ZaYa OS: Am I in love???

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok I'm sorry, do not throw any chappals at me for not continuing the last OS but I swear I will complete this one. So there goes...
Zain: 7:15 ho Gaye, abhi yak nahi aayi yeh Mamu ki bhanji. Kidar reh gayi?
Aliya walks in the room.
Zain: yeh koi Time hai ane ka? Kahan thi tum?
Zain looks concerned.
Aliya: 😕 Mein kitchen mein thi zain...
Zain: woh mein bhi jaanta hoon. Jhoothi. Cheater.
Aliya fumes with anger.
Aliya: tumhari problem kya hai, apne ghusse ko apni pocket mein rakh ke betho! Samjhe?
Zain: nahi! Nahi rakhoon ga pocket mein!
Aliya: to na rakho yaar, mera time kyun zaya kar Rahe ho!
Zain: tumhara yeh time mera hai.
Zain smirks as he sees himself winning.
Aliya confused: matlab?!
Zain signals towards the clock.
Aliya smirks. Zain's confused and his smile fades away, he looks at her. She signals towards the clock.
Zain looks at it.
Aliya: 7:45 ho Gaye, tumhara time toh 15 minute pehle hi khatam ho Gaya tha.
She turns to walk away but zain pulls her back.
BI music plays in the background.
Aliya not looking into zain's eyes: zain choro mujhe.
Zain tightens his grip on her wrist.
She looks at him in surprise.
Aliya: zain...pl...please.
Zain: kyun?
Aliya looks at him again, startled.
Zain: mein toh tumhara shohar hoon na?
Aliya looks down as she struggles to release her hand from zain's grip.
Aliya: zain mein a...aakhri bar keh rahi hoon...
Zain: aur phir bhi na chora to?
Aliya: zain choro!
Zain: nahi!
Aliya: zain!
Zain: aliya!
Aliya bites zain'so hand.
Zain screams, aliya covers his mouth.
"Yeh Ishq hai" plays in the bg.
Aliya slowly removes her hand from zain's mouth. Zain stares at her.
Aliya hurriedly changes the topic.
Aliya: uh...Sherni hoon Bhopal ki!
Zain: pata hai. Par yeh nahi pata tha ke yeh Sherni kaatti bhi hai!
Aliya smiles arrogantly.
Zain: waise... Hum to har time hi kit kit karate hain to time table ki kya zaroorat.
Aliya: mujhe aur bhi kam hain
Zain: Allah tauba... Shohar se bhi zyada zaroori kaam
Aliya: very funny zain!
Zain: mein tumhare liye kuch laya hoon.
Aliya looks confused.
Zain: ek second yahin ruko
Aliya nods.
Aliya: koi apni tarha ka idiotic gift laya ho ga. Koi spoof to ho ga.
Zain: ankhein band kar. Jaldi!
Zain looks very excited.
Aliya closes her eyes.
Zain puts a box in her hands.
Aliya opens her eyes.
She stares at the box.
Then she stares at zain.
Zain signals her to open it. Aliya unwraps the gift and opens the box.
It is a pendant/ locket.
Aliya: it's beautiful...
Zain happily at her mesmerised face. Then Aliya's smile fades, seein Aliya's smile fade, zain's smile fades too.
Zain looks disappointed.
Zain: acha nahi laga?
Aliya: nahi...Aisa kuch nahi hai, Bohot acha hai, Lekin kyun?
Zain: matlab?
Aliya: matlab ki ZAIN ABDULLAH mere liye gift laya.
Zain: Haan, tum jab isse Pehno gi to tum officially meri kit kit partner ban jaogi. Aur...
Aliya: (smiling) aur?
Zain: m...mujh...mujhe bhi Bohot acha lage ga...
Them both are lost in each others eyes. BI music plays in tithe background.





So should I continue or not? Please leave your comments and let me know.

