VM FF || DIL MIL GAYE #6 | CH 92 N 93 on PG 141 - Page 47

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Posted: 11 years ago



thank u... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cutiepie2244

Awww i just love the update..

Mohit n pragati scene was awesome..
Loved it alot..

Sanjana..




thank u sanjana... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jayprabu

Nice update. I hope Mohit moves on . Why Naina didn't go with Maan ? I feel something missing there. Pleas continue soon.



thank u... 😊
u never know whats wrong wid naina... or is everything fine... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kokubaba

superb update...hope virman n kasak go to trip nenjoy...please dont cancel it nainaa...




thank u n it will not cancel... promise 😃
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Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Awesome update..
Loved it..



thank u... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhYA_123

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVE KASAK VERY MUCH. SO CUTE SHE IS. PLZ DON'T CANCEL VIRMAN PLANS.😊😊😊




thank u sandhya... 😊 their plan will not b cancelled... 😊
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thank u khushi... 😊
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CHAPTER 79
~~ kuch bhi tere vaaste
RECAP : virat informs vanshika about his plan of taking kasak to a hotel, as she demanded and he will not cancel the plan because that would upset kasak. vanshika tells him to go on with his plan. rishabh talks to maan and his mom.
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mera teeth... mera teethhh...
manvi : its okk kasu... it happens baby...
kasak : kaise toot gaya... mummaaa...
kasak again looked at the broken tooth in her tiny hands and continued crying. she was yelling at the top of her voice from the past one hour.
manvi : it happens baby... now you will get new teeth...
kasak : i dont want new one... isko paste kar dete hain...
manvi : teeth paste nahi hote baby... kasu cmon...
kasak : ab main kya karun mumma...??? everyone will laugh at me...
manvi : no one will laugh... only special kids loose old teeth and get new one...
kasak : jhoothhh... aisa nahi hota...
manvi : kasak... first lets get out of the bathroom baby...
kasak pouted her lips and ran out of the bathroom and manvi followed her. kasak stood in front of the mirror and looked at herself.
kasak : its ugly mumma...
manvi : listen to mumma honey... you know what...
kasak : what...
manvi : at night we will keep this teeth under your pillow and the tooth goddess will come and replace it... then you will get a new teeth... sparkling white teeth...
kasak : tooth goddess...
manvi : yeah a beautiful fairy... like an angel...
kasak : when will she come...???
manvi : at night when you are sleeping...
kasak : she will not sleep at night...
manvi : hmm... no...
kasak : will she die then...???
manvi : no... fairies and angels dont die baby...
kasak : pakka new teeth ayega na...???
manvi : pakka ayega...
kasak : okk...
manvi : now go and keep it under your pillow...
kasak : now...???
manvi : yes now...
kasak : mumma you keep it na...
manvi : kasu... learn doing things on your own baby...
kasak : no... mujhe teeth mein pain hai...
virat : come to me my baby... we will go and keep it... agar ye gum gaya na toh aise hi ghumna like an old lady...
kasak : old lady... 😲
virat : hmm... a lady with no teeth...
kasak : no no no no... 🤢
kasak ran out of the room and manvi and virat giggled looking at each other. they knew it will be difficult but having each other beside will surely make it an easy task all together...
manvi was packing the suitcases when kasak came and sit in front of her with her mouth open.
manvi : what are you doing kasak...????
kasak said nothing and just waved her hands in air.
manvi ; hello... kasu... what is wrong...????
kasak : dad ne bola god ko pray karna padhega if i want a new teeth...
manvi : huh...???
kasak : haan... open your mouth and move hands up and down...
manvi : dad told you this...??? 😡
kasak : hmmm...
virat : hahaha... pagal ladki... 😆
manvi : virat you fooled her... she was fanning her hands in the air while her mouth open... you are the heights yaar...
kasak : mujhe pagal banaya... mummaaa...
manvi : this is not fair virat...
virat : arrey i did it for fun...
kasak : mujhe fool bna diya... aur mera teeth bhi toot gya hai... 😲
kasak again started crying and manvi placed her hands on her waist. she wondered whether it was right to swap the roles or not... she wanted to give a second thought to her so called pact with virat.
manvi : this is getting difficult virat...
virat : okk i m sorry... kasak... mela baccha...
kasak : dont talk to me... mumma...
manvi : kasu baby papa is sorry... it was a game... just for fun...
kasak : for fun... pakka...???
virat : 100 per cent pakka... aaja meri pari... pizza khana hai...???
kasak : hmm...
virat : come then lets go... tab tak mumma will complete packing...
kasak : main jaun mumma...????
manvi : baby jaana... bring one for me also...
virat : no mrs. vadera... have healthy food...
kasak : haha... 😆 😆
soon after virat and kasak returned, they got ready and zoomed towards their hotel.
kasak : mumma...
manvi : hmm...
kasak : lunch kar liya...???
manvi : no baby...
virat : why...???
kasak : why...???
manvi : because mere mood nahi tha... is that fine...???
ksdsk : yes...
virat : no... you should have eaten something manvi...
kasak : haan ab hotel jaa ke khana padega...
manvi : haan i will eat after sometime... promise...
virat : okk...
scene shifts
rishabh : what is your problem exactly...????
madhu : did i say anything to you...???
risshabh : better say things to me but please for god sake, stay in bed... you need rest...
madhu : i just went downstairs to the garden... thats it...
rishabh : you know what its a waste of time... you will never listen to me... you always do what you feel is right...
madhu : same applies on you...
rishabh : used to apply...
madhu : yeah... used to apply because now i dont tell you what to do n what not...
rishabh : why do you always want to get into an argument with me...???
madhu : because thats the only entertainment i have in my life jaanu...
rishabh : wish i could say that too...
madhu : arghhh... why did you come into my bedroom...????
rishabh : because its OUR bedroom... you stay in my bedroom... ting tong...
madhu : haha... funny... but where were you last night around 2 am...???
rishabh : i was talking to mom and maan was also there...
madhu : maan... and naina...???
rishabh : she is back in canada only... i wonder why...
madhu : yeah... i mean pati ko akele kahin jaane dene ka time hi nahi hai aajkal... its not safe...
rishabh : given there can be many wannabe women around...
madhu : excuse me...????
rishabh : excused... and here take your medicine... you shouldnt miss it in any case...
madhu : atleast get me something to eat first... its lunchh time if you didnt realise...
rishabh ; sorry... will send some soup and salad for you...
madhu : thanks you...
scene shifts
swamini : should i go or we will go when you return...????
pragati : ask bhai mom...
swamini ; but when will you be back...????
oragati : i have a meeting and then i will be free after that...
swamini : okk... i will wait for you then...
pragati : okk mom... by the way why dont you ask bhai when he will be free...
swamini : okk i will call him.
swamini calls mohit
mohit : hello...
swamini : mohit...
mohit : mom... kuch kaam tha...???
swamini : khana khaya...??? teri favourite dish pack ki hai...
mohit : woh i already had lunch with a client...
swamini : ohh...
mohit : mom mujhe kaam karna hai -
swamini ; accha accha... kab tak ghar aoge...??? aaj bhabhi ke ghar jaana hai... yaad hai na...
mohit : yaad hai par i will come directly at dinner time... bahut kaam hai...
swamini : hmm... okk...
mohit : bye...
swamini : bye...

