||VIRMAN||PYAR THA YA KUCH AUR * EPILOGUE * Pg 147 - Page 91

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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Liked it
Thanx 4 PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update...
plz plzzz update soon waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
virman convo was cute
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shirhid

superb update

virman convo was cute
thanx 4 pm



Thank u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi... M back with my stupid long comments here too... :).. First time commenting on this too.. 😊😊... Read ur story... This is awesome too.. Love Virat in this as usual... 😊😳.. And I love the concept... Possessiveness and love.. 😳
Now about this update.. First of all I am so liking the fact that maanvi loves him but is not admitting it... Awww... but plzzz make them ok now na... FIrst Virat was in guilt of Maanvi losing her memory and not knowing about her and Prem... But now when she knows everything an d has still married him they should b fine.. 😉😆😳...
Lol.. Anyways.. Ur update was too good.. Jealous Maanvi is always a treat to read... Hehe.. 😳😳... She is too cute in all her avatars... But jealousy always brings out the love between any couple... So is cute.. 👏😊..
The phone conversation was just too cute... they are so adorable... 😊😳.. ANd Virat troubles her more to get her back in action... 😳😳... Please make them fine soon... And show us some romance before u end it... 😭😭...
And Maanvi meeting Prem... I love Prem too but m biased towards Virat,... 😉😉... SO please no problems between Virman... Hehe.. Update soon plzzz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
manvi meeting prem hahahahhaaha😆 ab ayega maza virat is here be aware of it😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Fantastic updt yaar naina...

Loved to see the jealous, possessive side of manvi...
Jeevika and then virat too teasing her
was awsm... I enjoyed that so muchhh... 👏 Clap ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page....
Virman phone convo was entertaining too.
Uh.. oh... prem is back...
Now I guess possessive.. jealous virat will
also be back...
Hope this new turn doesnt create furthur
problems in virman shaadishuda jindagi 😕Confused ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page....
Cont asap and
thnks a lot for the pma...
Take care... tada... 😊Smile ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Fantastic updt yaar naina...

thank u lara...

Loved to see the jealous, possessive side of manvi...
Jeevika and then virat too teasing her
was awsm... I enjoyed that so muchhh... 👏 👏... im glad...
Virman phone convo was entertaining too.
Uh.. oh... prem is back...
Now I guess possessive.. jealous virat will
also be back... may be... may be not 😳
Hope this new turn doesnt create furthur
problems in virman shaadishuda jindagi 😕😕...
Cont asap and
thnks a lot for the pma...
Take care... tada... 😊😊 thnk u for the comment...




reply in maroon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update..
Felt bad for Prem..
Precap seems quite interesting..

Do pm me...


