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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys,i have written after ages on RaHi,this concept I had in my mind since my prelims😆,i wanted to write this since then but never got the time so here I am,hope you all like it!
We were sitting together,I was hugging her from behind,my eyes were closed,neither of us spoke for sometime,i suddenly heard her voice, "We need to stop this?"
She got out of my grip and stood up, I looked up at her in confusion and asked her,"Stop what?
"Stop this,stop being together",she said not facing me,i was shocked and did not know how to react and just got hold of her arm and made her turn towards me,"What are u trying to say Panchi?"
"We cant be together anymore,Ranveer,college is ending in three days,after that are ways are apart,we have to deal with our careers and also you know my Family doesn't like you much"
"I know they don't like me much,but we have to try right?,Is our love that weak Panchi?"I asked her with a hope that she would just hold me and say that she was kidding and it was just a stupid prank!
" I'm serious Nonu,when we got together I never thought we would come so far"
"4 years,still going storng Panchi "
I held her hand,"I love you and I know you love me too,and I know your parents will never approve of us,they will not be happy to know that we are together,but I cant live without you Panchi I cannot
there must be some way we will figure..."
She suddenly cupped my face,"I am sorry Ranveer but its over..."
she kissed me on my forehead,tears were rolling down her cheeks,i hated to see that view,but before I could say anything she ran out of the room...
I woke up with a jerk,i was on my bed and I looked around my room,it was same place where Panchi left me in the dream,the dream which was my reality,2 years back she left me ever since I keep getting the same dream.
I got up from my bed,picked up my phone and dialled her number,"Hey,Kiya sorry to disturb you,when will this stop?she left me and she is gone and I still cant get over it?that memory haunts me every night in my dreams and I don't know what to do?"
Kiya replied,"Ranveer you need to move on buddy,since two years I have seen you struggling and I have seen you following your dream as a musician but I have seen you breaking down as well, there was silence for sometime.
Kiya continued,"KD has planned a re-union with all our college friends?"
"I know that KD told me",I said still remembering Panchi.
"the problem is She is going to join us too"
I froze did I just hear that,will I see her again?after 2 freaking years?
I closed my eyes and remembered...
,4 years back i and Panchi were friends I was a jerk a total badass and then she came and changed me I never thought Ranveer Shergill the jerk could ever be a good guy,but since then Panchi started maintaining her distance with me,i never got the answer why?she kepy going away,yes I loved her and wanted to know if she felt the same,Panchi was a reserved girl,she was scared,she always thought she was never capable of nothing.
I always wanted to know why she felt that way?
I and Panchi had to do a dance performance for the annual day.
At the dance practise we were alone,i twirled her around and pulled her close,as that was part of our dance,she looked so lovingly into my eyes,i pulled her more close,the music was on behind I just couldn't see anything else but her,her beautiful brown eyes,she realised what this had turned into and pushed me away,i did not want this to turn out like that!
She looked at me and said,"I cannot do this,i cannot dance with you,I'm sorry I already had denied to do this,i'm sorry I am just..."
without even completing she tried to walk off but today I felt is the time to just talk it out,i caught her arm and stopped her from leaving I made her turn towards me,"Why do you go away from me?are you scared?Panchi we were friends,you started going away,do u feel I am not a good guy? tell me...
She tried to get out of my grip but I held her more tightly,she replied,"Beacause you and me?we both are different,and I am just not capable of anything just look at me,i am a fattu,i am scared,and we cant be..."She stopped,she was looking down,I went more close to her,I could feel her heart beat going fast,I went more closer and cupped her face with one hand I bent and our lips met,I kissed her with all love I had for her,and she kissed me back,she needed me too...
we broke apart I opened my eyes I saw Panchi's eyes still shut,i went near her ears and whispered,"I love you Panchi,and I don't care about the world because for me you are the most beautiful girl on earth",and she just hugged me and I kissed her on her forehead!
The re-union party was at KD's farmhouse,all our friends came in there,and then I saw her,she entered and KD ran towards her and hugged her after all they were best friends and KD missed each her too,as Panchi had gone to U.K for studies!
She met all of them and then came towards me,i wanted to cry,I wanted to just pull her and hug her,but I dint do that,"Hey Ranveer,how are you",I could feel the pain in her voice,i smiled and replied,"I am fine Panchi how are you?",she dint reply,she got on her toes and hugged me t,without even thinking for a second I hugged her back,i hugged her tight as I wanted to,i turned my head a bit and kissed her on her forehead,She broke the hug as soon as I kissed her!
"I'm sorry...I did not mean to do that,i just had an habit of kissing you on your forehead everytime u hugged me Panchi",saying this I just walked of from there!
There were many special moments we shared together,everyone looked upon us as a perfect couple,but one of my favourite moments were...
I and Panchi loved watching One Tree Hill,we have always watched it together sitting hand-in-hand,we loved Nathan and Haley beacause somewhere it was kind of our story bad guy gone good,falling in love with a good girl!
I still remember the day we saw one episode where they get married in high school and Haley felt this wouldn't work and she took out her wedding ring,and Nathan stood there holding her and telling her how he feels this can work and promises her that we will always protect her and makes her wear the ring back,that was one of our favourite scenes,and that day we decided that whenever we fight,or misunderstanding come our way,we will remember the times we spent together and love eachother even more and one of us would just give out our hand and say Always and the other one should just give their hand,and say Always back and that meant that they fought everything the fights,the MU's and they just wanted to be with eachother!
I stood near the sea,as KDs farmhouse was near a beach,Panchi came and stood next to me,I looked at her,thought she was looking at the sea,i had tears in my eyes and I just put my hand in front of her and said,"Always?" hoping that she would give her hand back and they would come together again?
She looked at him and there were tears in her eyes too,and looked at my hand as I waited for her to reply...
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So now we don't know whether she said Always and they united again or she just dint say anything or they are still not together,i ended it at that point and you can imagine the ending if you want,i just felt it would be nice if I left it,cuz even I do not know if Panchi says yes or no!
Hope you all liked it!

