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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a

Hey navi😃 Hi Andy😃

How are you, Great😉!! I know you are irritated with me for not able to comment. But u DID comment😉. Its my mistake , I know it. you must be thinking that I have time to talk to you, but no time to comment na.Oh my!! U read my mind😲😆. I am so sorry😭 Forget it Andy!

Any way I came to give you the comment that was pending for a long time... and I am adopting the kiss style for the first and last time... I know u said it was 150 words shorter than your normal size ... but still looks HUGE to me😕.

Great update navi, Thank you 🤗 finally everyone came to their senses about the insane game they were playing with manyta... 😳 Well , how would they know that they were doing the wrong thing?

So good to see unnathi and vijay... U are only the 2nd person that mention about themCry. he he he.. missed vijay loads. That car scene was funny Yep , laughed whilst writing it😆.

You know I had great expectations of the jealousy scene especially with arnav around, but you cut his part...HE didn't pay me enough for a longer air-time😉! so felt sad...😭 So sorry about that.

The pool party was awesome... Really😲? he he he uday along with slightly clad girls to get manyta out of her depressed self He wanted her to come and pull him away.

I always wondered how that doctor asked them to follow such a treatment method... I thought I was unaware of some treatment method around, so did not ask... that doctor seriously needs to get his brains checked. "HER" brain - it's a lady😆. And his ideas lost a family their support pillar. Send him to jail. I was thinking of having her medical licence revoked. now I was wondering what would have happened if manyta had taken that step unable to see her love in the hands of MANY women??? I know she wont do it, because the story wont move forward without the leads. I could've taken the lead part Embarrassed ... (no problem there😉)

I was analyzing that scene were manyata lands in arnav's hands... that guy must have looked so hot... I don't think so😕. and if I was manyta I would have fallen for arnav... but that scene brought the angry young man uday back... a furiously jealous version😆. the way he wanted to change the geometry Geography😉! of arnav's face(bad boy , uday)was really funny... it was jealousy at its best... aw!! What would have happened if manyta spent some more time in arnav's hands???? We would have seen a cold blooded murder!!! Yep - and I should've given it to you to write😈.

And I loved uday's dialogue..."I don't like anyone touching my things!!!!!" Classic , na😉? he he he... that line was sooo romantic... uday where did you learn to say such dialogues???Don't u know (I taught him😉). You really know how to make manayta's heart flutter ... and mine too.

Aw!!! Manyta felt good about that possessiveness na... Yep , it gave her strengthEmbarrassed.

So udita is going to investigate the giant "tub" with her duck.. Correct! where is her nani... which fool leaves a child unguarded??? Well , Udita snuck off when the nani was not looking. Gr!!! I just cant imagine how careless her parents are!!! Her parents are BUSY! and why do you always want to hurt udita. WHO me??😲? Poor girl!! Has to suffer a lot because the writer gets her kicks putting her in danger... 😡😡😡😡 U got THAT right 🤣.

Anyway looking forward to see the end of the jealousy dramaOh THAT has ended already😉. so that manveer can have a wonderful time together... blush. Don't BLUSH yet - I'm not putting them in bed just yet😳. Looking forward for the jai veer scene. It's in chapter6Embarrassed. Wonder what udita was doing there After this many months ... you're STILL wondering😕??

Next time will return to my ordinary length... I don't know if I'm happy about that😕😉😆!

Do continue soon Tomorrow night😛.

Thanks for the pm You're welcomeEmbarrassed

Love you❤️ Love u too❤️

Thank u for this spectacular comment Andy 🤗 ... loved it loadsEmbarrassed!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I edited me comment Di.
Sorry for making everyone wait.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Kritika-

sorry for late comment NO problem😊 . today my examz over so finally bada wala comment Awww, so sweet😳.

i love manyta n unnati conversation ... I'm happy that u enjoyed that😃. lol when she said LOVE BITE i just brust out laugh manyta's rection i love it Poor Manyata got embarrassed😆. n than pool party kuch zyada nhi ho gaya 😛 uday ka tharaki pan ... lol😆😆 but i like it ...Me too😉. n thn my fav screen ever lol when manyta was disbalanced n arnav save her n uday luk at both of them wid blood shot eyez ... thats called jealousy OMG my fav screen ever ...Yep , my favourite also. lol uday srsly arnav ka khoon kar deta ... lol par arnav bechare ki galti thodna thi yr vo tho sirf bacha rha tha bas use kya ptha tha volcano futne wala hai lol 🤣 Lucky fute nahin😆! i love it chaa gayi guru bhoth jkhass tha ye 👏 Thank you 🤗 . waiting for next update EmbarrassedEmbarrassed I'll post the update tomorrow night😃.

Thanx 4 the lovely comment Kritika 🤗 .
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princessSonia

Thnks fr d note Di...

Or else I wuld hve dead of curiosity...😆 Yep , I know ... therefore I posts a note😉!

Originally posted by: ...anju...

mindblowing navi. Thanks Anju 🤗 .
pool party was superb. Glad u enjoyed that!
continue soon navi Sure ... BTW - everything alright ? U haven't been around lately.

Originally posted by: mrs.K

I edited me comment Di. Thanks for keeping your word Kavya 😳!

Sorry for making everyone wait. .... and I'm sorry about the threatening PMs u received (Suhaan told me)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rockstar4eva55

Navi!!!!!!!! 😳 Hi Alisha😃.
Awesome Updates!!!! 👏 Thank you 🤗
My exams got over today!!! 😊 Yay!! 😳 I'm so happy for youEmbarrassed.
Now I can comment as much as I like on your marvellous updates!! :** Awesome!!
Coming to the latest update,That part was Awesome when Uday became possessive about Manyata 😆
Haye! Manyata actually blushed!! 😆 Who wouldn't😉?
Ranjana 😡 I don't like her much except for the fact that she is trying to help Manyata
out of her depression. 🥱 Shame , poor Ranjana.
Why did Uday kneel down!?!?!?!? 😕 That's a secret😉.
Kahin woh propose karne toh nahin jaa raha hain!? 😭 Ya usse business main
parter banaane jaa raha hai? 😲 Dunno - let's wait for the new update😆.
God,this is so damn confusing. 😕
Lol,so I finally commented! 😉 Yay! 😉 😛 Yippee😃.
Ekdum Jhakaas yaar!!! 👏 Thank you Embarrassed.
Keep it up and thanks for the pms 😳 Welcome😊.

Lots of Love ❤️,
Alisha

Thanks for the wonderful comment Alisha 🤗 ... and , welcome back😃!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.K

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Edited : Hi Di Hi Kavya😊. - so sorry for da late edit. Me uncle passed on and we weren't at home, only came back yesterday. I know - sorry to hear about your uncle.
Chappy was great , as always👏. Thank you 🤗
Unnati is the best character - so sweet and sensbile , always helping her brother and bhabhi. I love her for giving awesome advice to Manyata. She's a sweet-heart😳!!
AwwJealous Uday was just so cute. Yep - he is ADORABLE😳!! He don't like people touching his things😆. So possessive, he is. Just love him so much😳. Hmmm, me too☺️.
Oh man , that doctor was a fraud, she could've had Manyata killed ,Lucky it didn't go THAT far😉. thank God unati discovered da truth and informed Uday. Right!
Who went in the pool? was it Udita? Maybe it was den Manyata will go in to rescue her , den she can get out of da depression like dat! She's depressed bcause she couldn't save Virat, maybe when she saves Udita - she be cured😃. Now why didn't u tell me THAT before I wrote the new chapter - it's an awesome thought Kavya👏.
I don't think Uday is proposing to anyone, Manyata just misunderstood. U might be right😕.
Amazing update di, Thanks Kavi😃.
update soon. Shortly😉!
Thanks for da PM - its deleted😊. Excellent😊.

Thanks for the wonderful comment Kavya 🤗 .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you so much to the following 66 people for LIKING the previous chapter 🤗 ...
CHAPTER : 6 :
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- someone fell in the pool. "NOOO" - 2 people yelled out simultaneously. The 2 people in question were ... 1) Rachel , when Manyata charged at her and Ranjana ... eventually taking Ranjana into the water with her! And the Second was Udita - when her plan of going to the water, was thwarted by her own father. When Uday saw Udita nearing the pool - he halted the announcement he was making, and bent down to pick her up.
Manyata had caused a major chaos, when she "attacked" Ranjana. All the ladies, were running hither-tither and the media was going wild in clicking photos. Unnati and Jai immediately took charge of the situation and escorted everyone out ... and had to use force, in pushing the journo's out!
He's my husband - you b*tch! Mine, mine, mine - Uday is only mine! I'm not letting u take him away - you got that , Manyata screamed as she held Ranjana's head, below the water. Uday was dealing with his kicking-&-screaming daughter and couldn't go to help Ranjana. Luckily Vijay Bhai recovered from his earlier "run" , and came to lighten Uday's hands.
Dada - you're just standing here? Go on - get Bhabhisa out of there, before she kills Ranjana , Unnati urged her brother ... who was only standing and watching 2 LADIES SUPPOSSEDLY FIGHTING FOR HIM! Did u see Jiji - she was like a bull in full pursuit, Jai remarked. Yeah - I think it was Ranju's red-bikini that attracted her, Uday chuckled.
Unnati and Jai winked at each other, before pushing Uday in the pool. Rachel, who was in the pool trying to help Ranjana , was grateful; when she saw Uday pull Manyata off her lover. Yep, Ranjana was a lesbian and Rachel was her partner ... it was Rachel that was going to go down on 1 knee and propose - but Manyata ruined the special moment; when she assumed Uday to be asking the very important question. Leave me Uday ... I'm gonna murder her tonight , Manyata yelled as Uday got her out of the water. Ranjana gasped in trying to catch her breath - once out of the pool. Your wife is crazy Uday , Rachel fumed. YOU are crazy ... u think u can have a 3'some with MY HUSBAND AND I'M JUST GONNA BE QUIET - u got another thing coming! , Manyata tightly grasped Rachel's hair and was pulling at it with all her might.
That's enough! , Uday shouted and everyone went silent. He then carried his wife off as Unnati and Jai attended to Ranjana and Rachel. What 3'some was she talking about? , Rachel asked and Jai and Unnati shrugged their shoulders.
Put me down UdayVeer ,Manyata kicked , scratched and even bit him. Ouch! I'll do it again if u don't put me down , she threatened. As soon as Uday obeyed, Manyata darted towards the door - now I'm gonna throw those 2 Tarts out of MY HOUSE! Suddenly, she turned around to face Uday : After I sort them out ... YOU'RE NEXT! Uday's smirk unexpectedly appeared ... I think my Princess is back!
What's that smirk for? Don't think I'm letting u off scot-free. I know what u were doing BEHIND my back and in FRONT OF MY BACK ... you're gonna pay for all your sins UdayVeer , she pointed her finger at him ... which he bit! OUCH! What the Hell? It's called payback Princess ... U bit me ; then I bite you ... Uday had Manyata cornered.
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KNOCK , KNOCK ... instead of actually knocking, Jai said the words; opened the door and entered. Oops - sorry ... am I interrupting? , she asked Manveer. YES - YOU ARE! , Manyata shouted but Uday over-rided her: No Jai - not interrupting. What can I do for you? Something needs u immediately! , Jai made signs with her eyes for Uday; but was completely unreadable to Manyata.
Manyata caught Uday's arm : You're not going anywhere! , she commanded ; but in a breaking tone. He immediately understood her fear and reassured her: I'll be back Princess - just give me 5 minutes. Manyata nodded unconvincingly . Uday gently cupped her face and kissed her fore-head : I promise!
In the mean-time Princess ... why don't u take a shower; it'll warm u up, Uday said just before leaving with Jai. Manyata obeyed as she felt it to be a good idea. She felt different today ... from the time she entered that pool - something changed; but she did not know what!
Jai led Uday to Udita. The child was not a happy camper. She always got what she wanted - but today, things didn't go her way! The girl sat on the bed with her arms folded across her chest ... giving Unnati and Vijay , angry glares. Doesn't she remind u of Manyata Bhai , Vijay nudged Unnati; who gave him a back-handed smack on his arm.
Hi Sweet-heart , Uday sat next to his daughter ... but she moved away. Today she decided ... she's not going to talk to her Paapa again - EVER AGAIN! I'm sorry Pari , Uday held his ears and apologised ... but it didn't work. How can Paapa make Pari talk and smile again? You can ask for anything u want ... but no going into the pool! Udita smiled and made a deal with her father. Bye Dada - it's late ... we'll be leaving , Unnati and Vijay left.
Manyata came out of the shower, expecting Uday to be in the room ... afterall he did promise that he'd be back in 5 minutes; but there was no sign of him. I wonder if he's with those w*ores , the thought crossed her mind. She decided to look for him - HERSELF! And when she'd find him ... GOD HELP HIM! Ud ... Manyata called for Uday; but stopped mid-way, when she saw that he was still with Jai and both were walking towards 1 of the rooms in the new wing.
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Yeah Baby ... oh yeah ... again; do it again! Go higher Baby. HIGHER ... you can do it! More , more ... Oh God; yeah. Ya , Mmm , Mmm , Ya , Yeah ... YES! YES! , Jai yelled out her satisfied moans. Tears rolled down Manyata's face as she stood outside the closed door; to the room , where all the action was taking place. She had seen Uday and Jai go into that particular room , when she followed them... so there was no chance that Jai was with Jagat, instead of Uday! NO MORE! , she decided and opened the door to the most horrific sight.
