FF ~*~ Hum Saath-Saath Hain ~~ THE END (Pg 150) - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
nice part ramya, i enjoyed a lot. i like this krish, romba naughty appadiye vishnu maadhiri. so, simi hari pair dhana pa, appadi paathalum, karthi, vishnu sambandhigala??? ayyo rombo think panreno😆, sari pa neengale sollunga waiting for next part ramya😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Part 12 :

Previous Part : Part 11



Hari agrees to take Simi to the temple.

Simi : 5 mins Hari... dress change pannittu vandhiduren...

Krish : indha dress ku ennamaa korachal ?

Simi : just shut up.. ok ?

Prem : idhu unakku thevaiyaa daa...



Simi came back dressed in traditional wear... half saree...

Krish : paarraa... ? how come u brought this dress here ?

Simi : eppadiyum inga vandhaa temple ku povom nu theriyum...

edhu pannaalum plan panni pannanum...thambi...

Krish : soringa akka... sorry... saringa akka...

Vishnu's Mom sees her and take thirustti for her.

V Mom : en kanne pattidum pola...



Hari who went inside to get the keys comes back and is stunned to see Simi in that attire.

Krish : enna bro ? ippadi shock aayitta... bayappadaadha... namma Simi dhaan...

He comes back to reality... By the time Simi goes and hit Krish...

Krish : dei... nee mattum yen indha dress la pora... costume change... veshtti satta pottuttu pona... appadiye maappilai ponnu maadhiri irukkum...

Nobody expect that Krish would comment like this..

V Mom : edhula vilayaaduradhu nu illa... loosu thanamaa edhaavadhu pesittu... un vaaikku poottu podanum...

Krish : (to Prem) ippa naan enna thappaa sollitten...

V Mom : ennappaa... appadiye ninnutta... ? kelambavendiyadhu dhaane... ?

Hari : car key anga illa...

V Mom : oh.. solla marandhutten... ippadhaan service ku kondu poi vittaanga...

Hari : oh...

V Mom : un bike eduthuttu poga vendiyadhu dhaane ?

Hari : adhu vandhu... (he hesitates)

Krish : yennadaa yosikkura.. ?

Hari : illa... Simi ku ok va nu.. ? indha dress la comfort ah irukkumaa nu...

Simi : adhellaam onnum illa... I like to wear sarees... infact college ku at times saree la dhaan poven... I have no problem...

Hari : sari... polaam...



Hari starts his bike and Simi sits at the back and holds his shoulder for support...

Simi : hmmm... polaam...

They reach the temple, he parks his bike and comes and finds that Simi standing outside.

Hari : enna ingaye nikkureenga... ulla poga vendiyadhu dhaane... ?

Simi : adhu vandhu...

Hari : hmmm... any problem ?

Simi : problem illa... kovilukku varum bodhu eppavum poo vaichippen...

Hari : adhukkenna... idho... ingaye irukke...

Simi : avasaramaa kelambunadhaala... wallet edukka marandhutten...

Hari : (upset) enna neenga... naandhaane koottittu vandhen... enkitta ketkuradhuku enna thayakkam...

He gets flowers for her and she wears it and they both goes inside.

Simi : vaanga... kovil ah suthittu varalaam...

Hari : illa... naan ingaye irukken... neenga poittu vaanga...

Simi : yen... saami kumbida maatteengalaa ?

Hari : adhaan kumbittaache...

Simi : apparam enna... kovilukku adikkadi vara maatteengalo ?

Hari : varuven... aana just pray pannittu... konja neram appadiye thaniyaa utkaarndhittu poven...

Simi : ohoo.. (gives a naughty smile)

Hari : enna sirikkureenga.. ?

Simi : purinjiduchu... neenga edhukku varreenga nu..

Hari : hello... actually enakku yen temple ku varra pidikkum naa... inga vandhaa edho theivega sakthi kidaikkum... positive energy irukkura maadhiri irukkum... enna kovam... tension.. problem irundhaalum... inga konja neram amaidhiyaa spend pannaa... ellaam maranju poidum...

Simi : (silently looks at him)

Hari : enna... appadi paakkureenga... ?

Simi : hmmm... nallaa pesureenga.. different ah irukku...

Hari : sari... neenga poi suthittu vaanga... naan anga wait panren...

Hari was enjoying cool breeze at the night time...

As he was looking at the kids playing there... something covered his face from backside... He just turns and sees Simi there... Its her pallu.. of her half saree that flew due to the wind...

Simi was adjusting her dress.

Simi : semma kaathu... but nallaa irukku...

Hari : sari... shall we leave ?

Simi : kovilukku vandhaa oru 2 minutes aavadhu utkaarndhuttu poganum...

