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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have written a poem...
It describes kd's journey...atleast i tried showing dat...
Posting dis specially for simi di n khushi...
SO HERE I GO...

Hotheaded,ego,anger,rude...
These were d wrds people describe me through...

I cared least wat d people had to say...
All dat mattered to me...was my own way...

My burning desires..my untold drmz...
They were d closest...,People cldnt even see...

Close appeared my family,but far dey were...
Friends were there,bt i didnt care...

Den oneday whole wrld around me changed...
I wonder...
Was it d wrld..or i was at d centre stage...


It was ur talk or was ur presence...
I felt like ...i left my own prison...

Wid u i talked,walked n laughed...
Ur smile was like perfect dart...

I stopped myslf,slapped myslf internally...
Said falling for u is insane practically...

More i tried ,more i failed...
It was like my soul telling me dont u dare...

Finally i realizd its better to accept...
I was craving for u love...i dnt care abt d rest...


I know guys its nt dat gud...
Bt if u like it do comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow dear
this is so good
u write it so beautifully

keep writing

Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW WOW 👏
Its amazing , awsome , perfect and I cant even find words
you are an awsome writer and this poem is sooo good
this poem described kd's entire journey
from his denial to acceptance⭐️
plzz do write more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super likes to the poem...
Kd is a strong personality n so is your poem girl..
U have a way with words...brief concise to the point n bang on with emotions
U captured kd's character sooo well...

Thanks yaa
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shatzy kya baat hain teri poem ne meri study ki thakaan door kar di,kya karu dear IF pe jayda comments nahi kar sakti exam shuru hone wala hain,par tumhare comments hamesha padhti hoon.AT pe kabhi kabar hi aa sakti hoon,par guys aise hi post banate raha karu thaki study se raahat mile inehe padh ke.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Wow dear

this is so good
u write it so beautifully

keep writing

Geet

thnx alot Geet...
Glad dat u liked it...
I ll try to write more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prince6495

WOW WOW 👏

Its amazing , awsome , perfect and I cant even find words
you are an awsome writer and this poem is sooo good
this poem described kd's entire journey
from his denial to acceptance⭐️
plzz do write more

thnx alot stavan...
Really means alot...
Thnx alot for appreciating...
I ll try to write more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: sneha02

Super likes to the poem...

Kd is a strong personality n so is your poem girl..
U have a way with words...brief concise to the point n bang on with emotions
U captured kd's character sooo well...

Thanks yaa

thnx alot Neha...
Glad dat u liked it...
Thnx alot for appreciating...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveukisha

Shatzy kya baat hain teri poem ne meri study ki thakaan door kar di,kya karu dear IF pe jayda comments nahi kar sakti exam shuru hone wala hain,par tumhare comments hamesha padhti hoon.AT pe kabhi kabar hi aa sakti hoon,par guys aise hi post banate raha karu thaki study se raahat mile inehe padh ke.

thnx alot yaar...
I m glad k teri thakaan utri...
Best of luck yaar...
Thnx a ton...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Shatz AH-MAZING hai...
Loved it 2 d core
Beautiful 😳

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