The Diary Entries of Arti Scindia - Yash ki Zubaani (Pg 54)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Priyasi
waiting for the next update... Hope to get one soon...

Very very soon!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki
Kat I've yet to read the last chapter. But I'm so eagerly waiting to read Yash's POV, his monologue. OMG, I can't wait to read what His Majesty felt on seeing such a naughty Aarti
Thanks for fulfilling my wish 🤗

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Ok so I finally read "Kabhi Aar Kabhi Paar" (twice)
Oh I love this song

"Kahi Aar, Kabhi Paar
Laga Teere Nazar,
Saiyaan Ghayal Kiya Ji Tune Mora Jigar"

Perfect Song for this chapter. I love your song selections Kat, they perfectly suits the situation 👏

Now coming to the update.

OMG Aarti was literally counting days or hours or minutes or perhaps seconds also 😆. Poor girl was so desperate that she was ready to call Mrs. Mithai also 😆

And then she had to go through such an embarrassing moment when she finally came face to face with His Majesty.
Kat after AarYa, I'm loving Shobha so much in this cute story. 😳

As usual I loved AarYa moments so much, but for me the best was when His Majesty took her hands in his and KISSED them 🤢. After Aarti, even I almost fainted

Now I can't wait to read Yash's monologue

Nikki! Sabse pahle toh, thank you for recommending my works. That is so very sweet! 🤗

About the songs - you know, there are so many hindi movie songs that kuch na kuch toh fit baith hi jaata hai.

And Yash's pov - well, one of the reasons this next update took so long was that it just wasn't fitting right. And then i had an epiphany. Duh! It had to be from Yash's pov. And lo and behold - it just fit perfectly. Be prepared for a really long update though.

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kdsubs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: palbhar
Can't wait to read Yash 's POV!!!!

😆 - thanks for the enthusiasm.

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kdsubs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: Priyasi

Wow, Yash's monologue... Cant wait to see what's on his mind...

Hehehe.

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kdsubs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: roserosey
take ur time kat ...
i knowas always u will compensate it with super amazing work...coz the hint is this time yashs monologue...how interesting 😉

That's so sweet of you. Thank you Rose.

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kdsubs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan
Waiting, Waiting n Waiting !!
Monologue of His Majesty 😉
Take ur tym coz We know "Sabar Ka Phal Meetha Hota Hai" 😆

And... His Majesty is coming. Check the next post.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

I'm first again 😲 🥳

Kat, here you are thanking me for recommending your name, there Priya is thanking me for the same thing. I did nothing. All I did was to tell a reader the name of an excellent writer. And she loved your writing. 😳

Now coming to the update...

I love this song so much. You've posted the link of the song 🤗. I've not yet watched it, but I can still visualize, Dev Anand walking down the stairs of Kutub Minar. I love almost all songs from this movie. So thanks once again for coming with such a beautiful song which is apt, for describing Yash's feelings.

And thanks for giving us Yash's POV 🤗

Poor boy, I wonder what would've happened had not Dubeyji stopped Shobha from giving him snacks 😆

I enjoyed reading his thoughts. The Mela part was the best. Aww he so wanted to take her in his arms and kiss her . And he touched her lips with his finger 🤢. Now I want to read Aarti's POV on this. I know I'm sounding greedy, but what to do, it's all your fault, for writing it so beautifully 😳

Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago