1#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala: AsYa FF (Ch1-5|#2Link pg1)

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 4 Updated. 😃

Edited : The PAST is in BLACK and The PRESENT in BLUE 😊 Hope that clears all the confusion once again 😳

Thank you so much for showering so much of love and support towards this fiction of mine. I am so very overwhelmed with the response. 😳

THANK YOU SO MUCH. 🤗

Updates will be Once A Week, mostly on Wednesdays.😳

Suggestions will be highly entertained.

Do LIKE and Do COMMENT

And Silent Readers, Y U NO LIKE! 😭

For Updates BUDDY ME. 😃

❤️ Ankie

Ohh this part is especially for Sona Dee, Cause she just came back home, from HOME 🤣

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subhkisonu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#553

Thank you for the update!😳

Loved it, loved Asad and his friend😳. Sun!! The narration was so so good👏

And that part you know where Asad suddenly realised that he is holding Zoya and he left her and crossed his hand behind his back I could see KSG in that seen😳. Oh gosh!! How much I am mising him.

And then the last part was bit unexpected but again it was bound to happen sometime

It's well written. Now waiting for the next update😳

Tab tak tumko tang karti rahungi😳

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#554

Res😉

Unres 😆

Anku nice update 😃

Asad finally lost his cool n confronted her and this time he was right n right to question😡

Asad n zoya shld accept that they both love each other bas 😡😳😆

Zoya is funky sometimes after asad saying no ketchup she still poured it n the end result was she eated asad sub sandwich 😆

The antics of zoya r very cute n i like them😳😆

My SJ my Baby Doll 😳

Asad beated that man black, blue, orange etc.😆

Zoya tended the wound n was really bugged by that asad was hurt n she cares for him still😳😆

But their fight n something has to come to ruin the moments of love 😡

The fall at staircase n asad caughted was very good 😳 and the two clothes where asad said u will look allured in both😳😆

Update soon n thanks for the pm 😃

PS: Hope u won't mind the long bakwas comment from me 😆

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Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#555

It was awesome... Loved the prt... Full on asya wala updt... Thnks for the pm..

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Simran Bhandary

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Super duper Amazing upate it was..totally mindblowing..👏

it was splendidly written..i just loved it..👍🏼

aww Asad's Bst friend is the Sun..poor Asad, he had to suffer so much in the past..

Zoya slipping on the staircase nd asad preventing the fall was so beautifull.the way he hold Zoya protectively was awesome..😳

the sandwich part was sweet one..😛

nd he hit the man who grabbed Zoya's purse to death..aww he is such a superhero.😳.

the outburst at the end was much needed...so Zoya is feeling guilty now..hope to see these love birds close very soon..😳

nywayz continue soonish😊

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A.S.K

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Posted: 11 years ago

#557

Awesome update!!!
Asad 's best friend is sun!!!
mine is moon Asad!!!! ( match nahi hua*pouts*)
Asad got hurt while getting her bag back!!!
Zoya is worried for Asad!!!
Asad let out everything dat was within him!!!
Zoya feeling guilty!!!
Thanks 4 pm

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Divya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#558

hey it was wonderful

asad's best freind is sun aww

loved der shopping

continue soon

thanks for pm :)

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DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Ankie..that was another wonderful update... Asad's friendship with sun... 😊 That is beautifully written... He definitely has gone through lot of pain in the past n to be strong and sane after all the hardship 👏

Zoya liking 2 dresses n he insisting that she buy both... That was sweet... 😊

The interaction at food court was lovely... He offering to swap his sandwich with hers ... Let us know to what extent he can go to see to that she is happy n enjoying was another beautiful scene...

The last paragraph has got me thinking now... What had gone wrong ?? 😭