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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aaja pyaar ki ho deal😆

Okay I'm confused😕

Coming to it later

My fav lines

My wall moved🤣 and cussed out colorfully "f**k!" I looked closely to see the wall turned and the other side of the wall looked like someone's chest moving up and down. I shook my head thinking I was imagining stuff and when I looked again I saw it was really a chest of a man and not a wall.😆

I went still when I saw him casually leaning by a car sipping from his Starbucks cup. Last night it was dark to see carefully but now in day light I was able to see him better. He was wearing all black from his boots to ribbon glasses. His hairs were messy yet classy. It gave the look of bed hair😛. His muscles were bulging out of his tight black button up shirt. The sleeves were rolled up revealing a huge tattoo with writing in the center😕 on his one arm. His hard chest was visible as some buttons were undone. In short everything of him was screaming one word, DANGER. Yet it was hard to look away from him because he was simply breath taking. I mean when goons and thugs started looking that HOT🤣.

Now coming to the confusion...
First I felt the wall guy is Rey..I mean Ryan...
But then thats Mr. unknown with tattoo😕...Seems to me like KSG..don't know why😕
And one more thing where did Rey suddenly come up from???😕
Okay wait when did Taani show him that pic..I mean Swayam's pic??😕
You need to answer this😆

Now finally coming to the update😆

Loved the courageous Taani😳
OMG trained in self defence...not bad😉
Good job Swayam😛

Taani drooling over that KSG looking guy😆
P.S.- I'm gonna call him KSG until you reveal who he is😛

That place looks very creepy...
and that medicines wala part?? 😕

You have totally confused me...

Update soon to clear out my confusion🤢

Edited by sashaz_sis - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sashaz_sis

Aaja pyaar ki ho deal😆


Okay I'm confused😕

Coming to it later

My fav lines

My wall moved🤣 and cussed out colorfully "f**k!" I looked closely to see the wall turned and the other side of the wall looked like someone's chest moving up and down. I shook my head thinking I was imagining stuff and when I looked again I saw it was really a chest of a man and not a wall.😆

I went still when I saw him casually leaning by a car sipping from his Starbucks cup. Last night it was dark to see carefully but now in day light I was able to see him better. He was wearing all black from his boots to ribbon glasses. His hairs were messy yet classy. It gave the look of bed hair😛. His muscles were bulging out of his tight black button up shirt. The sleeves were rolled up revealing a huge tattoo with writing in the center😕 on his one arm. His hard chest was visible as some buttons were undone. In short everything of him was screaming one word, DANGER. Yet it was hard to look away from him because he was simply breath taking. I mean when goons and thugs started looking that HOT🤣.

Now coming to the confusion...
First I felt the wall guy is Rey..I mean Ryan...
But then thats Mr. unknown with tattoo😕...Seems to me like KSG..don't know why😕
And one more thing where did Rey suddenly come up from???😕
Okay wait when did Taani show him that pic..I mean Swayam's pic??😕
You need to answer this😆

Now finally coming to the update😆

Loved the courageous Taani😳
OMG trained in self defence...not bad😉
Good job Swayam😛

Taani drooling over that KSG looking guy😆
P.S.- I'm gonna call him KSG until you reveal who he is😛

That place looks very creepy...
and that medicines wala part??😕

You have totally confused me...

Update soon to clear out my confusion🤢
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🤣 for ur fav lines

Now i doubt my update i made it too confusing
I think dark eyes was the clue but it wasnt helpful enough

The wall guy, startbucks guy are same meaning ryan/rocky aka KSG looking guy dang woman :/
She showed the pic to starbuck guy who is ryan n who in the end was about to fight with those 6-8 guys

The unknown guy is unknown to all even Ella
She doesnt know anything about the unknown guy
With the med wala part


Samjhay ya aur samjhao 😛


I hv to do something about the update now :'(


Yes he trained her for situations like this


Thanks for a drooling, confusing n rofling comment 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ta_Sha--



🤣 for ur fav lines

Now i doubt my update i made it too confusing
I think dark eyes was the clue but it wasnt helpful enough