"HORRIFIC" - it definitely was! The comforter from the bed was on the floor ... so were the 2 pillows. The bed-sheet and night-frill , had become undone. Jai was on her back on the bed, gasping and giggling at the same time, and on top of her was ...
Maasi - more times! , Udita was on top of Jai, but urging her to get up - so that both of them could jump on the bed again! THAT was the deal, little Udita made with her father; in order for her to talk to him again. She wanted to jump on the bed in "BOYYA'S" room!
Mamma - cum jump! Udita invited her mother when she saw her ... but Manyata was frozen to the spot. She was in a state of shock - this was the first time, she ever entered this room. Sure - she knew the room was Virat's ... but she never had the courage to open the door and look inside. Tonight, she stumbled inside, when paranoia got the better of her ... and she mistook Jai's cheering for Udita ; to be something else!
Princess , Uday called to Manyata and slowly she looked at him : Virat's room? Just as Uday nodded in reply ... Manyata burst into tears. Come Baby - let's go jump somewhere else , Jai took Udita away, leaving Manveer. Uday held Manyata close to his chest as she relived Virat's death ; and grieved over his memory.
Uday had destroyed everything in Virat's room when Manyata miscarried ... but when he came to know of Manyata's condition - he restored it to how it should be. Perhaps - Manyata could get the closure she needed from here!
And as usual , Uday was right! Manyata finally felt the PEACE that was evading her all these months. I think he would've been crawling now , Manyata laughed as she imagined a Baby on all 4's on the floor. All night long , Manyata remained in Uday's arms whilst in bed - talking about all the "could have", "would have" and "should haves" ... till eventually both fell off to sleep.
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Good-morning Princesses , Uday kissed Udita, but as he was going to kiss his wife; she moved away. He watched patiently, as Manyata fed the Baby her cereal; then asked : Where are the servants? I gave them the day off! Then who will make me break-fast? Manyata glared at him in relpy - and Uday understood that his "punishment" had officially begun.
Princess - I was thinking ... it's such a nice day today, let's go to the zoo. Keen on seeing YOUR FAMILY , huh Uday? , Manyata smirked. Uday laughed along before replying : Yeah - it's been a while since I saw the in-laws . Manyata did not have a come-back reply!
Come on Princess - what have I done to deserve this coldness from you? Like u don't know. I don't , please tell me. Let's see : You don't want a divorce ... yet u want us to lead separate lives; you don't want us to keep a cat ... yet u want us to have a dog ; You were roaming all around London with your girlfriend ; You bring her to stay in our house; We made love ... and u called it S*X; You were rude to my friend Arnav ... but I must be cordial with all your bimbo's; You had a 3'some under MY ROOF ; you were giving the media TOO MUCH DIRT TO SPLATTER and you are STILL my HUSBAND ... yet u were going to propose to Ranjana! Uday had his arms crossed over his chest, whilst he smirked; listening to his wife's "complaint list" ... but had to take cover fast when a vase was coming at him in high velocity. And lastly - u said you'd be back in 5 minutes last night ... what the Hell took u so long?
Paapa - cally me! , Udita came at the perfect time and asked to be carried. Uday took her in his arms - and , whilst talking to the Baby; he attempted to answer a few of Manyata's queries. Sweety-Pie ... didn't u tell Mamma what you've been up to? Why did u tell her that u were going to dive into the pool ... but Paapa caught u in time! If u told Mamma, then she'd know that Paapa bent down for you; and NOT TO PROPOSE TO RANJANA AUNTY! And why didn't u tell Mamma - that we both were busy making a deal ... that's why I couldn't return in 5 minutes! Manyata listened carefully as Uday explained everything indirectly. And we HAVE TO keep the dog now - as that's your KAAKASAHIB! Manyata pursed her lips together and stared at the floor ... he wasn't supposed to know that! Ummm , what else? Oh ya - Arnav touched PAAPA'S TOY ... therefore Paapa was rude to him. By now , Manyata was blushing hard. Tell Mamma - that she's the only woman for me ... no-one else could even match up! Udita covered her mouth as she yawned - once again ; her father was boring her. She wiggled her body, showing that she wanted to be put down and as soon as Uday left her ... she ran off!
It was suddenly time for Uday to tell Manyata about her depression and the "act" he was told to do; in order to make her better again. Manyata - there was NO 3'some ... there was NO AFFAIR. Manyata didn't react. Princess - when I had amnesia ... I couldn't cheat on you; there is NO CHANCE OF ME DOING IT NOW! Yep - he had a point there! You deceived me? I had to. Why would u do something like that? You were sick ... we thought doing this drama would make u better again. Sick? What sick? Don't talk rubbish Uday ... do I look sick to you?
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Urgghh - I feel terrible ... Jai wandered into the same room where Manveer were, interrupting them. She had stayed the night with them ... but spent all morning in the bathroom - throwing up! Manyata got all worried about her sister and sat beside her, rubbing her back. You'll be fine Jai.
No Jiji ... it's my second month - I got 7 more months to go! , Jai complained - but by then, Manyata had already disappeared from the room.
Ok - there it is Ch6 (1 day early😆)
Please leave back your LIKEs and comments😳.
Next update - May be late as I won't be around much, till April.
A reminder - RES posts are not allowed😡.
Edited by ...navina... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi navi😳

