A (SAHIL-ASYA) SS The Destiny Plays (Note on page 2)

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I wrote the first part of it in April when asya were dead. SO the first Part Is completely Of Them But From second Part I WILL include SAHIL As now we know abt them.the first part will be a funny one and f r om second I will concentrate on story...


ASAD and ZOYA after dying in each others arms went directly to heaven

Firstly they were received by the guard at the entrance of heaven...

they had to wait for sometime as the guard was little busy..
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later after wating for 1 hour the guard arrived...(in heaven...1 hr is 3 days)

By the time guard arrived...zoya lost her temper and started shouting at the guard

Zoya : Allah miya wats wrong with you Mr.guard...i tght kam se kam jannath mein tho wait nahi karni padegi...par itni dher india mein electricity bill pay karne ke liye bhi nahi lethe hein...

Asad : Mrs.khan...calm down...hame kya patha,iski koi majboori rahi hogi...warna jannat mein kabhi koi kaam itni late nahi hoti...

guard : haan maadam...hum maafi chahte hein...woh hamara system thoda kharab tha...isiliye aapka mauth calculate karne ke liye time laga...

zoya : aapka system karab ho gaya hein...dnt worry mein teek kar dethi hu...aapko tho patha hi hoga...ki...iss duniya mein aisa koi kaam nahi hein jo zoya faarooqui..oops...zoya ahmed khan nahi kar sakti...

Asad : par Mrs.khan yeh tho jannat hein...

Zoya : tho kya hua Mr.khan...hein jannat hein tho...computers tho duniya se hi aaya hoga mr.khan...

Guard : Ji nahi Mrs.khan...aapko takleef utane ki koi jarrorat nahi hai...woh isiliye kyun ki...Computers invent karne wali Charles Babbage se lekhar Apple invent karne wali Steven Paul tak yahaan par hein...woh log teek kar denge...ab mein aapko iss nayi duniya mein swagath kartha hu...aayiye...

Guard : Ab aap apna naam, apna relatives ka naam, aapko kisne aur kyun maara...sab information ispe likiye...

Zoya : yeh sab kuch bhi likhna hein par kyun...

Asad : Mrs.khan aap bas wahi keejiye jo usne kaha hein...kyun bekhar mein sawaal kar rahi hein aap...

Zoya : bekhar mein??? bekhar mein nahi mr.khan...ab tho hame poori zindagi...mera matlab hein agli zindagi tak yahin par rahna hein...isiliye hame yahaan ki rules and regulations ka patha honi hi chahiye...

Guard : hame ee saare informations isiliye rakna padtha hein taaki ham agle janam mein kisi jodi ya kisi maa-baap ya kisi bhai - behen ko ham repeat na kar de...har kisi janam mein agsr changes nahi hogi tho zindagi boring ho jaayegi...par kuch log bahuth luky hote ki unki jodi janmo janmo tak bani rahti hein aur bore bhi nahi hote...

Zoya : iss ka matlab...T.V serials banane waalo ko yeh idea aap hi se mila hoga...isiliye woh log jodi repeat nahi karthe...audeince bore ho jaayenge...

Asad : Mrs.khan aap apna kaam poora kijiye...

Zoya : ji Mr.khan..

After few minutes they both completed the paper work and handed over it to the guard...he was surprised to see the full information about them...

Guard : Acha tho aap zoya faarooqui hein...

Zoya ; ji zoya farooqui thi...ab zoya ahmed khan hu ...

Guard : han tho aap zoya farooqui reh chuki...zoya ahmed khan hein...

Zoya : JI haan...tho aap mujhe jaanthe hein...

Guard : haan bilkul mein aapko jaantha ho...

Zoya : iss duniya mein itne saare log hein...aur aap mujhe akele kaise pehchante hein...

Guard : woh mujhe allah ne apke bhare mein batathe rehte hein...

Zoya : allah aur mere bhare mein???? kya bathate ki ??????

Guard : woh yeh ki...aap din bhar kam se kam 1000 bhar allah ka naam lethe hein ki...woh ab apna naam badalne ke bhaare mein sochthe hein...

Asad : (laughing) : Dekha aapne mrs.khan...aapke "allah miyan...wats wrong with you" se allah bhi pareshan hein...

Zoya : (Irritatingly) Allah miya ...wats wrong with you mr.khan...marne ke baad bhi aap mujhe thane maarna bandh nahi karenge na...

