New SANDHIR Fanfic..... Love Me Thoda Aur

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Posted: 11 years ago
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😛 Guys, This Is my First Fanfic... If you guys like it please comment and you think it's bad please PM me... I would Enjoy Your Likes and Comments as well as try to do well if it is bad...😊 And this story is dedicated to Tanya di, Anuradha di,Arushi di, Arpitaa di...and to Reminescence Love u All..


Chapter 1

Randhir's Point Of View

It was the last day of the school. I was perplexed. I don't think I can see Sanyukta. I haven't met her eyes since that day. After all, I just let my anger took me away. I sheepishly entered the class. Uff... Sanyukta was not in the class.

"Bro, we can hang out in the summer in Goa . My dad will get us tickets to there...

Before Parth could finish, I interrupted. Now, it was the time to face the next problem. Parth is expecting me to hang out with him but my mom has decided to send me to Sikkim for some courses. Oh God... What am I going to do???

"Actually, my mom was thinking to send me to Sikkim for some courses ... You know, for intellectual, emotional and spiritual peace"

With the meekest smile, he said "Oh... I didn't know your plans. Great, go ahead. At least, you will have some peace of mind when you will return.

I felt really annoyed by myself. I saw the disappointment on his face.

"So... when are you going?"

"Tonight"

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"Look Randhir, take care of yourself. Just get rid of the tiredness in yourself and especially take control of your attitude and anger" said my mom in one stretch.

"Yes mom, I will. But mom, Sikkim is one of the places where I don't want to keep my foot and you are sending me to there!!!!"

"No excuses. Now should I call your dad to drop you to airport?"

I gave a good bye' kiss to mom and took a taxi to the Airport. Parth was very upset by my sudden trip and so I didn't call him to drop me.

'Let's get Lost' song is humming in my ears...I wish Sanyukta was with me..

Why the hell I am thinking about her??????

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So HOW WAS IT??????

NEED LOTS OF COMMENTS!!!!!!!😉


Index

Part 1- Page 1

Part 2- Page 1

Part 3- Page 2

Part 4- Page 4

Part 5- Page 8


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PrussianBlue thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey! Thank you for the dedication! Means a lot! I suggest you post a longer update next time with a smaller font! Also, one grammatical correction! One doesn't buy tickets to here or there. Its just either "brought us tickets" or "brought us tickets to Goa". Cool? :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lved the update!!!!!!!!! Great start!!!!
Update sooN!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

Hey! Thank you for the dedication! Means a lot! I suggest you post a longer update next time with a smaller font! Also, one grammatical correction! One doesn't buy tickets to here or there. Its just either "brought us tickets" or "brought us tickets to Goa". Cool? :D


THANKS A LOT... I WILL CARE ABOUT MY GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES... AND IT IS TOO COOL TO HAVE SOMEONE LIKE YOU😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter - 2

Sanyukta's Point Of View

My face had smudged kajal. My cheeks had tear stain. How dare he? That wretched hunk...RAndhir. I know I should not have said that words about his father but he crossed his limits.

FLASHBACK

"You are sick, RAndhir. It's the second last day of our 3rd Year and you are fighting me with for what I said to your father. I will just talk like that to a DRUNKARD."

"What the heck, Sanyukta? You little town cheap, how the hell did you talk about my dad like that?"

RAndhir caught Sanyukta by her waist and pinned her down on the canteen wall. Everyone who was present there was staring at them now. Parth tried to pull RAndhir but in vain. In his anger, he lifted her to his room threw her on his bed. She was screaming but he closed her mouth with his hand. And then he blissfully kissed her. To Sanyukta's shock, she also kissed him back. First, it was gently but then it was full of passion. When they couldn't take breath, they stopped kissing. Still in shock and surprise, Sanyukta left the room in hurry. RAndhir was also still in shock.

**********************************************************At Home:

"Sanyu, you have surprise."

My family said to me that I have surprise. I think they noticed my dullness. It's not like the old days. My dad and Ankit were always supportive and always there is only yes for my dreams and thoughts. Thanks to RAndhir but now that guy just makes me aggressive. I asked them what it was. And guess what? Four passes to RE-Nature' was the SURPRISE. It is a centre for intellectual, emotional and spiritual peace. And it's run by my Sister Sharon and my Brother- in law Swayam in Sikkim. I was like so happy and thanked mom, dad and Ankit for this amazing surprise. And the plane is today night. I invited Jiggy, Kaustuki and Parth as I had four passes. God! After all this drama in my life, there is something good in it.

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At the airport:

We four, Kaustuki, Jiggy, Parth and I were sitting in cafe when I heard a familiar sound.

"What the hell? How dare you say something dirty like that? She is everything to me."

Goodness Damn IT!!!!!!!!!! IT WAS RAndhir.

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OMG!!!! SANYUKTA HAD A SHOCK...

LET SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN??? IT ALL DEPENDS ON MY PEN...

GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!! SO HOW WAS IT??? I WILL BE WAITING FOR YOUR COMMENTS AND LIKES. CRITISISMS ARE ALWAYS WELCOME... AND IF YOU WANT PMs PLEASE ADD ME TO YOUR BUDDY LIST...

AND THIS CHAPTER IS DEDICATED TO KAVERI DI, TANYA DI, ANURADHA DI, ANYSIA, REKHA DI, ARPITA DI and ARUSHI DI.

AND AN ADVANCE THANKS... KEEP SMILING AND LOVE SADDA HAQ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome concept..
Read the first two parts...
Brilliantly written...
Eagerly waiting for next update..
Update ASAP...!!
Love,
Shalini
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG. Sanyukta and Randhir meet again. Super excited.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arrey sweety mera toh dil aise baraf ki tarah pighal ke drain se beh gya. Thank you so much for the dedication! :) I love you too and I'm sure everyone else does too! :D
This is going good. Nice concept.
I kind of got shocked on seeing thaqt note at the beginning I mean Arushi, Arpita, Anuradha- all of them are brilliant writers on IF and I'm sure I don't match up to their level, at least not yet. Waise my name is Rini. What is your name?
Edited by Reminescence - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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VERY GOOD UPDATE!!!👏👏
SANDHIR IN SIKKIM WOW!!!😊
PLS PM ME WHEN U UPDATE
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Swaron also in this ff!!!!!!!!!
I just loved the second part!!!!!!!!!!
They met again...
Awesum concept!!!!!!!!!
Keep Writing
With Love
Rekha!

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