scene shifts
kasak : where is my room...???? 😕
virat : yeh toh raha...
kasak : no no no... its your room dad... mera room kahan hai...????
manvi : baby yahi room hai...
kasak : matlab mumma...
vrat : ek hi room hai... you me n mumma...
manvi : yes... hum saath mein rahege na...
kasak : okk... arrey haan yahan pe agar bhoot hua toh...
manvi : yes thats why only one room... akele room mein agar bhoot ne apko scare kia toh...
kasak : no mumma...
kasak held manvi's hand and hid behind her.
virat : oye darpok (coward) ladki... bhoot voot kuch nahi hota...
kasak : hota hai...
virat : nahi hota...
kasak : hota hai...
virat : nahi hota...
kasak : hota hai dad...
manvi : haan virat hota hai...
manvi mouthed a please to virat asking him to end this argument right now.
virat : okk hota hai... now lemme order something for my beautiful wife...
kasak : main toh daughter hoon... wife nahi... haha...
virat : i mean lemme order soemthing for your mumma... not for you...
kasak : why not me...???
manvi : because you just had pizza sweetheart...
kasak : mumma dad ne khaya tha mera saara pizza...
virat : haww... jhoothi...
kasak : sachiii...
manvi : ok ok order something for my kasu also... like a glass of chocolate milk...
kasak : no chocolate milk... order pepsi...
manvi : no pepsi kasu... its milk or its nothing...
kasak : nothing then...
virat : haha... okkk... as you say...

scene shifts
mohit : yes... 😃
mohit smiled looking at the laptop screen.
rishabh : mohit...???
mohit : s...sir... yo.. you here...
rishabh : its my office... remember...????
mohit : yes... i mean... why did you come...??? you should have called me...
rishabh : no no its fine... i had to come mohit...
mohit : ohh...
rishabh : by the way what are you doing here in my cabin...??? needed anything...???
mohit : no... i mean yes... some detail about the project i am working on...
rishabh : so got it...???
mohit : yes... yes...
rishabh : okk...
mohit : what will you have...?? should i send some coffee...???
rishabh : hmm... yeah... i would like it...
mohit : in a minute sir...
rishabh : thank you...
mohit : your welcome sir...
rishabh : mohit...
mohit : yes...
rishabh : hmm... nothing...
mohit : okk...

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the response is hell disappointing. i think i was being stupid thinking i should complete the story before i leave...
but never mind...
i will post the synopsis soon...
bbye guys...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome
for update
will read in minutes...
Superb
like it
fab part
Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago
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The family was lovely. Awesome update!

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