the hug:zain's p.o.v!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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'Tum wapas aayi toh mai yahan nahi rahunga'i said as aliya walked away

I was searching for sticks for bonfire, when I heard aliya screaming my name

'Mamu ki bhanji, sabr nahi kar sakti thoda'i mumbled

I came back and saw aliya running towards me, I was ready for her kit kit, but instead I was welcomed with a hug
I knew she was afraid and that's why she hugged me
I had some new feeling's when she was hugging me, I dunno what was that ,yet I wanted to hold aliya in my embrace
😊

P.s, wanted to wrt that scene in zain's p.o.v...
Hws it
Check this out >>raabta . my review
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ramita94 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You depicted Zain's feelings perfectly
Loved that scene 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one😃, that hug was beautiful😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramita94

You depicted Zain's feelings perfectly

Loved that scene😃

thanks alot dea.it means alot
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Desigirl_21

Nice one😃, that hug was beautiful😳

aww.thanks alot
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u really discride zain pov.i'm sure he think the same that time.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

u really discride zain pov.i'm sure he think the same that time.

I was so w8ng fa ua cmnt . I always wait for.
U and desigirl-21 's review on ma post
😊
Thank u so much.. yeah..nhe must have thot dat
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautifully written...that man makes me blush big tym :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aahaan really u described zain's feeling so beautifully
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Gaganjot-

That was really nice!!!

thanks alot 😃

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