Hari : (stares at her)

Simi : enna.. appadi paakkureenga ?

Hari : illa... naan idha edhirpaakkala...

Simi : ennadaa... appadi vilayaattu ponnaa.. aadittu irundhava... idhellaam kooda panraale naa...

adhu appadidhaan... engenga eppadi irukkanumo... i'll place myself to that situation...

They both sit there for a while and have the prasadham...

While they were about to leave, she notices the shops around that area and thought of visiting there... She goes and looks into the items...

She was holding an accessory set.. chain, ear rings and ring... that was very artistic... Just then she remember that she left her wallet... Hari was watching this from distance...

She comes outside.

Hari : enna edhuvum vaangala... ?

Simi : illa... chummaa dhaan paarthen...

Hari understands that she hesitate to ask him for money but he left as she would think different if he tries to do something...

They drive back home...

V Mom : ennamaa... sandhosham dhaane... kovilukku poittu vandhaachu...

Simi : so happy Naani...

V Mom : Hari enga.. ?

Simi : yedho vela irukku nu enna entrance la ye drop pannittu kelambittaaru...

V Mom : sari nee vaamaa saappidalaam...

Simi : enga Krish and Prem.. ?

V Mom : enga poyida poraanga... ? ingadhaan pakkathula... engayaavdhu scene kaamichittu iruppaan...

Simi : correct purinju vachirukkeenga...

V Mom : idhu kooda theriyaadhaa... ? appadi en magan Vishnu maadhiri dhaan... aanaa Hari appadi illa...



... to be continued...


Link to : Part 13
Edited by ramyvijay - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Nice one ramya, appadiye padichukitte polam pola irundhadhu pa...😊
Simi appadiye karthi dhan...
Krish Vishnu maadhiri, appo Hari yara maadhiri pa...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Lovely update Ramya...Hari and simi...this combo is interesting...

Simi reminds me of karthik in her attitude and character..love her char.

Devi,.. I think Hari is like LAkshmi ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: sathya87

Lovely update Ramya...Hari and simi...this combo is interesting...


Simi reminds me of karthik in her attitude and character..love her char.

Devi,.. I think Hari is like LAkshmi ...

Yenakkum appadi dhan thonuchu pa...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
lovely one ramya,

simi and hari pair romba arumaiya iruku...

i really enjoyed this update


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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
read the last 2 chapters ...loved it Ramya.. Simi and Hari are going to be paired up 😉?/ that wud be lovely.. looks like Simi and Hari are contrasting characters.. while he is kind of reserved and Simi is jovial.. im excited to see how their relationship is going to develop ...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
wow pa.. semma update...

Ovvoru characters are separate and distinct but very realistic.. semma update!!


Simi poyitta, Hari enna pannuvan pavom??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ramya05

wow pa.. semma update...

Ovvoru characters are separate and distinct but very realistic.. semma update!!


Simi poyitta, Hari enna pannuvan pavom??



appadi vittiruvomaa enna... 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 13 :

Previous Part : Part 12


Next Day :

Simi, Krish and Prem are getting ready as they are leaving to Chennai in the evening.

V Mom : ennappaa.. adhukkulla kelambureenga... ?

Krish : what Naani.. ? vandhu evlo naal achu...

V Dad : adhaan... office la join panradhukku innum one month irukke... apparam enna avasaram...

Simi : Naana... neengalum anga Chennai ke vandhutteenga naa... indha prechanaye illa...

V Dad : idhu Hari kitta ketkka vendiya kelvi... aanaa kandippa unakku answer kedaikkaadhu...

Simi : yen appadi... ?

Hari : adhu appadidhaan... neenga ippo inga vandhu permanent ah irukkanum naa iruppeengalaa ?

Simi : enakku eppavum Chennai dhaan...

Hari : adhe maadhiri dhaan...

V Mom : aana... ponnunga kalyanathukku apparam vera edathukku poidhaan aaganum...

Simi : appadi edhum rules laam illa..

V Mom : nee ennadhaan sonnaalum... appadi oru situation varumbodhu nee enna seiyurennu paaru..

Simi : Naani... munnamaddhiri illa ippallaam.. pasanga ponnu oorukku transfer vaangittu poguradha naan paarthirukken..

V Dad : ennammaa solra ?

Simi : en friend oda annan... love marriage dhaan... family ellaam chennai la dhaan irukkaanga... but avanga wife bangalore la work pannittu irundhaanga... so avangalum angaye poi settle aayittaanga...

Hari just smiles...

Krish : hey... bangalore nu udane nyabagam varudhu... Simi... when are u planning to visit ur thatha's house. ?

Simi : aamaa... innum plan pannala... surprise visit dhaan kudukkanum...

