Arakshi FF: ~THE FOUR DAYS!~ **COMPLETED** - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice Shakti dear
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Case proccedings were nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Nice Shakti dear

Loved it awesome
Case proccedings were nice
It was interesting
thanks for the Pm
Continue soon😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😊Very good..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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finally, caught up with all the parts i'd missed due to exams..
as usual, they were all very well written but my personal favourite is the poetry..i'm biased towards it you can say...you're terrific!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: myriad_hues

finally, caught up with all the parts i'd missed due to exams..

as usual, they were all very well written but my personal favourite is the poetry..i'm biased towards it you can say...you're terrific!!


welcome back dr.
first take a deep breath, since i'm going to update the next part..
And thanks for the comment .
liked u loved the poems...

Now ready for the next part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Now we've reached the eleventh chap...

We've completed the previous ten successfully in a flow, and it was 'cause of you only guys!

Thus wanted to thank u for the support and now the next part...

And Happy HOLI...

The Four Days

Chapter-11:

A spy is one who is able to assume an appearance which may create no suspicion (in the minds of others), who fears no man's face, and who never reveals (his purpose).

-Thiruvalluar.

He was ready to go on a mission. But before he went out he had to do some checking for, it was another mission he had to do all alone. But he liked the loneliness to some extent. In a way, he was enjoying it strangely.

Now he was free to do anything, as per the plan, of course.

He smiled to himself.

He was going out now to see that whether his plan worked out well, to see the first step of the plan against the factory went well.

He came out of the room, turned a corridor and reached the staircase.

He thought, he had to devise a plan against them all, each and every one of them after that night's incident. That night and one more...

It was still a mystery to him that, the most disastrous and cunning events were happening in the dark in his life, only after darkness engulfed the world and him as well.

But Not Anymore!

Inside the compound, there were many heads around, some were doing welding work, some were packing, and even some were just doing nothing, except wandering.

He saw everything before asking his uncle that," Uncle! Why are these people wandering idly?"

His uncle, who was working with a wooden box meticulously on one side of the working place, did not expect this from him.

One or two of the other workers turned towards them, before resuming their work.

"Shh!... Don't talk loudly. In a place like this many works will be going on. You can't question them. Take that spanner!"

He handed him the spanner.

"Uncle, you've made many boxes. But why is this one is a special?"

He asked out of curiosity, in a low voice.

"You fool! Don't you understand a thing? I said to shut your mouth! It's my mistake! I shouldn't have called you here in the first place!" His uncle cursed himself.

They saw someone approaching. He signaled the boy to keep mum.

"Have you finished?"

"Yes, sir! Just the wheels!"

He replied and motioned the boy to get the screw driver.

"The mobile!"

Arjun asked the suspect and extended a hand.

After taking some time to think, after an uneasy glance at Chottu, he produced a mobile and put it on the extended hand.

Arjun opened the outbox' and shocked a little to see the message still in the machine.

"Can you tell me what this means?" Arjun showed the message.

He looked at it bewilderingly.

"I-I didn't send it! How can I?"

"Meaning?"

"I didn't send it!"

"May be your friend?"

"He must have. Why do you ask?"

His voice lowered a bit.

"When did he give his mobile to you?"

"This morning. Why?"

"What did you do in the airport?"

"Checked my ticket for the flight to Delhi on Friday."

"So you met this friend at the airport and got the mobile."

Arjun hinted him.

"Yes! Yes, that's right!"

He said a moment too quick.

"Then you must have seen him sent a message fast and gave the mobile to you."

"Yes, now I remember, he did!"

"And what time did this happen?"

"Well... You shall check the delivery report, because just moments later he gave me the mobile."

He was happy for his brilliance at times like this.

"It just says that the message was sent to me at-"

"What?" He got to his feet abruptly.

Arjun motioned him to sit.

"At 07:40 this morning." He went on as if he was not interrupted.

"How? I was in the hotel then!"

"Mm...mm."

Arjun nodded.

And the mobile says it was purchased with your photo identity along with your voter's ID with an address here in Mumbai."

The suspect just looked at his opponent helplessly.

He realized then that all that happened in that room was nothing but a trap and he had bitten the bait at the very first instant, the man ever set foot into the room. But why? He could have checked him the first moment he started lying.

As if Arjun was reading his mind, he said," That was a hell too long, right? I too hate this procedure, but..." he sighed," Evidence making!"

He motioned towards the CCTV camera and looked the opponent's facial expressions.

"That's right. You are recorded."

"Start talking! We've already lost much time."

He insisted.

"Sir!..." Jaisar started.

She was soothing herself that she would be allowed to consume something.

Her throat was getting dry and she hated the loneliness, let alone the darkness around her. She thought, the windowless room was the reason for her sweating who did not know the clouds hobbled together fast and getting ready for a pour.

He entered noiselessly in; reached her, stood before her a moment changed the tape on her lips and without saying a word left the room quietly.

She could not understand most of his actions. She let it go as she did to his other doings.

She could say he was in a dark outfit, but was not in the same one she saw him last and he looked fresh and relax, she thought.

This must be a morning!'

Suddenly she remembered that he was still there!

Oh God, he didn't go for negotiation still! He must be going there only!' She prayed for things to go well, soon.

She did forget one thing Man Proposes God disposes!'

But God had other plans for her...

Right Guys, start saying whether it was worth writing and reading as well!...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Now coming to update
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Beautiful shakti
Was this our holi gift 😊
Very true said in the end "Man proposes & God disposes"
Loved it
Thanks for te Pm
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