her senses. Last night she couldn't sleep, every time she closed her eyes, maan's face keeps on flashing in front of her. Maan "you are most welcome! Gorgeous..! infact I have a nickname for you... " Geet "huh? Nickname? " geet smiled at his cuteness when he told her about the nickname. Maan "yes... nickname..vanilla" geet knew she heard him correct, just to make sure she asked "Vanilla? Like vanilla ice cream? "...Maan was admiring her beautiful face moving more closer. Now maan is all over her touching from top to bottom.. only few inches space between them. Maan slowly whispered "yes vanilla..my version of vanilla...I will explain about it some other time. And no ..its not ice cream.. now get in the car before I kiss you hard and make you breathless. " geet surprised and flustered at a time hearing his threat about kissing her breathless. Geet thought Oh! My every single girl's dream to be kissed by MSK and I might be the lucky one...

Maan watched geet lost somewhere.. he couldn't resist another minute, maan just grabbed her head in one hand whilst his other hand pulled her small waist pressing to his pelvis. Maan slowly traced her upper lips by his warm tongue and then upper lips urging her to do the same with him. Maan completely lost his mind when he tasted her sweet pink lips by this tongue. First geet was surprised, second shocked and third she was in trance. Geet just imitated maan by licking his perfect lips. Maan went crazy when he took geet's bottom lips first sucking at them and then upper lips. Her lips tasted like honey, a unique taste, only hers..Nothing artificial. Maan squeezed her waist pulling her more closely. Geet did same what maan showed her how to suck the lips. Maan left her lips to inhale pressing his forehead to hers. Geet was panting for air to inhale. Maan again took her lips in his chewing them lightly taking a utmost care not to hurt her. Geet did the same with maan.

Maan knew he has gone too far and have to stop or else geet might take flee. Maan smacked himself mentally..Leaving her red well kissed lips. Geet still had her eyes closed while enjoying her blissful moment. Geet leaned on his chest while saying something in breathless "It was my first kiss...and its mind-blowing.." Maan hugged her tightly in his arms. Maan gave butterfly kisses on her earlobe while answering her.. "It was my first real kiss too".. Geet snapped opened her eyes to maan's answer. Geet said with accusing look "Liar...I have seen you kiss malika, nikitha, kash, reena, teena, meena, disha..and and whats her name, the two piece model ..haa.. sia..and list goes on" maan watched her amused look "who are all those girls..?" maan asked with blank look on his face. Geet rolled her eyes and replied "they are the girls you kissed before me. I have seen you kissing them on TV and photos in news papers." Maan laughed out loud.. " geet..I said It was my first real ..i mean R-E-A-L kiss...those kisses doesn't count..all i care about is just this kiss"

Geet ignore when her tugged at his answer. Maan "Geet..get in the car please...before I do something that later we both might regret."..

Geet was starting at his chest and replied "I can't sit in the car unless you release me Mr. Khurana"

Maan held her jaw bit hardly rather harsh. "Listen Geet...from here onwards you will call me only by my name... Maan "

Geet nodes her head for a yes. Maan couldn't get enough of her. he thought he looked even cuter when she nodes for a yes. Maan kissed her nose one last time before releasing her "now get in the car vanilla" maan called her by his given nickname to which geet blushed hard. Her cheeks had turned to beetroot red.

Maan walked across to his side door after closing her door hopping into driver's seat.

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...To Be Continued...

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