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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 23


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Past continues


"Thik hai bte" told dadi relieved. Geet too thought dadi believed her and cut the call. Geet sighed as her plan is success at least for some time they don't have any problem from dadi. Maan barged into geet's cabin the next minute she cut the call. Geet is shocked to see his angry eyes. "Geet, I don't understand one thing why you use your fit for nothing brain and do something which is very risky" asked maan angrily placing his hands on his hips. "What I did maan?" asked geet innocently unaware of the fact that maan listened their conversation. Maan stared at her seriously which made geet more confuse, "Did maan come to know that I talked with dadi?" thought geet but shrugged it off thinking how he will come to know when she didn't tell him and just few minutes back she is done with her talk with dadi. "Maan aisa mat dekho darr lagta hai mujhe, batao hua kya hai" asked geet finally not able to bear his silence.

Maan walked towards geet and held her shoulders, he is angry on geet for talking to dadi which is dangerous for her at the same time he is so touched with the fact that she can go to any extent for him, his heart swelled with happiness but maintained a straight face. "Geet, tumko maine mana kiya tha na dadi se baat karne ke liye phir tum aisa kyun kiya? Why you don't listen to me geet, hamesha apni mann maani karti rehti ho tum. Tum kyun nahi samajti geet" asked maan. His eyes has so much worry for her, he don't want his family to be in any trouble. His geet and dev are beside him now and he will face and will do anything for them. But he want them to be happy. "Kuch nahi hoga maan, everything will be fine. I am watching you from morning you were tensed and worried about rishi" told geet and hugged him. "Geet" called out maan and hugged her tight. Maan felt his shirt is getting little wet and understood she is crying. He held her shoulder and caressed her hair with the other hand. "Geet, please don't cry. Ok I am sorry for shouting on you but jaan..." before maan could complete geet came out of the hug and looked away from maan.

"Maan, before coming here I thought you were wrong and avoiding all of us but when I came here everything has changed. I never thought in my worst dreams about dadi like that. Dadi se aisa baat karna padh raha hai maan, which I never thought" told geet feeling horrible but she can't tolerate anyone who harms maan. "I know geet at first I took time for me to digest the fact that dadi did everything. Dadi did everything for her son but what she did is wrong. Jaan, I and maa never wanted this property and even now I am ready to give her everything but I need just one thing from dadi that she has to tell the world that maa is innocent. And I want maa to become normal and come out of that hell" told maan. Geet looked at maan and told "That day will come soon maan, dadi will accept what she did and maa will be back to normal" Maan smiled slightly and nodded. He again made a serious face and told "Now don't do anything okkk" Geet nodded like a small child pouting her lips, maan ignored her pouting and left from there. That maan decided to transfer geet's property on her name as he and his maa are the guardians. And he even thought dadi might think something and its better if maan and geet are legally married as no one can harm or point out on them.


In India:


Dadi is thinking about her convo with geet, she believed that geet is with her but somewhere she has doubt. At the same time she doesn't have any source of contact with rishi to know about here and she doesn't have any option other than to believe geet. She is in a confusion what to do. An idea popped in her mind and decided to go Canada. She can't take any risk as it involved her grandson Rishi. She booked her tickets to Canada and her flight is after 2 days.


End of flashback


Maan looked at geet when geet herself is shocked to see dadi here. And dadi didn't expect that maan and geet are marrying.

From Rishi dadi came to know about ramya and her son who is the only family to maan. So after coming to Canada dadi contacted her and with her drama she told she came here to meet her grandson maan, dev and geet. As ramya knows about dadi very well she told maan about dadi being in Canada. At first maan is shocked and angry on geet, because of her one call today dadi is here. But he have to play safe with her. He told to ramya to bring dadi just before their register marriage and geet will play her part very well.

Dadi is still in shock to see maneet marrying, maan looked at geet and winked and told her through eyes that he knew dadi coming to Canada. Geet smiled little and smiled knowing what she has to do now. She walked towards dadi excitedly and hugged her. "How are you dadi? Missed you so much. I am very happy to see you here dadi. I so much wanted to invite you for our marriage but knowing about maan I didn't but babaji hai na dadi. He made everything happy" told geet smiling sweetly at her inside she is cursing dadi for about to ruin her beautiful day. Dadi smiled at her confirming that geet is still thinking that they had MU and talking sweetly in front of maan is really a wonder. Dev is burning with anger and want to drag geet away from her as he is unaware of their plan.

"Come dadi" asked geet and they both came in. Maan smiled at geet and stared at dadi. Dadi gave a slight smirk to maan. "Welcome to hell Mrs. Savita Khurana. Now the game begins till you accept your sin I won't leave you" thought maan. Dadi sighed on the register and ramya too sighed. Maan and geet sighed in the register. Krish and Meera congratulated them and dev hugged his bro-bhabhi and wished for their happy future. He glared at dadi and turned the other side don't want to face her.