It was a total surprise for me to see you update early Sunday morning... not even a word did you breath the night before did you?????very bad!!!(avoid all that, am just fussy. And you know the reason, and after 8 days I could be totally cranky)😭

Anyway I am keeping my comment short. Am gona be so busy for the next 3 days , I don't know when I can comment, and to avoid all that confusion and complaints that we had during the last update I am gona do my work first, he he he 😉

Thanks so much navi for reserving my place... it was a total surprise!!!!!!! Morning I was like , "er who opened my account???" and after your message, I felt sooo happy😳

Coming to the update. It was mind blowing, really manyta was so wild.. and the jaiveer scene, totally wow!!!! It was sooo great...and ranjana's mess is finally solved...😃

So I was right about uday , he went down to take udita in his arms, na. good girl navi, you did a great job, not putting udita in the pool. You are really a goo-girl... so It was udita and racheal who screamed na. poor girls, manyta ruined their engagement night na.. how unromantic are you manyta, go get some classes from uday will you???😉

Poor ranjana, she would have cursed the day when she agreed to help uday... she would never have agreed to their insane idea, if she even had a tiny idea that her engagemen t would be ruined and manyta would try to drown her

Loved the way mnayta attacked ranjana. The 2 ladies landed in the pool and would have fought to death , sorry,😆 manyta would have singlehandedly MURDERED RANJANA... loved that angry manyta when she said she would deal with uday soon. And uday dialogue about ranjana's bikini... wow!!! Laughed lots

So uday promised manyata he would be back in 5 minutes and he did not come. With all that happening its only natural for mnayta to doubt uday...😭

So udita is big enough to make deals with her dad. Let she be 3 or4 years old then she will rule her father(which she is doing even now😆). So she wants to jump from the bed in "boyya's room" na. so I was right , udita was with them during the jaiveer scene... he he he

So the zoo scene was so funny!!! I remember how my parents say the same dialogue, like when my dad watch animal planet and mama wants to watch something else, mama says, so your watching your family video and my dad says, now don't talk bad about my inlaws... he he he...

So manyta misunderstood what was happening between them ,,, she must have died a million deaths hearing jai's excited screams na.. naughty jai, you are up to no good are you?

So manyta finally went to virat's room, and uday did restore it after destroying it na😭

Loved the way uday told manyta the truth talking indirectly to manyta... poor child must have been so bored hearing the talks she barely understood😆

Are you bringing arnav back? please, I will pay for his screen space... ok, so is it a deal???

When are we knowing the truth of how uday stayed in his home unknown to all?? And did I mention that kaka sahib part, he he he, manyta would have thought it was better if she was invisbe than face uday na

And why did manuta leave jai without listening to her? Does she think uday has any connection with jai's condition??? Na, just saying because manyta has a twisted mind...

Anyway it was an awesome chapter😃 do continue soon, how about a bday treat??😉

Loved it loads, thanks for the pm and the res

Love you❤️

Edited by andy.a - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsum update ⭐️ manyata was so crazy in the water fighting with the Rs for uday and uday is so naughty; finally the truth will be out! Udita is soo cute love her. So J's pregnant? Continue soon 😃
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Hey omg that was such a adorable amazing cute UPDATE!!!
Oh i knew it was going to be Rajana😛 drowning in that pool🤣
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Aha so they are lez then😃(Thank god the drama is finish now and manyata is back to normal)
Aww that indirectly talk Uday did at the last aww that was so adorable!!
Girl i must say u should become a book writer😃
Update Soon!!!!🤗

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