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divikash thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
bohath acha hai
please do continue, am waiting for next update too

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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Sure do continue!! It's just Amazing and is also kind of expected track! Continue 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Awesome os
Good romantic one
Pls cont soon
Lovely
HarshIkaZaYaxox thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Thanks guys I will continue, I have holidays so I'm free! Yaaayyy!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Very nicely written
Do continue :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
cute and romantic one.keep continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Awhhh that was such a cute Os loved the way he pulled her back and when she bit his hand it was hilarious lovely Os :)
Edited by Sweta... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2:
Aliya shyly nods. Zain slowly steps away.
Zain: mein change kar ke aya.
Zain goes to the toilet.
Aliya goes to the mirror and tries to wear the pendant. However she struggles.
She suddenly feels a hand on her hand. She looks up into the mirror and sees zain in the reflection.
She slowly leaves the pendant.
Zain: me..mein help kar deta hoon.
Aliya nods.
Zain is looking at a blushing and nervous aliya in the mirror as he closes the pendant.
Aliya looks in the mirror and smiles.
Aliya turns around to face zain.
Aliya: Bohot acha hai...
Zain: I know!
Aliya: kis Khushi mein?
Zain: bas aise hi...
Aliya looks confused.
Zain: kya hua?
Aliya: kuch nahi.

Later at night.
Both zain and aliya are asleep. Zain starts to cough. Aliya wakes up scared and runs to get water for him. She makes him sit up and makes him drink water.

Aliya: zain tum theek to ho na?
She is still panicking.
Zain: relax, mein theek hoon.
Aliya: sure?
Zain: positive.
Aliya nods, unsatisfied.
She gets up to leave but zain grabs her hand.
Aliya stops. Then turns back.
Zain: don't worry, mein theek hoon...
Aliya nods: good night.
Zain: good night.

Zain wakes up in the morning.
He sees aliya praying and looks at the time.
Zain: Aaj kuch zyada hi jaldi Uth Gaya mein?
He gets mesmerised looking at aliya pray.
Aliya puts her jalimaz and the Quran in the cupboard.
Aliya: Uth Gaye tum?
Zain smirks: Kyun nahi Uth sakta?
Aliya: Maine Aisa to nahi kaha...
Zain: to phir kya?
Aliya comes up to him and sits by his side.
Aliya: ab tumhari tabeeyat kaisi hai?
Zain: better...
Zain coughs.
Aliya: mein tumhare liye cough syrup le aati hoon.
Zain: no!
Aliya is already gone.
Aliya comes back and zain is not in the room
Aliya: zain...zain...zain! Kahan hi tum?!
She looks in the toilet, looks out the window but there is no sign of him.
Aliya: ab yeh syrup...
Suddenly, aliya gets a flashback of when her and zain were kids and Aliya's mum was trying to give zain syrup but he hid under the bed.
Aliya looks under the bed.

Zain looks terrified. Aliya laughs.
Aliya: zain, Bahar aao.
Zain: nahi
Aliya: zain, kitne bade ho Gaye ho aur abhi tak yeh bacho ki tarha...
Zain: mein nahi peeoon ga!
Aliya: ok baba mat peena, bed ke neeche se to niklo. Warna sab ko lage ga ki mein tumhari class le rahi thi.
Aliya continues laughing and gives him her hand. Zain grabs her hand and comes out.
Zain: mein nahi...
Aliya: mujhe pata hai tum nahi peo ge.
Zain nods.
Aliya: zain...
Aliya screams.
Zain: kya hua?!
Aliya: s...s...sa...
Zain: yeh kya samp ki tarha s...ss...s kar rahi ho?
Aliya nods scared.
Zain looks scared.
Aliya: sammmppp!!!
Zain opens his mouth to scream and aliya puts a spoonful of syrup into his mouth. Zain makes a disgusted face and then realizes what aliya has done. He give aliya the death glare and aliya shrugs.
Aliya: ghee seedhi ungli se na nikle, toh ungli tedi Karni padti hai! Kahawat to Sunni hi hogi na?

Zain makes a face at her and she laughs at him.

There's part 2. Done!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
ITS AWSOME N CUTE OS
I LOVED IT...

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