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Posted: 11 years ago

okay 😳
i will be updating in 10 mins now 😳
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so should we fifnish this page to thn 😆
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Originally posted by: treasure11

so should we fifnish this page to thn 😆


yeah!! remember.. only 8 comments are allowed in one page
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Hello everyone..

Here is the fifteenth part of my story Unrecognized Emotions. Happy reading.. And PLEASE read the note below.. 😃



UNRECOGNIZED EMOTIONS

PART 15


Zoya was tracing around the room, to and fro, with a book in her hand and many more littered on the bed. She sometimes whined, complaining about the existence of the twice in a year guests, The Semester Exams. Like every time, and every other student, Zoya welcomed these guests half heartedly.


It was her last exam tomorrow. She had her most important paper the next day, but her roving mind went hither and thither, mostly getting stuck at only one person, Asad.


Dear Diary,


He had told me a few days back that he needed to talk to me about something important after we finish off with our examinations. I don't know what it is, but I am anxious about it. What if it is about that day? The day which we have never discussed again. I tried to, but failed, which added much to my discontentment.


But if he has decided to talk about something, then I know he will. This is something that I really like about him, and hate it too. The former because he always does what he says, and the latter because he does that when he wishes to...


Zoya could not write more, she did not want to write more. Her emotions were heightened these days, but they turned disastrous when she remembered about his ignorance towards her at times. And right now, she did not want to think about it.


Her cell phone buzzed. It was Humeira calling.

"Hello!!", greeted Humeira's chirpy voice.

"Hey!", answered Zoya. Humeira sensed despondency in her tone.

"I think it's a wrong number... Sorry...", Humeira said and was about to disconnect the call.

"Nooo... No... Humi.. wait.. this isn't a wrong number... I am Zoya speaking." Zoya almost screamed out suddenly shaken up by her friend's response.


"Now this sounds like My Zoya", said Humeira, chuckling. Zoya could not help but smile at the silly ways that her Humi sometimes used to bring her out of her perplexed state.


"Zoya, you sound terrible!!"


"Stop being so cruel and tell me why did you call?", answered Zoya as she knew very well that it was just another way of Humeira to make her speak up.


"Ha ha.. I just called to wish you good luck for tomorrow.. Best of Luck! And do good.. I know you will", she said, with much confidence.

"Thanks Humi... I really need it"

"No, you don't... You just need to throw away all the weird things out of your mind and only concentrate on your studies."


Zoya was awed at Humeira's ability to detect her somber state of mind. But again, it was never something new. Zoya smiled a smile of contentment after she finished talking to her Best Friend. Her words always gave her positive vibes, no matter what the matter was, or how gloomy she felt. She got back to her books, as she was much at relief after hearing to what Humeira said.


Next day, morning

Zoya got ready for college and climbed down the stairs to join her parents for an early exam-time breakfast. But today there was an addition at the table. She saw Humeira sitting beside her father, completely absorbed in a conversation. Zoya understood from the look on their faces that it was Dr. Anwar Farooqui talking to a Medical student at the moment. She waited for them to finish and finally hugged Humeira for being so thoughtful.


She whispered a 'Thank You' in her ears to show how much touched she was at this simple act of hers. Humeira hugged her tighter which only meant, 'I am always there for you when you need me.'


Zeenat served them breakfast and saw her daughters deeply engrossed in discussing something silly that had happened long back in school. Whenever she saw Humeira she felt a tug in her heart. She was no less than a daughter for her. She saw the gold bracelet dangling in her left wrist and smiled at herself as she knew that she was also like a mother to Humeira.


Anwar did not fail to notice the changes in his wife. Her eyes brimmed with unshed tears which threatened to fall any moment. He quickly motioned her to rub her eyes before his daughters could see her and also join her in the task. Yes, if one of the ladies started crying, then it was a tradition for the others to join in the activity.


"Ammi, Abbu, what are you both doing huh?", teased Zoya.


"Oh ho Zoya!! Don't you know?? This is called love. Their eyes are doing all the talking", Humeira joined her hands with Zoya for teasing them.


