RishBala FF The Forbidden Love NOTE PG 11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi
Awesome start... Interesting concept...
Plz continue soon ... Plz pm me when u update...

thanks... will surely pm you

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel
Wow...Madhu as a maid and Rishabh is engaged to someone...yet they are involved together...awesome start , totally loving it..so pls continue soon 😛😛

yeah despite the differences they love each other

will try to cont it soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

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@ v.p.joshi, rekha.366, Clara20 : thanks for commenting i will continue it

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: 4ever4love
oh thank God, you had me scared there for a minute thinking that Madhu was married to someone else.

Best friends that fell in love but Madhu works for the family. I like it! Please continue!

yes they were childhood friends and fell in love

thanks will continue

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL
master n his maid.. awesome❤️coninue soon dear 👍🏼plz update ur other story😳

will try to cont it soon 😳

im going to update that one next 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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awesome start...😊

u go girl👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: flowing_river
awesome yaar..
do continue soon
dark stories are always magnetic to pull me...😛😆

thanks i'll try to cont soon 😳

same here 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: rishablover
awesome start...😊
u go girl👍🏼

thank you 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Character Sketch

Note: I'm thinking of making a slight change and show RishBala secretely married but I want to know what the readers want so if you want them to be married before they start their relation let me know in your comments and I will do what majority want 😳

Madhu

She is a maid with the attitude of a princess and is proud of her beauty. She is only good with those who are good with her and not at all selfless. But it's a fact that she loves Rishabh more than herself and can do anything for him, even give up her life if need be.

Rishabh

He is the son of a wealthy family located in a village. He is generally a nice person and loves Madhu a lot but cannot marry her because his family will never accept a maid as their daughter in law. He would have left his family for her if his mother was not ill. He loves his mother too and does not want to lose her because of his forbidden love.

Mohan

Rishabh's father and head of the Kundra family. He is proud of his wealth and status in society and would rather die than let anything happen to his dignity.

Radha

A nice lady but can do nothing without her husband's permission. She is a heart patient so Rishabh always tries to make sure she doesn't take any stress.

Ranveer

Mohan's eldest son who is just like his father.

Deepali

Ranveer's wife and she is a negative character.

do comment on the CS and let me know if you want RM married

Edited by i-love-me - 12 years ago