V Mom : Simi bangalore ku poitta neenga ennadaa panna poreenga... ?

Krish : theriyala... konjam bore adikkumdhaan...

V Dad : hey... appo Hari yum koottittu pongapaa... holidays nallaa enjoy pannunga... apparam velai nu vandhuttaa... idhukkellaam time odhukka mudiyumo mudiyaadho ?

V Mom : neeyum ivangalodaye kelambu..

Hari : Naani... unga aarvakolaarukku oru alavu illayaa.. ? ippave naa.. without la yaa ? flight la appadi pogamudiyaadhu naanimaa... 2 days kazhichu poren...

Krish : hey.. appa ok yaa ?

Prem : hmmm... super...

Before they start, Hari comes to meet Simi and gives her a gift wrapped... He says that its just a token of rememberence of her visit to Jaipur...



All three are back to Chennai. Simi starts to Bangalore the next day.

Vishnu comes to Karthi's home and they have a casual talk...

Vish : ennadaa un ponnu enna Robo vaa ? nethu dhaan vandhaa... innaikke kelambittaa... indha rest appadi nu solluvaangale... adhellaam...

Karthi : dei... unakku theriyaadhaa... avalukku travelling romba pidikkum nu...

Vish : theriyum daa... irundhaalum... konjam rest eduthuttu kelambirukkalaam...

Jaya : vidu... ippa anga poi enna velai paakka poraa... athaiyum maamaavum.. semmaiyaa gavanikka poraanga... haiyyaa maharani maadhiri irukka poraa...

Vish : yen Jaya... unakku poraamayaa ?

Jaya : oru aamaiyum illa...

Karthi : Krish enga... aalaye kaanom...

Vish : nallaa kumbakarnan maadhiri thoongittu irukkaan..

Jaya : pinna... un payyan aache... vera eppadi iruppaan...

Karthi : unakku idhu thevaiyaa daa...

Vish : family yaa serndhu oattringalaa... oattunga daa...


In 2 days, Hari arrives.. and everyone happy having him here... especially Lakshmi...

She goes and hugs her son...

Laksh : what a surprise .. !!

Hari : surprise ah... ? Krish ku theriyume...

Vish : ennadhu theriyumaa ... enga avan...

Krish : I'm here (joins them)

Laksh : yendaa ammaa kitta sollala...

Krish : idhukku dhaan... illanaa ippadi oru emotional scene kedachirukkaadhu la...

Laksh : fraud u...

Vish : enna Lakshmi.. adhukku yen enna thittura..?

Laksh : unna illa... arumai puthirana dhaan sonnen...

Krish : Mom... adhu Dad ku mattume sondhamaana word...

Vish : thats my boy...

Laksh : idhula perumai verayaa .. ennavo ponga...

Vish : adhaan un chella payyan vandhuttaan la... inime unna kaila pidikka mudiyaadhu...



Later in the evening :

Hari : Dad... enna Karthik Uncle veedu pootti irukku...

Vish : ippo varra neram dhaan...



While they were talking, Karthik and Jaya enters...

Vish : pesitte irukkum bodhe vandhuttaanga...

Karthi : ennadaa sollave illa... Hari varraan nu...

Vish : enakke theriyaadhu daa...

Jaya : unakku ennadhaan theriyum...

Vish : (whispers) Please Jaya... pasanga munnaadi vendaame... thaniyaa evlo venumnaalum damage pannikko...

Jaya : andha bayam irukkattum...

Karthi : come... enga veettukku polaam...

Hari : illa Uncle... ippo dhaan vandheenga... poi refresh aagunga... naan apparamaa varren...



After an hour, Hari takes Krish to visit Karthik. They come to hall and look around...

Krish : Aunty... Aunty...

No reply... So he goes inside... to look for them... He moves freely in their place but Hari hesitates to go behind him, so he sits on the hall...

Jaya : Krish... I'm here in the kitchen...

While he was waiting, he sees Simi's mega size photo in the wall and admires her...

Jaya comes with juice and offer him... By that time, Karthik also comes there...

As they were talking, Hari's eyes search for someone around... and disappointed ..

Karthi : apparam Jaya... ammaa kitta pesuniyaa... Simi eppo varraalaam... ?

Jaya : ippodhaane ponaa... adhukkulla vittiruvaangalaa ? yen.. Sir ku ponna paakkaama irukka mudiyalayo ?

Karthi : hmmm...

Jaya : appa neeyum Bangalore ku kelamba vendiyadhu dhaane...

Hari : (mind voice) Bangalore ka... ? ya... she told la... she wud be visiting her grandparents... cha... few days kazhichu vandhirukkalaamo...?



--- to be continued ---

Link to : Part 14
Edited by ramyvijay - 10 years ago

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