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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter ~ 8

Author's POV

Jeevika Entered Her Room After Cleaning The Kitchen To Find Viren And Abhi Playing Around On The Floor. Viren Making Abhi Stand And To Make Him Walk And Plus Talk.

V - "Say Papa" Viren Cutely Requested His Son Twice.

But Abhi Sensing His Mother's Tried Walking Towards Her. Viren Followed Him Crawling Just In Case If He Fell. Abhi Was Just Few Little Steps Away From Jeevika When He Threw His Hands Indicating His Mom To Pick Him Up. Jeevika Stood There Not Moving, Letting Abhi Walk Upto Her Feet. Just As Abhi Reached To Her Feet He Hugged Them Tightly And Spoke His First Ever Words "Mumma". Jeevika Immediately Picked Her Son Up Kissing His Cheeks, While Viren Also Joined Them.

V - "Very Bad! I Was Trying Like For Past Thirty Mins So That You Can Speak Papa First And You Abhi? Mumma's Boy Huh?" He Said Taking Abhi From Jeevika And Nudging Abhi's Nose With His.
J - "Nothing Like That Papa, Abhi Loves His Mumma Papa Equally Hain Na?" Jeevika Caressed Abhi's Forehead. "Chalo Time To Get Your Afternoon Sleep Abhi. And Today Papa Will Pat You To Sleep!"
V - "Don't Need To Remind You See...I Always Remember...It's Sunday So I'll Be Taking Care Of Abhi Whole Day!" He Said As He Sat With Abhi Sleeping On Him. "We'll Go Out Tonight For A Walk. But We'll Not Take Mumma...Just Papa And Abhi.."
J - "We'll See..." She Said Showing Tongue To Viren And Settling Next To Him On Bed.
Soon Abhi Was Asleep And So Was Jeevika. Placing Abhi Next To His Wife Made Sure They Two Were Fine With The A/C Temperature And Started Doing His Work On His Lappy.

It Was 4:30 In Evening When Jeevika Got Up Pressing Her Head. Viren Stood There Near The Window. She Went Near Them Placing Her Head On His Arms While He Held Abhi.
Sensing Her Forehead Warm "Jeevika You Feel Warm. Having A Fever?"
J - "I Don't Know, Maybe. Head Feels Heavy Too..."
V - "Then Stay Put On The Bed. I'll Go See If Virat's Here, Or I'll Call Manvi." (Some Introduction Time LOL! Manvi Is Virat's Girlfriend. And She's A Pediatrician Plus A Normal Physician)
J - "Okay Hand Abhi To Me..." She Said As She Tried Taking Abhi, But Viren Denied.
V - "No I'll Take Care Of Him. He Shouldn't Catch The Fever From You."
J - "Yeah Right. Okay Then If He Bugs You More Hand Him To Maa. She'll Take Care Of Him As I Know You Won't Let Abhi Near Me Till I'm Completely Fine!"
V - "You Know Me Well!!" He Said Taking Abhi Out. While Jeevika Lay Down On The Bed.

Viren Entered Their Room Along With Manvi. She Checked On Jeevika And Informed It Was Just Due To Over Exertion Of The Body.

M - "The Temperature Here Is High. It Causes This Normal Fever, She'll be Fine With A Little Rest And The Medicines." She Stated.
J - "And What About A Son Not Being Around His Mother?"
M - "Abhi Can Be Around You!" Jeevika Smiled Widely. "But Still I Would Say Stick To Bhai's Opinion!" Hearing It She Again Became Sad And Glared At Viren, Who Was Smiling.
V - "I'll Drop You Out..." He Said Picking Up Manvi's Bag.
M - "It's Fine. I'll Just Go Meet Maa & Little Abhi And Then Go Off To The Hospital..." She Said As She Left.
J - "Happy? She Also Said To Keep My Son Away From Me..."
V - "Why Would I Be Happy Keeping Our Son Away From You Huh?" He Asked As He Settled Across Her.
J - "Why Would I Know..."
V - "Manvi Said This Fever Is Normal...But You're Getting Cranky Jeevika Ji..."
J - "Maybe Because I Already Miss My Son..." She Said Getting Upset.
V - "But Jeevs It's Better To Take Precaution Right? He Shouldn't Catch The Fever! And If He Does, It'll Will be He Suffering Plus You'll be Upset With You're Self Also! And It'll Be Tough For Me To Handle A Upset Mother!"
J - "I'm Not Tough To Handle!!" She Smacked His Arms. "When Did You Find It Difficult To Handle Me Huh?"
V - "There's A Huge List I Can State Mrs. Vadhera..."
J - "Don't Talk To Me... Go Away..."
V - "I'll Leave You Alone Cranky Mumma..." He Got Up. "Hopefully You'll Be Fine In Few Mins. I'll Bring In Some Soup For You.."

