FF ~~THE UNTOLD CUTE LOVE STORY~~ PRECAP PG 106

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sweety

@sweety16

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#681

Originally posted by: Ramya05

Your story is brilliant because of this:) no negative characters... Please stick to this. :)

definitely... ramya... all are humans ... they commit mistakes and learn from them that's all...

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veda

@sizzling78

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#682

i like ur way of taking the story 👏

so Ashwin & Susan gona be a pair ?

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kkasvn9

@kkasvn9

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#683

Sweety:

Roma sweet and cuteya erithunu this chapter too. Your story always impress the golden words- "nothing is impossible"-👏 I think meesai might have heard VL conversation, that is the reason he gave a military look at both of them. Terrace scene was also good- you expressed the feelings of KR in a realistic way. In total this chapter is also super...

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kkasvn9

@kkasvn9

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#684

Sweety:

Roma sweet and cuteya eruthinuthu this chapter too. Your story always have this golden wordings "Nothing is impossible"👏. I think Meesai might have heard VL conversation and gave a military look at both of them. Terrace scene was also awesome. You have clearly expressed the KR feelings about their future in a realistic way, which i liked most. In total this chapter is super...

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Rajee71

@Rajee71

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#685

No words to explain - very relaxed after reading your story👏👏👏 Actually I am out of the real TENSION created by the TV serial...

Thank U so much - though it is a story its creating so much of emotions in us...

Good GOING !!! 👍🏼 Pls try to update the next chapter asap...

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Devi

@Devino

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#686

Indha week yeppadi irukkumonu theriyala, promo paathathukke 😡 ippadi irukku, innum week fulla yenna yenna nadakka pogudho 😲

So please yengalai yellam ungaloda cute and entertaining episodes kuduthu kaapathunga pa...😊

Waiting for the next update...

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sweety

@sweety16

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#687

Chapter 78

Raji finishes the Kolam and comes inside...
She starts Preparing the amman with Manjal...

Karthik, Vishnu and Lakshmi get ready and come downstairs...
Both Karthik and Vishnu look Awesome in Pattu Veshti and Lakshmi in a Purple & Green Pattu pudavai...

Raji's aachi is making garlands of flowers... all three of them sit beside her...
R-aachi: neenga ellaarum onnaa velai parkureengalaa?
Lakshmi: aamaa paatti...
R-aachi: aachii nnu kooppidanum...
Lakshmi: saringa aachi...
R-aachi: neenga ellaarume Madras thaana?
Lakshmi: enakku Tiruchy aachi...ivanga rendu perum Madras thaan...
R-aachi: ivanga rendu perula enga aathaa kattikkanum nu aasapadaradhu yaaru?
All three of them look at each other.
Raji comes there, smiles at them, takes some flowers and a garland. She pats her aachi on her hand and shows Karthik and goes to the Pooja room..
R-aachi: unga peyar enna thambi?
Karthik: Karthikeyan ... aachi...
R-aachi: Raji ya pidichirukkaa?
Karthik: romba pidikkum...
R-aachi continues weaving garlands...
Lakshmi: aachi... Raji innaikku muzhu naalum pesa maattaalaa?
R-aachi: illa... amman senju mudikkira varaikkum thaan...
Karthik: en appadi?
R-aachi: mounamaa irundhaa... entha sinthanaiyum illaama seyyara oru vishayam azhagaa irukkum nu dhaan... aanaa adhu kandippaa kadai pidikkanum ngradhu inga vazhakkam...
Lakshmi: thiruvizha nnaa kovil la illaiyaa aachi? veetla edhukku amman seyyanum?
R-aachi: 80 varushathukku munnaadi... mazhai illaama anju aaru varusham velaichal illaama ellaarum romba kashta padumbodhu... amman enga maamiyaaroda kanavula vandhu... veetla manjal la amman senju eduthuttu poyi... vayal la vachi poojai pannu mazhai peyyum nu sonnaangalaam... avangalum appadiye seidhu irukkaanga... nallaa mazhai peinju nalla valainjidhaam... adhukku appuram ovvoru varushamum ... amman seidhu kondu poyi poojai
pannittu... naathu nada aarambichaangalaam... 0ru 10 varusham kazhichu... oorula ellaarum...mazhai peyyumbodhu manjal laseidha amman karainjidudhu... ammanukku kovil kattalaam nu mudivu panni vayal galukku naduvula kovil kattinaanga... adhu varaikkum irundha vazhakkam maaraama irukka... namma veetla amman senju mudichadhum... Kovil la irundhu pallakku eduthittu vandhu eduthittu povaanga...
Lakshmi: Oh ...
R-aachi: neenga moonu perum saapteengalaa?
Lakshmi: innum illai aachi... inime thaan...
R-aachi: innaikku... viratham irundhu... enna vendikittaalum antha amman aruloda kandippaa nadakkum...
Lakshmi: appadiyaa? muzhu naalum saappidaama irukkanumaa?
R-aachi: ille maa... madhiyam kovil kitta ponga vachi kumbidura varaikkum...
Lakshmi: Raji viratham irukkaalaa?
Raji's periamma comes there saying..." Raji viratham irundhe aaganum... amman seyyanum illa?" and sits beside them.
R-periamma: amman eppavume aachi dhaan seivaanga... seyyumbodhu... poojai arai kulla yaaraiyum vara vida maattanga... Raji maa ku 5 vayasu irukkumbodhu... azhudhu adam pudichi poojai arai le ye irundhaa... aachi edhaiyume thoda vidalai nnu ... avale aachi seyyaradhai parthutte... kutti ya oru amman senju alangaaram pannaa... paakka avvalo deiveegamaa irunduchi... adutha varusham aachi solla solla avalaiye seyya vachaanga... appo irundhu ava dhaan seyyaraa...
Lakshmi: naanum viratham irukken... aachi...
R-periamma: avvalo neram saappidaama irukamudiyumaa unnaala?
Lakshmi: try panren aunty...
Raji's amma comes and invites everyone for breakfast. Lakshmi says that she'll also fast. Vishnu gets up to go but Karthik doesn't.
Vishnu: vaa daa...
Karthik: illa daa... nee saaptu vaa...
R-amma: Lakshmi konjam vandhu kooda parimaruriyaa?
Lakshmi: sari aunty...
Both Vishnu and Lakshmi go with Raji's amma.