Anwar cleared his throat with a heavy sound whereas, Zeenat stood there stupefied for few seconds. She smacked both of them on their heads and ordered them to eat fast.


Zoya and Humeira could never stop laughing when they saw the embarrassed look on their faces even after being married for so many years.


"Zoya, eat fast beta, then I will drop you to college today.", said Anwar, to withdraw his daughter's attention from him and his wife. Zoya suddenly remembered about her exam and gobbled the leftover food as fast as she could.


"It's okay Abbu.. You don't need to. There is still time. I will reach early if I start now. You still have more than an hour left for you to go to the hospital. You don't have to start early for me. Instead, you can drop Humeira to her college on your way.", said Zoya while checking her stuffs one last time before leaving.


Anwar stood up and blessed her by dropping a kiss on her forehead. "I know you will do good beta. Make me proud!"


" I will, Abbu!",Zoya said hugging her father. She hugged her mother too and took blessing from her.


She walked towards the door with Humeira and turned around once before opening the door. "Thank you so much for being there whenever I need you the most. I am feeling so much better now."


"Stop this rant of thank you's Zoya. It sounds so formal!! I am more than happy to do this for you. And you remember what I said last night, right??"


"Of course I do!! 'There is no need to worry about something if you know that the problem can be solved. And there is no use in worrying about something that can't be solved' ", Zoya repeated Humeira's words from last night.


"And, you be confident when you talk to Asad. Just listen to what he says and ask your heart what you want, and everything else will fall in place", Humeira said with utmost love, care and sincerity. "Now GO!! You will be late."


Zoya turned the knob of the main door and winked at Humeira. Even before Humeira could imagine what Zoya was about to do next, she heard her shouting at the top of her voice.


"Ammi, Abbu... You both still make the World's Best Couple!! So don't be embarrassed."


Zoya kissed her on her cheeks and ran outside the house leaving one shocked and two more embarrassed people behind.

Dear Diary,


Humeira was right, self confidence can do wonders, just like it did to me! My paper was good, no, not good but Great!! I hope I can do what I just promised to Abbu in the morning. I hope I can make him proud.


Where is Asad now? He said he would meet me at 3.00 pm. He claims to be punctual, but it's already 3.03 pm now. He is THREE minutes late. Here I am counting every second, and Mr, Asad Ahmed Khan is late for Three minutes!! Where are you Asad??


She felt a hand on her right shoulder and immediately stopped writing. She knew whose hand it was as by now, she was very well aware of his touch. She closed her diary and kept it in her bag hastily. Asad took a seat beside her in the canteen.


"Your Diary again, right?"

"Yea...Yeah..", she said, clasping her bag more securely.


"Zoya, I am not going to take that from you. Relax", said Asad, sensing her possessiveness for her diary. Zoya smiled at him and released the hold on her bag a little as she knew that Asad would keep his words.


"You are late!", she said showing him her watch. Asad checked the time and brushed his thumb on his forehead. "Only for Five minutes Zoya!!"


"300 seconds Asad!!", she said and bit her tongue the next moment for slipping at every wrong time.


Asad looked at her amusedly and tried hard to control his grin imagining her counting seconds, for Him!!


He scolded himself mentally for losing the track of his thoughts. "Zoya, I tried calling you, but your phone was switched off."


Zoya remembered switching off her phone before entering the examination hall and then she never remembered to switch it on. She looked at him apologetically to which he smiled.


"How was your paper?", asked Asad, to break the silence prevailing between them.

"It was Great! ", she said cheerfully. "And yours?"

"Great, just like yours."

"Where is Aafreen Baji and Farhaan Bhaijaan?", she asked, fidgeting with the loose ends of her scarf.

"They have left. I told them I have some work. So I will be late."


Zoya nodded and continued with fidgeting.


"zoya will, will you Please stop doing that? This is so irritating!", said Asad stressing more on the word please and eyeing her scarf that was tangled with her fingers now. Zoya frowned hearing his annoyed tone and continued to ignore his so-called-request.