Jeevika Sat There, While Viren Went To Make Some Soup For Her And Check On Abhi.

Viren Entered To Find Jeevika Asleep With A Book In Her Hand. He Placed The Tray On The Side Table. Taking The Book And Keeping It Aside, He Caressed Her Forehead Softly, Making Her Wake Up.
V - "Felling Better...??" He Asked As He Took The Bowl In His Hands.
J - "No. Where's Abhi? Did He Bug You Or Maa? Is He Alright?"
V - "He's Fine Jeevika. Don't Worry About Him. Here Have This Soup." He Said Feeding Her. She Denied.
J - "No First I Wanna See My Son. Did He Eat Something?"
V - "Yes Maa Fed Him His Food, Right Now Maa Is In The Kitchen Preparing Dinner, Abhi Is With His Chachu..."
Vi - "Here's Abhi Bhabhi" Virat Entered. "He's Just Crying For Past Five Mins. And Not Calming Down."
J - "Hand Him To Me Please?" Jeevika Said As She Glanced At Viren. Viren Nodded A Yes To Virat. As Soon As Abhi Was In His Mumma's Warm Embrace He Became Quite. Jeevika Placed A Soft Kiss On His Forehead As Abhi Played With His Mumma's Fingers. Viren And Virat Adored The Mother Son Duo. Abhi Was With Jeevika After Almost 5 Big Hours.
V - "Now You Wish To Drink The Soup Or have Dinner With All Of Us...?
J - "Dinner...!!" She Said Smiling Wide, Not Taking Her Eyes Off Abhi Who Was Slowly Drifting To Sleep.
Vi - "I Heard He's Been Doing Masti Since Morning. And Also He Was Up Early Today. And See Now He's Sleeping So Peacefully In His Mumma's Arms.."
V - "Yeah He's A Mumma's Boy, And Also My Wife Love Her Son More Than Me..." He Said Pouting.
Vi - "I'm Leaving! Meet You Two At The Dinner Table..." He Said Escaping From There.
J - "So Were You Saying I Don't Love You?" She Eyed Viren.
V - "When Did I Say That? I Just Said That My Wife Loves Her Son More Than Me! And It's A Fact Isn't It?"
J - "And Because Of Whom Did I Get Abhi?" She Said Blushing A Little
V - "Is My FM Really Talking About This Now?" He Said As He Took Abhi From Her And Placed Him On The Bed, Adjusting Some Pillows Around Him. "Before Having The Dinner Can I Have Something Sweet?" He Inquired Making Jeevika Closer To Him.
Jeevika Didn't Reply. Taking Her Silence A Yes, Viren Kissed Her Lightly.

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Finally Updating My This Story!

Do Comment And Press Like!! ❤️


Take Care All!! 😛

PS ~ Please Forgive Me For Any Grammatical Mistakes! 😆

Edited by RiddhiTacker - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wooohohooo...finally
my LITTLE ABHI is back

yipeee he said mamma
awweiieee and he walkted too 🤗
haaayyeee...
in this update i loved every bit👏
some of the part were superb like the starting "the walk and abhi saying mamma"😊
and viren saying i was trying from pat 30 min to say papa😊
awwwiieee i loved it❤️
then the sleeping 👍🏼
awww...poor jeevika catches fever
and have to say away from abhi😔
viren taking care of jeevika😊
thats really cute😳
and the small nok-jhok😳😆
its superb darling 👏
then jeevika adoring abhi😊
awwiieee🤗
i m daydreaming
continue riddhi
wanna read more n more😊
being greedy i know but cant help😊😆
ur story has made me crazy!😉

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
how much I missed this story.. but finally u updated..
it was a cute update ❤️
adorable is an exact word..
cuteness personified !!
cont soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww...so cute..!!!!
love the mother son relation..!
Viren is such a perfect husband..!!😊😊
Update soon..Wanna read further..!
Thanx for the pm..😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
This update takes the cake!!!!
My favoritest story by you!
Seriously this update was something else with viren being oh so adorable as always!!!
Nd loved the way jeevs is always craving to be with her soon!
Loved each and every line that I reread all fair 😛
👏 👏 👏
Please update this one soon!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
Loved jeevika and abhi's bonding
amazing
fabulous
thanks for the pm
continue
soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update
absolutely brilliant
too good
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Posted: 11 years ago
commented do check second to comment 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww... cutieee updatee.. .. loved hw viren s taking care of jeevika... keep continuingg. Eager to read the next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved the whole update
liked the bond between
jeevika and abhi
and loved jeevika
feeling bad away
from his son
and she is angry with
viren
for the reason
total
awesome
superb
fantastic
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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