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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

Tu apna wo dusra naam bata mujhe jo Ria baat kar rahi thi 😡
ANKITA naam mujhe pata hain 😡
Tu mujhe chup chaap bata de wo naam anku jaani 😡 😳 😆
ohh hosiyar ho gayi hain invisible hoke log in kliya tune aur sab comments bhi padh liye 😆
jab ab sab padh liya hain tune tu apna naam ab tu khud hi bata de 😆

wait let me party hard first tune mujhe intellegent kaha 🥳
maine log in kiya hi nahi tha aise hi guest ki tarah view kiya 😃
ok main tujhe bata dungi but on a condition yujhe bhi apna koi ajjeb sa name batana pade ga jo kisi ne tera rakha schul mein college mein ya if pe
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

no it is not final 😡 😆

i would officialy declare it if its final opr not only on a condition which i just put 😳😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

billi ko mein billi hi toh bolunga meow 🤣
billi jaise bade nails haw 😲 😆 tu daarati hogi sabko uss time pe 😆
kya kya naam rakjhe tune unke bata toh sahi 😆 😳

uu 😡😳😆
noop main just cut karna bhul jati thi otherwise i had no intentions to keep long one 😆
jisne mera name rakha tha uska surname batra tha jisse i gave him the name bakra later changed to Mr. Goat 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

Ria uss milli ka kuch ata pata hain wo pata nahi IF se laapata ho gayi hain aajkal nazar hi nahi aati hain 😡

Haan haan mujh batana toh sahi kya hain iss groves ka nick name jo milli bulati thi 😈 😆

she is busy with her job and even ussne ek baar kaha tha that she is gonna marry soon may b issey liye she left if

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: QuboolHaiAsya

It was awesome!!
Luvd it!!
Update soon!!
Ty fr d PM!!

thanks
will try updating this week 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
shrey for u
ye ussi gif se banaya
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter-2

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"People think the most painful thing is losing someone you love... But the truth is. Knowing that the one you love is gonna leave you..."

As the Sun rays hit his eyes, he slowly opened them. Rubbing them from one of his hands and blocking the way of rays by the other. Next he realized that he was lying on the bed in his room. He had fainted when he raced. He looked around him to find his mother 'Dilshad' talking to Doctor. Dilshad's back was facing Asad. He couldn't hear what they were saying but he was quite sure that he will have to face the anger of his mother and Zoya today. Zoya?? wait where was she?

"Ammi" He called Dilshad in a low tone.

Hearing him call her, Dilshad turned to face him.

She walked to Asad as the doctor finally left the room.

As she went close to Asad her teary eyes came to view.

"Ammi, I am fine.." Asad answered Dilshad's unasked question.

Dilshad preferred to stay quite, running her hands through his hairs, making him feel better

Finding her silence unusual, Asad finally spoke. "I am sorry. I know i should not have did what i did. But you know I feel alive when I race."

"Asad I know how much you love to race but..." Dilshad left the sentence incomplete as she lacked efforts to complete it. Asad was born with a disease which had made his heart weak. If his heart was stressed once more then it may become difficult for him to survive.

Dilshad decided to leave finding it difficult to face him.

oOo

After having a shower, Asad rubbed his wet hair with the towel to dry them as he stood in front of the mirror. He remembered Zoya telling him that the wet look suits him. Her thought was enough to bring a ear to ear smile on his face. Keeping the towel aside he took his shirt. wearing the shirt he remembered Zoya calling him Jahanpana Six Packs. Thinking of her again and again brought a sweet smile on his face. He looked down at his six packs and then back to the mirror. This time when he looked into the mirror he saw Zoya standing beside him.

He finally turned around to see her quietly looking at him.

'Is that Zoya really?? No she isn't here actually. i am just imagining her. Its all because I am thinking about her again and again. '

Ignoring her he began to button his shirt. Before he could even start to button it. He found himself being slapped. Yeah! he was slapped by Zoya for risking his life.

"Ouch!!"

he then looked strangely at Zoya and finally asked her "Is this really you Zoya?"

"No its not me actually. Its my ghost who is standing here in front of you."

Ignoring her reply he again asked her " and what was that slap for"

"The slap was for risking your life. What was the need of racing?"

"Zoya you know how much I love racing right"

"Asad and you know how much I love U right"

The last sentence from Zoya left Asad speechless. Without any words he hugged Zoya tight.

"and I love you more" he whispered as Zoya hugged him back.

Once the hug was broken Zoya buttoned his shirt and gave him a bowl full of soup to Asad.

"and this is the reward of your racing"

"Zoya, You every-time make me have this tasteless soup. This time I am surely not going to have this."

"Not even if I feed you.." Zoya said with a puppy face as she help a spoon full of soup near his mouth.

She surely had some effect on him. He was again left speechless but his ego didn't allowed him to have the soup.

The final please from Zoya made the love win over his ego this time and he finally had Soup making wired faces.

oOo

Author's Note- Before you again complaint that the update is smaller i want to tell you that as my exams are nearer, the workload has been doubled. I am finding it very difficult to deal with everything now. I still updated for my lovely readers be it a small update.

Thanks Shrey, Ria and all my lovely readers for bring this thread to a century of pages.

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Edited by hottytotty - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
PM's on the way
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Edited by hottytotty - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wowww
that was so cute.
asad love racing thats cute 😳
Zoya slapped him! 😲 but that was due to care, love 😳 shoo shweett! 😆

that waas so cute 😊
loved it ❤️


Edited by -KitKit- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such an cute part..
Enjoyed while reading it completely..
Asya were so adorable.
All the very best for ur exams..
I wont complain it as small part.
Loved this chappu❤️

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