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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: jojo1986

great job update soon



sure dear😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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He straight away went to balcony and rested himself in the chair. He slowly closed his eyes and remembered the moment wen he saw her first.


Part 5:

Those moments were fresh like newly bloomed flower. Every day he used to thing that moment it gave him so much happiness and also so much pain in the heart. He took the diary to right today's moments, he wantedly skipped the first part of the diary but due to the wind the pg turned and stopped in the pg which he don't want see. He looked at the words written in the pg. Three years before: "For the 1st time in my life i am writing diary. It's a short trip but it was a trip to find my life. The day i reached Mumbai was a rainy day. Conference is the reason i am here, from the morning the hell of chatting and discussion were taking place. I was rushing to the airport bcz of the conference which delayed 3 hrs, on the way to the airport car got break down everything happening just opposite to my wish and the driver and mechanic were doing their best to get fixed soon. My anger was more due to the break down, i shouted at the driver in a full speed. I even thought of killing him one moment. When my anger was in a full form i heard some children's shout so i went in search of the voices. I saw a small gate with a single push it opened fully and i saw one dog and group of children were standing under the tree and shouting for someone in the tree. I can't get the clear view of the person in the tree so i went little forward to have a look, there i saw a girl by seeing her my body relaxed automatically, my heart was beating in a jet speed i dono y but i felt that i am smiling. For the 1st time in my life i am smiling that to by seeing one girl in the tree and its totally strange for me. I felt i saw my life in the form of girl. I saw the fear in her eyes, than oly i understood even the eyes can be more beauty full wen in shows the fear. The curly hair which covered her face attracted me more, rosy lips and the cheeks were like soft snow. Children's were shouting her name as Chiky. My lips repeated the name slowly and i smiled wider. The fear for the dog was shown in her voice. Her voice was like some bird singing. I slowly moved towards her, while walking i felt the cool breeze in my body and heart. Suddenly i heard an elder person sound for the watch many to take the dog out so i didn't move forward and stood in that place itself. After the dog was off from that girl's sight she came down and hugged the elder person and smiled wider, those smiles were childish but i loved it more. The laughter of the children echoed the whole place, after that see started to leave with the children's. I who was standing in a distance cant tolerate that she is leaving me and going, i started to move close to her but it was no use she went inside. Then the elder person came to me and enquirer-ed about me, i told my details and i offered to help tis orphanage. She accepted happily that time driver came in search of me and informed about the car got fixed and time is very shot to reach the airport. I left the place by leaving my heat in that tree itself. Bcz tomorrow i am leaving with my mom to the states for her heart treatment, if not surely i will be stating here in this small world were my angel is living. I reached the airport and gave more money to the drive as thanx to him for making me to meet my life. After that i didn't hear any single word from anyone mouth, i saw ter lips movement but my heart gave the dobbing as Chiki chiki chiki . I reached home late but with the broad smile in my face as i entered my eyes saw the dog which is in the corner of the hall. My Tiger came close to me, i kneel down and touched its head and my heart asked me how ur going to convince chiki to keep ur tiger in the home? i asked sorry to tiger and smiled. Suddenly i heard the laughter near me, it was my mother who was standing near me wen i entered the home but i failed to notice her. She asked me "r u talking to the dog?" bcz i have not done that before, she didn't stop ter she continued to ask more which made me in a shock. "Want happens to u, u seems to be happier and OMG that means u r in LOVE?" i really could not answer her question i just smiled wider and ran up to my room. Suddenly i felt my room changed, i saw my room very differently again my heart asked me one question "is she going to live here?" by hearing that i want to change my room completely that too now itself. I slept after reap ting here name continuously. The two years in the states were like hell for me, i wants to go to Mumbai at any cost but i am the only relation my mom has so i can't leave her al lone. Wen ever i remembered her face by seeing anything in the shop i just bought that in a go. Like that i had filled two large bags so many dress, dolls and n no of products. Can u believe that i sultan doing this sort of thinking, i have never imagined in dream also. Finally the day came i returned to Delhi. Two days i stayed with my mom in the home to make her relax. The next day i reached Mumbai airport, no words can explain my happiness. I thought today was the most beauty full day in my life but everything changed in one hrs." with that he throw-ed the diary in one direction which hit the pot of plants place in the corner. His eyes automatically started to close then he falls in the sleep not peaces full and deep sleep.

Next Coming: "sultan, madhu...actually small fire accident in the kitchen...pls come" wen her mom was finishing the sentence he was in his car...



Message: The love at 1st sight will have the more hard work to do in the journey of the life together .😳


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Part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/103084403

Edited by prabha.abha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg awesome pehli nazaar ka pyar.(love at first sight)...yr u r too gud
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: angelinasingh

omg awesome pehli nazaar ka pyar.(love at first sight)...yr u r too gud



thank u so much😳😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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pleasure u deserve more
have this and write about sweet choclaty romance
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelinasingh

pleasure u deserve more
have this and write about sweet choclaty romance



sure dear 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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His eyes automatically started to close then he falls in the sleep not peaces full and deep sleep.