Sanjana..
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 34
WARNING : i havent been in touch with this story 🤢 🤢
manvi : di i have to go out...
jeevika : then go... who is stopping you...???
manvi : i wnat you to cover it up for me... if anyone asks where i am, tell them i have gone to meet mum...
jeevika : but where you are going mannu...???
manvi : i have some work... nothing much...
jeevika : then i can everyone that only... why to lie unnecessary...???
manvi : yeah... as if you never lied unnecessary... infact you all lied to me when i neede the most was the truth... only truth...
jeevika : wha.. what...???
manvi : yeah di... i got my memories back... i know whatever happened, how it happened and why it happened... i know what i did to prem... i know everything...
jeevika : mannu we didnt do it intentionally... we all liked prem...
manvi : but not more than virat... you all always wanted me n virat to be together and we are today... end of the topic i guess...
jeevika : it is not the end of topic...
manvi : it is... virat n i got married... we are together... we love each other but what about prem... i literally cheated on him... he thinks i made a fool of him...
jeevika : which is just non sense...
manvi : think from his point of view... what he got di... he got nothing... just betrayal... and i lost a friend like him... a gem of a person he is...
jeevika : i know he is a wonderful person but what are you going to do about it NOW...???
manvi : i am going to meet him... and i dont want virat to know about it...
jeevika : okk... dont worry...
manvi was waiting for prem in a cafe when her mobile rang.
manvi : what...???
virat : where are you manners...???
manvi : do you want something...???
virat : yeah... a kiss...
manvi : anything except that...
virat : you...
manvi : dont irritate me... i cant talk right now...
virat : why...????
manvi : because... because i.. i am busy...
virat : bcos u are lying... i know you know yourself wifey...
manvi : okk fine... im out n dont bother me for sometime...
virat : that i cant do...
manvi : listen just let me be for sometime... please i beg you...
virat : are you ok manvi...??? is anything wrong...???
manvi : im fine... nothing wrong...
virat : okk...
prem : hey...
manvi : hii...
prem : looking beautiful...
manvi : thank you...
prem : so you are happy... right...???
manvi : sort of...
prem : what does that mean...????
manvi : i cant be happy until you are happy...
prem : there is nothing like that...
manvi : thats rude...
prem : thats a fact manvi... this sort of connection is between the ones who are made for each other... as in you and virat...
manvi : prem... i.. i am sorry...
prem : its ok...
manvi : i know you did everything for me... everything possible...
prem : i dont regret it manvi... infact i love the feeling that i did something for you... though it was letting you go...
manvi : you dont need to get disheartened... someone better than me is waiting for you somewhere...
prem : someone must be waiting but definitely not better than you...
manvi : but she will not be like me... the one hwo broke your herat and betrayed your trust and love...
prem : never say that... never...
manvi : how can i not prem...??? i feel so guilty... but i couldnt let virat go... i love him... i love him from donno when... may be i loved him from the time when he held my hand for the first time, may be when he looked at me and smiled at me, may be when he first got protective about me,... i dont know prem... i honestly dont know...
prem : i know manvi... i know how it feels... i also fell in love with you when i saw you that day... exactly six months ago... the trip to college that day is something i will cherish for the rest of my life... the few first moments i spent with you catching glimpse of you every now n then from the corner of my eye...
manvi placed her hand on prem's and looked into his eyes...
manvi : prem...
prem : hmm...
manvi : can we be friends...???
prem : we are already friends...
manvi : sach...
prem : muchh... n trust me i am happy for you...
manvi : i trust you...
prem : i am happy as long as you are happy with virat but you know what the moment he hurts you or if god forbid things dont work between you guys, i will not leave the golden opportunity and will make you mine...
manvi : okk done...
prem : so thats a done, then...
manvi : yup a deal... i seriously love you prem... you are such a sweetheart...
prem : i love you too... bas ab se kabhi mat kehna ye... remember you love your husband...
manvi : hehe... yeah... i toh love him...
prem : now should i order a coffee for you...
manvi : yes... and a chocolate pastry too.,...
prem : okkk...

at home
virat : mom... bhabhiii...
jeevika : hey virat...
virat : hey... where is mom...???
jeevika : sleeping... just had a little headache...
virat : ohh n manvi...???
jeevika : gone to see mum...
virat : ohh... you didnt go...???
jeevika : i like staying here...
virat : glad to hear that... cmon lets go n see my gf n wife...
jeevika : let her be devar ji... i will make coffee for us... lets enjoy...
virat : good idea...
jeevika : i will be back in 10 minutes...
virat : okk...
jeevika prepared two cups of coffee and grilled sandwiches and prayed that manvi comes back soon. she was scared thinking what if they go to chaudhary mansion and find that manvi never turned up and virat knowing that manvi went to meet prem secretly, gave her goosebumps.
jeevika took the tray outside and gave one cup to virat.
jeevika : here is your coffe...
virat : thank you...
manvi : traitors...
virat : baby doll you are back...
jeevika : hey mannu...
manvi : yup... you guys enjoying your coffee without me... not fair...
virat : aww... have my sandwich...
jeevika : mine also...
manvi : hehe... love you guys...
jeevika : love you too mannu...
virat : ahaan... i toh love you tooo much mannuuu...
manvi gave virat a look and snatched his sandwich...
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will wrap it up soon... may 2 or 3 updates more...
hope u guys like it...

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