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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saakhi01

Its 12th today navi... I know😆!
Where is r update, huh 😉 I said at night ... and it's not night in my country yet😉.
Update jaldi karo navi pls... Half an hours time!

Originally posted by: mrs.K

2 hours till da next update . 30 minutes now Kavi😳. (sorry di, couldn't do hourly countdown) No problem!

Originally posted by: andy.a

Navi, if arnav has less than 15 lines i wont read the update But Arnav has no lines in the next 3 updates😭. Sure u won't read??

Edited by ...navina... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey navi!!! How are you?

The update was great as usual!! But the end????? No, I did not like it. even the child welfare association members are not happy with the end and how it targets udita. Here is a copy of the letter they want to send you.

Miss navina,

It has been come to our attention that you are repeatedly putting the life of a toddler in danger. The child udita , daughter of mr udayveer singh and mrs manyta singh had undergone many deadly experience in her life even before she turned 2 and she has barely escaped death in all this instances... it has come to our notice that all these are made by you purposely and they are not accidental...

First when she was barely 6 months you tried to drown her in the ocean... and left her nearly dead, then got her hand in plaster , then you threatened to drown her in the pool and now the snake bite...

It seems that you haven't done anything to keep her safe, so the offence is great that it could land you in jail

However because your past record is clean and so instead of going through the long legal procedures we are asking for a compromise , if you don't allow the snake to bite udita and prevent any more attack on her we may let you free and forget this case... we need your reply at the earliest, and if possible your reasons for putting the child to such danger

The president

(child welfare association)

See navi these people are very serious so you better obey them😆

Anyway seriously I feel this update was an eye opener... the feeling of being in depression and the helplessness it brings both to the patient and the patient's family is so well explained... I don't think anyone could have done a better job than this to express this ...

So they covered up the cat fight bw manyta and ranjana, saying it was udita who had fallen into the pool and they were trying to save her... great idea jai

So giriraj realized the truth about his son and how he had even sacrificed his reputation for his wife's sake... poor uday!! just love him more after each update!!

So mnayta is not taking any step to make herself ok... initially when I read she cut udita's hair I did not feel it like a offence!!! And I had scraped you that uday was making a mountain out of a mole hill... My defense was that even my cousin cuts my niece hair and she looks like a boy, only her earring shows she is a girl. Even I had short hair till I was 8-9 years, plus my best friend too has short hair and cuts it shorter each time na,,, wink😉

But as you said uday was right, I continued to read, and you proved without doubt that manyta was suffering from depression and she was not willing to come out of her state of mind... the way she tried to make udita like a boy was too much... if she wants to get rid of the guilt , then she could adopt a boy na... now why cant manveer adopt a kid

any way loved udita and her talk, how she said dont talk to mama ,,,he he he... my niece says dont talk when we talk and she feels when we are ignoring her,,, she even said that in church loudly when the father was delivering the sermon😆.. and uday called her sexy!!!!😆😆😆 so funny!!

Bw in a comment you had replied that ds said good things about jai and that she wont be there (something like that, don't remember the actual words) what are you planning? Her death? Is she gona die soon?? Don't!!! not before uday gives her a piece of his mind

So manveer and udita had gone to the park, and manyta tried to pretend she cared for udita na,,, and then again daydreamed and now udita is gona be bitten by a snake... I know you wont hurt her and uday will save her,, otherwise you better hide yourself as I will hunt you down, if not me, I would send mr shark!!! (be scared)😕

Anyway do reply yo the child welfare association at the earliest... they say someone tipped them about this(can you guess who?😆) and I am just saving you from a messy lawsuit

Anyway stopping the comment now (and keeping it short!!!!)😆, thanks for the pm!!!