Part 6:


In the morning he heard the dog barking sound and he open the eyes in wider and by telling madhu's name he stood up from the chair. Then he saw the dogs in the street which is chained by their owner and going for a morning walk. He moved inside the room and checked for madhu but she went missing, checked the bath room and then he heard the laughing sound from the hall so he rushed down to check. There he saw which he wished to see, his mom is laughing whole heartedly with her DIL. He slowly went up and took the cold shower to relax himself. Then dressed in blazer and came down for the breakfast. From the steps he searched for her, she came out from the kitchen with a bowl in her hand. He came close to her to enquire about her health, madhu didn't notice him coming towards her and by his more closeness towards her she was made to see those magnetic eyes and missed the bowl from her hand due to the pleasant surprise. Sultan caught it on time and places it on the table. Madhu was shaking in the fear and she moved away from him by seeing her MIL coming out from the kitchen. She asked madhu to sit near sultan; well ter was no objection so she sat near him unwillingly. Sultan poured himself a juice and took the sip. Suddenly his mom asked about the dog and by hearing the word dog madhu places her hand in his lap in the fear and tighten the grip. By the sudden touch of her soft hand and the electric current due to that made sultan to float in air and to the extent he poured the juice in his dress. A smile slipped from his mom's and madhu's mouth. Madhu without knowing that the incident happened due to her, she took her pallu end to wipe his shirt. While wiping they both saw each other's eyes and for a moment tey forgot the whole world. After some time by hearing his mom's laughing sound made sultan to come out from the dream world. Both moved away in a fraction of sec, he bid gud bye and rushed to the door. His mom couldn't control the laugh and asked him "r u going to office in this juice dress?" by hearing this madhu laughed louder. Sultan went up to change the dress in anger and then left for office. After the storm went out from the house both the ladies some wat controlled ter laugh and came back to the reality. Sultan mom came near madhu and took her hand in hers and spoke politely"Wen i was pregnant sultan's father left us and went for some other girl, i tried my level best to stop him and make our marriage work but all went in vain. Then i came to Delhi worked day and 9t to save me and my child. Sultan didn't ask me about her dad like other child he under stood the situation and obeyed as a gud child, but he didn't had sweet childhood days. He grown up as an anger, rough and dough boy. I tried my level to change but i really cant may be if his dad was with us means he would have done. He never wished for anything in his life, he worked very hard to reach tis level. His oly company is his dog, tiger. I always used to ask him to marry but he will burst like a cracker by hearing the name marriage. Suddenly everything changed 3 years before one day i saw him happy without a reason. I asked him he just smiled, u know he never smiled like that in his life. His happiness was endless wen we were in states for my treatment. He told surely he will marry so oly i agreed for the treatment in states. After 2 years over we reached Delhi, he promised me that he will bring my DIL soon, those words are true bcz i saw it in his eyes. After few days he went for some place, while returning he was completely changed, it will be right if i say he is completely mad. I have never seen him like that before he was burning in the anger as if he lost his soul mate. I tried so many times to ask him about the matter he will just say everything is over. The blank statement will come as a replay. Few days back my health was worse so i was admitted in the hospital, then he came and told me that he is married. I didn't ask him wen, were and who. I oly told i want to see her. So u r here"with that she kissed madhu's forehead. Madhu was having so many feelings after hearing the story and she felt very bad for him. He thought every man was devil but now she tried to change her thoughts particularly about sultan. By talking both went straight to kitchen for the work and by hearing her voice madhu came to her present state. "Yester day 9t i saw the love for u in his eyes, he just want to through the entire guest out who were laughing at u. The way he hugged u back was telling me that he loves u more, he is protecting u by keeping the things which u fear for, the dog. i am really happy for my childes. Here after pls call me as maa, will u?" madhu saw the eye which is glowing in the happiness and said yes for the wish her maa made. Madhu was lost in the words which were said by his maa before few mints. Is he loves some one? Ten y he didn't marry her? He loves me huh it can be never possible. She remembered the time of ter meeting how she had reacted by seeing those magnetic eyes."it was one week after tey reached Delhi for Aryan treatment. She saw him in the hospital for the 1st time. Wen she was coming out from the hospital room to the reception, ter she saw him standing by turning his face and showing his back to her, she asked him for a pen so he turned to see her, wen she meet those magnetic eyes she really stopped to breath due to that she fainted and a strong arm was holding her tightly. She had never felt a strong attraction like this before some happiness came inside her after seeing him, those were like dream but it is a sweet dream".By thinking about her past she forgot to off the gas, the oil started to boil well and suddenly caught fire. Sultan was busy in meeting wen his phone rang he thought to cancel the call but he attended it. He heard his mothers worried voice "sultan, madhu...actually small fire accident in the kitchen...pls come" wen her mom was finishing the sentence he was in his car driving home. His heart was beating faster and faster, his mouth was reap ting her name.


Next coming: sultan was staring at her mom he could nt speak up any words bcz he itself dono the reason y she is shouting to leave her insted of asking to save her from fire.


NOTE: pls hit the like button and do the comment also. dont forget to tell which part or the line u loved the most. Ur comments is the Energy drink to me😃 so pls do comments...


Part 7( last part) : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/104089338



Edited by prabha.abha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u so much😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u😃

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