ZaYa Drabble ~ Finding home

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I decided to leave him, for his own good.

I wiped my tears and looked towards the train clock. my train will come anytime now, destination Bhopal. though its my home, my Abba's home, for some reason it didn't feel like going home at all.

I saw the date, and felt more tears threatening to fall. its 1 month, 30 days after my Nikah with him. he had challenged me that I will leave after 30 days, which am doing. but I am not leaving him because of that challenge. the irony of situation made me chuckle, and I wiped my nose, taking deep breath.

the train entered platform and I got up from bench, feeling my heart sinking. weird enough, my one leg was ready to run away from train station, ready to go back, but I stopped it, totally confused at my own heart. I took my luggage and walked toward train when . . .

"Aliya !!!!"

the voice echoed behind me and I just froze in my track. not believing my own ears, I turned, only to get the biggest shock of my life.

why on earth Zain Abdullah is here? and why is he looking so relieved...wait, now he is glaring at me!!

he come toward me rather furiously, shooting daggers, then shouted on top of his voice, creating a scene.

"What do you think of yourself? tumne ghar chodne ke bare mein Socha bhi kaise? mujhe chod ke jaa rahi ho?"

I tried to calm him down "Zain.." but he continued.

" Jab chaha biwi hone ka haq jata diya, jab chaha chod diya !!! Tumhari manmani ab aur nahi chalegi" he caught hold my wrist, taking me by surprise.

" Zain!!" I said rather too loudly and he looked at me "tumhe yahan nahi hona chahiye tha. tumhari tabiyat..."

he cut me before I even finish "ab bada khayal araha hain meri tabiyat ka, Mamu ki bhanji !"

"Zain! "

"Ab chal rahi ho ya aur scene create karne ka irada hain?? waise to bada biwi hone ka haq jatati ho, aur jo tumne Shauhar ke izazat ke bina ye faisla liya hain uska kya???"

I flushed, trying to retort back something, anything, and saw many onlookers were looking at us.

"Chalo" and with that I felt a pull toward him and next moment we were heading toward station's exit. I heard the train's whistle behind me, its leaving, but I didn't care much. I don't know why Zain came here or what's going in his head. I just know one thing.

I have found my home, a home where he wants me to stay.




So, does it look decent enough? first time tried to write on ZaYa and its pretty much the same what I want to see on screen. The promo is superb ⭐️ and am super excited for the epi to air.

Give your valuable Likes and comments Please 😳

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One-Of-A-Kind thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was wonderful! Do continue n p.m me 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cute one totally ZaYa style.keep writing more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aniiee

It was awesome!!❤️

thanks 😛

Originally posted by: KaBhi-FAN

It was wonderful! Do continue n p.m me 😳

not sure about continuation 😛 thanks for liking it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riya.S.007

thanks 😛

not sure about continuation 😛 thanks for liking it


but u should continue it! Its awesum! If u have tym, then do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It is Awesome..
Keep Writing on Zaya.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I don't visit here very often but if you write something and I don't respond to it, ha! That's unlikely!
Marvelous Ri! Once again you've managed to steal my heart with portraying the emotions Aliya is feeling. The ending with the train's whistle signifying that it's leaving almost shows a new beginning for the couple.

Nice one, Ri!

P.S.
Am writing up the reply to your PM. Shoot me later. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is actually what I'm expecting in this scene! Thanks for writing what I wanted 👏 It's simply wonderful!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Decent? It's awesome.
Continue it if you can dear. :)

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