The wall guy, startbucks guy are same meaning ryan/rocky aka KSG looking guy dang woman :/
She showed the pic to starbuck guy who is ryan n who in the end was about to fight with those 6-8 guys

The unknown guy is unknown to all even Ella
She doesnt know anything about the unknown guy
With the med wala part


Samjhay ya aur samjhao 😛


I hv to do something about the update now :'(


Yes he trained her for situations like this


Thanks for a drooling, confusing n rofling comment 🤣


It means I was right throughout...just because of your note after update I got confused🤢
Dang!!!😡🤢
That unknown guy confused me...
You've given him tattoos...I see...tattoo se ek hi naam yaad ata hai re KSG😛
chal now I'm not confused😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb update dii

But what if one answer is different from others? What if one word can change your life? What if one word wakes up all the dead hopes inside you?
i like this line this was so nice
showing her hopes
& i more when she says

I gave my last prayers to whoever was above watching me and enjoying the scene.
becoz i also used this line whenever am
in trouble 😆
dekha mera or ella k thoughts kitne milte hai🤣
but unfortunately i dun have reyan like ella
daah ! my bad luck 🥺
oops back 2 the update again
so finaly ella made her entry
to that dangerous place cool
omg she just entered in that town

& starts her action😆 i think
she want to replace reyan lol
bad joke sorry
wow brave girl chose fighting option
but she forget 1 thing
tht in every story hero save the heroine😉
so their come our again mistake not our its ella 's reyan
to save her 😉
i like reyan 's entry & his mysterious look
all things were just perfect


Damn! His chin was leveled at the top of my head. Why people have to be tall, muscular and hot? I faced palmed mentally at my stupid question and glared at him. "Are you insane? You are leaving a lonely girl with thugs. What happened to humanity? What's the use of all those muscles if can't get them to use for good? Hah?" I said with stern voice. He looked at me dumbfounded and then all of a sudden he was laughing out loud. It wasn't a normal holding stomach and rofling laugh. It was devilish and mocking laugh. I gulped again and he looked at the thugs and then at me and he asked me "who needs saving again? These thugs from you?" I was stunned by his words and thus I concluded that he was HIGH, literally on some weird and dangerous drugs.

i just love that part
lol poor ella now she remeber that she is lonely girl
but be4 some mins
she was like jhansi ki raani 🤣
poor thugs they dun know that she is the little monster
of Eve 😆
but now who's that unknown guy
hmmm * interesting very intersting *🤣


I went still when I saw him casually leaning by a car sipping from his Starbucks cup. Last night it was dark to see carefully but now in day light I was able to see him better. He was wearing all black from his boots to ribbon glasses. His hairs were messy yet classy. It gave the look of bed hair. His muscles were bulging out of his tight black button up shirt. The sleeves were rolled up revealing a huge tattoo with writing in the center on his one arm. His hard chest was visible as some buttons were undone. In short everything of him was screaming one word, DANGER. Yet it was hard to look away from him because he was simply breath taking. I mean when goons and thugs started looking that HOT.

ella totally drooling over reyaan
seeing his ever feature 😳😳
but seriously te way u describe reyan
am imaginging him
oh god he is looking so hansome 😉😉😳😳
so i guess reyan knew about eve
that's y he was giving just xpressions
oh god tht is so much intersting
& the last line of this update


That smirk was not just a smirk it was a promise. It was a promise to kill them with no mercy



omg am in love with this line
i dun know y
but i love this line
😊😊
* FINISHED*



Edited by navk - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sashaz_sis



It means I was right throughout...just because of your note after update I got confused🤢
Dang!!!😡🤢
That unknown guy confused me...
You've given him tattoos...I see...tattoo se ek hi naam yaad ata hai re KSG😛
chal now I'm not confused😆


Not was to help n not to confuse
Thank God confusion dur hoi 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unres
superb update.luvd it..entry of hero.
Edited by Mon_tr - 11 years ago
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wow...
loving each and every line of this update...
finally Rey / Ryan ki entry ho gayi...
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superb update..
funny .. too .. my wall movd seriously!! 🤣
ella's pov is awesome..
end is a big bang!!
continue soon...

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