SanDhir OS:Uff Teri Adda

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ola Peeps! Tanya is back xP She's back on the roll, back with an OS! Nothing much to say. Just that, this time I'm pretty proud of it xP For once I dont think its complete crap. Its a bit of crap! Rofl!
Dedicated to all my lovely IF friends and sisters :D Hope you like it!
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Uff Teri Adda
Randhir woke up with a jerk. He'd had the same dream yet again. He rubbed his eyes and ran his hand through his messy hair.

'Darn it! What's wrong with me?! Why's that stupid Farzi always in my mind? Din mein kya kum pareshaan karti hai jo ab raat ke sapno mein bhi chudail banke aane lag gayi?'', Randhir thought, frustrated.

Almost immediately, another voice in his mind piped in, 'Chudail? Seriously?! Why don't you fall asleep again? Have an action replay of the dream! But do try and remember your dream carefully next time. And then do ask yourself, Voh chudail thi yaa pari?''.

'Pari? Tu paagal hogaya hai kya? Voh naa chudail thi naa pari. Voh thi ek bhayankar daayan! Thode push-ups karle Randhir. Dimaag thikaane par aajaega. Vaise bhi agar so gaya toh firse vahi dream----actually nightmare-----dikhaai dega!'' another thought popped.

'Kya yaar? Tere Rank No.1 buddhi ko kya hogaya? Abhi toh Push-ups karke tu bach jaaega. Par kabhi na kabhi toh tujhe firse neend aayegi naa? Aur tu so jaaega naa? Toh abhi sahi! Ab asli zindagi mein toh teri Sanyukta ka yeh roop tujhe kabhi dekhne nahi milega, toh yahi apni saari khwaaishe poori kar le!'' a devilish voice chirped.

'Arghh'', screamed Randhir, shaking his head to rid himself of all the silly thoughts. He looked around to see if he'd woken up Jiggy or Parth. Luckily, he hadn't.

He quickly grabbed a towel and walked into the washroom. A shower would do him some good...or atkeast, he thought so.

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Droplets of water trickled down his face. He rested his palms on the wall, and closed his eyes for a minute.

There she was, again!

She had draped herself in a saree. This time her saree was a light shade blue-----His favorite color. His favorite color because she looked best in it! There were other people around her too, but his eyes could only see her. He could hear the song playing in the background. His eyes were fixed on her lips---her smile, actually. Her beautiful, happy smile. Her twinkling eyes was also one of the features that awed him. He could drown in those beautiful grey orbs, forever.

Jogi nachle ..
Rang rachde ..
Jogi nachle ..
Rang rachde ..
Lehraake balkhake tu, duniya bhula ke naach
Dhun ko ae gunguna le, gaane tu gaa ke naach
Rangeeleon mein to kho ja, pee ke peela ke naach
Matt bhare naino se tu, naina mila ke naach

His eyes fell on her slender waist. Her saree highlighted all her curves perfectly but he was now lost in the way her hips swayed. Right to left. Right to left. She raised her arms, high above her head and he watched, dazed, as her arms and hips swayed together in perfect sync.

Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you
Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you

That's when she looked up! Her eyes met with his and she smiled. Again! At him?! She motioned with her hands, for him to come and join her. He denied, shaking his head in a straight 'No''. But then as her eyes donned a pleading look and her lips formed into a begging pout, he gradually gave in and walked towards her slowly. The twinkle in her eyes immediately returned, as did her bright smile. She caught hold of his hand and brought him closer.

Sun le sahiba ..
Tu hai ik nasha ..
Hosh hai mera ..
Saara kho gaya
..

She started dancing again as he watched.

He could forever keep staring at the lady, gracefully dancing before him.

Hosh gawa deewane, hosh gawa ke naach
Paas tu aa deewane, paas tu aake naach
Dil mein hai armaan jitne, saare jaga ke naach
Tann mein badan mein jaise aag laga ke naach

Suddenly, she placed her palms on his shoulder and whispered loudly in his ear, 'Stop watching. Start dancing.''. After a little pause, she added, 'With me.''.

Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you
Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you

As if on cue, he caught hold of her bare waist and they danced together. A few minutes later, as he looked up at her, he noticed. He noticed that the excited twinkle had disappeared from her eyes. But it had been replaced with something else. Something that sent shivers down his spine. He saw 'Want'' or rather, 'Desire'', there. He saw 'Love'' there.

Dekh ke bhi nahi ho yakeen
Itni kyun hai btaa tu haseen
Tere husn se zindagi haseen
Tere husn ke aagey koi haseena kujh bhi nahi
Aankhon mein mere saare sapne saja ke naach
Mujhko tu dil mein rakh le, dil ko dhalka ke naach
Pyaar agar hai mujhse, pyaar jaga ke naach
Jaan o dil hai jo teri, mujhpe luta ke naach

Randhir saw 'Love'' and 'Desire'' in Sanyukta's eyes!

She inched closer as her gaze fell on his lips. He felt her warm breath on his face.

He stood, glued to his place. Waiting for her lips to crash onto his.

Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you
Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you

He tightened his grip over her waist, and pulled her closer. She wrapped her arms around his neck and leaned in to kiss him and...

BANG!

Randhir's eyes jerked open. He shivered as cold air rushed towards him. He glanced around. The shower was still running. He was still in the washroom!

BANG! BANG!

