laal ishq- bheem draupadi story

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Posted: 11 years ago
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DISCLAIMER:hello ppl😊 i wanted to write this stry frm a very long time so i m finally doing it. This stry has many romantic,sad,passionate n revengeful moments so ppl nt comfotable with it, pls skip the part in red. No offence meant to anyone.
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Dharma adharma is for weak ppl like that eldest son of pandu jesth. All that exists in tis world is power. No matter what happens i will never leave u. I will avenge your insult jesth, that lady with 5 husbands took away your precious gada, i will make life a living hell fr her,no matter hw much ever i suffer later...
Duryodhan remembered his most favorite brother dusshsan with these words...at his funeral pyre. It ws still burning, devouring on the remains of his brother. Both arms dislocated from the body,chest torn, this was the death of his brother. No sympathies were shown to him. He had witnessed bheems oath but dint beleive that he would fulfil it,word to word. But it happened, n duryodhan had lost one of his major pillar of support. Karna had come n sat beside him,both of them dint utter words,for words could nt express the grief within...


The site where the funeral pyre ws burning was very close to the tent of Draupadi.suddenly, in the shadows of the canopy thry saw her coming. She was wearing only a single drape(imagine the kind of cloth draped on her in the episode wen she ws born). They could make out that her hair ws wet n it ws dribbling. Slowly she sat on a couch with her back towards them. Bheem's shadow came in moments later.it was clearly visible that he was bare chested(imagine hw he is during the fight with the snakes of khandavapradth). He took a large matka, walked towards draupadi n poured the contents of the matka down her treses. Through a narrow furrow leading frm the tent, duryodhan n karna saw what flowed from her hair...

It was blood. Bright shiny red blood of his beloved brother, taken frm his chest to dye the hair of Yagyaseni. The sight shattered duryodhan n he broke down in karnas arms. Karna was baffled. The man who died ws like his younger brother but the man who killed him WAS his younger brother...
Bheem might have heard duryodhanas wailing, but dint pay attention. The nly truth in this universe for him nw was that the lady he loved the most in this world ws looking at him with utmost love in her eyes. Thats what mattered for him.five huge matkas of water was wht it took, to clense panchalis hair compleately of the blood. Karna n duryodhan saw that with evry matka poured on her hair, it became more water n less blood. They saw bheem carefully massaging her hair n draupadi gracefully arched her neck n back. After the entire blood was washed away, they saw the shadows of draupadi n bheem appraoch each other slowly. The could not see the couple but they could feel tremors of chills n warmth in their body. They could sense the burning passion in the body language of both of them n slowly they saw bheem putting of the lamps of the tent, drowning it it compleate darkness...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG i have never read any story that shows so much passion between Draupadi and Bhima.Its generally Bhima who loves her intensely but she is unable to return it.So this was a different story for me and well written as well.Please do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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she did loved them equal,so i think that she not returning bheem's love is kind of less acurate.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS Paro...loved it..continue soon 😃 beautifully written 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its lovely,never imaagined such a thing,keep updating
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks a lot evryone🤗🤗
Abt the uncertainty that draupadi did nt reciprocate the love bheem had for her n loved Arjun the most, well wen yudhisthir actually revealed it to them, they all were shocked. Evn if she did have extra affection fr Arjun it ws never overboard. It was sooo deep inside her heart that perhaps she herself dint know it. She did love ALL the husbands felt a special bond with bheem after the keechak n this dusshasan incident. The next part in my story is gonna be the romantic part😳😳 So yaa I guess I need some good amt of thinking to make it look passionate n nt offensive...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Paro... Well everybody may have had other feelings, but I had a very different feeling reading your story. You made me cry.
I am very scared to say my views. I was thinking of PMing you but fine, let me write it here. I felt heartbroken when you talked of Dusshashan's funeral. Maybe I have a dirty mind. But death always brings worst. As Dickens had quoted "It was the BEST of times, and the WORST of times.." But for me its always the worst. Those words of Dusshashana which Duryodhan remembered. More than the actual topic, "Bheem-Panchaali" you made a tear come to my eye reading the first pargraph itself.

Your story is extremely touching. I always feel a bit differently towards Kauravs (ofcourse I felt like pullling out Duryodhan's stupid tongue when he insulted Draupadi in the sabha) But I felt so bad reading it. You are flawless.

Sorry for such a long comment, and not putting any emoticons. But Paro I really mean it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome, beautiful nice os
pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

Paro... Well everybody may have had other feelings, but I had a very different feeling reading your story. You made me cry.
I am very scared to say my views. I was thinking of PMing you but fine, let me write it here. I felt heartbroken when you talked of Dusshashan's funeral. Maybe I have a dirty mind. But death always brings worst. As Dickens had quoted "It was the BEST of times, and the WORST of times.." But for me its always the worst. Those words of Dusshashana which Duryodhan remembered. More than the actual topic, "Bheem-Panchaali" you made a tear come to my eye reading the first pargraph itself.

Your story is extremely touching. I always feel a bit differently towards Kauravs (ofcourse I felt like pullling out Duryodhan's stupid tongue when he insulted Draupadi in the sabha) But I felt so bad reading it. You are flawless.

Sorry for such a long comment, and not putting any emoticons. But Paro I really mean it.

Thanks a lot brishti u literally made my day!!!😃 I strongly believe a person should nt be considered an enemy before his birth or after his death...dusshasan fr me ws always like lakshman, following his brother without any questions(though his brother ws nt like ram). Evn arpit said this in an interview.
I always believed that duri loved dusshy more than anyone else, perhaps more than he loved himself. Other bros like vikarna were loyal n tried to counsel him for his good but no one ws as precious to him as dusshy. So this was the way I imagined him to be after his death n I m veryyy glad that u could connect with it. Whereas my main topic, the romance will come in the next post. I m working on it...it will be red...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow patro dear!!! awesome!!!!! 👍🏼

that blood flowing part is awesome!!!!! 👏 👏

i literally enjoyed it!! 😃

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