Hayye Anu!! Tune mera dil garden garden kar diya!!! Finally I get to live my dream and be Khushi. I get to tease Arnav and in return get all his love and adoration. Thank you darling for such a wonderful dedication, that has all my likings seamlessly blended into the story of Arnav and Khushi. 🤗
It begins with the title of this OS... my favorite song and I just loved how you have used the names of Hrithik Roshan movies into the conversations so casually. Perfectly suits a nautanki and dramebaaz person like Khushi / Minty! Haha, I can only imagine Arnav wearing that shiny friendship band!! 😆
Poor me, I have to go through so much trouble to make Arnav admit his love for me. Upar se mera OCD driving me crazy all the time! My love for Barun does not go down well with Arnav... but I love both of them equally. Loved how you have recreated the Diwali almost kiss scene... mera favorite part of IPK and gone ahead and completed it!! 😃
I loved how I lied and tried to make Arnavji jealous... using Barun Sobti as a bakra. But I do visit the malls sometimes, in the hope of finding that gorgeous man somewhere. And then Anu, you actually send Vandy, C and me on a trip to Kerala. Hayye!! It will definitely happen someday... for sure! 👍🏼
Itni koshish ke baad bhi Arnavji ne apne dil ki baat nahi kahi... then I had to get into the dhak-dhak mode and seduce him to admit his love. Anu, tune meri saari favorite cheezin add ki iss story main yaar!! Madhuri, harry potter... so brilliantly fit into the situations... Hats off to you!! ⭐️
A bad cook, a patriotic, love for fairs and shopping, loving Italian food, scared of ghosts... everything about me was just perfect... And then finally on my Birthday... my Arnavji confessed his love for me. My romantic hero, my angry young man, my workaholic husband finally admitted... 'Tum se hi...' 😳
This is exactly the way I want my Arnavji to look at me, Anu!! 😉
Edited by mints23 - 12 years ago
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Anu my darling I said this before and I am saying it again. This was beautifully written, you incorporated so many likes and habits of Mints here, the way you added the names of the movies, the song was so seamlessly done and what a compliment to Mints to be the inspiration behind such a wonderfully written story.
Loved how she tries to use the 'nuskhas' on Arnav and loved how he plays along. Right from responding to the messages and then seeing his wife dress up and then tries to entice him and just to get him to confess and he is wondering what is going on, ofcourse she has to like him...they are married ...
Loved how you added Chitra, Barun and me and our love for him and her love for him , the way you used the names of the movies she loves so effectively...it added to the story and wit and humour. A trip for us together...nice.
Loved the trip and their telephone conversation and the farak padtha hai conversation...I found it endearing...the her dance where he gets excited that it is for his pleasure and it turned out to be in honour of her favourite Madhuri...
The way she gets him to cook as she hates cooking ha ha ha ..
Loved his birthday surprise for her. Her mint cake and his love for her And their happy ever after
...loved how you used the verses of her favourite song...
All in all a super story and you wrote it so well...loved the last line and the gift ...
First of all Thank you for making me a part of your lovely story... I finished reading it just now and have to tell you how lovely it was.
I totally loved how you used the movie names in the narration and dialogues - and you really have done it so well- used it in the right places and at the right time. Purrrfecttt!!! 😊
Then I have to say thank you for making Vandy n me crazy Sobti fangirls..ooohhh-how could we resist a chance to meet him? No way! 😆
Loved the girls only holiday idea- and the way you wrote of Arnav missing Khushi was so real- I do wish we had seen more such little scenes in the show - the picture of them chatting with each other on the phone was so fitting here.
The dance for Madhuri was so so good. And this Khushi doesn't like to cook? 😲 Koi nahi- I laughed when you talked about burnt rotis and dal.
Last but not the least, I loved how Arnav makes her birthday special - planning her surprise so well, making her feel so loved.
And most of all, I loved how you incorporated all of Mints' favorite things in the story! Wonderful wonderful story, Anu Will read more of your works soon. Hugs
As I said earlier, great concept Anu.. Loved the way you used so many movie's name and how to fit there perfectly.. Awesome job! Such a cute and lovely story.. You included so many things which Mints likes or loves and that made this OS a very very beautiful dedication on her birthday. Khushi's crazy antics were hilarious and Arnav's declaration of love in the end left me awing on him, haaaye ☺️ Fantastic OS Anu, well done 👏👏
What a cute and a beautiful OS. Loved the way you added so many movie names and dialogues. Creativity i say. The ending was just perfect just like Arnav-khushi themselves.
It was a wonderful OS. Very sweet and very Minty. Loved all of Khushi's antics. It was Mints inside Khushi's body. Loved how you included Hrithik Roshan's movies and dialogues. Not only that you have included everything that Mints like. Its undoubtedly a beautiful birthday gift for Mints. Loved the ending where Arnav laid his heart out in front of Khushi. It was very romantic. Beautiful OS. Loved it :)
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