~'Shaadi Mubarak'~ Ch-13 updtd pg111 30th dec - Page 44

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ankitabaran

Love it...plz continue soon...😛









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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaKabhi

Hai,

I am New to this forum,I had Just Read Your FF Till CH-9,It was very Interesting and very nice👏
Please PM to me next parts,I AM waiting for it.
I had Stopped Watching QH After KSG exists and I am missing KSG very much 😭and I am missing KABHI very very much😭,After READ YOUR FF I feel BETTER😊
Please Mention ASAD AS KSG ONLY PLEASE
Please Update next part,I am waiting for it.😊


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Posted: 11 years ago


Update coming soon😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Chapter 9...

zoya won the deal.. she is not going to let asad walk...

another hug...

and goes second fall... so funny before catching her
asad smile first...



Originally posted by: Linsie

and asad fight with zoya... she is not angry...
but like his concern...

nice... so geet is asad friend...

zoya found out asad can sing...

asad intro zoya to geet... and she make fun of them...
so sweet...



Love ur comments...😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nisha150




Update coming soon😉


nish plz update soon now... U have not updated from long time now
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--


nish plz update soon now... U have not updated from long time now



I know...sry for that...vil do in a while stuck with something...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

~ "Shaadi Mubarak" Chapter 10 ~




Credit - Delena❤️





Hope u all enjoy reading the update as much as i enjoyed writing it...!! Do tell the reviews...:)
Lastly , Happiee Reading :)

Precap-Asad meets his Best friend Geet and comes to know its her wedding only . Asad sings song on the stage when geet forces him.


Asad came down of the stage without breaking the eyelock with zoya and it broke only when Geet came to him taking long steps and side hugged him.Mahshallahh Asad miya aapne toh kamal kar diya..i just loved the song.Thanx a lot for singing said Geet smiling wide , i am happie u liked it said Asad smiling his one of the rare smiles for others but for Geet a smile which came from bottom of his heart.After that Geet went back to Maan and Asad to the Dinner side to check if everything was at a place and everything was perfect just the way he wanted it to be and as he was going back he saw Imran and told Good job i just loved the way everything was set up and patted his back. Yeh muje nahi you should tell to zoya she had only given me and Tanu all the ideas and instructed us said Imran smiling. Asad was really overwlemed listening to it and thought she is such a talented girl decoration aur catering ka work pura ache se samal liye..Yeh lakdi muje ek din zarur pagal kar degi. Meanwhile Khushi came near them and Asad came out of his thoughts. Sir , Imran jaldi chaliye. Par kaha said Asad. Sir woh sab chodiya ap phele chaliye jaldi aur Imran tum bhi chalo jaldi and she hold Imran's hand and pushed him to the back side of the stage followed by Asad.


Back side of the Stage (Green Room)

Tanveer tum ek baar utho aur chalne ki koshish toh karo said Zoya to a crying Tanveer.Nahi ho raha hai bohut dukh raha hai paer(leg) Zoya.Toh phir tum ab dance kaise karogi said Arnav slightly smriking towards Tanu which went unnoticed by Zoya.Before Tanu would answer Imran came rushing as Khushi told him and Asad the whole thing that how Tanu fell because of a chair which was there in the green room as Tanveer was entering the room.Meanwhile Ayan also joined them.Kya hua Tanveer , tum thik toh ho na said Imran with concern. Nahi Imi mere paer mai mouch agayi aur ab mai dance bhi nahi kar sakti said Tanveer again crying. Vasie toh Zoya ko bohut se steps athe hai na usi ne toh tum logo ke bohut help ki thi dance practise ke waqt toh zoya kar legi Imran ke sath said Ayan looking at Zoya.But before Zoya would answer Asad said nahi mai zoya ke sath dance karuga and thats final his voice showing finality and with that he left the room.

Par Mr.Khan said Zoya but then she saw he just went away.Zoya was though nervous she was somewhere deep inside her heart even happy?? No more than happy. She didnt knew why she felt so right by Asad taking the decision ans she dancing with Asad was making her go mad already. The other side she was even shocked that Akdu would dance with her Zoya Farooqui whom he hates. really?? She felt so right to dance with him rather than Imran though she didnt have problem dancing with him.

And The Anchor called for the next performance which was of Tanveer and Imran and Zoya came out of her thoughts and saw everyone and all wished her good luck and she went out feeling excited as well nervous.