Do continue soon and am waiting for may 2😳

Love you❤️

Edited by andy.a - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh no Manyata save your child
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Posted: 11 years ago
Navina..I am sooo angry...Sooo sooo sooo angry that u can't even believe...
Ofcourse not on u sweety..
But this manyata...
I want manveer divorce...Or I'll go on a strike...Oh wait i gues I'm already on one...
Navi manyata ki jagah ranjana chalegi rachel chalegi jai kamini bhi chalegi...Kick that manyata out!!
Himmat kese hui uski!!
Meri udita ko hath lagane ki...
Ughhh...
She cut uditaz hair?????I will cut her promise!!!i hope she enjoys her new haircut
She dressed her like virat???I'll renew her wardrobe soon...
A snake bit udita????Manyatas gonna love those black mambas I'm gonna leave in her room tonight!!Ofcourse our uday won't be there!!
Great update navi!!Loved it to coreee...
Update soon..Oh i forgot..That's on 22..
10 days to go!!Chal no problem..Update on 22..Till that I'll carry out my plans on manyata..
Hope u don't mind!!We'll keep uday after that!Love u!!
Edited by MAHI1198 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Navi!! Great Update!! Aw!! Manyata still can't forget Virat 😭 and my lil Udita was dressed like a boy that's so funny but at the same time sad! I mean Virat was so close to Manyata that it'll take time to forget Virat. I hope she can forget him soon! And we get to see more cute mother n daughter scenes. As usual the father n daughter scene was cute!!❤️ Loved it! Enjoyed every bit of it!!
But the end bit was shocking, how could you Navi?? My poor Udita shes the one always getting hurt! Do Uday ya Manyata or anyone else at times!! Ur so cruel towards her😭.I hope that Manyata comes and safe her!!!😡Otherwise i'll kill her!!😆Kidding! Btw is this ur last part of ur JOW?? (i hope not!😉)


Edited by THEfanOFheartz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hii navi!!!! actually main manyata se bohut hi zyada gussaa hu,i know she is not well,and her mental state is not alr8,but dil to gussa hai na,meri sweet si udita ko dekhkar,she was crying so muchh,uday was r8 in givng manyata a piece of mind!!! loved it when udita forbidded uday to talk to her mamma,and they that little kicked humara uday!!!!!!😆 udayy u dare not brk ur promises to ur lil princess,she is also a rajwada!!!!!!!😉 park mein ye kya ho raha hai,snake is trying to bite her,and manyata is agn not noticing that,udayy plzz cumm fasttt!!!!!!! i cant see udita hurt!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res :)
P.s.- I have to got to sleep now :)
Get ready for an extra long comment! :P
(Edited)
Hey Navi! :)
Late again,aren't I? :(
K,now back to the Chapter!

Chapter 7 =

" Halkat ... what if someone walked in on you and I - what would you say then?" "Ummm...you wanna join in?"
Manyata grabbed a pillow and started beating Uday -BESHARAM! "

This scene was cute!! :3

"Uday arrived at the wrong time; and all 3 woman were set to tease him. Mmm, u smell really nice Manyata , Rachel sniffed the area beneath Manyata's hair. Damn, u taste amazing too , Ranjana ran her tongue up Manyata's neck. Uday's eyes grew wider and wider as the 2 R's attempted to jump HIS WIFE'S bones!
As much as Manyata wanted to be part of the "act" ... she couldn't! Having another woman push their hand into her bodice; was harrowing , at the least! Uday had soon realised what the woman were up to and decided to play along, but Manyata turned out to be a wet blanket as the whole charade fell through!

Uday, of-course; had to have the final say ... If you ladies do have a threesome ; CAN I WATCH? Naturally - he was bombarded with many cushions thereafter.

This scene literally made me lmao!!!!!!!! xD xD
Threesome lol.

Chapter 8-

Plz make Manyata come out of her depression fast! The things she is doing with Udita are depressing for us :(
Tum hamesha Udita ke picche kyun padi rehti ho!!!! :P
Uday is such an amazing father,he actually managed to convince Udita that she looked sexy! :D
OMG!! Snnnaaakkkeeesss.
I hate those evil creatures.
Lol I sound awkward. Why Udita man? But I'm sure Uday'll save her! ^_^
And scold Manyata to the core :(
K,enough of my blabbering.I'm sorry for the very late reply and res :(
The reasons being lack of time and my laziness :(
Anyways!Amazing Updates and do continue! :)
Update of Love and War?

Anyways love you! Bye! :*

Lotsa'love,
Alisha



Edited by rockstar4eva55 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
OMG 😲 snake!!!! This time uday is gonna lose his temper big time...
I knw uday will save udita... 😉
The baby is a sweetheart of all d readers, if sometthing happens to her d writer wud be gone 😉 😆

Thanks for d pm navi...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...


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<font color="#ff0000" size="3">I'm so happy to receive this comment from you Yasmin ... I missed you (and your comments, obviously😆). Thanks so much 🤗 .</font>

I missed u too navi...

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