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Posted: 11 years ago
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i hate to admit that i love you... how can u be my strength and weakness at the same time??
why the hell do u love me sooo much... why have i become like this... first i wanted u but u left me and now that you are back why can't i b away from you... why did u come back...why... this feeling called love i hate it!!! and i hate u too... just go away... just go away from my life... go away...
this is how i felt when i saw her back... but now i feel the bliss it's beautiful!!! beautiful with her!!!
the way i behaved with her... i noe i shouldn't have but i was right on my part... but ab everything is different... coz she is with me!!! my life my wife... mrs kria reyaansh singhania...
usse dekh kar saari problems khatam ho jaati hai... uski smile makes my day... and her voice it's like music that i never want to end... she is perfect!!! she defines perfection!!!
and most importantly she completes me!!! my life my love... usse dekhta hun toh pata nahi kahan kho jaata hun...
kho jaane se yaad aaya... i had to pay a heavy price for it... but i was happy for it... coz after that started my story..."our story"
it was time that i get ready and go to college... pehle hi i was 10 minutes late and ab i couldn't afford to get late...
i was almost there when i saw her... saw her for the first time...she was wearing a plain white chudidar... she was soo beautiful and elegant...her laugh it was pleasure to hear it... and her eyes... they were something anything would love to die for... she was walking with her friends talking and laughing...
i sooo wished... just once only once if she would have seen me,,,, but i guess destiny had it's own plans... and she went away... but me like a fool i was standing and looking at her going away... but mereko kya pata tha that i was sooo lost in her ki meinne ek traffic jam kara hai... all the people started scolding and honking there... huh... it wasn't done...it was her fault... i quickly drove so that i could end the embarrassment i was facing...
i drove from there... and reached the college...
i was excited!!!! i went to my friends who were sitting in the canteen waiting for me... thank goodness that they informed me i didn't have the first lecture...
i was speaking to them when i heard her laughing... i quickly looked up in the direction from where the voice came and there... i saw her... i saw her with her friends again... but wait a minute... what is she doing with sharon... i waited for sharon to come here... and she came... she introduced her to us... kria... beautiful name!!!
i was lost in her... when my friends started calling out my name...
vi- reeyyy haath chodna...
nil- haan rey... chodna...
i felt like a fool and then i glared at the two and smiled at kria and left her hand...
humari first official meeting!!!
one day at RH...
kr- reyyy...
rey- wwoooaaahhh kria kya hua?? itna hyper kyun ho rahi ho?
kr- rey aapko pata hai ki kal kya hai??
rey- nahi... kya hai??
kr- rey kal sharon ka birthday hai...
rey- wat?? sh*t how could i forget it...
kr- i noe how could i...
rey- wat?? tum bhi??
kr- haan rey i had forgotten about it... abhi bas yaad aaya... and dekho its late... ab mein kya karron??? i wanted to surprise her on her birthday but ab... kuch tayaari nahi huyi hai... koi plan nahi koi preparations nahi.. ab mein kya karun?? sharon is sooo excited for her birthday... but ab
all this while rey was lost in her... he saw her lips moving... he felt like kissing them...
kr- reeeyyy
rey- haan haan
kr- rey kya aap meri help karogey?
rey- haan sure...
kr- rey please take sharon out na,,,,
rey- what mein??
kr- haan
rey- par kria u ask swayam...
kr- naaahhiii
rey- theek hai... relax dont shout...
kr- i m sorry and thank u...
i take her out and kria goes to sharon's house along with swayam...
hmm pata nahi y did she react strange wen i took swayam's name... kahin she... nahi nahi aisa nahi ho sakta... sharon likes swayam... par iska matlab toh ye nahi... awww rey kitna sochta hai tu... (i told it o myself)
finally after one hour i get a msg from kria which says everything is ready... i take sharon home... and she was shocked along with me... yes... i was also shocked... shocked to see the decorations... they were beautiful!!! and the next thing surprised me even more... i saw swayam knealing infront of sharon and proposing her... kria came and stood next to me... her hands brushed over mine and it sent shivers...
kr- isliye i asked u take sharon out and not swayam...
rey- huh??
kr- arrey swayam ko pata na tha to propse sharon...
rey- ohhh
kr- ab samjhe?
rey- haan...waise i didn't ask the explanation... toh tumne kyun dia??
kr- bas aise hi...
i looked at her... she looked at me... v were lost...but v were brought back into our senses by hearing everyone scream...
after this v became friends...best of friends... and with time passing i started loving her more!!! v spent sooo much of time together...finally one day i decided i will propose her...
the day came...
that day i wen to her... she was in RH...
kria i told...
kr- haan rey...
rey- i want to tell you something!!!
kr- what?? really?? me too
rey- okk so u first,...
kr- no u...
rey- ladies first...
kr- theek hai!!!!
she took a deep breath and then wat she told left me shocked...
kr- reeeyyy!!!! u noe what i love this guy called rehaan!!! he is my childhood friend and yesterday he proposed me!!! oh gawd i feel sooo excited!!! i soo love him,... v have spent so many years together and now!!! i just can't belie
before she could complete i smashed my lips on hers...
i bit her lower lip making her moan in pain... i entered her mouth and bit her...
all this while she was struggling,,,,,,
after v break the kiss,,,...
kr- what the f**k... have u gone nuts rey?? whats wrong with you... and tears welled up
ye ye tumne kya kia?? whats wrong with you damn it...
i held her by shoulders and screamed...
rey- what's wrong with me?? what's wrong with you kria?? how could u do this to me???
don't u noe i love you?? then how could u love that that guys rehaan haan?? (i left her) didn't u even think about us on...
and then my cheek pained hard... it pained,...she slapped me hard...
