Online Love FF surprise page 44 updated

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys!!!!
my friend she has written this FF!!!! it's beautiful!!!
i am in love with it!!! and finally i could get this posted on IF!!!
I am sure you guys too would love it!!!

this is a story about a boy and girl who meet online through a networking site!!!
the characters mentioned in this story are imaginary (not related to any serial)
a complete fiction story!!!
feel free to imagine any characters in the story!!!

Part-1

Four words

Unbelievable how four word can simply change your

life. You may be wondering the four word to be like "I really like you" or

"please marry me dear" or "I am for you" but no its was none of them.

It was a Saturday night I was searching something

in the website and I love to read stories so I found a e book site and searched

and read a lot of stories.

Suddenly while searching I saw those four word that

completely changed my world

" Share you own story"

Yes I know u might be thinking how that change

someones life can right?? So I instantly clicked that and started to write my own

story. Days and weeks passed by whem my phone suddenly buzzed one night.

It showed "..." commnted on your story. She wrote "

Its awesome please upload soon"

My heart flickered a bit. But then as days and

weeks passed by I got mny reads and comments.

Howerver let me introduce myself.

I am Shanaya Mukherjee. I am 18 year old and yes I

love to read books that's it.Nothing more to know about me.

Suddenly one fine day in college when I was hanging

out with my bestie Rima my phone buzzed again and it was a notification.

"Ayaan Rathore commented on your story"

I quickly opened it and much to my dismay it said

"Get real you Miss Peachy girl... Its just one of those cocky love stories"

And I replied " its ok that you did not like my

story but need not to be so rude"

I pressed the send button.I didn't even get a

chance to breathe when my phone buzzed again and it was his rply. I narrowed my

eyes at his rply. Nd that is were our fight started...


so guys!!! kaisa laga?? do tell!!!

ye toh bas shuruwath hai!!!!

do hit the like tab and do comment agar accha laga toh!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index

part 1- page 1
part 2- page 2
part 3- page 3
part 4- page 3
part 5- page 5
part 6- page 7
part 7- page 9
part 8- page 10
part 9- page 12
part 10- page 12
part 11- page 14
part 12- page 18
part 13- page 18
part 14- page 18
part 15- page 19
NOTE- page 20
part 16- page 21
part 17- page 21
part 18- page 25
part 19- page 25
part 20- page 25
part 21- page 26
part 22- page 26
part 23- page 27
part 24- page 29
part 25- page 29
part 26- page 29
part 27- page 31
part 28- page 31
part 29- page 31
part 30- page 34
part 31- page 34
NOTE- PAGE 34
part 32- page 38
part 33- page 38
part 34- page 38
part 35- page 41
part 36- page 41
surprise page 44
Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres..

so online love and all..?? well it sounds interesting..

so shanaya nd ayaan well i personally love this names a lot

so coming to the story shan is writting a love story nd ayaan read it nd he was rude..

aww poor shan so thier started there fight awsum just loved it..

sims dekh i unresed it..

babes i hate u update soon which u hv already done..😆
Edited by -reine- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm.. Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing and unique concept...
The title itself seems so catchy!
The start was brilliant!
And being a random FF will be interesting to read...
Nice start...👍🏼
Continue soon...Will be waiting for the update!

Edited by --resh_kr-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dats nyc actually!!!
Lyk no face to imagine!!! Nothing u knw bout d characters!!
Just reading d story!!!
N dis is really nyc!!
Shanaya n ayaan!!!
Nyc names!!!
Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cant wait for the update
please update soon
thanks for the PM about this FF
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...lovd it...
do continue pls...
would love to read it. ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So I am back with ONLINE

LOVE?? And yes its online love so ther is a lot of convo's!!!!

so here goes part 2


Part- 2


HE REPLIED "cut the drama

girly.

And that is how our epic argument strted

Me: First of all do not call me girly, nd secondly I am nt being dramatic, and

I wud nt kill you to be good to me

He- why would I be nice to you? I do not know u.

Me: exactly there is no need to be so rude wen u do

not know me.

He: whatever girly.

Me: don't call me that.

He:it suits you.

Me: No it does not and next tym try to be nice.

He: touched a nerve? Did I hurt you?

Me: yes

For a moment I thought that he wud apologise but

then how stupid of me to think that.

He: want my shoulders to cry on?

Me : cant you just apologise?

He: nopes...

Me: I give up just don't talk to me evr again.

He: aww you are breaking my hear. Can't you see?

Me: shut up being sarcastic is not really helping.

He: I think it is.

Me: y are you so rude to me

He : because

Me: because?

He: no reason

Me : just stay away from me.

He: you are the one stalking my profile.

Me: no I am not.

He: blah blah blah...

Me: you are just...

He: can't think of a prper insult Miss. Strawberry

?

Me: strawberry what the...

He: yeah u are like a strawberry.. ur stories are

soo cheesy.

Me: you are unbelievable

He: thanks

Me: that was not a compliment.

He: it was... for me.

Me: that's it I m out of here.

He: go shoo you are staining my page with

strawberry fingertips..

This guy was unbelievable. I was fuming in anger

and tried to calm myself nd not think of this guys umm Ayaan ya right Ayaan

anymore.. Disgusting.

Suddenly when I was lost in my thoughts I got a

message in my inbox in that site.

Ayaan- Nice talking to you miss. Strawberry. Its

not yet over.

I squeezed my fists. Oh its on...


so guys!!!! here goes the part 2!!!!
i hope everyone likes it!!! and haan agar accha laga toh share it with your friends too!!! please!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its beautiful..
m just wandering hw this online fight z gonna turn into love?
plx keep writing nd pm me link 2 next part..update soon..
nd I loved ur story honestly :)

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