Trust Once Broken Is Hard To Regain ~ KriYaansh FF part 3 pg 21 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
i loveeddd dis part😳
but y so short
asha-rithvik convos wer cuteee😳
and asha admires our cutie kriya😳
amazingly writtenā­ļø
continue soonish😊
love yašŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Wow!! Beautiful update!!
lovely... Ashvik bond is so sweet!!
Asha scolding Rithvick... Poor him!!
Mystrious Dairy...
What kept for us in the dairy??? ofcourse our own KRIYAANSH!!
Kria as always being so cute...
loved the chapter!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
khush ho jaa!!!
unresd on page 9
oops sorry page 11
Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Wahh vampire ek aur naya wrk...
Amazing...
Ek dum different concept
Luvd it
Prologue mast tha yaar
Asha aur rithvik ko kriya ki diary milti hai aur usme kr ki kahani
Superb wrk
Aur fir first part is amazing
Bechara rithivik asha kitna kaam karvati hai aur fir agar barabar nahi kiya toh bichare ko daat bhi padhti hai...
Finally woh logo ko kriya ki diary mili...
Kya mast takrike se tune kriya ki diary ka first part likha...
Luvd it...
Amazingly written
Aur ab jaldi update kar dusra part...



Aur late comment ke liye sorry
Aur late comment kyu hai woh toh tujhe pata hi hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
res for now..
N that banner seems Ashvik also there...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
wow... its a different concept... well written...

loved it.. do let me know wen u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Credit ~ Khushboo dii


Chapter 2


Next day well it was quite difficult for both of them to not read the book. It was like they were got addicted to it. Both were getting ready and side by side glancing each other and the drawer too where they kept the dairy.

"Asha u ready..??"

Rithvik asked her from living room.

"Yeah 2 minutes please"

Asha replied back and hurried tug her hand bag on her shoulder and left the house with Rithvik.

It was hectic day for Rithvik as well as Asha both had back to back shoot for their performance and their serial too. Both didn't got a chance to talk about the dairy but they were mentally still think about the dairy only and nothing else.

After hell 4 hours continues shoot both exhausted their room on the set both sat and drank orange juice. Both were looking and had same face. Both knew that the other one is thinking about the dairy only. Finally Rithvik thought to break the ice.

"Asha what do u think what must be there in the dairy..??"

Rithvik asked Asha looking straight into her eyes. Asha knew that from morning Rithvik was only thinking about the dairy.

"Let's ready it nah to know more"

Asha said with a smile on her sweet face. Rithvik raised his eye brow as if asking how..?? Asha took her bag and removed the dairy from the bag and showed it to Rithvik.

"When did u took the dairy..??"

Rithvik asked taking the dairy and settling himself beside her.

"Well at last moment I know from morning u were only thinking about the dairy so I took it and kept it with me"

Asha said to Rithvik to which Rithvik smiled back and thought how properly Asha knows him.

"So let's read it nah"

Asha said when she saw Rithvik only staring at the cover of dairy.

"Umm Asha this time u read please"

Rithvik said will handing the dairy to her.

"Okay"

Asha replied and open dairy.


"First day of college and meeting someone special..??"


Hey my bestie guess what..?? Today was my first day of college. You know how much excited I was about it..?? Well how will u know let me tell u.

U know I was hell excited but from inside I was hell double nervous. I mean it new place I don't know how people over here speak or behave with other. But I was almost correct and wrong about judging the people of Mumbai.

Yeah - yeah I know u must be confuse that what m speaking but it's like wait let me tell u everything from starting. Today when I entered the college I had a big smile plaster on my face after all it was my first step towards my dream, my dance. Well like all other college girls and boys were roaming here and there and talking.

I was looking all over college with a sweet smile when by mistakenly I dashed with a guy. Well he look damn good but that was not my point he sweetly said sorry to me and left. I guess he was a bit busy in his work. So I ignore it and went ahead I saw a gang standing over there and lots of student surrounding them. I was curious to know what's going on so went near them. But I got the shock when the girl I guess she was leading them called me near her. She was kind rude types from look.

I was scare to go ahead but she shouted again and I was pushed in front of her. She asked me what my name with lot of attitude and I slowly said m KRIYA. By now I had got to know what they were doing. They were raging the newbie's in the college and I was one of the newbie. I stood in front of her though I was scare from inside but still from outside I showed them how strong I m.

She told me to dance, well that was easy isn't it..?? Dance is my passion and I can do it but still I was scare she was glaring at me with her doe's smoky eyes. Soon I hurt a loud sound or rather to say a shout it was of a guy well I have heard that voice. I turned around a saw all student have vanished away and the girl face was pale and there he was standing the same guy who before sometime dashed into me.

Sharon what's going on for god sake stop raging, u are my best friend so stop it and u guys too. Otherwise I will have to take action. He said looking at the girl. So her name is Sharon and her group. Well for a second I was shocked he is their friend and still he is not with them. Well soon they all left. He looked at me.

He sweetly again said sorry to me. Aww he was really too cute. I said its okay and he smiled looking into my eyes we were standing still only looking into each other's eyes. There was really something with his eyes. Which were like...umm I don't know.

So bestie now u understood what I meant..?? Well the scene was kind of any film was going on mean heroine in trouble and hero come over right time to save her. Haye how romantic nah..??

Romantic..?? Err what's wrong with me..?? I don't even know his name. I should stop thinking about him for universe sake. I think I should catch some sleep. So good night bestie see you soon.

I hope for a happy tomorrow.


Asha read it with a smile. It was clearly visible on her face that she was too attached to the girl by now. Rithvik smiled at her knowing why she was smiling.

"Rithvik what do u think who must be that guy who saved her..?? Aww it so looked like love that first sight nah..??"

Asha continued to speak and Rithvik just adored her.

"asha I know u want to know who is that guy, but I don't know so lets read ahead to know about him, okay..??"

Rithvik said cutely to which Asha smiled sheepishly and was going to turn the page when the spot boy came and inform them that their shoot is ready.

"Asha let's read it afterwards"

Rithvik said and Asha nod and kept the dairy in her back and both went to their shoot.

~*~*~



Okay - okay I know m again giving a short update and really sorry for it.
Next time will paka wala give a bit bigger one.
So howz it..?? do tell me do hit like tab and review me back.
Guyz I one small request if possible please share my this work with others also means I will get new readers too.
And one import thing m really disappointed with the likes and comment on the chapter 1 guyz plzz tell frankly are u loving this FF or not. If not I will stop it.😊
Happy holi to all of u.
Have a awsum day.

Lots of love,
Abhilasha


Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
res
unres!!!
haayyeee kamini this was awesome!!!
ashvik sooo much excited to read the book...
very nice!!!!
Asha NE book le Li Thi...
and the first part haayyeee its awesome!!!
kria soo excited... Reminded me of the days jab kria ne st.louis enter Kara!!! With that big smile!!!
just took me through the memories!!!
sweet voice pehle laga swayam hoga but then he saved her and bola Sharon ko u r my best friend...i m sure it might b rey!!!
just can't wait to read further jaldi update kar!!!
and kamini hate u dil se!!!
Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
res
unres

awesome update Abhi... Ashvik jaise diary padhne ke liye eager the usi tarah sach me me bhi eager thi tere update ke liye

thanks for PM.

update soon...
Edited by rolisiddhant - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
res
unres..
awesome update
sharon doing kriya ki ragging...
ah dat boy saved her...
intresting...
i'm sure d boy was rey..
so waiting for d nxt part...
Edited by -Monika- - 11 years ago

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