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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Vampire?!
Nicee!! I'm so gunna love this 😛
The love story of 2 vamps.. gotta be interesting!
Update super soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
this is something really very nice!!!
love the concept dear!!!
read the prologue and felt it really good!!!
and then the first part... Very nice!!
kria sooo strong!!! But a bit weaker than rey!!!
she fighting with wolves!!! Wooowww!!!
kria ki punishment... Rey the king!!!
but I don't understand kria didn't kill two people na... Was it the two people who die...why was she angry... This confuses me...
very nice concept!!! Continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update.
Very interesting story.
Looking forward to read more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: arsha_simran

this is something really very nice!!!

love the concept dear!!!
read the prologue and felt it really good!!!
and then the first part... Very nice!!
kria sooo strong!!! But a bit weaker than rey!!!
she fighting with wolves!!! Wooowww!!!
kria ki punishment... Rey the king!!!
but I don't understand kria didn't kill two people na... Was it the two people who die...why was she angry... This confuses me...
very nice concept!!! Continue soon!!!!



The two people in the starting stood seeing kria , was killed by her. Their whole body had been strangled , and so rey bought them back to life so people don't see the body and get shocked, but he killed them again.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Thanks a lot for such a good response . :') Continue it , it really means a lot for me. Thanks. :D Btw guys i have NOT read or seen twilight , so i don't know a shit about it. So it's not related to it. I hope so..:P
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Part 2

Of words and duties

Kria was taken away to a room. She went to the washroom washed her face and came out , she sat on the bed. She had to stay here for a week , locked in this room. Another part of her punishment. She groaned in anger, she hated this.

But she was happy , she was happy that her revenge was taken twice , first time by her herself and the second by reyaansh. And if she had to pay this price for her revenge she was ready to pay it.

She looked up the ceiling. Nothing much interesting anywhere. She got up to the door and knocked it. A lady opened it.

"What?"

"I need my books."

"You'll get your belongings in few minutes."

Kria nods and went inside. Her belongings came soon , and she was soon enough busy reading a novel.

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Reyaansh reached his room and sat down. He threw the vase beside him with such a force that his mere touch had made it break into pieces. This girl had always been a trouble since the day she had entered the clan.

He had so wished that that the wolves would have mercilessly eaten her flesh. But no! He cursed the extra powers given to her. And it angered him knowing that it was because of him that she bloody got those extra powers. This girl was a pain , even when she had been an amateur .

He got up and walked to his balcony , he stared at nothing in particular just the serene view . It helped him calm down a bit.

Looking at the forest , and the trees that stood still without a single leaf movement as well , would make his nerves calm down.

The forests from outside narrated a story of peace and calmness. But in the inside it was a different story altogether , it narrated the story of deadly hunger , it narrated the story of mysterious deaths, it narrated the story of anger , in other words it narrated the story of a pure danger.

The forest made him realize that it's necessary to show anger from outside because you're angry from inside. And that is why seeing the quiet forest calmed him.

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Rey entered the hall. He saw few men sitting there , they bow in front of him. He went and sat on his seat. The men were scared to say anything . They were the court member and very nosy in everything and anything. Especially in matters related to rey. But ultimately they were always scared of him after all he was the most powerful vampire among them.

"Can you just ask what you wanted to ask."

Rey said his voice raising with each word. Rey had a very bad patience level especially in these courts.

"Why did you kill those guys so brutally?"

Rey looked at them .

"None of your concern."

"We need to know reyaansh. You can't just kill those mortals like this."

"Did you get what I said.."

He said these word gritting his teeth , the men move back in fright.

"...Or should I say it again."

He shouted while saying this , the men disappeared in a second. After all even vampires were scared of someone and that was none other than rey. He smirked. He enjoyed scaring these "Never-afraid-of-anything" vampires.

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Kria who had finished her book got up and went to look out , she saw the dense forest. She kept staring at it , there was something that attracted her to these forests , she felt calm staring at the forests.

She was staring at it , when the door opened. She turned and saw Reyaansh.

"You."

He was extremely close to her in a second , pinning her to the wall.

"You better not tell anyone the reason I helped you."

"What is the reason reyaansh?"

"Good."

He moved back. He was going to walk when.

"Thank you."

"Helping you was my duty. My dad had taught me to give sinners their punishment , I give you yours and as well as those people got their punishment , it was in their destiny , I was just a medium."

"I saw them die twice."

She smiled and felt the tear of blood roll down her eye. Rey who could sense that turned.

"You're still an amateur!"

"I don't have a heart reyaansh , but I do have a brain which brings these tears in my eyes."

"Only amateurs don't know how to control their brain."

"Only royals know how to control their brains , go and see normal vampires you'll understand what I mean. "

Rey rolled his eyes , and went from there. Kria sat down on the bed muttering curses to him , she loathed him. He had too much pride , was too much of an impulsive vampire , But he was a just king.

In the initial days when she had been recovering and being taught of how to control her vampire powers , she had seen him in the court. He had the power to actually differentiate the truth from the lie and that is why he could save non guilty vampires from going inside the room.

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Hope you liked it. Do review

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Res yay me
Unres

Ahh! Yippee kriyaansh and rye have something going on...

Whatever it is... He helped her for a reason yes!

I want more kriyaansh please...

Love this story it is getting better and better each day...
Edited by FrozenTeardrops - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
awesome... so kriya is an amateur vampire... eagerly waiting 4 next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
It was very nc... Continue soon...thnks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Supab update just want to know why rey help kria?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
update next part soon

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