kr- i thought we were friends rey... but u... i hate u i hate u
and she walked out of the room
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its been one year she moved out of my life...
that day after that incident... she left me forever... next day sharon came and told me that she has left this college and has gone out of mumbai... she doesnt wanna stay here more...
i hated the fact that some wer i was responsible for it...
after that she never picked up my calls... infact after one month she changed her number... all the updates about her i could get was only from face book...
well i still loved her... but after that incident i didn't want her in my life... nup not the proposal one but an incident after that...
one day i messaged her on FB and pleaded her for sorry and the reply i got was...
u are so mean and a ba***rd... i never expected u to do this... u noe wat rey u are a selfish and mean guy who only thinks about his happiness... i thought v were friends but no i was wrong... v can never be... and keep ur sorry with you... after wat ever u have done don't expect me to forgive you...
kria i m sorry... i misunderstood our friendship...
no i m sorry rey that i made friends with a guy like you...
what do u mean by a guy like me??
a guy who is selfish mean dumb and
stop it kria,... i thought u would understand but... i guess wat ever i did with u was right... u are an egoistic girl with mean attitude and a bit*h...
how dare u call me that...
just the way u dared me to...
and then she logged out...
i never thought she would behave like this... i just couldnt digest the fact...
i still loved her but hated to admit the fact... i still used to stalk her profile but after 6 months even that stopped... i had seen her and rehaan's pics on fb... and i hated seeing that...
but i was shocked that she had disappeared from facebook...
i took it and decided to move on... i couldnt b with this life any more... i cant b a devdas type... when she doesn't cares about me then why should i...
i started living my life like before... until that day...
i saw her again... and my life stopped... she was beautifully dressed in red chudidar... she was laughing and smiling... but her laugh didnt have the sweetness it had...
i kept staring at her until her eyes met mine...
her eyes didn't have that spark... they were not the way it was...
she started coming towards me...she came and stood there...
kr- hey
rey- what are u doing here??
kr- wo actually i
rey- ohh how could i forget... u must be here with rehaan... vacation type...
kr- rey rehaan
rey- ohh m sorry... i must b disturbing you guys
kr- nahi rey...
rey- bye kria.. and say rehaan hi...
i left from there without uttering anything... i didn't want to speak to her... i never wanted/... my heart ached seeing her back...i wanted her to go away...
i had just started leaving my life without her and she is back... back to give me all the pain...
luckily she didn't join our college back but i came to noe from sharon that she broke up with rehaan... rehaan wanted to use her... but before she could get used she broke up with...and now he calls up her and irritates her... i was angry damn angry... i wanted to punch him right now... and i went to pune to spk to him...
rey- what the hell do u think of urself...
reh- excuse me bro... who the hell are you...
rey- how dare u do that with her...
reh- who??
rey- kria... how dare u??
reh- listen just b in your limits,...
rey- limits right... and i punched him hard on his face...
reh- what the hell you...
and then we started fighting...
i warned him to stay away from kria...
next day i went to meet kria...
rey- hey...
kr- hi...
rey- i m sorry...
kr- no i am...
rey- no i meant i m sorry to hear about ur break up...
kr- i dont want to get sympathized...
rey- you really need it...
kr- really why do u think so??
rey- just look at you...
kr- i noe the way i m... but i dont want it...
rey- ohhh soo sad... u fell for a guy who wanted to use u... and now even he isn't there... poor u./...
kr- that doesnt matters... at least
rey- atleast what?? he was better than me?? ohh plzzz kria stop this crap... i noe u better... just let ur feelings out...
kr- just leave rey...
rey- kyun bura lag raha hai??
kr- i said just leave and she slammed the door...
rey- darwaaza band karne se sach badlega nahi,,,,,,
and then i went away... i cared for why... i didn't want to...but still why... why did she come back... why... why did i still love her... why the hell can't she just get out of my life... why...
next day morning i heard my door bell ring... it was kria...
rey- ab kya hai??
kr- what did u do with rehaan??
rey- why does it matter??
kr- why did u do it??
rey- look it's none of ur business...
kr- what did u say him??
rey- nothing...
kr- stop lying rey... and answer me,,,,
rey- fine... i went and fought with him because he hurted you... i told him to stay away from you and next time if he do's something i'll screw his a** off...
kr- why did u do this??
rey- because because
kr- bcoz what rey??
rey- bcoz i love u kria... bcoz i love u and i hate to admit it...
kr- rey
rey- no kria just leave...
kr- i m sorry
rey- it's kk kria i understand u still love him and its fine...
kr- can v be friends??
rey- no kria wait wat??
kr- can v be friends??
rey- are u serious??
kr- yes... and den she hugs me...
from that day v came became friends and slowly again nest friends... and i i again fell for her... but this time i didn't want to loose her... so i waited... but one day she confessed her love to me... and v bcame a couple...
people say intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai...and meri story mein i guess it is true... kahin na kahin i waited for her...and shayad mera pyaar saccha tha that i got my love next to me!!!she is my life now... well tab bhi thi par ab she is more precious to me than before...
my love came back to me... and now my life is my wife!!! mrs.kris reyaansh singhania!!!
ye thi meri story!!! humari story!!!
rey then hugs kria tight!!!!
ansh- papa u guys are sooo amazing!!! itna struggle phir bhi ityna pyaar...
kr- beta agar pyaar mein struggle na ho toh wo pyaar pyaar nahi hota...
ansh- happy wedding anniversary papa!!! happy anniversary mumma... (and he hugs them)

Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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huh!!!! so finally this story is over!!!!
yaaayyy!!!! this story is specially written for my sweety!!!!
Reshma sweety!!!! this is your second part of the treat!!!!
congo shongo babes!!!! tu finally dazzler ban gayi!!!!!
this story is for you!!! special dedication!!!!

and ye le!!! ek chottu sa gift!!! this ice cream only for you!!!!



do hit the like tab agar accha laga toh!!! and do comment!!!!
Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Babes u wrote this??? 😲 Suchhh an improvement!!! 👏 awh truly amazing!!!
And Sweetypie...tune mereliye yeh OS likha? nd mujhe pata bhi nahi tha...
Pehle...the story is mindblowing...👍🏼
Rey recalling his flashbacks...nice!!!
Awwh he so loved her but she said that he misunderstood their frndship...huh! 😒
And she loves that so called Rehaan crazily!!! 😡
FB mein convo hua but she so badly treated Rey and Rey too repayed her back! But still he loved her but couldn't accept it!
And later on she got what she needed! Rehaan cheated her nd used her...!!! Now she could only come back to Rey...😈
And bechara Rey who was about to do a new start was dragged back to the past...his past again came in front of him ...
though he still loved her...But with full on attitude he turned away from her...
And Rehaan broke up with Kria!😲
Again my hero Rey went to punch him up...And kria still had a problem with it!!! 😵
But she was ready to be friends with Rey...😛
And there started their new beginning...
Friends to best friends...best friends to Lovers...😳
And this was his story...their story!!!😳
awwwhhh!
Now he got back his Kria and their chutku sa Ansh wishing them Happy Anniversary! Hayeee sooo cuteee ending!!!
😛

And my Sweetypie mereliye Ice cream woh bhi chocolate wala!!! u know what...i love u chooo muchhh!!!! <3<3<3
My darling simsss!!! 🤗
Second part of the treat bhi tune dediya...ab meri baari! 😉
Tab tak wait kariyo!!! lemme enjoy this pyaar bhara ice cream!!!!😆
Love u sweeto!!!❤️
Thank u sooo muccchhh for this!!!! 🤗


Edited by --resh_kr-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow amazing start to the OS
loving it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: don girls

wow amazing start to the OS

loving it

thank u!!! complete kar dia!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice oneshot
Awesome work
Loved the way u described their lovestory
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was beautiful and outstanding os... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsom os
love this story
thx fr ice cream treat
my favourite

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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
unres-ed on pg 1...meine bohut bada speech diya hai...do spare sum time in reading it! 😆

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