Jab do dil milte hain - Epilogue at Page 23- Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
ha ha ending was too funny😳...I was laughing ...😆
very very nice update👏..loved it❤️...continue ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update❤️
RaYa are awesome together...they have solved their all confusion😉
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow lovely update n finally sab kuch theek ho gaya btw RAYA n they made love with each other n now now wat next for RAYA some body knocked at the door i know wats next n i m still waiting for next part [/COLOR]
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow ...awesome update
finally Ram and priya ek hogaye ...
reunited ...👏
Loved the way they found their love back
and the last was funny ..had huge grin on my face .
cont soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hahaha...Raya arguement ended with Ram's (or both) hunger 😉 A sweet update. Expecting Ne-vik teasing Raya.
Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb part...
raya toghethr again... 😛
love reunited...

end was super...😆
nevik aagy...
and ray aka halat...lol... 😆

contn soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww so sweet priya was talking on serious matter and ram was thinking of eating priya golu's is so cute
but he don't miss any chance to tease her
yipee their is no barriers between raya now again they became one
oh god vik neha is knocking on thr door
now wat raya will do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting 4 the update!!!!
continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all parts at one go. Loved it . waiting for the reunion of the whole family and friends.
Pl. update ASAP.
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 10

Mr Kapoor, I called softly , trying to wake him, There was no effect, he was sleeping deeply.

Priya " called out vikram , are you okay ? Now I was desperate .shook him , Mr Kapoor please get up, He smiled and murmured something ... Turned over settled once again.. Are yaar yeh to gode bacche ke so rahe hai, enna ab mein kaise ootavum???

PRiYA called Neha and Vikram in unision. Coming Coming , ek minute. Aarahi hoon. Mr Kapoor I raised my voice myself to the extent it will not be heard ... Outside the door

Slowly he opened his. Eye... Hmmm.. Priya you look so beautiful... You beauty puts flowers to shame

This man never knew what romance is know trying to be romantic. Now when whole family is outside waiting for us.

Mr Kapoor ap please get up ..get to the bathroom and hide... there is no time for this filmy baatein

What ? he got up with a start said I thought every wife wanted their husband to be romantic, I am trying to be .. you asking me stop go hide in the bathroom... Priya you only asked me to stop hiding...?

Poor Ram... he was so confused... Ram please just listen to me, Vikram and neha knocking at the door, I need to go and open, please go hide.. Why should I hide this my room.. His trying act to dumb / or his he still asleep. My Fustration climbed up a notch. Ram ap yaise ja karu darwaza koolenge kya... Isme Ky... He stoped..Then realized state of dress or should I undress we were both in... Ab kya kare ??he realized .

In dono agr hume is hall me dekeliya to ?... they never allow us to see the end of this... Hamare jeena haram kardege!!!. He dono.. Ap he duvet wrap karke go to the bath room .Mein ja kar door kolthi hoon. Magar tum kaise ja ho ge he asked . oh I god I was equally at bad state... how am I going to get up...? Ap jakare Meri ho red nigtie laya he ga..mein ja kar darwaz kol thi hoon. Better still why I don't I were my shirt ,,,, He started

Mr Kapoor ... I told.. I think you cant were that shirt..why.. realization struck him, now I was embarrassed to remember what I did to shirt in throes of passion... women in passion why cant we think straight when in passion. Okay !!! At last my man was fully awake. He tied the duvet around himself jumped like peguin moved towards the cupboard .Bought nighty ... Give itto me and once again jumped away to the bathroom to hide himself. I Asked himto change and come out as soon as possible

He looked to so cute , with duvet around him. Priya I stopped myself get the grip on yourself... there is pagal kandan going to be here in another 10 minute and you are admiring your husband assets come on girl I reminded myself...

I quickly wore my nighty, ran to the door to open it... Neha and vikram were about to bang it open. By then I quickly opened the door.

What happened what took you so long to open the door... asked neha , looking over me at the room.

Kuch nahi... I was in the bathroom that why I was late I was trying to block her view, in case she saw something she should not see..

Are you alone ?did you find ram? Where washe some many years ? Where is ram now..? Why did you not tell us anything yesterday night... what happened

Are baba neha... Let me answer you na. Tum sawal pe sawal pooche ja rahi ho , mujhe jawab denaka muaka nahi de rahi ho I said trying to stop neha's express train

Vikram said neha give priya a chance to answer na... let go inside first

Nahi Nahi- I shouted both of them were stunned hearing me scream..what happened ?

The room is very dirty how can you guys come in..

They were looking at me waiting for me to continue... I mean 5 years the room was not cleaned up na that s why

But I asked Bk to clean the rooms regularly na. how can he do this , forget that it is okay if it is dirty let us come in and talk. Vikram answered

I could not stall them anymore... just wait a minute I said ..okay.. let me set things straight so that you can atleast come in and sit on sofa ,,

Hurriedly closed the door on my friends. Not even giving them a chance to answer. I don't know what they must have thought. Ran in to pick up the clothes lying around threw them into the laundry basket.made the bed look presentable covered it with another duvet. Closed the dressing room door while Calling out to ram to hurry up. Ran back to open the door.

Both of them were still stunned with my actions, they were looking at me differently as if I had grown pair of horns or something.

Come comein , both of you. Why are you still standing outside.. now I am sure they would have thought I have gone mad !! mad with grief..

Vikram and neha came in and sat down. Looking at me for answers..

Ram is fine vikram, He was hiding here inkm for so long. Had threatened Bk that he would leave and never return back if bk told you anything..

Where is he now? He is the bathroom.. before I could finish ram came out of the dressing room dressed in his white kurta.

Vikram saw ram got up hugged him . Neha also hugged her fatty there were tears in her eyes. I know how much these two missed their friend.Both of them were happy to see their friend they never questioned him , just welcomed him back . Their friend ship always amazed me, to think I was part of this friendship I felt blessed.

All of us settled on the sofa. Neha asked "but priya you told me you were in the bathroom that why you could not open the door, why did ram not open the door.. then "

I was caught I and ram looked at each as who is going to answer the question...

Before we could answer vikram answered oh bechara soo raha ho ga na easiliye nahi kola hoga tum bhi na neha what question you ask.

But vikram when priya opened door the ram was not there in bed na..

Ho when I came to open ram went to the bathroom.. I tried to salvage the situation.

Knowing that we were there outside.. he went to the bathroom without even meeting us. After all we are seeing each other almost after 5 years na neha countered

Vikram saved me tubhi kaise kaise sawal pooch rahe ho Lekin ap dono are not ready,,.Whole family will be coming down na...

Ram asked what whole family

Vikram asked what priya you did not tell ram that you invited the whole family at 6 pm today.

Oh shit I forgot to tell ram about it . I am sorry Mr Kapoor time hi nahi mila baba..

Neha started what are you saying priya from yesterday night till now you did not have the time tell him.What were you guys doing? Vikram and neha gave usa all knowing look.

Ram Came to my rescue... Yaar we are talking so we forgot. So what .. You guys go welcome them and I and priya will get ready and come down in 10 minutes

Talking a ... Okay they said loudly both looked at each other smiled... Priya neha said we will go down ... just two things there is duvet caught between the dressing door remove it before it tears. And then she came close to me and said is this a new way of wearing a nighty front side back and back side front nice!!! She gave me a wink led vikram down to welcome our family..

Oh god I never felt so embrassed. Both ram and I did know where to hide... . Then ram reminded me to go get dressed before the whole family decide to visit us in our room... Time has come to face the family and answer their questions...

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