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..WitchGrave.. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Panchi said yes for me !
Awww loved it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Akshu sweetheart...An OS from you..wow,Its like a surprise to me..this is the first time I am reading something from you...and Girl,You made me so proud..This is Just AWESOME...You write it so Beautifully...Just love the way you portrayed Ranveer's Pain and Panchi's helplessness..The small small moments you mention in between are so magical.,.And Love the way you give us uncertain end..I simply love the way you write girl...you should continue writing...Now I am waiting more stories from you..Lolz,I know I am sounding like a greedy person but can't help it😆😳.. ..plzz do write more...Take care...Muahhh
Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Akshi...that was so subtly beautiful...wow...
Me knows u write well so this aint that big a surprise...no...n expected enough moi loved it...
Rahi are very simple here...no big obstacles nothing...but the way u have presented their helplessness s so real...that's what reality is all about...aww my perfect two tortured my circumstances..
The confession was perfect..loved it...the badass jerk n angel together...perfecto...n the way they drifted apart was so painful...
Their meeting again n rv unable to control himself..my baby... n panchi all restrained... yaar they are killing...felt for them
The open ending is good though me would forever prefer my rahi together..m stuck actually but cant help it...but at least here m assuming that they do get together..thanks for not writing otherwise...
In all loved it...do write more...

Thanks for this...n...lots f love..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Akshu! Loved it! Aww loved how u used the flashbacks. one tree hill ka vi yaad dila dia!<3 pls write a part 2 pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You left me speechless!
You write so beautifully!
I loved the concept!


Panchi left Ranveer 🥱

Aww.. I was stunned to see Ranveer's love for panchi!
He was mad after her!

It was just amazing!

I loved the open ending! And it has to be a yes for me!

You are awesome writer!
You should write more often!

In short,
It was perfect!

I loved it to the core!
Keep writing!

Lots of love
Tina
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohhh noo
Sorry but i hate open ends...
For me ehe has given definitly her Hand and said forever and always :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!!
I've read rahi for d first tym!!!
N i think i'll continue reading der stories nw!!!
All credit goes to u!!! 👏 😆 😊
Thnx for d pm!!!
I was lyk wow!!! Ranveer n panchi r awesome!!!
N KD n panchi r bffs!!!
N d last part was emotional!!!
U didnt let her answer yaar!!!
Bt i think dey r matured enuf nw!!!
So dey myt just get together!!!
Lyk RaHi forever!!! 😃
Gud work!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Akshu 😃
I loved it ⭐️
I first time read a rahi os from u
And belive me it is mindblowing 👏 👏
Now I want to read more stories from u


Luv u
Ishita 😃
Edited by MyLifeMyRulz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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akshu🤗
hayeee a RaHi os frm u
fab one👏
beautifully penned down😊
lovedd ittt❤️

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