As soon as she was out of sight all started dancing even tanver Hi-Fi ing eachother and Tanveer told Guys Plan sucessfull and all smiled wide. Bhaijaan ko toh kuch bolna hi nahi pada woh toh apne aap hi maan gaye dance ke liye said Ayan. Haa aur dekhe nahi jaise hi tumne mera naam liye woh kitne jelaous feel kar rahe thae said Imran. And all Thanks tu Khushi and Tanveer itni achi acting karne ke liye said Arnav and all laughed and except Tanveer and Imran all went out of the room to see the couple dance.

At The Stage

Both Asad and Zoya came from opposite sides and stood in the middle and all lights went off and only one light was onn which was on Asya. Asad actually saw her now properly and closely and thought how would he miss seeing that she was looking soo beautiful. She was wearing a royal blue colour valvet blouse and red colour ghagra with both the colours present in the duptta and zoya was admiring his looks he was wearing a Royal blue colour shirt with a black three piece suit they looked totally wonderful as a couple.And as the music slowly started Asad came more closer and slowly interwined their right hands and both felt a pleasure with eacothers touch and he kept his left hand on her waist and zoya felt her whole body on fire. After that zoya was lost in her thoughts so asad instructed her through his eyes to keep her hand on his shoulder and she did as he told her. Both started dancing slowing.Asad even strted humming the song reconising the tune.

Kaise bataaun tujhe ki dil mera kya keh raha
Rahe na faasle ye jo hai apne darmiyaan

Ho...
Kaise bataaun tujhe ki dil mera kya keh raha
Rahe naa faasle ye jo hai apne darmiyaan

Asad then twirled Zoya.And then again they were face to face holding their hands and then he pushed the strands of her hair and tucked them back of the ear.

Tere qareeb main ho sakoon
De de tu apni razaa
Paas bithaaun ye zulf sanwaroon

Asad twirled her again and now her back was touching his chest and his hands were on her stomach interwined with her's.

Aur baahon mein le loon tujhe main
Hai dil ki ye khwaahish
Ki sun le guzaarish
Aur de de tu khud ko mujhe
Ho ho...

Asad now lifted her catching her waist and twirled around zoya left her hands in air and humming the song now.

Tujh se mohabbat hui
Hai meri hai bas ye khata
Tujh se main door rahoon
Yeh mujh ko gawaara kahaan
Main tere saath mein hi rahoon
Chhodo ye saara jahaan

Asad and Zoya were at a distancee of there hands zoya then turned round and came close to him and again turned round to the other side and they were again at hand distance.

Ho ho...

Ho ho wo ho... Ho ho wo...
Teri adaaon mein doob loon
Doob loon main tujhi mein
Ho jaaun tere itne qareeb
Ki main dikhoon ab tujhi mein

Paas bithaoon ye zulf sawaaroon
Aur baahon mein le loon tujhe main
Hai dil ki ye khwaahish ki sun le guzaarish
Aur de de tu khud ko mujhe
Ho ho...

Zoya slipeed at bit because of the carpet but Asad catched her in time and that became the most superb step for all .

Song ends..Everyone praised them by appluding..!!

The Shaadi Mubarak Team was really happy seeing it mainly Ayan thinking that finally someone has come in his bhaijaan's life to make him live again.

At night after the function was over.Geet pleaded Maan and told him to take her to Asad's home.

Khan Mansion

Asad and Zoya were back so now all were going to their rooms for the night but the door bell rang and all stood still thinking who would be at this time and were thinking who would open the door and again after the second bell Dilshad went and opened the door.She reconised Geet and was totally suprised. Geet beta tum,come inside said dilshad smiling.All were settled down ut zoya was standing near the dining table.Geet beta,yeh kaun hai said Dilshad.

Auntie yeh mere mangetar hai said Geet a bit shyly.Aur mai hi Geet ki wedding plan kar raha huo ammi said Asad smiling.Kya tumhne muje batya kyu nahi said dilshad.Actually ammi woh maine socha mai appko kal subha batuga.Acha thik hai.Areey Zoya tum waha kyu khadi ho, come sit here with us said najma and all turned towards Zoya.Arrey Zoya aap yaha??said Geet confused.

But before Zoya would repy Dilshad told Yeh meri Best Friend ki Beti.Kuch din yaha ayi hai hum sabke sath rehna.All were confused about this new revleation except Geet and Maan as they didnt knew about Zoya and her staying here before.Let me bring coffe for you allsaid Dilshad followed by Najma for help.Zoya was confused but thought of talking about it later.Once they were served coffee Geet and Asad just went out in the garden to talk something private which was between their friends.

Geet and Asad sat down on a bench sipping their coffee.Asad tu kitna change hogaya hai phele toh itni bate karta tha aur ab bilkul chup hogaya hai siad Geet a bit sad.Ab kya karu Geet zindagi na aise bana diya hai said Asad sadly.Vaise Rashid uncle kaha hai mai unse toh mili hi nahi said geet.Unka naam bhi mat lo Geet siad Asad angrily.Geet was really shocked seeing her friend getting so much angry who ones never knew what was anger and always use to be smiling.