R-periamma: unakku idhula ellaaam nambikkai irukkaa thambi?
Karthik: kadavul nambikkai irukku... aanaa kannmoodi thanamaana nambikkai illai... neenga enna Karthi nne kooppidalaam...
R-periamma: adheppadi? veettu maappilai ya peyar solli kooppidaradhu?
Karthik looks at her surprisedly...
R-periamma: Kaalaile thaan en kozhundhanaar sonnaaru.. Raji santhosham thaan engaluku mukkiyam... enna Raji oda periappa othukkanum... ippo adhu dhaan irukku... konja naal munnaadi nna lum edhum prachanai irundhirukkaadhu...
Karthik: en? ennaachu?
R-periamma: avaroda snehithar paiyyanukku katti vaikkanum nu piriya padaraaru... adhaan... kaadhal naa enna solvaaru nnu theriyalai...
Karthik: Raji oda appa ku sammathamaa?
R-periamma: adhanaala thaane annan kitta pesanum nu sonnaaru?
Karthik feels very releived hearing this...
R-periamma: enga Rajiya nallabadiyaa parthuppe ille?
Karthik: kandippa... naan ava mela uyiraiye vachirukken...
R-periamma: enga ellaarukkum serthu otha ponnu ava... ethanaiyo varusham thaviyaa thavichu... partha kallu, maram, kodi nnu poojai panni thavam irundhu poranthava...
R-aachi: adhu enna vidhiyo theriyaadhu... enga kudumbathula parambarai parambaraiyaa otha pullai thaan... mudhal thdavai yaa enakku thaan moonu pasanga... sari ini yaavadhu vamsam valarum nu parthaa... en periya pullaikkum kuzhandhai illai... en ponnukkum illa... en chinna pullaikku thaan kalyaanam aagi 7 varusham kazhichu Raji poranthaa...
R-periamma: otha pulla nnu romba chellam... aanaa... adhe pazhagittaa... naalaikku puguntha veetla kashta paduvaa nnu romba kandippaa iruppom...
Karthik: puriyudhu...
R-periamma: inime idhu ellaam naanga thaan seidhukkanum...
Karthik: en appadi?
R-periamma: kalyaanam mudinju puguntha veettukku poyittaa... avalai ethirparka mudiyumaa? engalukku appuramum avalai nallaa paathukkanum..
Karthik: mmm... saringa...
R-periamma: sari thambi... enakku velai irukku... naan varen...
She gets up and goes to kitchen...

R-aachi: Raji kalyaanam aagi poyittaa... veedu viricho nnu aayidum... adutha varusham naan thaan seyyanum...
Karthik: kavalai padaatheenga aachi... thiruvizhaa kku naal kuricha udane sollunga... eppavum pola Raji vandhiruvaa...
R-aachi: unmayaa solriyaa paa?
karthik: kandippaa... aachi... ava modhal la intha veettu ponnu appuram thaan enakku pondaatti...
R-aachi: romba santhosham thambi...
Karthik smiles and Raji comes there to take remaining flowers...
R-aachi: mudinjithaa aathaa?
Raji signals with her fingers... in 10 mins and leaves...

Half an hour later, everyone has breakfast and gathers in the muttram... Raji comes and signs her periamma to take a look... She goes inside the pooja room and comes out after 5 minutes. She goes into the kitchen and brings a glass of water and gives it to Raji... Raji drinks the water and asks..."ellaam sariyaa irukkaa partheengalaa?"
R-periamma: romba azhagaa irukku Raji maa...
R-aachi: ellaarum ovvorutharaa poyittu ammanukku namaskaaram pannittu vaanga...
First Raji's thatha goes... and one by one has the darshan ...
Karthik enters the pooja room and is awestruck with the amman alangaaram in front of him...

it looked as if he was in a temple... he is so amused the way amman sat Grandly in jewels, flowers and garlands... He closes his eyes, folds his hands and prays..." ivvalave azhagaa enga kalyaana vaazhkaiyum amaiyanum... aaseervaadham pannunga..." and few minutes later comes out.
His eyes look for Raji... but there was no trace of her.
He comes upstairs to take his mobile and hears Raji and Lakshmi talking in their room... He knocks on the door and asks "ulla varalaama?"
Lakshmi: vaa... Karthik...
He enters into the room and sees Raji making something with cotton...
Karthik: enna panre Raji?
Raji: paruthi maalai... amman alangaaram eppadi?
Karthik: adha solla thaan vanthen... chance eh illa Raji... avvalo azhagaa irukku...
Raji smiles...
Raji's periamma calls Lakshmi and she goes downstairs.
Karthik sits beside Raji and she says..." thodaadhe..."
Karthik: en?
Raji: kovilukku poyittu vandhu veetla poojai panni mudichadhum dhaan viratham mudiyum...
Karthik: sari ok... appaa unga aachi, periamma kitta ellaam sollittaaru pola...
Raji: enna?
Karthik: namma vishayam thaan...
Raji: mmm... periappa othukkanum... adhaan innaikku amman seyyumbodhu vendikitten...
Karthik: ennannu?
Raji: namma kalyaanam nallabadiyaa nadanthaa... adutha varusham
eppadiyaavadhu vandhu idhe maathiri viratham irunthu amman seyyaren nu... appuramaa eppadiyum vara mudiyaadhu...
Karthik: en appadi?
Raji: unga veetla othukkanum ille?
KArthik: adutha varusham mattum illa... ovvoru varushamum kandippaa naama varom... eppavum pola nee viratham irunthu amman alangaaram pannu...
Raji: nijamaavaa solre?
Karthik: PROMISE...

ON THE ROAD:

Susan is amused by the person who got down from the car... it was Ashvin...
Ashvin: Hi... Susan...
Susan: Hi ... Ashvin...
Ashvin: what happened?
Susan: my car is not starting...
Ashvin: shall i take a look?
Susan: ya...
Ashvin goes to the front of the car , opens the bonnett and inspects something...then ...
Susan: ennachu Asvin?
Ashvin: konjam major problem thaan... mechanic varanum... service kuduthu ethanai naalaachu?
Susan: adhu aayirukkum oru 6 months...
Ashvin: sari irunga...
He calls someone and speaks...
Ashvin: sari enna plan? engayaavdhu drop pannanumaa?
Susan: paravaa illai...
Ashvin: sollunga ... no formalities...
Susan: poganum nu nenacha idam romba dhooram... drop ellaam kekka mudiyaathu... vandi ready aanadhum poyi sera late aagum... return pogavendiyadhu dhaan...
AShvin: enga poganum nu sollunga... drop panna mudiyumaa illaiyaa nnu naan solren... ennaa naan romba long poren...
Susan: it's Ok...
A bike stops and two mechanics come to Ashvin...
Ashvin: enna Raja? eppadi irukke?
Raja: nallaa irukken naa... velinaattu la irundhu eppo vandheenga?
Ashvin: rendu vaaram aachu... friend oda vandi ... ennaachu nnu paaru...
Raja examines the car and says it can be done but will get ready by evening only...
Ashvin: ippo enna pannalaam nu sollunga...
Susan: ore confusion aah irukku... inga engeyum evening varaikkum irukka mudiyaadhu... veettukku poyittu thirumbi evening vandhu car edithuttu poganum... cha... ippadi sodhappiduche...
Ashvin: idhu varaikkum neenga unga plan ah solla ve illa...
Susan: periya plan laam onnum illa... friends oda irukkalaam nu...
Ashvin: appo en kooda vaanga... naan evening return vandhiduven... return la inga vandi ready nnaa... neenga unga car la kilambidunga...
Susan: why troubling you?
Ashvin: it's ok... naan pora edathulayum unga friends irukkaanga...
Susan: haan? puriyalai...
Ashvin: naan Raji oda ooru Kovilpattikki poren... unga team ellaam anga thaan irukkaanga...
Susan: (surprised) hey... naanum anga thaan kilambinen...
Ashvin: sariyaa pochu ponga... vaanga... serndhu polaam...
Susan: neenga eppadi kovilpatti kku?
Ashvin: adhu periya kadhai... on the way solren... vaanga...
Ashvin calls Raja and asks him to get the car ready and keep in his garrage so that they can take while returning.
Susan and Ashvin get into his car and head towards Kovilpatti...

Chapter 79... coming soon...

CHAPTER 79

Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago

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muthucheenu

@muthucheenu

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#688

Outstanding update Sweety!! appadiye oru gramathu customs, heritage, relationship, respect, commitment, care, beauty, ellathaiyum kan munnadi niruthiteenga!! 👏 Karthik's prayer in front of amman was the highlight, beautiful expression!! ⭐️