Guard : ezcuse me...aap log aisa mat ladiye...yeh jannat hein...aapka duniya nahi...waise yeh sach hein ki allah aapse pareshan hein...par woh aapse bahuth khush bhi hein...aap sab ki bahuth madad karthe ho,sabse pyar karthe ho.,aur bhale hi aapka "allah miya...wats wrong with you" unko pareshani dedthe hein...par woh words bahuth saare logo ko acha bhi lagtha hein...isiliye allah aapse bahuth kush hein...

Zoya : dekha na mr.khan allah bhi mujpe bahuth proud feel karthe hein...sirf aap hi ho..jine apni biwi ka kadr na ho...

Guard : aur isi khushi mein...allah ne aapke liye ek thofa bhi ready raka hein...agar aap wo sunege tho aap khushi ke maare behoosh ho jaayenge...

Zoya : wow...surprise...i just love surprises...kya hein woh surprise gift...mujhe abhi jaanna hein..

Guard : sorry, mein aapko yeh baath abhi nahi batha saktha...sabke saamne bathaunga...ab aap mere saath chaliya...waise aap ka mauth ek murder tha...

Zoya : haan uss billo rani ki bacchi ne hame maara tha...woh bhi teen baar stab kiya...

asad : par mrs.khan usne tho aapko do baar hi stab kiya tha...aapko koi galath faimi hui hein..

Zoya : Mr.khan usne stab mujhe kiya tha ya aapko...aapke aane se pehle hi usne ek baar mere leg mein bhi stab kiya tha...

Asad : are you sure ??

Zoya : mr.khan poori zindagi mein tho aapne mujpe bharosa nahi kiya hein...kam se kam marne ke baad tho kijiye...aap bhi na marne ke baad bhi nahi sudrenge..

Asad : So mr.guard mujhe aapse ek sawaal karna hein...jab mein zinda tha...tab mujhe tanveer se bahuth nafrath hotha...par ab mujhe usse koi nafrath nahi hein...

Zoya ; haan mr.guard...mujhe bhi tanveer se ab koi nafrath nahi hein...aisa kyun...usne hame maara tha...

Guard ; Woh isiliye kyun ki ab aap log insaan nahi ho...aur kisi se nafrath karna...sirf insano ka kaam hein...ab aap log allah ke darwaaje par aaye hein aur yahaan saari galthiyo ki maafi aur saza milti hein...aap allah ke nek bandhu ho...isiliye aapko jannat naseeb hua...aur jo galthi tanveer ne kiya...wo tho hona hi tha...aur uske jimmedhar bhi tum bhi ho asad...

Asad ; mein par woh kaisa...maine tho kuch nahi kiya hein...

Guard ; iss janam mein tho tumne beshakh kuch nahi kiya hein...par insan ko apne pichle janmo ka paap bhi iss janam mein chukana padtha hein...woh sab kuch tume waqt aane par pata chal jaayega asad...

Guard ; So Mr and Mrs. khan...yeh hein aapke rehne ki jagah...yahaan par aapka poori family bhi hein...aap unse miliye...mein abhi aati hu...khuda aafiz...

Asad zoya : poora family...

By the time asad and zoya completed their word...two hands came from their behind and held zoya tightly from behind...asad and zoya turned back to see who was that...and they were surprised to see...

To be continued

second part : sahil intro along with Asya's thghts
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg that was hilarious
i was laughing throughly
i literally fell from my sofa..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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zoya's antics especially that serials talk 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i dint get that all sins will vanish on entering door of Allah
and also asad responsible for tanveer's action
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was awesome..😃
Zoya and her antics..She will rock in Heaven too..šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it's awesome /...hats off to ur imagination loved it
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hey it's awesome dear..where r u??..when will u update it??..plz continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...1234

hey it's awesome dear..where r u??..when will u update it??..plz continue soon.


im so sorry...i totally forgot about it...i cannot update now as my exms are going on...and i will be doing it nxt month
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was awesome just loved ur imagination..
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh oh...sorry guys i thght I lost this as I couldn't find it even after searching for long...
I wrote this long back in April when I felt very sad when they killed asya...to remove my frustration

Now I think I shld continue it with sahil too...At that time we dnt know anything about them but now I think I can also bring them in to this...

SO SAHIL Also WILL BE There From NEXT Part...


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