Jab mai final year mai tha tab se hi Rashid Sahab ghar mai kuch alag tarak se behave karte the aur hamesha bahar hi rahete..kabhi kabhi toh teen chaar din hojate unka kuch pata nahi hota woh kaha jate kise milte kuch bhi nahi...bas ghar pe ata aur ammi ki ouchne par khate kaam zayada tha isiliye ghar nahi a paya.Phir jab mera graduation hogaya tha uske baad woh hame chod ke chalgaye tha...unhone ek letter likha tha ki unki jab ammi se shaddi hi thi uske do saal baad unhone dusri shaddi kar li thi aur ab woh unki dusri biwi ke pass ja rahe hai aur kabhi vapas nahi ayege...aur unhone yeh bhi likha tha ki muje kabhi dhunde ki koshish bhi mat karna...uske baad ammi bilkul tuth gayi thi hamare pass tha toh sirf yeh ghar aur kuch nahi uske ek saal baad woh phir apne beta ayan ke bimari ke liye aye the..unko blood chaiye that aur sirf mera blood group ayan se match karta tha..aur jab maine Ayan ko hospital mai dekha he was fighting for his life aur woh itna tadap raha tha toh isilye maine use blood de diya aur uske baad jab tak woh thik nahi hua mai roz use dekhne jata tha...aur phir woh mere ghar roz chipke ata tha...aur haam log bohut kareeb hogye the...phir muje use yeh bhi pata chala tha ki jab woh paanch saal ka tha tab uski ammi , I mean Rashid Sahab ki dusri biwi guzar gayi thi.Maine bohut mehnat ki aur ab finally ek bada Wedding Planner ban gaya huo...woh bhi sirf ammi ki liye kyunki jab Rashid Sahab chale gaye the tab muje nikah aur pyar mai bilkul trust nahi tha par ammi ne kaha yeh tumhara dream hai aur tum kisi ke liye ise tuth ne nahi doge and completed while having tears in his eyes and Geet was also crying and gave him a friendly hug.

Acha theek hai ab yeh rona dhona chodo aur yeh bato ki woh zoya kaun hai said Geet smirking and also to cheer up his mood.Zoya Wo-woh-actually ammi ne batya na said Asad. Oh god Asad kitna sochne lege ho tum bolne se phele...said geet laughing and asad looked away. Acha vaise maine tumhare ankhon mai dekha she said winking.Kya he replied.Pyaar Mr.Khan. Kya bakwas bol rahi hai geet he said shocked.Bakwas nahi sach aur ab apni bestie se jhooth bol raha hai?? kya hua agar itne saal sath nahi thae phir bhi muje abhi bhi pata chal jata hai ki tumhare dimag mai kya chal raha she said grinning.

Geet you are thinking wrong mai Miss.Farooqui se pyar no way he replied. Asad miya maine kab kaha ki tum apni Miss.Farooqui se pyaar karte ho she said winking.Nahi wo- woh actu- actually he said words stuck in his mouth.Bas bhi kar tu jaise use dekhte hai na aur jab tum dono dance kar rahe thae , ache se pata chal raha thae ki tum dono kitna pyaar karte ho ek dusre se. she said remembring there dance.Mai use like i mean pyar nahi he was cut off.

Why dont u admit yaar said geet faking anger.
Okiee fine mai use pyaar karta hu said Asad.Babaji aapka bohut bohut thanku. finally is pagal ne bol diya said geet looking up in the sky.In all these the two didnt knew that someone eavsdropping to their last part of converstaion and was totally shocked.After that Geet and Maan bid farwell and invited Dilshad for there wedding.

To Be Contd

Hope u all liked...It was the longest update i hav written...and pleaseee do like and comment i really write it only for u all...and soo i need something for my inspiration and dats only ur comments...!!

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Love

Nisha❤️








Edited by nisha150 - 11 years ago
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Yipee! I am first! Yay! Shouting with joy!



I am enjoying the story a lot

It is one of my fav stories

Well comming to the update

It was awesome

Asad and Zoya ka eyelock

Asad praising Zoya's work and thinking that she'll drive him crazy was so nice



Then Zoya and Asad ka dance

Loved how everyone planned to get them to do so



Finally night time and the story of the past... it was really sad... I cried along with the story

Geet knows that Asad is in love and asked him to admit it... yay...

Totally enjoyable

The dialogues 👏

Perfect work


looking forward to the next update eagerly


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