"Zoya!!", he said bit louder.

"Asad, I don't like to be ordered", she said, equally annoyed this time.

"Zoya, please stop doing this!", he repeated his words in a sugary sweet tone.

"That was so sarcastic of you Asad!!"


Zoya sighed heavily at her helplessness. She was talking to The Asad Ahmed Khan!! Whereas, Asad giggled at her exasperated look.


"You wanted to say something? Or should I leave?", she asked, getting up from her seat.

"No... Stay!!", he pulled her back to her place by holding her hand.

"I want to, but not here Zoya. Can we go somewhere else?"


Zoya nodded her head in a yes as her heart was again doing a summersault at the close proximity of Asad. Her hand was tightly held by his still now and she made no effort in loosening it.

They started moving towards the gate when he heard Zoya's phone ringing.

"I think that's your phone."

"Huh?"

"Your phone is ringing Zoya."

"Oh.. yeah...". She left his hand and walked a little distance to attend her call.


Asad waited for her to be back and till then, he mentally framed and rehearsed his words that he was about to say to Zoya. He needed to be patient; he required courage for that too. He could not let restlessness take over him.


He turned towards Zoya to have a look at her. She was taking time. "I wonder why she is taking so long?", he thought.


The very next moment he saw her phone falling from her hand and hit the ground. Her body suddenly turned frail and she herself fell on the ground with a thud. His heart thumped with trepidation. He sprinted towards her and embraced her fragile frame in his broad physique.


A/N: In all my updates, I have always kept KSG in my mind as Asad and nobody else. I have stopped watching QH many months before, but the way our beloved AsYa got stabbed to death was definitely heart-wrenching.

So this update is dedicated to Asad and Zoya, the two most important characters of the show that we all loved so much, irrespective of who played the role. I am dedicating this update to the eternal characters Asad and Zoya and not any actor.. so please refrain from any type of bashing in this thread.. 😃


I have been really bad with replying to the comments this time, but I have replied to them all. 😳

Since this story has got to do with AsYa, I have decided to complete the story as soon as possible. Don't worry, I will not cut short it in any way.😆

It will go in the same way as it was planned from before.

I will just give more regular updates, but a little shorter one. It's not possible to give long updates in less time... Hope you all will understand.

Coming to the likes and comments, I would really be extremely motivated if I get your love in the form of likes and comments..😳

It truly means a lot to me. The number of likes has decreased in the previous update, and it truly feels bad when writers don't get any appreciation for their work.

I would be waiting for your feedback. 😃

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago
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shreee 🤔
Unres 😆


I love how Humeira understands her 😳She is such a sweet gal !!😳
I think she was more nervous to meet Asad and talkt o him than her exam 😆

Also i wish some day Asad reads her Diary 🤣
Last one yr will be full of Asad this Asad that 🤣

Now what does he want to talk too her bout 😕Confession or a goodbyeee for sometime
Omg why did she faint 😲
What are u upto ankieee 😡 Am scared now
Also i found this update very short 🤔
Edited by treasure11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!! 😉Ankita but it was short 🤔
from beginning i loved zoya and humaira bonding ❤️ so sweet 😳
whole family scene was superb!!!😊
How can asad be 300 sec late😲 bechari zoya 😆 and their bickering was so cute 😳
is Asad really trying to confess her???😕 thumne tanveer ka tarah paani pher diya .how can you ankie😡
Cliffy 😡 you too now i want update soon SOOON 😡
I hope humaira is fine 😕
love you ❤️ sweety

p.s-Don't forget about frequent update🤓




Edited by sweety003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

MAshallah. ..now res bcm shree..

New brand name of RES on IF

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its was awesome update dear 😃
loved zoya and humi bonding..
She cant wait to meet asad 😳 he is also rehearsing.. for what confession? 😕 now whse cal is tat 😡 is anythng serious..

Want to wait until wed or thurs?..k wil be waitng..update soon..
Edited by aniha20 - 11 years ago

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