Maan and Geet completed the other rituals happily. Later they were taken to different rooms. Dadi entered into maan's room to talk to him or say taunt him. Maan saw dadi in his room and smirked. "Welcome Mrs. Khurana, how are you. Felt so worst to see you" taunted maan. Dadi smirked and told "Dekha maan, your geet still believe me. And being geet on my side you cant do anything" "Oh Mrs. Khurana, I know geet still believe you. And I think you might have understood why I married geet so soon. So that she cant leave and she has to do what I tell. Chakar bhi geet aapki help nahi kar sakti" smirked maan. Dadi's anger rised but she calmed herself and told "All the best maan, lets see who will win" and she left the room.

Later geet is waiting for maan in their room sitting in the middle of the bed. Maan entered in their room and walked towards geet least he knew that madam is in her sherni avatar. Maan reached geet and sat in front of her. He was about to place his hand on her shoulder sherni geet pushed him and he fell on the bed due to sudden heavy force, he looked at geet who is staring at him angrily, geet got up and sat on his stomach punching him. "Kutta, kamina, bewakoof tum samajte kya ho apne aap ko? Tum tho ek baar bhi kaha nahi ki dadi aarahi hai. I was so shocked to see her and tum... Huh!!!" shouted maan still punching him. "I was so worried kit um mujhpe gussa hoga and my most important day will be spoiled, you should have told me na" asked geet angrily and panting.

Precap: SR 😆😆


Here is the next part of Tera Saaya, waiting for your response.



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Edited by _GoldenStarz_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeppiee me firstme first me first
what an update di
dadi khud saamne se maan ke trap me phasne ke liye aa gayi
nd how can dadi think that geet won't trust her maan jisse woh apni jaan se bh zyada pyaar karti hai
kya yaar dadi itni acchi khiladi ho kar geet ke plan me phas gayi
nd when maan got to know what geet was doing he was angry nd happy at the same time
angry bcoz geet was risking her life nd took decision without maan permission but happy bcoz he got to know that geet can go to any extent to be with maan
di dadi ne iss story ki sabse badi stupid character hai pehle geet par vishwas kar liya uske baad ramya par jab usse pata tha that ramya is part of the family still she went to her nd asked for her help
but ramya ne maan ko sab kuch bata diya nd maan planned everything without telling it about geet
aur jab dadi ne KM entry li aur geet ne maan ke isharo par unse acche se behave kara toh dev got angry thinking geet is being nice with dadi
yaar common dev how can u think geet will behave nicely with the person who tried to harm her maan nd maa, yeh toh sirf natak tha
nd when geet got to know that maan planned to bring dadi in KM she got angry bcoz she thought maan will be angry on her but geet how can u think like that maan aaj tak apni mishty se naraz hua hai kya
me too want maan's maa back to normal soon
nd di I m waiting for PL, PL 2, BD, DIP, AOML 😭😭😭
inke bhi toh updates dona😭😭😭inke bhi toh updates donainke bhi toh updates dona
Edited by lovesia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
geet dadi se baat kar rahi thi maan ko pata chal gaya
ek taraf wo geet se gussa hai dusri taraf khush bhi
geet maan k liye kuchh bhi kar sakti hai...
dadi actually geet ki baat believe kar li ...
dadi itne game khelne k baad bhi aisi bewakufi kaise kar sakti hai
unhone ramya se contact kiya jo maan ko inte saalo se jante hai aur apni kahani sunai...ramya ne maan ko sab bata diya ...
maan ne hi ramya ko dadi ko KM lane k liye kaha...
geet bhi shocke ho gayi dadi ko dekh kar
maan k ishare par geet dadi se pyar se baat kar rahi hai bechari...uff ye sab dekh kar dev gussa ho gaya
hope maan ki mom jaldi achhi ho jaye n dadi bhi apna gunah kabul kar le
maan ne to sherni ko jaga diya bechara shadi ki raat nayi dulhan se maar kha raha hai 😆😆

Edited by goldenmoon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
last part was just awesome..



Loved It...



Simply superb...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pravalika9291

ledu vundedi hyd hstl kadu


hey telugamay
wow yela unnarandi ;-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
lo ek se badkar ek planning mein jhute hai ek baar laga yeh dadi aakar kahi shadi tho nahi rukwayegina par jab tak maan ka dimaag hai tab tak wo kuch nahi karpayegi aur waisa hi huwa 😆😆😆aur wo khud chalkar aagayi hai ab dekthe hai maan kya kya kartha hai uske saath
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part maaneet planned very well to confront dadi especially maan now waiting for next part to see the sherni geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
he he ... poor Maan
got beaten on his SR .. lolz
Nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
loved it
maan knew that dadi came to canada and he want play along with her
finally maaneet got married
this geet is too much yaar she scolding maan on their SR giving him gaalis like khutta kamina and all
poor maan kaha pasgaya
nice precap
eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting update! Wt a twist!! Past n present well incorporated! So Maan knew she was coming! Thanks 2 Ramya! Geet stunned bt plays along! Dadi thinks Geet is on her side! Dev angry seeing dadi there! Geet pretends to b happy! Maan n Dadi! Oops sherni Geet attacks poor Maan on their SR! Poor Maan wt ws he expecting n wt did he get! Lol! update soon! Superbly written! Pls updae Tum hi hi, DIP, BD etc! Thanks

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