AsYa OS :- SEPARATION MADE THEM ONEFOREVER

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Hi guys
Here is my 2nd OS
Since many ppl askd me to continue writing i wrote another one
And i hope to get a gud response for this one too


Separation Made them OneForever...







Its a story about friendship and love . Asad,Zoya and Najma were BESTFRIENDS since they were 3. Asad and Najma were twins and Zoya was the only child of her parents . They all were neighbours . Zoya was 3 when her parents shifted to bhopal . In start Asad always use to tease Zoya . It didnt took much time for Zoya and Najma to become BEST FRIENDS . Soon even Asad and Zoya became Best Friends too


When they were 4 they all went to school for 1st time . Zoya and Asad were excited but Najma being the a bit shy was really nervous . Though she knew that her Asad Bhaijaan and her Bestiee will be by her side . They all went to school . Asad was over possessive for both the girls with him . He didnt allow any guy to come near them or even make them cry . If any girl would make Zoya or Najma cry he would go and complain to teacher.


Soon they made new friends but things didnt change between them . Years passed it was Asad and Najma's 9th birthday . Zoya was really happy . She would always wish that only if she had a sibling she would be as happy as Asad and Najma . But she was some where satisfied that she had Najma as her sister . Zoya and Najma were not only friends they were more than sisters. The bond which Najma shared with Zoya was same as she shared with Asad. No one could believe that they are BEST FRIENDS and NOT SISTERS. Asad was really happy to see his sister and his best friend bond so well . They were in same school in same class . They all use to study together, play together , do assignments together ...



Zoya always used to say shayaris and make her bestiees laugh at them . She knew her shayaris never made sense but she knew that they always made her bestiees laugh . Where Zoya use to say funny shayaris Asad use to say romantic shayaris . Zoya use to look in awe at him . Their parents knew that Asad and Zoya are not just Best Friends infact they were more than that . They were perfect life partners for each other . This was also noticed by Najma . Even she use to tease her Bestiee and her Bhai jaan . AsYa always blushed when Najma or their family use yo tease them .



Asad and Zoya were admant that they are just Best Friends . But things changed when Asad had to go to Canada for a year . To study for a course . He wanted to be there with his grand father . Zoya made a PPT a day before Asad left . She had added all their pics from their 1st meeting till their schools farewell day . If anyone would see those pics they would say that THEIR ARE THE WORLDS MOST BEAUTIFUL AND CUTEST COUPLE... Zoya handed over that pendrive to Asad and asked him to see it whenever he feels sad .



Zoya didnt went to airport to leave Asad . Because she didnt want to cry in front of him and make him sad. A few days later Zoya started to miss Asad . She felt some part of her life leave her . She was physically here but her mind ... her mind was somewhere else. She use to think about Asad the moments she shared with him . Their fights . Their outings . Though Najma was there with her she always use to feel alone. Every weekend she use to wait for Asad to send a msg . They use to video chat every weekend . They use to chat for long time sometimes even throughout the night they use to keep chatting


It was Zoya's18th birthday she wanted both her bestiees to be with her . Najma wished her at 12 but she was sad because every year Asad use to wish her 1st . Suddenly she got a msg from Asad


Khuda ki bani kudrat nahi dekhi ...

Dil main chupi mohabbat nahi dekhi ...

Jo kehte hai ki duriyaan thod deti hai dosti ...

Unhone shayad humari dosti nahi dekhi ...

Happy Birthday to my princes


Zoya was really happy seeing that msg . She slept with the teddy that Asad had given her on her 16th Birthday. Next morning when Zoya woke up her family and Asad's family was present there to wish her . She was really happy. That day she was missing Asad really badly but some where she was feeling that Asad was too close to her.


After collage she went home. Najma left early as she got a call from home that her mom was not well . Zoya wanted to go too but she had to give her presentation so she couldnt go when she reached home it was dark every where . Suddenly there was a light . She covered her face with her hand to stop the light come on her eyes . A few mins later her eyes adjusted to that light . She heard a voice it merly took secs for to recognise that it was Asad's voice . She wishpered "Asad" she was on 7th heaven at that moment .


"Khuda ne yeh jism banaya ye soch kar...

jism ke bina rooh hai kya...

Phir khuda ne yeh dil banaya yeh soch kar...

dil ke bina dharkan hai kya...

Phir khuda ne apko banaya ye soch kar...

apke bina hum hai kya ..."
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"Zoya we were away for so long . Each and evey day of my life was colourless. Its then when I realised that YOU ARE THE COLOUR OF MY LIFE... Zoya I cant express it how much I missed you . I use to wait for weekends to see you .. to talk to you... Remeber the PPT you gave to while I was goin ? Zoya I saw it every day .. It was the only thing that made me happy .. Staying away from you made me realise what you meant to me ... Zoya you are not just a BEST FRIEND to me ... YOU ARE MY LIFE ... YOU ARE MY LIFE ZOYA... without you I was dieing each day Zoya . I always use to think that our family and Najma like to tease us but the fact is that they are right Zoya WE ARE MADE FOR EACHOTHER...I LOVE YOU ZOYA WILL YOU BE MINE FOREVER...??"



Zoya couldnt believe that Asad was there infront of her asking her out . It was a total shock for her. She shut her eyes and each and every moment they spent together
came infront of her eyes. He was right even she was dieing each and every day being away from him . She opened her eyes only to find him on his knees in front of his with his hand streched for her to accept it.


She slowly moved her hand and caught his hand she nooded in a "YES" with unsheld tears in her eyes his happiness had no boundaries . He stood up and hugged her tightly . She hugged him back . Suddenly the lights were on and their family came out clapping . Their moms had tears in their eyes .Najma was on cloud 9 she was so happy that Zoya her BESTIEE was going to be her Bhabhi .Asad and Zoya cut the cake and fed each other . He wished her "HAPPY BIRTHDAY ZOYA" She replied " THANKYOU FOR THE BEST BIRTHDAY GIFT " their families decided to get them married as soon as possible and they got engaged a week later . That SEPARATION MADE THEM ONEFOREVER...



Here I end my 2nd OS its dedicated to all those who read my first writing 🤗
Plz ignore the errors 😛
And all sarcasms and comments are accepted
But not eggs and tomatoes🤣
Love,
Niya😳 🥱
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Thanks 😊
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Res...Un res😃
Wah...Wah...Wah...My sweet chikoo.
This was well written and so lovely...👏
And You said You couldnt write anything😡
I loved the shayaari's and the concept.
This was sweet and cute...Just like you.
I adored the proposal...It was romantic
Awesome👏👍🏼❤️
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Just beautiful... 😳
The way Asad proposed, it made me cry 😆
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Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Just beautiful... 😳
The way Asad proposed, it made me cry 😆


Thanks
Why cry ? 😲
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loved it short and sweet story😊
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Originally posted by: Niya_789


Thanks
Why cry ? 😲


Because it was so beautiful... 😆 😳
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Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

loved it short and sweet story😊


Thank you 😃
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Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


Because it was so beautiful... 😆 😳

oh 😳
Thanks 😳
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