'Randhir Bhai!! Kya kar rahe ho? Jaldi bahaar aao naa! Mujhe Kausto se milne jaana hai! Voh mera wait karahi hogi! Jaldi karo!'', Jiggy shouted from outside.

Randhir turned off the shower and dried himself with a towel. He then shook his head vigorously, before any stupid thoughts started making space for themselves, in his brain! Finally after composing himself, her strode out of the washroom, ignoring the grumblings of a clearly hassled Jiggy, and Parth's questioning glance.

He refused to think about the dream.

'No way! Better to avoid thinking about it! I can't believe she appeared before me, even in my shower! Well okay. I mean, she appeared in MY DREAM but it's her fault I was day dreaming in the shower!'', he thought irritated.

He halted on his tracks as he spotted her. Dressed up in a pink kurti and a white Patiala with her hair tied in a loose pony, she looked nothing short of Drop-Dead-Gorgeous. She walked delicately with her brown bag slung over one shoulder, chatting away with Kaustaki. God! Even the way she walked, dazed him!

'Shit! What the...No! No! No! Not again!'', Randhir mumbled, slapping his hand over his forehead. He turned around immediately and walked back to the Boys hostel. He was going to have to skip college today. Again. Or else, he knew what'd follow. There were only two things that could happen if he attended the lectures today.

1. He'd day dream all day, making a complete fool out of himself.

2. He'd go and complete the unfinished part of his dream in the shower.

The Kiss.

He shook his head again and sighed for the millionth time that day.

It was going to be one long day today. In his hostel room, daydreaming all day!

And there was the song again.

He flopped down on his bed with an exasperated Sigh.

Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you
Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move
Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove
Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you

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TeekhiMishti thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*takes out gun*

buttercup ki bachi.! U had to make all of it a dream? OS mei toh sandhir ko romance karne deti.!! Ab ruk tu 😡☢️ . . . . Okay coming back from that panic attack :P I only partially heard this song but reading it hear with sandhir in it was fabulous. You made the song even more beautiful buttercup 😳 It was perfect.! And the scenes complemented it very well. I loved the conversation RD had with himself in the beginning phunny it was 😆 And then the shower scene *ahem* well :P acha tha 😉 The whole dreaming sequence was just too beautiful for words. Their dance. The song. Their moments. Everything was so in sync. I could see them dancing before me. And it was really awesome the way you described it. Loved this part the most But why oh why did you have to make it a dream. bad girl 😭 now you have to write a real romance wala for me. soon okay? The end was really cute. RD bechara running away from sanyu. 😆 On the whole very well written buttercup. Loved reading it :) Lots of love, ari :) P.s I am first...weee...stalker I am 😆 *happy dance*
Edited by --Ari-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES
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I actually stood up straight when I read the part of Randhir in the shower. That scrumptious body under that water? Mhm. Why you make me drool, you Hitler? :P :P
You described Sanyukta in such a manner, that you turned that clumsy tomboy to a sensual seductress. What the fudge, man xD
How'd you do that?
^The power of words, my friend. The pen is mightier than the sword, and all that shiz :P :P
WHAT THE FUDGE!! JUST A FEW MORE SECONDS! JUST A FEW MORE KISSES PWEASE! WHY YOU DO THIS, YOU CRUEL AUTHOR???

Hmph. I am pissed at you now :P :P

God, is Randhir head-over-heels in this OS or what? *blush blush*
Brilliant one, as usual. Kisses for you, even though you love to deprive us of it :* :* :*
Edited by TheDreamyKid - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love-struck randhir ❤️ omg..this is so beautiful..it remind me of RD's dream abt sanyu coming to him n taking abt distance to moon..what a awsome scene it was i love the os tanya.. keep them coming
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES...
UNRES...
tanya..awesome os...loved it...
u penned it beautifully...and perfectly...
and randhir dreams aww lovely..yar...
and sanyu and dance..wow !!! amazing...
blue..one of my fav...loved it...
oh bechara randhir ...in the thoughts of sanyu...
song is perfect...
thanks for the pm!!!
love,harika...keep smiling...😊
Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oooh such a cuteie randhir😳
dreaming about sanyu while sleeping and also in the shower😆, how sweet 😳
truly loved it👏. shooo... shweeet... randhir😳
pata nahi serial mai hume aisa randhir kadh dekhne millega🤔. abh intezar nahi hota☺️😳
well thanks for the pm😃
Edited by AnuSweet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow just awesome dear...

Bechare randhir ka haal behal kar diya sanyu nelol 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lool! The res ki bahar 😆 .. dont worry I am not "ressing"

Well I was reading the OS, and then he said "Pari" & I was like what the?!??? Is Tanya being incredibly nice to me!! But then I made myself come out of my trance 😆

Even though this song was pictured in a nightclub; it fits perfectly in this situation as well 😃

I love it when Randhir says, "its her fault" since she is coming in his dreams! Loool! I doubt that!

That shower scene though! Brilliantly portrayed as always! It was amazing, yet your writing made it even more magical!!!

This could have been part of your SonRie! Anyways, just happy that you are writing heaps these days!!!

Loved the infatuated Randhir!

Love
Paridhi 😳
Edited by gujjupari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update pm me when the update is up!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THIS. WAS. ADORABLE.
I loved how you expressed his thoughts, and how he skipped classes for this. xD You have a new stalker. c:

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